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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

Awww...loved the room scene of prem and heer.. cute .. and manmeet.. so he likes heer and prem is starting to get some jealousy feeling.. interesting ..looking forward to the next chapter... do continue soon

Edited by -Sadi- - 12 years ago

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lamha

@abhiyarockz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#632

lovely update kiran...👏

continue soon...

thanx for pm! 🤗

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swati

@sweta2005

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

awesomeee too good waiting for next asap.

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#634

wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm

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repunzell

@repunzell

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#635

fantastic

loved premeer scenes

and now our prem wil get jealousss :p!!!

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Deshian4lyf

@Deshian4lyf

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#636

Heyy Kirann! I just started reading this ff! Its amazing! Please do add me to your pm list! Will be a big favor! Thank youu! Amazing ff!

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AASUS

@AASUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#637

Kiran :D
pg 88 ch 23
It was short and sweet update :D
love the friendship they share.
Loved Teji - she is so understanding and friendly :D
So they are supposed to be having fun - but will they have fun :/
Manmeet's eyeing Heer , lets see how Heer will handle this.
We'll get to see how you shape up this Heer.
We already see Prem as easy going and bit protective but loyal friend.
Waiting to find out what will the friends do next.
Thank you 🤗

Edited by AASUS - 12 years ago

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luvharshiti

@luvharshiti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#638

awesome update ...loved it ..

premeer scenes were awesome ...

waiting for the next update ...

please update soon ...

thanks for the pm ...

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khwahish

@AnokhiKhwahish

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#639

comment updated on pg 89

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lakshmi

@Ephemera

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#640

hi dear 🤗am back sorry for the late feedback😳

1]" OOOHHH PREM is so jealous!!!! haye mein marjawaan its a nice little addition dear👏...

2]"Teji (smilingly): Thik hai ja" is it me😕?? or teji's smile is KNOW-IT-ALL blessing smile😆?

3]"Heer (confusingly): Is dress ke sath sabse zyada konse earings ache lagenge. Yeh wala ya phir yeh wala." umm 🤔dear am sorry😳 but blame my set mind😡..but i am not able to visualise HEER doing THAT😕...i dunno y ...but first time ever am not connecting 😡with her here 😔...dunno y though..am so sorry..😳.

4] i must say you have a knack to explain romantic scenes😉😆☺️..awesome dear..👏

5]prem pouting☺️( i mean imagine his lips??☺️)!!!! that's my most fav scene ever in your FF till now..you made my day dear🤗..thanks for including that!!⭐️

haye nee how cute PREM would be pouting ...and all mock angry...

6...road😕?? i thought they were in Heer's bedroom right😕?,,,or am i missing something hon😕?

7]"Heer: Prem, yeh zid karne ka kam to mera haina or manane ka tumhara. To ab yeh reverse kaise ho gaya!!!"🤣🤣

8]"Prem (cutely): Pakka wala promise!!"

9]"All laughed. Heer gave a killer look to Prem which made him stop laughing" bechara prem😆..poori thara se phasa🤣...

LOVED IT DEAR.👏👍🏼...but as i 😡said had few problems in connecting with heer's charecterization😔...am so sorry....

all in all superb story👍🏼 ...and prem's jealousy and anger pouting and happy smile made this chapter extra special...

as for my reaction?? "Prem (whispered): Good Morning!!!" @bold: only i would say awesome😃😆 (whispering)