NEW FF:Blind Love CHAPTER.4 P.6 November 21 2012

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Hey, this is a new FF with a very different and broad idea. I hope you all like it and please do criticize me and tell me how it is.Thank you😳


Chapter 1



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I sat up quickly as my eyes widened, a bit shaken by the loud noise of the rooster. I rubbed my eyes as I tried to wipe the sleep out of them. I felt a chill through my spine as I just realized how cold it had gotten.


I sighed as I looked besides me and noticed my two sisters sleeping and completely unaware of the rooster's constant noisemaking and to the fact that we have to get up early in order to milk the cows. Khushi and Meher. What am I supposed to do about these two? I smiled lightly as I placed my hand on both of their heads. I shook my head as I quickly got up and took my shawl and wrapped it soothingly around me.


Guess, I have to milk the cows again all alone. I closed the door shut and walked out in the veranda, noticing papji sleeping on the small wooden bed outside. He was snoring quite loudly and held an empty alcohol bottle in his hand. He could never stop the addiction and there was nothing I could do about it. Ma had done everything to stop his addiction from going to the doctor to get the injection to going to the gurdwara and making him swear to not drink again, but he never stopped. Every evening, starting from five o'clock P.M. , he would begin his usual desi alcohol and continue throughout the night. Most of the time beating up ma, Khushi, Meher and me, but we had no control, afterall he was the man of the house.


I shook my head and took the large steel jugs as I noticed ma sleeping in the kitchen. I noticed how tired she looked in her sleep and so I let her sleep and tried to make no noise. I opened the main gate of the door and closed it silently before I began to walk down the rugged and uneven pathway. I walked to my family's small plot of land and down to the cow shed.


I smiled as I looked at Lala, my favorite cow. I smiled as I sat down on the small stool and began to milk the cow.


"So,Lala, how are you?" The cow mooed as I smiled and patted her head.


I began to take food for Lala and placed it in front of her.


"Heer Di!Di!" I heard a loud shout. I looked up to see Khushi running through the field. Her loose pony tail flying up as she ran with a worried look on her face. I looked at her curiously as I ran up to her. I felt worried too because Khushi never woke up so early ever in her life.


"What happened Khushi?Is everything ok?" I said as I held her shoulders.


"Di...woh...You know Mahi right?"Khushi said as I shook my head remembering Laxmi who was my 10th class classmate.


"Well...um..."Khushi stuttered as she looked at me biting her lip.


"What Khushi?Tell me."I said shaking her shoulders.


"She's having the wedding."Khushi mumbled.


"What?"I said shocked as I looked at her.


"Yes, Mahi's parents already saw the groom and settled it. It's...a...blind marriage"Khushi stumbled.


Blind marriage. It's a tradition that lives in this village. A tradition which has been going on for more than 50 years. The tradition is that the bride and groom never see each other before getting married. Only the groom's and bride's families see each other and settle everything. The marriage occurs without neither of the groom or bride knowing anything about each other nor seeing each other's face. Many young girls my age do complain, but what can we do? It's a tradition which all of us have to follow.

"God...Where's Mahi now?"I said looking at her.


"Well...she's having her bidaai right now,"Khushi mumbled again.


"What?"I said a bit shocked.


"Yes, Mahi's family had a small secret marriage. Apparently. the groom is a bit older"Khushi said.


"A bit older?"I questiongly asked.


"Yes, I heard he's 41 and has a young daughter and an older son,"Khushi said.


"What?Mahi's only 20!"I said a bit to loudly as my voice hollowed quietly through out the fields.


"I know. I heard the band marching back as the doli came and then I heard our neighbor Soni Aunty standing on the terrace and telling me"Khushi said as an expression of sorrow filled her up.


"Well, another marriage gone by in a week. It seems like every girl in this village is leaving," I said as Khushi agreed. I heard Lala moo as I looked back and patted her head.


