||FF- Pyar Ka Asar||Ch-1 to Ch-34||CLOSED!!! - Page 10

Originally posted by: HARSHITI12

ohh nice update..

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: Oblivious

superb update ...loved it ...

thanks for the pm ...

and please update soon ...

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Very nice kiran.. i was reaidng it but didnt get time to comment... sorery for it.. and most imply.. u are updating so fast, loving that..

waiting for next update

Precap:- Prem's caring side towards heer😳

nice... want their love soon soon and soon

Sweet ff. Premeer relation is realy cute. I'm loving way story proceeds..update soon.
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Sweet ff. Premeer relation is realy cute. I'm loving way story proceeds..update soon.
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Chapter-7

Aryan: Prem mamu! Dekho maine boat or aeroplane banaya.

(Prem grabbed Aryan in his hand)

Prem: Kya baat hai, mere bete ko itni achi drawing banani ati hai.

(Aryan nodded his head cutely)

Prem: To iskeliye to ek gift banta hai. Hmmm'..kya gift sien Aryan ko. Ha ek chocolate!

(Prem gave Aryan a big chocolate bar)

Aryan: Thank you mamu!

(All are admiring them in the living room)

Kulraj: Aryan chalo idhar ake baitho. Prem mamu abhi abhi office se aye haina.

(Aryan came to kulraj and sit beside her and starts eating his chocolate)

Balraj: Aur beta kam kaisa chal raha hai. Lalit ne bataya ki kaise tumne Sehgal group of industries wala project hasil kiya. I am proud of you beta.

Prem (smilingly): Thank you uncle!

Heer: Papa, Prem mujhse hi to business tips leke jata hai.

(Prem glared at Heer)

Teji: Han han ek tu hi to hai is poori duniya mein jise business chalana ata hai.

(They all laughed at Teji's joke. Just then'.)

Cheater! Cheater! Cheater! Yelled Meher.

(Preet, Meher and Kiran came in living room)

Meher: Prem bhaiya ap agaye, kaise ho ap.

(Meher asked Prem while hugging him)

Prem: Main to thik hun lekin tu bata, tu kyun chilla rahi hai.

Meher: Pata hai bhaiya, yeh jo Preet haina ek number ka cheater hai. Khud to khelna ata nahi hai chess or Kiran jiju ko age kiye ja raha hai. Chal jiju chalte hain or bazi yeh Preet le jata hai. Bar bar jiju ko bole ja raha tha ki jiju ap khelo ap mere lucky charm ho.

Preet: Arre ab jiju mere lucky charm hai to mae kya karun.

Meher: Acha to saf saf kehdo na ki tumko khelna nahi ata or sirf jiju ko hi khelne do. Tum kyun sara credit liye ja rahe ho. Cheater kahin ka huh!

Preet: Dekho Meher'''.

Kiran: Acha ab bus karo tum dono. Kitna jhagra karte ho yar.

Teji: Han Kiran bilkul thik keh raha hai. Chalo sab khana lag gaya hai, aao!

(They went to dining room)

Heer: Ma, ap baitho mae serve karti hun.

Teji: Heer tu rehne de mae karlungi.

Heer: Nahi ma ap baithiye, mae serve karungi.

(They all sat on the their chairs and Heer starts serving them. All are got busy in eating, then suddenly'..)

Ouch! Ah ma! Heer yelled in pain.

Teji (worriedly): Kya hua Heer?

(Before Teji, Prem got up and stood next to Heer taking her hand in his.)

Prem (angrily): Yeh kya kiya tumne Heer, garam- garam dal apne hath pe girali. Dekho tumhara hath kitna jal gaya hai. Kisne kaha tha tumhe serve karne ko. Chup-chap aram se baith nahi sakti thi.

Heer: Prem wo mae''

Prem (angrily): Chup! Bilkul chup! Ek shabd bhi nahi. Chup karke yahan pe baith jao, mae first aid box leke ata hun.

(All elder are admiring Prem's caring towards Heer. Prem came with first aid box and starts applying burnol on Heer's hand)

Heer: Ah'ummm''

Prem (worriedly): Dard ho raha hai, I am sorry mae' mae dhire se lagata hun.

Gayatri: Prem tu itna hyper kyun ho raha hai. Heer thik hai.

Teji: Beta tu khana khale, mae Heer ke dawai laga deti hun.

Prem: Nahi aunty, mae hi Heer ke dawai lagaounga.

Heer: Prem relax! Mamuli si hi to chot hai.

Prem (angrily): Mamuli si chot! Yeh tumhe mamuli si chot lagti hai. Heer muje haina or gussa mat dilao.

Heer: Ok ok. Acha baba, mae kuch nahi bolti. Tum lagao dawai.

