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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: seema.sharma86

kiran plss update
update
update
update
todayy plsss
plsss

will try to update as soon as i finish writing the next chapter
😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lakshmi_3004

next Fb is for @kiran_28 's


FF- Pyar Ka Asar - Chapter -21


1] KUNAL was hilarious loved his charecterization dear🤗 ...well done👏
2]awww i loved the whole scene of Prem dragging heer behind a tree...😉😆.
it was hilarious the way heer asked about another exit...🤣.
heer's dialogue "ab kya karein" jogged my memory lane remember during heer's haldi (post leap) they both got stuck in heer's bathroom IT WAS SO HILARIOUS🤣...good work on comical touch.👍🏼...nice sense of humor 😆👏
3]heer laughing in car reminded me of anda scene 🤣

All in all nice visualization dear👏⭐️👍🏼...smooth transition between scenes👍🏼...nice flow of character strengths👏...good keep it up 👍🏼
as for my actual reaction😊...here it goes "Heer smiled and kissed him on his cheeks" same as heer 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lakshmi_3004

my next Fb is for @kiran_28 's FF

FF- Pyar Ka Asar - Chapter-22


1]its a nice way to start the day with cute lalith-preet khich khcih😆...you have stayed true to lalit's characterization👏...not even once felt like i can't connect to him😲 ...good work👍🏼
2]"Preet (thinks): Wah Preet!!! Its right time now, "marde moke pe choka"." HILLARIOUS🤣...but again true to preet's characterization⭐️...it seems you have an eye for detailing😃...its good to see you have spent time in analyzing and researching the character's profile and nature😃 ...commendable work hon👏
3]karele ka juice...🤣🤣
4]bechaara aryan phasgaya maamu or naanu ke beech🤣..obedient kiskiska hoke rahega?😆 poor kid😆
5]missed preet a lot😭 and his "PB"s...😭
thanks for including that...🤗.
6] is it me or that manmeet's entry is too silent.😕😲...like the calm before the storm?❓ (or is it too much of daily soap influence?😆)

all in all nice little familial bonding chapter👏...nice to see lalit-preet-aryan bantering.😆..gayatri's light scolding and mock anger.😳...and also the interaction between kunal and Junejas...😊

as for my reaction? here it goes "Prem smiled while thinking about Lover's Point encounter" same as prem 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: seema.sharma86

Kiran r updating today...

no dear not today but surely next week 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plss don't include man meet And heer marriage and plss show some romantic scenes of prem and heer scenes and pls don show any sort of that man met falls or like heer At all
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: seema.sharma86

Plss don't include man meet And heer marriage and plss show some romantic scenes of prem and heer scenes and pls don show any sort of that man met falls or like heer At all

hahaha well ab yeh mae kaise keh sakti hun ki manmeet heer ko like karega ya nahi...its totally depend upon manmeet na...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter-23




Prem, Kunal and Manmeet, trio reached at Maan Villa.

Teji: Arre tum log to kuch kha hi nahi rahe ho. Yeh saari cheese maine sajane ke liye nahi rakhi hain yahan. Khao na tum log.

Prem: Nahi aunty bus, hum log abhi abhi nashta karke hi aayen hai.

Prem said to teji while keeping his eyes on the staircase, eagerly waiting to see his Heer.

Kunal: Aunty yeh Heer kahan reh gai hai. Kitna time lagati hai taiyaar hone main. Hum log ghumne ja rahe hain uske liye lardka dekhne ke liye nahi.

All laughed at Kunal's joke except Prem

Teji (laughingly): Mae use bulake lati hun.

Prem: umm Aunty ap yahi betho, mae bulake lata hun.

Teji (smilingly): Thik hai ja.

Prem: Ji aunty.

Saying this he went upstairs

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In Heer's Room

Heer (confusingly): Is dress ke sath sabse zyada konse earings ache lagenge. Yeh wala ya phir yeh wala.

Heer asked herself holding two pairs of earings in her hand. Just then Prem entered her room, slowly locked the door which Heer didn't notice.

Heer: Oh god ji, muje to kuch samaj hi nahi arah''.

Prem slide his hands on her waist and started nuzzling her earlobes and placing soft kisses on her neck.

Prem (whispered): Good Morning!!!

Heer (blushed): Prem yeh kya kar rahe ho tum.

Prem (while kissing her neck): mae kya kar raha hun.

Heer: Prem chordo na koi ajayega. Phir humara secret bhi sabko pata chal jayega.

Prem let her go.