Khushi smiled as she grabbed some food and fed her. I smiled as I tried to divert my mind from Mahi and her new life.


"Where's Meher?" I asked as I filled up another jug of milk.


"Where else?She's still in her bed. God, she's a lazy bull"Khushi said as I giggled and shook my head.


"Let's go. Ma will be waiting for the milk" I said as Khushi smiled and picked up a jug and stumbled a bit as her small slender figure shook and tumbled as I laughed and pushed her lightly.

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We quickly got home and closed the door. I noticed Khushi and I had gotten a bit late and saw papaji sitting on the wooden bed and saw the village head sitting next to him drinking tea.


I looked at them curiously as did Khushi


"Sat Sri Akal" We folded our hands and quietly went into the kitchen where ma was quietly making rotis. I noticed a small bruise near her eye and knew in a second that it was given by papaji. I gave her the two large jugs of milk and looked up at her.


"Ma,why is the village head here?" I whispered as she looked through the barred window at the veranda where papaji and the village head were sitting.


"I don't know either...I wonder what it is about?" Ma said as I noticed Meher entering the kitchen. She smiled and asked the same question.


"Look, I have this really nice family, the Juneja Family. The family is wealthy and owns companies all over the world. The best part is that the poor old man has three sons, Prem, Arnav and Preet, and only one wife. The family is well reputed and from the Sekhon village which is near by. They came from Delhi a few days back and they are looking for a girl. Well, not one girl, but three. They are so desperate that they are offering 1 crore to the family. And their demand is that all three girls should come from the same family and a humble one too. They believe if the girls are from the same family then they would not try to run after the property and seprate the family. The Juneja family believes in the tradition of the marriage and after all Mr. Lalit Juneja got married to his wife following this custom" The village head spoke and every phrase of his widened all our eyes in shock except papaji's who smiled and I could tell he liked the idea.



"You are my good friend which is why I am telling you about this proposal."

" I know and you are right. So, yes, I will meet with the family" Papaji said.

"What?" Meher said in shock as she stared at papaji through the window.


"I can't believe it. What are we supposed to do?" Khushi said as her eyes filled up as I placed my hand on her shoulder.


I couldn't believe papaji would do this and why would he do this. A blind marriage?Why?


Papaji smiled as he let the village head leave and bid him adieu. He smiled and called out ma. Ma quickly walked out to him.


"See,our dreams are becoming true. Now our daughters will marry rich and we will be rich to! " Papaji smirked as he shook ma's shoulder.


I noticed ma looking at him nervously as she looked back at us then at him.


"Um...well...a blind marriage. Um...I think...this is not right. This is our daughters' futures we are talking about" Ma said. I noticed the expression on papaji's face changing as his eyes turned red.


"Oh Really?! So, now you are the head of the house!You will make the decision?!" Papaji yelled as he placed his hand on her cheek and shook her. He grabbed her and threw her on the floor and pressed her head against it.


I quickly ran out up to mom.


"Papaji please stop!Stop!"I yelled as tears ran down my cheeks as Khushi and Meher tried to pull him back.


"I will if you agree to this proposal!"Papaji yelled. We looked back at each other as I heard Ma scream.


"Yes!We will do it!" We pleaded and papaji stopped as he let go of ma and smirked walking away to his room.


I grabbed ma as we hugged her tightly as she sobbed and hugged us back.


"I'm so sorry. I can't even help you three at all. I'm so weak" Ma said as she hugged us.


"Ma, please don't say this. You have done much for us." I said.


"Yes, ma we love you,"Khushi said placing her hand on her cheek as she hugged us and waited for the day to come and wait for her daughters' bidaai...




CHARACTER SKETCH


Prem Juneja-29 years old. Handsome, and arrogant. He believes he is made for the world and the world should be beneath him. He has a soft heart which he always keeps hidden. He does not believe in traditions and only obeys his parents and no one else. He is the CEO of Juneja Globals.


