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@Fatima_Q

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Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: brainychild92
What a good friend Gaurav is for steering Preet in the right direction, away from Ash. I just hope Preet adheres!lol
Great part and thanks for the pm. can't wait for Meet's first meet..lol

Thanks for reading and commenting Brainy.

Will Preet adhere? If Meher has anything to do about it, he will 😆

But let's see.

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

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Posted: 11 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: fansush
yippeee... preet...!!

sushant in ny form is adorable..😳

n preet here is doing quite well for himself...
okk...so both will bump at the wedding looks like..
gr8...put in a nice nok jhok...

waiting...😛 thnks for the pm...🤗

Yay!! Preet is finally here.

Sushant in any form is adorable... and as Preet he is especially adorable

Thanks for reading Rasika 🤗

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kiran

@kiran_28

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#533

great update fatima
i always luv the way u write...
thanks for pm 🤗

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bhagyashree2011

@bhagyashree2011

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#534

Hi Fatima

Thanks for the pm

I liked the update very much but what I felt like preet is a bit more serious in this update but that I guess is because of the situation you created.
The conversation between preet and ash was good and for a change u showed preet running behind ash
The point which I wanted to know that why have you killed both meher and preets father because I loved the comedy between preet's father and him with those chandni jokes
I liked the caring friend gaurav's character
With all the 3 updates I can only say that this story is completely diff from earlier stories and that is very exciting for me and I am looking forward for your coming updates to see where the story heads

Now just waiting for the next update where preet and meher meets and what changes come to their lives because in this story both of them are strong headed individuals so how they fall in love will be a great thing to see

Edited by bhagyashree2011 - 11 years ago

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

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Posted: 11 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: kiran_28
great update fatima
i always luv the way u write...
thanks for pm 🤗

Thanks for reading Kiran 😛

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011
Hi Fatima

Thanks for the pm

I liked the update very much but what I felt like preet is a bit more serious in this update but that I guess is because of the situation you created.
The conversation between preet and ash was good and for a change u showed preet running behind ash
The point which I wanted to know that why have you killed both meher and preets father because I loved the comedy between preet's father and him with those chandni jokes
I liked the caring friend gaurav's character
With all the 3 updates I can only say that this story is completely diff from earlier stories and that is very exciting for me and I am looking forward for your coming updates to see where the story heads

Now just waiting for the next update where preet and meher meets and what changes come to their lives because in this story both of them are strong headed individuals so how they fall in love will be a great thing to see

Okay I know the 1st 3 updates take a bit of patience to get through, for me personally as a reader, because we all want to get to the Meet scenes... 😆...but they are necessary in order to properly lay the foundation for everything else to come.

Preet is Preet...and that's how he will stay in this FF too. Never too serious...and yet not as dumb as everyone thinks he is. 😆

I think in Kis Desh we remember the funny times Meet created for us...but they as characters did go through a wide range of growth in the drama from ...happy go lucky youngsters...abuse...enemity...friendship...marriage borne out of circumstances...best friends...falling in love...committed, sensible, and responsible life partners, and parents.

The underlying characteristics don't change but the characters do grow. Same will happen in this FF.

Gaurav on the other hand I would say I have written him more seriously than I have done before.

I wouldn't say Preet is running after Ash, else he wouldn't have tossed her request aside. But yes...he is definitely attracted to her..because...well...he hasn't met the right girl yet... 😆 He is more focused on setting his career right now.

Why have I killed off both the dads?

Because I wanted that connect to be there between Meet...they've both lost their fathers...perhaps they'll help give each other closure. I also wanted fewer people for them to be able to turn to should they need help. That's one of the reasons i have Preet living away from his family too.

Lalit's presence is still very much there in Preet's life and it is influencing a lot of the choices he makes.

The rest I refuse to give away. 😈

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Rhea_401

@Rhea_401

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#537

shucks man ...i cnt wait fr meet to meet!:P...3 chaps n no meet...too bad!! ...but good update oderwise...n preet dude improve ur taste man!!...ash srsly?

Edited by Rhea_401 - 11 years ago

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: Rhea_401
shucks man ...i cnt wait fr meet to meet!:P...3 chaps n no meet...too bad!! ...but good update oderwise...n preet dude improve ur taste man!!...ash srsly?

Hah! A complaint from the Queen of Cliff Hangers ... 😈

Fear not my dear!! Every chapter henceforth will have Meet pouring out of your ears. 😆

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#539

absolutly fantastic fatima,
i just hate the part with ash😊,
i just hope preet wouldnt lie for her...

cant wait for their meeting...

great work

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

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Posted: 11 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: hangok
absolutly fantastic fatima,
i just hate the part with ash😊,
i just hope preet wouldnt lie for her...

cant wait for their meeting...

great work

@ bold: He didn't lie for her...remember he tossed the paper aside and went to his meeting.

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