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Hello people!!!!! Well, I had this concept in mind for quite a while and then I finally thought to put this on paper. I don't know how good it would come out but I think I have done quite well. 😳


I really hope that you all would like it. 😃

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I Don't Want To Survive

I Want to Live


This was the life he had always dreamt of, or at least it seemed like that. But the truth was far away from the reality. Initially he was happy, like really H-A-P-P-Y but as time flew, he came to know what a grave mistake he had made. No doubt he was successful, well placed, rich and respected but amongst all this there was one thing that was missing out from his life and it was his LIFE.

He was quite a good decision maker and almost all his decisions proved correct in the long run but he made a mistake, a grave mistake, after all he was just another human being who wanted to fight, to compete against the world and to survive as a winner and it was here where all went wrong, he went wrong. He had chosen to survive, not to live. Though at that time, he neither had the insight nor the foresight of the consequences of this rushed decision. He absolutely had no idea of what hell would break loose upon him due to that one decision whose penalty had seemed negligible in front of the great rewarding career that lay before him as the key to his survival.

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Dard mein bhi yeh lab muskura jate hai,

Beete lamhein hamein jab bhi yaad aate hai.

These lines were so apt to describe his life. Some people just can't let go of their past, there can be many reasons but for him there was just one reason - the girl.

He had chosen the illusions of life and had wrecked her heart.

It is said that you should treasure the things that you have before time makes you cherish what you had. Now when he looks back he finds that his life back then with her was much more beautiful. Yeah, he didn't have a stunning black Audi R8 or a bungalow near the beach or an empire of thousands of millions but he had love.

He had love and he had the desire to live, to look forward to a life with her. But that one mad moment and that one mad decision ruined it all.

He misses those fights, those nok-jhoks, those hugs, her smile, her laugh, her intoxicating smell, her almond shaped big brown eyes, her silky long black hair, her soft cheeks, her pretty lips, her blush when he teased her, her. . . . .basically he missed everything about her, everything related to her, he missed her.

His life was full of everything that he had wanted but ironically it was hollow and empty. And the only reason he was still surviving, was tiny hope of finding her and spending the rest of his life living with her . . . . . forever and ever.

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This is his life. A story about the path from living to surviving and the undying urge to live and love again.

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So, how was it? Would be eagerly waiting for you likes and comments.

See you again, but not any time soon I guess...till then TC.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: seema.sharma86

nice concept
pls update soon


Thank you. But I won't be able to update soon...I am really sorry for the delay that I would make in advance.

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Can anyone please give me the link of the song - Beete Lamhein - so that I can play it over here with the OS? My link is not working.
Thank you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one ... W8ing 4 ur nxt update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the starting.. looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept yaar
pls cont soon
nd do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really nice update ,so P left H for his career and this remainds of someone😆,waiting 4 next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww..such a lovely and touching concept..
pls continue soon..
really want to read the full story soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW 😲 Shwet you shocked me.

Very strong concept and serious tone. Is there any light moments coming up?
Lets see what Prem's idea of "Live" as opposed to "Survive".
Tell us what he is thinking about doing next.

Thank you for sharing your OS - nice start.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice concept...
please add me in ur pm list ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I know you all must be very angry but please do keep patience. I am having my half yearly exams and since it is my 12th, I have to concentrate on my studies.

But, literature is something that gives me happiness. Hence whenever I get time I write something, so I hope that I would be able to give you updates but let me warn you that they won't be regular.


And one more thing, sorry for not replying to any of the msg as I am really really busy. *Holding Ears*

One more thing, I love you all yaar. And I looovvveee Prem-Heer and Desh. Miss them a lot. Hope that they come back together(which is quite difficult, but whats the harm in dreaming). Well, hope that AG makes a come back soon...missing her a hell lot.

Premeer, Desh and AG rocks!!!!!

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Thank you Deshianz for all the likes and the comments. I really appreciate your involvement. Thank you.

-Giya-, NinaArief, seema.sharma86, Mfm_06, -prime-, kiran_28, .Suhasini., AASUS, priyahmt, Divya4Srk-Barun, iheartChai, -Sadi-,


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Originally posted by: -Sadi-

Loved the starting.. looking forward to the next part

Sadi di!!!!! Thank you so much. 😃 🤗 I really miss coming here...and the family hugs.

Originally posted by: Mfm_06

Nice one ... W8ing 4 ur nxt update :)

Thank you. 😊

Originally posted by: -Giya-

nice starting

continue soon

Thank you. 😃

Originally posted by: kiran_28

nice concept yaar

pls cont soon
nd do pm me

Hey Kiran di! Thank you very much. Would continue but will take some time. And well, I will try to PM. Thank you. 😃

Originally posted by: -prime-

Really nice update ,so P left H for his career and this remainds of someone😆,waiting 4 next part.

Thank you. 😃 Well, but you can't be too sure if its P & H or someone else. 😳 😉

Originally posted by: priyahmt

aww..such a lovely and touching concept..

pls continue soon..
really want to read the full story soon

Priya di...!!!!! 😃 🤗First of all I would like to appreciate you for your editing skills. You are doing really good. Keep it up. And then the posts are really cute, sorry for not commenting...just a lot busy with the half yearly exams. But, I do read them.
Thank you.

Originally posted by: AASUS

WOW 😲 Shwet you shocked me.


Very strong concept and serious tone. Is there any light moments coming up?
Lets see what Prem's idea of "Live" as opposed to "Survive".
Tell us what he is thinking about doing next.

Thank you for sharing your OS - nice start.

Gosh, I missed you...🤗 and your posts and your convos too. 😳
I always get uplifted after reading your comments. Thank you so very much...loads and loads of love. Thank you. 😃

Originally posted by: Oblivious

very nice concept...

please add me in ur pm list ...

Thank you so much. 😃 Hmm, about the PM I will try to send them but I can't be sure...I quite lazy.😳

Okay, here's just a short promo but there is a lot more to come... 😉


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