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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sure will update dis sunday pakka 😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hemaaa

Sure will update dis sunday pakka 😊😊😊

aapka sunday nahi aaya abhi.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey yaaa 😛

hope you r ol doin good 😊 i know its comin late 😊 a big sorry! was buzy with project stuffs!! here am updatin 1st chapter !! i know its short update 😛 but i will pakka update big one tomo lol so pl am waiting for ur comments 😉 ok here we go ;


Chapter:1

Heer:Maa wrz those documents? am not finding it

Teji:Check in your room beta!

Balraj(with serious face):Heer beta here it is!

Heer:Thank god!thankuu paa

Balraj:Heer are you serious about this paper?

Heer:Haan i am

Balraj saw teji she ignored him & went to kitchen calling heer to have her brkfst

Heer:Maa am alredy late….i will have ouside

Teji:Ok beta all the best

Heer:Thanku maa

Balraj was silent

Heer:Dad

Balraj:I wont say anything beta

Heer:I know dad what you are thinking!but don worry dad I won burden you

Balraj:But beta

Teji intrupted them heer u go its alredy late

Heer:Cya paa..cya maa

Heer started her two wheeler to reach her destination!

Here on the other side of part a guy still sleeping , all of a sudden his mobile ringed he lazily turned his face ;showed his face; its Prem he attend the call

Prem(Sleepy voice):Hello who the hell calling early mng!

Preet(Girly voice):Hey sweetheart its me

Prem opened his eyes wide

Prem:shut up preet !

Preet(Serious tone):Prem get up yarr….we have to be their on time

Prem came to alert he disconnected the call how can he forgot that-- today is very important day to prove her that he is only her's !!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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hemaaa interesting character sketch and ch 1.
Heer Teji convo. is mysterious and wonder what's going on.
Like the way Preet woke up Prem haha.
Thanks for it. Curious to know more about these characters.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update...canyt. wait😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update
pls do cont soon
want to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Thank u for those comments guys 😊 Hey here iz next chapters hope u guys ll like it...!!

Chapter:2

[Note:Preet& meher; Nihal & Veera-----Husband & wife]

Preet still holding cell fone with sad meher nudges him

Preet:Its all happened because of us

Meher:Preet lets go!Heer & prem needs our support!

Preet:Ya

Prem wears white tee & black faded jeans and pull out his fone he calls Ashlesha but no use her cell is not reachable then he locks the house and drove to court!

@ outside of d court:

Veera:Nihal do something na

Nihal: we need Ash,

Veera:Nihal she is in uk!

Nihal:Haan god only knows whats gonna happen today evening

Heer reaches court!she saw nihal & veera.Nihal moves aside

Heer is not talking with him & preet obviously they are prem's best friends..

Veera:Hi heer

Heer:Hi veera

Prem parks car and comes towards heer seeing him she turned her face….nihal joins prem!Preet & Meher joins Prem & Heer!Preet & Nihal stands with prem vice versa Meher & Veera with Heer!

Prem Saw a lawyer couples guy giving red rose to her & girl was blushin….Prem smiles and murmurs Happy Valentines day Heer! Heer turn towards as if prem sayin something to her she saw he was eyein tht couple!

Flashback begins:

Year back!!!Heer after finishing her work she logs out from bank and came to bus stop while she was waiting for bus Prem comes towards her & gives one sheet to her!!

Heer:Hello Mr???

Prem(Stands beside her):Well hi I am Prem,Girls usually calls me premu

Heer:Hello Mr.Whatever what is dis? she throws sheets & moves away

Prem followed her again he gave one more sheet this time she is angry

Heer:What???

Prem:Its my Bio-data

Heer:So???

Prem:I love sanjana she stays near your home so I need your help

Heer:Huh love??Hello Mr.who ever you are & y schld I help u in dis love matter….i know u type guys today sanjana tomo ranjana then anjana!!so get lost from here

Prem(Winkin @ heer):Are you jealous Miss :P

Heer:Huh y schld i??

Prem(Holdin her hand):Then help na I love sanju a lot plz plz plz

Heer:Huh ok gimme her address

Prem:D/no234,BSK 2nd stage

Heer:Ok fine I will try

Prem:You have to :D

Chapter:3

Lalit:Gayatri wrz prem?

Gayatri:In room

Prem came downstairs talkin over fone

Prem:Sir plz try to understand I need loan to start up my business

B.Manager:Sorry Prem we are helpless

Prem:Ok fine

He cuts the call

Lalit:Prem if you marry geet thn geets father is ready to help you

Prem:Sorry dad I don wanna marry now,btw I don lik her

Lalit:But she is only daughter-in-law of this house

Prem:Yeah in dream…

He lefts house

Gayatri:lalit he will marry geet only calm down

Prem goes to canara bank with Nihal,heer was checking accounts she saw him & hides behind computer screen but our prem is alredy standing beside her!