Arnav Juneja-27 years old. Handsome,humble and a bit short-tempered yet treats others right. He is young at heart and serious, but comes out to be open hearted and sweet. He respects the idea of marriage, but believes that he should be compatible to the women he is with. CEO Of Juneja Asian Hotels.


Preet Juneja- 25 years old and funny and cute. He is bubbly and the joker of the family. He believes in true marriage and traditions. He is the CEO of Juneja Europe Hotels.


Heer Maan-20 years old and shy and innocent. She believes in traditions and is always obedient. She knows how to keep her family's status up high.


Khushi Maan- 19 years old and very bubbly. She is the girl that most men like, but not quite up to some expectations. She always keeps the energy up.


Meher Maan-18 years old and very funny. She does not like to get tied into relationships yet respects them.




TABLE OF CONTENTS

CH.1-PAGE 1

CH.2-PAGE 2

CH.3-PAGE 5




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Really really loved the concept.. awesome ...


Do continue soon and do pm me whenever u update,,

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Ooohhh this is gonna be good!!! Love the start!!
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very nice concept.

love the character sketch.

how could heer's father do this with his daughters.he is so sick man.😡

thanks for adding arhi in this.😊

premeer has a 9 years age difference.

waiting eagerly for the next.

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nice starting yaar
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nice starting yaar..
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Chapter 2
"Di...where are my blue bangles?" Khushi cried she grabbed and tried to tie her hair. I shook my head as I took the blue bangles on the dresser that was right in front of her and placed it in front of her face .

"Oh sorry Di," Khushi said as she placed the bangles on her small,tiny wrists. I could tell she was worried and I was too. Today, in the morning the village head had come and told papaji that the Juneja family was willing to meet us and would be coming soon in the afternoon. Ever since Meher,Khushi and I are in panic and wondering how we should behave and act like.

"I'm so nervous di," Meher said as she came up and placed her head on my shoulder. I placed my hand on her head and looked at her.

"Don't worry Meher,everything will be alright.Don't worry"I said that again in a tone that soothed me more than them.

"Well, we have to get ready quickly before they come or else papaji will freak out," Khushi said as she open the small wooden suitcase behind our bed.

"What are you looking for di?" Meher asked as she walked over to her.

"Well, you see,ma wants us to wear a salwaar kameez from the suitcase which she saved for us since we were young...duh." Khushi said smiling and taking the salwaar kameez out. I smiled as I walked up to them.

"See, this box is for Heer di, one for you and one for me" Khushi smiled and opened hers quickly. She was always excited about seeing new objects and especially since we never had gotten much gifts throughout our lives.

Khushi: http://www.utsavfashion.com/store/sarees-large.aspx?icode=kmm20

Meher:http://www.utsavfashion.com/store/sarees-large.aspx?icode=kmm28

Heer:http://www.utsavfashion.com/store/sarees-large.aspx?icode=slkmm26

"Wow...these are so beautiful!"Meher exclaimed as we looked at out suits.

"I know...now come on let's get ready quickly" I said smiling as we quickly began to change into our suits.

I grabbed my duptaa and placed it on my shoulders and placed it on my head.
"Di, why did you put it on your head?"Meher asked as she looked at me.

"Because,maybe they are more traditional," Khushi answered smiling as she placed her duptaa on her head.

"Wow...what kind of traditions we have to follow?"Meher asked as she placed on a pair of light green bangles and a small bindi on her forehead.

"Ji,Sat Sri Akal" I heard ma speaking. I quickly ran up to the window as Khushi and Meher followed.

We noticed an older aged couple along with a senior women besides their sides. The lady wore a nice light moroon sari and the man wore a black suit. The senior aged lady wore a creme colored salwaar kameez.

"Sat Sri Akal. I am Mr.Juneja, this is Mrs.Juneja and my mother,well my sons' dadi,"Mr.Juneja said.