Prem (pouted): Kya Heer, mera sara mood kharab kar diya tumne.

Heer (placing her hand on his cheeks): awww!!! Mera bacha!!! Prem ab apna emotional drama band karo or jaldi se muje batao ki in mein se mae konsa earing pehnu.

Prem: hmm, yeh wala (pointed on one pair of earing)

Heer (smiled): ok.

She wore her earing.

Heer: Chalo Prem, niche chalte hain. Sab log niche wait kar rahe honge. Chalo!!!

But Prem stopped her by holding her wrist making a pout.

Prem: Heer maine tumhari earing choose karne main madad kari, uske liye ek bhi reward nahi. Very Bad!!!

Heer (smirked): Reward!!! Well Mr. Prem Juneja, yeh tumhara farz tha, koi ehsaan nahi kiya hai tumne. Or waise bhi ab tum iski adat dallo kyunki ab life long tumhe hi mere liye yeh sab karna hai samjhe!!! Ab chalo.

Heer started dragging him towards the road. Prem pulled his hand from her grip and sat on her bed crossing both his hands on his chest and making an angry face.

Prem (stubbornly): Muje kahin nahi jana. Jab tak tum muje mere wala reward nahi deti, tab tak mae kahin nahi jaounga yahan se, huh!!!

Heer (whined): Prem yeh kya bacho ki tarha zid kar rahe ho tum, chalo niche!!!

Prem: Nahi!!!

Heer: Prem, yeh zid karne ka kam to mera haina or manane ka tumhara. To ab yeh reverse kaise ho gaya!!! Acha thik hai tumhe tumhare wala reward chahiye na.

Prem nodded his head saying yes.

Heer: thik hai maee tumhe reward dungi'.

Prem (happily): Han to do na.

Heer: Lekin abhi nahi. Jab hum log ghumke wapis ajayenge na tab.ok.

Prem: Pakka na!!!

Heer: Pakka

Prem: Promise!!!

Heer: Han baba promise

Prem (cutely): Pakka wala promise!!!

Heer: Premmm ab chalo'.

They went downstairs.

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Kunal saw Prem and Heer coming down from the stairs. Heer first hugged kunal and then greeted Manmeet.

Heer (hugging Kunal): Hey Kunal!!!

Kunal: Yar Heer kitna time lagati ho yaar taiyaar hone mae. Muje to laga tha ki hum log kal hi ghumne ja sakenge. Kya kar rahi thi itni der.

Prem (teasingly): Kunal, humari Heer madam yeh decide karne mein busy thi ki wo is dress se matching konsi earing pehenegi.

All laughed. Heer gave a killer look to Prem which made him stop laughing.

Kunal: Ok ok chil. Heer isse milo. He's manmeet, hum teeno ek hi college main pardte the. Tumhe to pata hi hoga.

Heer (smilingly): Yup!! I know. Bataya tha Prem na. Hi manmeet.

She shook her hand with him. Manmeet was completely lost in Heer's beauty. He tenderly held her hand and smiled.

Manmeet: Hi heer. It has been long time since we met. And I must say tum pehle se zyada khubsurat ho gai ho.

Heer (smilingly): Thanks manmeet.

Seeing their interaction Prem became curious. He didn't like the way manmeet was holding her hand and giving her looks.

Prem (thinks): Control Prem control!!! Manmeet hi to hai. Lagta hai mae kuch zyada hi possessive ho gaya hun Heer ko leke.

Kunal soon interrupt his thoughts.

Kunal: Ab chale. Hum already both late ho chuke hain.

Manmeet, Prem and Heer: Han chalo.

Heer (to Teji): Mumma hum ate hain abhi thordi der mein.

Teji: koi baat nahi beta. Take your time. Enjoy your day or tum sab log apna khayal rakhana.

Heer: ok, bye

Teji: bye!!!

Kunal, Manmeet, Prem and Heer left from there.

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[So guys here is the next chapter. Hope you all like it and Please DO LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS. Thank you 😃]

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

wooohooo... me first...😉

o.k well update was fab,👏

and love premeer scene...😳

continue soon

and

thanks for pm.. 😊

Edited by annokhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi kiran . . A fab update. . Sorry for not having commented on your updates. . M sorry. . But i always made sure to like it. . They were always fab. . I loved today's update. . Naughty prem. . Their a little bit romance. . But m not liking this stupid manmeet!! Idiot. . But premeer will be premeer. Thank you for always sending me pm's. . Love ya. . Take care. Thank you so much for updating. . . Tc. . And thank you for the pm. . Awesome as always. .

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