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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Thank so much🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: harshitideewani

Thanks kiran for the pm lovely updates👏

Part 4 was cute Prem and Heer nice boding love the way Prem convinces Heer emotionally blackmailing😉 ending byee idiot and byee Prem 🤣
Part 5 Teji is saying to make kheer for Heer and fav dishes of, Prem and Preeth as their comingg woww and Lalit and Gay3 are talking abot Prem's marriage and Gay3 says to Lalit that Heer will be perfect for prem aand convinces of Lalit to talk to Balraj...
interstingg to know what happens when Premeer comes to know
pleaseee update soon

Thank you for your lovely comments🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Chapter-6



In Maan Villa

(Juneja family entered and Maan family welcomed them.Balraj and Lalit and Gayatri and Teji hugged each other.)

Balraj: Kaisa hai tu?

Lalit: Main to ek dum bardiya. Namaste Bhabiji.

Teji: Namaste bhaisab!

(They came inside. Just then Heer came downstairs.)

Heer: Namaste uncle, namaste aunty!

Lalit: Namaste beta, kaisa hua tera exam?

Heer: Uncle exam to bohot hi acha hua.

Gayatri: Aur hoga kyun nahi, bohot hoshiyar hai hamari Heer.

Gayatri said while kissing on Heer's forehead.

Meher: Aunty Prem bhai nahi aaye?

Preet: Yeh lo jo aaye hain unki kadar nahi hai or PB ke liye pooch rahi hai.

(Meher glared at Preet and she was about to answered him but Teji showed her angry face to Meher)

Lalit: Meher Prem office se nikal chuka hai, bus ata hi hoga.

Teji: Ap log baithiye tab tak mae chai- nashta lekar ati hun.

Kulraj: Han aunty chaliye, mae bhi apki madad kar deti hun.

Teji: Arre Kulraj tum baitho, mae kar lungi.

Kulraj: Arre nahi aunty, mae bhi chalti huna apke sath.

(Teji smiled)

Teji: Acha thik hai chalo.

(Then Teji, Gayatri and Kulraj left for kitchen)

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Aryan: Heer didi mae apko plane banake dikhaoun. Meri mam ne aj hi muje sikhaya hai.

(Heer smiled)

Heer: Acha! Mere shona ko plane banana ata hai, chalo hum upar chalte hai or plane banate hai. Ok chalo.

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Meher: Preet ke bache bardi zuban chal rahi thi na teri, ab chal chess mein muje hara ke dekha.

Preet (to himself): Arre yaar yeh kahan phas gaya mae. Muje to chess ka 'C' bhi nahi ata. Lekin ab Meher ne challenge kiya hai to khelna to pardega hi. Ek kaam karta hun jiju ko saath leke chalta hun shayad wo meri thordi madad karde.

Preet (to Meher): Han han chalo, mae koi darta hun kya. Jiju ap bhi chaliye mere sath. Ap mere lucky charm ho. Chalo!

(Preet said while dragging Kiran with himself. And they left from there)

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Back in Living room

(Teji, Gayatri and Kulraj came with snacks and tea)

Teji: Arre yeh bache kahan chale gaye?

Balraj: Heer to Aryan ke sath upar apne kamre mein hai or Preet, Kiran or Meher chess khel rahe hain angan mae.

Kulraj: Mae Heer or baki sabko snacks or chai deke ati hun.

(Now only Gayatri, Teji, Balraj and Lalit are there in living room. Gayatri gave signal to Lalit to talk to Balraj and Lalit nodded)

Lalit: Ballu, yar tujhse ek baat karni thi.

Balraj: Han bol, kya baat hai.

Lalit: Ummm'hmmm Heer ke final semester khatam ho gaye hain to age ka kya socha hai.

Balraj: Abhi to kuch pata nahi hai yaar. Heer hi decide karegi ki age usse kya karna hai.

Lalit: Nahi mera matlab hai ki tune Heer ki shadi ke baare mein kuch socha hai ya nahi. Matlab usse kya koi lardka pasand hai ya nahi.

Balraj: Pata nahi yaar. Humne is bare mein kabhi usse baat hi nahi ki. Lekin tu kyun pooch raha hai.

Gayatri: Darasal wo kya haina bhaisab, humne socha hai ki ab hum Prem ke liye lardki dhondna shuru kar de.

Teji: Arre wah!, yeh to bohot hi achi baat hai. To kabse lardki dhondna shuru kar rahe hain ap log.