I bit my lip nervously as Khushi and Meher grabbed on to my arm looking down a bit shy .

"Oh,ji please sit down,"Papaji said as he seated them. Ma quickly brought chai and gave it to them.

"Toh, where are your daughters Mr.Maan. We have to seem them before we see other girls if your daughters do not fit our idea," Dadi said in a stern voice and I could tell she was a stern and strict lady.

Ma quickly walked into our rooms as smiled at us.
"You three look beautiful,"Ma said as she smiled at us. I could tell she was a bit sad about the idea of a blind marriage.

"Come on,let's go. They are eagerly waiting for you all three,"Ma said as she smiled and took us.

I looked down shyly as I walked behind ma. I stared at the floor and no where else as I fumbled with my dupata. Khushi and Meher did the same as they followed right behind me.

"Um...ji...these are my daughters,"Ma said as she looked at them an sat down on a chair. We stood there quietly as the three guests observed us.

"They are very beautiful,"Mrs.Juneja said as she smiled at us. We smiled back and looked down.

"Hmmm...they are very traditional,"Mr.Juneja said as he stared at us and smiled a bit too.

"Toh...what do you three know about housework?"Dadi asked as she looked at us.

"Everything...all three of them milkt he cows, clean the house,cook food..."Papaji rambled on smiling and tryign his best to get the 1 crore rupees.

"Did I ask you?"Dadi said staring back at him throw her glasses. Papaji looked down a bit guilty. Dadi looked back at us expecting an answer.

"Your name is Meher right?"Dadi asked as she pointed at me. Meher nodded slowly as she bit her lip nervously.

"You go first,"Dadi said as Meher gulped nervously looking a bit scared.

"Ji...well...I know how to cook...and...clean. I can embroidery too and sew clothes...I can milk the cows" Meher mumbled. Dadi shook her head as she turned he head towards Khushi.

"Till what grade did you all study,"Dadi asked Khushi.

"Ji...tenth grade and then after we began to help at home,"Khushi said quietly.

"And you?Why do you think you three are ready for marriage?"Dadi asked as she looked at me. Marriage?Why are we ready for marriage?I thought as I looked back up at her.

"Well...um...I think marriage is an important bond that holds not only a husband and wife, but the whole family. These days marriage is considered a bond only between a wife and a husband...but...I...think that it is a bond between a woman and her family. Her in-laws are her family and are the most important think a woman can cherish...I know we are not up to an economic status many want their future daughters-in-law to be, but I know that all of three of us can keep a family bonded and be there for our parents,grandparents and husbands that we find at our in-laws...We can obey our husbands and take care of them and will do everything possible to keep the whole family happy.And we are ready to do this because our ma has taught us many values that are needed to cherish our in-laws and thus we are ready" I said. I could tell Dadi was staring at me as Mr and Mrs.Juneja smiled and were happy at my answer.

"The answer I was looking for at every and each house we went to was never given correctly and well in this house that is..."Dadi stopped as we looked at her a bit scared and anxious.

"Not the thing at all. You are correct and this is the answer I wanted. I think we are ready for this marriage,no I know we are ready to accept the girls as our daughters-in-law,"Dadi said.

"Really?Congratulaions!"Papaji smiled as Dadi took a glare at his loudness as Mrs.Juneja smiled and got up as she walked up to us and hugged each of us. She walked up to me and smiled as she grabbed my hand.

"I loved your answer and I know you three will do it and keep this family together the way I kept it. You will be the oldest daughter-in-law and I know you will fulfill your responsiblity at its best"

"Thank you aunty"I said.
"No aunty,but ma.Okay?"Ma said as I smiled and took her blessings.

Dadi come over to us and gave each of us a pair of diamond bangles as a family tradition and gave us her blessings. Though she still seemed stern,I could tell she was a bit happy.

The family soon left and papaji sat down to take a drink while we walked back into our room and sat down to get ready for the wedding to come soon.