Prem:Hi

Heer:What u doing here?

Prem:My love case

Heer:Get lost from here

Veera:Heer you check this statement

Prem:Heerrr lovely name u hav

Heer glares at Prem…..nihal smiles at veera she smiles back.Heer glares at nihal , nihal nudges prem that girl is far better to compare to this volcano

Heer:Hello??

Prem:Nihal we are here to meet manager shall we move

Nihal:as u say he smiles at veera , she smiles back!

Heer:Veera my dream girl we are here to do work oki??

Veera (with sad pout):yeah

B.Manager:I am impressed with your plan Mr.Prem but bank rule is rule we cannot change

Nihal:Sir plz believe us we will pay each month with interest without failure.

B.Manager:Atleast we need one person as sureity

Prem:My girl friend works in this bank

B.Manager:whoz dat?

Prem shows his finger towards heer,manager smiles ok loan sanctioned comin outside he goes to heer "meet me evening 6 at Orion Mall other wise I will meet u at your place ;)"he lefts winking at heer

Heer:Huh

Chapter:4

Evening 6 Orion Mall

Heer waiting for Prem with her friend Meher

Meher:Don worry I will teach lesson to that guy

Heer:Meher dono am scared W*F dad know about ths guy

Meher:no worries honey when I am with u so temme how he looks like?

Heer:Meherrr

Meher:ok chill

Prem comes with preet ,heer signals meher him she opened mouth widely

Meher:Heer he is so hot yarr

Heer:Meher shut up

Prem:Hi heer …thn turns towards meher hi beautiful

Meher( was shocked):Hii

Heer:hello whats your problem

Prem:Love

Heer:huh

Prem:I wann my sanjana back

Heer:listen thrz no one sanjana staying near our home ..u got !

Prem goes towards meher :Pls tell your friend to help otherwise my heart pump stops

Meher:aww so cute don worry prem you will get your sanjana

Heer:Meherrr

Preet:watta a lovely name

Meher(blushes):thanku

Preet:mention not

Prem takes heers hand plz heer

Heer:ok fine I will search your so called sanjana!but promise me this is last time!ok??

Prem:ok I wont thn gimme your number!

Heer:huh y my no.??

Meher:to get update about his lover,here prem her house no. is 080-2644098907

Prem:aah thnx bye heer bye meher

Heer:huh

prem murmurs god she is so cute

Preet:Prem u said something

Prem:nothing lets go

Preet(vt lovely voice) bye meher

Meher:Bye

Heer:bye my foot huh

Meher:heer plz help him na about that sanjana

Heer:huh let c

Chapter:5

Prem was thinking about heer her gussa wali face ;) he smiles & takes his fone dials to heer no.

Balraj:Hello Balraj here

Prem cuts d call again he rings this time irritated Balraj shouts at his wife to receive d call

Teji:Hello

Prem cuts the call and murmurs y this elderly ppl receiving my calls he again calls this time heer received!!!

Heer:Hello

Prem:Hi Heer

Heer:You

Balraj & Teji saw heer,….heer to her parents its meher my friend prem starts laughing

Heer:you shut up

Prem :lol sorry heer what about my sanjana?

Heer(Shouts):Sanjana she z mid way she realized that her parents watching her so she normally I will meet u at caf with sanjana ok she cuts d call

Coffee day

Asusual prem was looking dashing in white tee & blue jeans pant…..Heer came she was wearing pink color top & blue jeans!

Heer:Sorry Prem there is no sanjana staying near my place

Prem:hmmm heer I wont disturb u from now on my last request plz handover this letter to sanjana I hav faith she will come & accepts my love

Heer takes the letter….

Prem:Heer one more request don open that letter

Heer nods & left thinking about prems love towards that sanjana ….

Heer in her room was thinking about prem & his love letter

teji saw her daughter thinking serious

Teji:heer what u thinking?

Heer:Maa is there any one sanjana near our place

Teji:Haan daljeet daughter sanjana she is so cute

Heer:Sanjana is cute ah?

Teji:Haan everybody likes her she is so cute

Heer:no wonder Prem too likes her

Teji:tomo onwards she is going to baby sitting

Heer:Baby sitting??U mean sanjana is baby

Teji:Haan

Heer:oh no…..

later that night heer with curious about that letter she opened and shocked he wrote I Love you heer…love at first sight I never believed but all this happened cos of u !i truly love u ….

u means a lot to me heer …..if u accepts my love meet me tomo at lalbagh park…I know u will come accepting my love ;)




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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
It's a nice update
Plss donate soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
nice update hemma
fb scenes was fabulous...good job
i love the way prem proposes heer
pls cont soon

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