Lalit (nervously): Actually bhabi, wo ek lardki hai humari nazar mein.

Balraj: Acha kon hai wo?

Lalit: Umm wo lardki''.wo'..umm Gayatri tum batao.

Gayatri (nervously): han wo lardki''.ummm wo lardki Heer hai.

(Both Balraj and teji are shocked)

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In Heer's room

Heer: Arre wah! Mere shona ko to barda acha plan banana ata hai.

Aryan: Heer didi muje na boat banani bhi ati hai.

Heer: Acha to phir banake dikhao.

(Aryan starts scribbling in paper and Heer starts wondering''.)

Heer: Yeh Prem abhi tak kyun nahi aya.

(She starts dialing Prem's number)

Heer: Hello Prem!

Prem: Han Heer!

Heer: Kahan ho tum? Abhi Tak aye kyun nahi? Abhi bhi office mein hi ho kya? Aur kitna kaam bacha hai? Kitni der lagegi? Aur'.

Prem: Arre bus! Bus! Meri ma! Itne sare sawal. Mae tumhare ghar ke niche hi hun, bas car park kar raha hun.

Heer: To tum pehele nahi bata sakte the.

Prem: Arre tum muje bolne dogi, to mae bolunga na.

Heer: Acha thik hai thik hai jaldi aao.

Prem: Ok mam.

(They disconnected the call)

Heer: Wow! Aryan ne to bohot hi achi boat banai hai. Chalo hum niche chalke sabko dekhate hai. Thik hai chalo.

(Aryan smilingly nodded his head and went with Heer.)

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(In living room, there was a long discussion about Premeer's marriage. After the long discussion, Balraj and Teji agreed to this marriage.)

Teji: Wo sab to thik hai lekin kya Prem or Heer manege is rishte ke liye.

Gayatri: Arre Teji, wo log zaroor manege.

Lalit: Aur agar nahi manege to unko manane ke liye mere pas ke plan hai.

Balraj: Kaisa plan?

(Then Lalit told them about his plan and they all agreed. Just then doorbell rang)

Gayatri: Lagta hai Prem agaya.

Teji: Han mae jake darwaza kholti hun.

Balraj: Ek minute Teji, humare is plan ke bare mein Prem or Heer ko bhanak tak bhi nahi pardni chahiye.

Lalit: Han han unko bilkul pata nahi chalna chahiye.

(Both Gayatri and Teji agreed and Teji went to open the door. Just then Heer came downstairs with Aryan.

Heer (eagerly): Prem agaya kya?

Gayatri: Han agaya.

(Teji opened the ddo and greeted Prem)

Teji: Prem! Kaisa hai tu.

(Prem touched Teji's feet)

Prem: Mae bilkul thik hun aunty.

Teji: aja andar aa.

(Prem entered and Heer jumped on him)

Heer (exclaimed): Prem!

(She hugged him tightly and Prem also smilingly hugged her back and both Premeer's parents gave knowing smiles to each other while looking at them)

[Ok guys that was the 6th chapter. Please do comments. Thank you😊]

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
cool update thanks ;) heer badi naughty nikli i mean jumping on prem infront of ever1 :P , aryan's n heer's convo was cute :D n love de way prem calls heer as maam etc !! thanks :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
woww lovely and cute update Kiran
interesting to know Lalit's plan for making Premeer agree to marry.
waitinggg for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Thank you so much sadi for your comments and for this lovely pasture. I really liked it. Thank you soo much🤗



u r welcome.. glad u liked the pic... just got this idea to make one as i had free time...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Heer and aryan convo were cute... and aryan himself is cutie pie... as usual our Meet ..loved then and their fight.. lets see who's gonna defeaf whom in the chess...

so premeer first faceoff in the ff... heer's welcome with a hug.. superb..

So their parents had some plans for them lets see what is that...

looking forward to the next part... continue soon...

thanks for the pm..

take care



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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
superb update ...loved it ...
thanks for the pm ...
and please update soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: harshitideewani

woww lovely and cute update Kiran

interesting to know Lalit's plan for making Premeer agree to marry.
waitinggg for next update

Thank you 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi

Heer and aryan convo were cute... and aryan himself is cutie pie... as usual our Meet ..loved then and their fight.. lets see who's gonna defeaf whom in the chess...

so premeer first faceoff in the ff... heer's welcome with a hug.. superb..

So their parents had some plans for them lets see what is that...

looking forward to the next part... continue soon...

thanks for the pm..

take care



Thank you sadi 🤗

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