Gayatri (whispering to Teji): Dekha tumne Teji. Prem ko Heer ki kitni chinta hai. Uske gusse mae bhi pyar jhalak raha hai.

Teji (whispering back to Gayatri): Han Gayatri, dono ki Jodi sach mein bohot achi hai.

(After applying burnol on heer's hand, Prem starts feeding Heer and both Premeer's parents admiring them)

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(After eating dinner, they all sat in living room. Teji brings Kheer for everyone)

Preet: Sach mein Teji aunty, aj to khane mein agaya. Kyun PB?

Prem: Han especially gobi ke paranthe. Thank you so much aunty.

Teji: Prem ab tu mere hath se maar khayega. Arre mae bhi to teri ma jaisi hun or ma ko koi thank you bolta hai kya.

Prem (catching his ears): Sorry J

Lalit: Acha bhabi ap kheer leke aai ho na. Lao lao jaldi lao.

Gayatri: Kya lao-lao? Apko koi kheer nahi milegi. Apko diabetes haina.

Lalit: Arre yeh to galat baat hai.

Teji: Arre Gayatri kyun nahi milegi bhaisab ko kheer. Unhe zaror milegi. Yeh lijiye bhaisab.

Gayatri: Lekin Teji''.

Teji: Gayatri muje pata hai ki bhaisab ko diabetes hai. Isiliye unke liye maine alag se kheer banwai hai.

Lalit: Dekha Gayatri, sikho kuch bhabi se.

Gayatri: Ap haina chup-chap apni kheer kha lijiye, warna yeh bhi nahi milegi.

(Everybody laughed)

(After sometimes Juneja family got ready to leave)

Lalit: Acha ballu, ab hum chalet hain bohot der ho gai hai.

Balraj: Yaar thori der or ruk jate.

Teji: Han thordi der or ruk jao na.

Gayatri: Nahi Teji bohot der ho gai hai. Kal sabko office bhi jana hai.

Heer: Kuldi Aryan so gaya.

Kulraj: Han, aj yeh bohot thak gaya hai, isiliye so gaya.

(Then Heer kissed on sleeping Aryan's cheeks)

Prem: Heer tum apne haath ka khayal rakhna. Kal subha hi iski dressing change kar lena. Ok.

Heer: Yes boss, or koi hokum!

Prem: Nahi bus itna karlo kafi hai.

Preet: Ok bye Heer di, bye Meher.

Heer and Meher: Bye, good night!

(Then the Juneja family left from there)

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In Juneja Mansion

Prem's room

(Prem came out of washroom wiping his face. After that stand near his window smilingly staring at moon)

Prem (to himself): I hope Heer ke hath mein ab dard nahi ho raha ho. Msg karta hun use.

(Prem took his phone and starts msging Heer)

In Heer's room

(Heer was about get in the bed. Just then'')

Bip! Bip!

Heer took her phone and saw Prem's msg.

"TUMHARA HATH KAISA HAI AB"

Heer smiled and replyed

Bip! Bip!

Prem saw Heer's reply

"HATH TO THIK HAI, BUT MAE THIK NAHI HUN"

Prem got worried

Bip! Bip!

Prem's reply: " KYUN KYA HUA, TUMHARI TABYAIT TO THIK HAINA"

Bip! Bip!

Prem read Heer's reply

"HAN MERI TABYAIT THIK HAI BUT I AM ANGRY WITH YOU"

Bip! Bip!

Prem's reply: "KYUN????"

Bip! Bip!

Heer's reply: "TUMNE MUJE SABKE SAMNE DAANTA L"

Prem smiled and Replyed

Bip! Bip!

Prem's reply: "OH TOH MADAM ISILIYE GUSSA HAI. I AM SORRY HEER. ACTUALLY TUMHARI CHOT DEKH KE, MAE BOHOT GHABRA GAYA THA. TUM JANTI HO NA MAE TUMHE TAKLEEF MAIN NAHI DEKH SAKTA"

Heer also smiled and replyed

Bip! Bip!

Heer's reply: " HAN BABA MAE JANTI HUN. MAE TOH MAZAK KAR RAHI THI. MAE TUMSE NARAZ HO SAKTI HUN KYA"

Bip! Bip!

Prem's reply: " I KNOW"

Bip! Bip!

Heer's reply: "When an angel came to me he asked: 'what is your wish for tonight?' I said: 'Please take care of the person who's reading this msg'. Good night!"

(After reading Heer's msg Prem smiled and replyed to Heer)

Bip! Bip!

Prem's reply: "My day may be hectic. My schedule may be tight. But I would never let the day end without saying Good night. Sweet dreams!"

(Then both Premeer went to sleep with cute smile on their lips)

[Guys this was the 7^th chapter. Please do comment. Thank you😊]

cute update kiran , thanks lov de way prem cares for his heer :D n de nyt msg's were interesting sumthing new :D thanks