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Juneja House:

This house is not just a normal house, but a mansion to be exact.This mansion is not a typical one many see in soaps,but the atypical. This mansion is located on a beautiful hill and is besides a beautiful lake to be exact. This mansion sits on 50,000 square feet of land and yes we do need horses or cars to make our way around. We have 300 rooms.Yes,300 for the family of 6 and all the other rooms for our guests,friends and other family relatives. And I am Prem...Prem Juneja. The Prem Juneja to be exact.

Yes, I am arrogant and yes I am bossy and yes I am short-tempered,but I am me and if I don't get what I want. I know how to get it. I smiled as I looked at my new white Ferrari and a small card saying Happy Birthday on it. And yes I wanted this for my birthday.

"Happy birthday Prem!" I heard. I turned around and say Melissa. Great, the blowhead is here. I faked a smile as she walked up to me and gave me a kiss on my cheek.

"Wow...a new Ferrari!"Melissa said eyeing at it. This woman only wants my things and so I've decided to dump her. She's not up to my standards.

"Um...Melissa.Look, you are gorgeous and beautiful and sexy,but I think that you are not up to the status" I said raising my hand and giving her a sad look.

"What?!Are you dumping me?!"Melissa exclaimed as she looked at me.I rolled my eyes.

"Well,yes.Toby!Come and get her!"I yelled. Toby,my bodyguard, came and smiled at her. He was 6 feet tall and built to wrestly and well guard.

"Toby,get her out of here,"I said looking at my iPhone as I looked at the Cricket results.

"Are you serious?!I hate you!"Melissa yelled as I smirked.

"Take it back." I said as I walked up to her.

"No!I won't!"She yelled into my face.

"Oh!Are you a bad girl Melissa?!"I asked as I looked at her shocked.

"Not any worse than you!"Melissa yelled as she tried to grab me,but Toby stopped her.

I smirked and grabbed Melissa and threw her right into a puddle of mud face flat.

"Toby!Take her away!"I said as I turned around and checked out my Ferrari. I heard a loud noise and looked back to see a familiar Mercede Benz E-Class driving down the drive way.
Arnav. My other annoying young brother, but whom I love. He stopped his car in front of me and smiled as he got out.

"Happy Birthday Bhai!"He said as he hugged me and I did so to.

"Thank you bro!Now where's my gift?"I asked.Arnav shook his head.

"Prem bhai,you never change!"Arnav smirked as he took out a small box and inside it was held a diamond watch.

"So,you do know my taste,"I said proudly as Arnav rolled his eye.

"And so does mom and dad"Arnav said eyeing my Ferrari.

"Where are you going to drive it? This is Delhi!"I heard a voice. I looked back and saw Preet as he sat on my Ferrari. I took a glare at him and threw him off the car.

"Back off!This is my car!"I yelled as I looked at him.

"Okay calm down bhai.Don't worry,I know you will gift this to me next year when you get another one"Preet said winking as I rolled my eyes.

"Anyways, ma and dad called telling us that we have to go to Punjab,"Preet said.

"What?Why?!I have a party tonight!"I asked as I looked back at him.God,I can't believe my parents are ignoring my birthday party!

"Well, I don't know,but we have to go,so might as well start now to not get into traffic"Preet said.

"Tell them I am not going,"I said as I turned around frustrated at my parents.

"Well,they said they will take the Ferrari back,"Preet said.Arnav giggled as I threw him a glare.

"What?!Why?!God,nobody ever listens to me!"I said as I looked back at them.

"Well, do you want the Ferrari or not bhai and it's just a day,"Arnav said. Well,he is right. I guess,I'll just move my party on to the weekend and afterall I do want my Ferrari to show off.

"Fine.Let's go"I mumbled as Preet grabbed my cheeks and squeezed them and I slapped his hand away.

Punjab:

"God!I hate that smell!"I exclaimed as I held the steering wheel and stopped it as a group of Cows crossed the road.

