Fatima's Cozy Corner - Page 46

Originally posted by: AASUS

pg 56

OS banner from Nikki is v pretty.

It's different style and serious tone. The poem and OS both are Preet's pov and walking down memory lane.

Well I liked how Meher gift wrapped or put a bow on his heart. That's unique.

Failed attempts were interesting scenes. But sounded serious may be bec,Preet is worried and that was shown through out.

Ty Fatima. Keep going.

😆I'm back. Y'know I hv nt read wt everyone else thought about story or poem.

^^ Yes...we had ups and downs in Aadha Ishq too...but then that's part of life. You have to take the good with the bad and always hope for the best... 😆

Hey fatima

I thought you will start updating jab we met from today but you did not 😭
So fatima when are you going to start
Please start soon 😳

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011

Hey fatima

I thought you will start updating jab we met from today but you did not 😭
So fatima when are you going to start
Please start soon 😳

Originally posted by: AASUS

cute isn't it. stress buster for ya.

Yay! I completed reading your SS in first attempt. It's kinda achievement for me..

But you know why? It's because the way you've crafted the story. You've included all the elements to make it blockbuster : Genuine efforts from Preet to gift her wife "anniversary gift", sense of humor, struggle to find out "special anniversary gift", in the end "pureness of love" when Meher says "You" are my perfect gift.🥳.

Goodness, purity of your heart, chulbuli andaaz always reflects whenever you write the story.⭐️.

Waise, kya baat hain aap ne bahut passionately Preet ki soul ko apane inside rakhaa hain.😳.

Originally posted by: -Amlu-

Yay! I completed reading your SS in first attempt. It's kinda achievement for me..

But you know why? It's because the way you've crafted the story. You've included all the elements to make it blockbuster : Genuine efforts from Preet to gift her wife "anniversary gift", sense of humor, struggle to find out "special anniversary gift", in the end "pureness of love" when Meher says "You" are my perfect gift.🥳.

Goodness, purity of your heart, chulbuli andaaz always reflects whenever you write the story.⭐️.

Waise, kya baat hain aap ne bahut passionately Preet ki soul ko apane inside rakhaa hain.😳.

awww fatimaa.. fab writing..