"Pull the stupid window up Preet!"I yelled as Preet ignored me and continued to listen to his headphones.

"You are a CEO and 25 years old Preet!Stop acting like a kid!"Arnav said grabbing his headphones.

"Well,I don't act snobby as you two!Complaining about stupid stuff!"Preet said as I threw my water bottle at his face.

I sighed and continued to drive down the broken road into our parents village. The smell of the village annoys me. I drove down as I noticed the village people staring at our Hummer and scratching their heads curiously. I ignored them and went on till I found our bungalow.

I drove into the driveway and stopped the pickup as I got out.

"Preet!Take the luggage!"I yelled as Preet sighed and glared at Arnav and me as I smirked and walked inside.

"Ma!Papa!Where are you?!"I yelled as I ran inside. I noticed my arrogant dadi sitting on the sofa as she stared at us. I noticed some Pandit sitting next to her.

"Why are you screaming Prem?!Where are your manners?!"Dadi exclaimed as I rolled my eyes as I took her blessings along with Arnav.

"Well,how can we remember when we are away from our fsvorite dadi?"Arnav said as Dadi slapped his cheek.

"I'm your only dadi!"Dadi exclaimed as I bit my lip from laughing.

"Oh,Prem and Arnav,you are here?"Ma said as she hugged both of us.

"Ma,what is all this?"I asked as I looked at the pandit.

"Well,we are fixing your guys' marriage"Dad said. I looked at him shocked and a bit taken back.What?He is joking right?

"Are you joking dad?"Preet said coming in as he looked at everyone.

"Yeah,our marriage?"Arnav asked as I noticed he was getting red in the face as I was.

"Yes,we found the right girls for you three and fixed it up"Dadi said getting up.

"How could you?!We didn't even meet them yet!"I yelled as I slammed my fist against the coffee table.

"Well,it's a blind marriage.What do you expect?"Dadi said.

"Are you serious?!A blind marriage!How can you all have such old thinking?!This is the 21st century for God's sake!"I yelled.

"Yes!I completely do not agree with this marriage or marriages!"Arnav said pointing at Dadi.

"Respect your dadi!"Dad yelled pointing back at us.

"We will if you stop this nonsense!"I yelled.

"Fine,then give up all of this up.Give your property,your house and everything up!"Dad screamed.

"We own that!All of it!"I screamed.

"Well as SECONDARY owners son!I am the PRIMARY owner!"Dad pointed at himself. I stood there dumbfounded not knowing what to say.What if he really took away everything we owned and he could do that.

"Calm down,"Ma said as she soothed him.

'Stay out of it!Now tell them to leave this house immediately if they are not following what I say to them!" Dad said.

I stood there not knowing what to do. If I leave then, I will lose everything and I cannot do that. Never and ever.

"Give us a minute,"I said as I grabbed Arnav and Preet and took them outside.

"Look,we need our property," I said looking at both of them.

"So,wait.You are getting us into this marriage?"Preet said shocked as he looked at me.

"No...duh...Sherlock!"Arnav said slapping his head.

"What?!Are you kidding me?!Just for property!"Preet exclaimed.

"Well,let's see. This property and chain of hotels is our career and everything we need to have money. And when it comes to marriage,then come on. We all know that we will never get married by our permission and plus who cares about marriage?We need money!"I said as I smirked. Arnav shook his head as he agreed while Preet glared at me.

"It's a relationship bhai!"Preet said.

"So?You don't want the money,then fine.Leave and be a nobody.You should be thankful dad helped you so much this far" I said. Preet stopped and rolled his eyes. I could tell he did agree with my thought.

"Fine,Let's get married"

I hope you all liked it and I will put up another chapter.Also,I will update other FF's,but right now I need to start up this FF.And tomorrow I'm getting the Hunger Games DVD!Has anyone watched it!Love Jennifer Lawrence!😛


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