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Originally posted by: priyahmt

me firsttt

awesome update kiran..👏

a cute and romantic one..

first day toh yehi haal hai..toh aage kya hoga..☺️

premeer in office...

update next part sooon

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ragvir92

nice update yaar👏

prem heer scene was cute.

Yes prem can never hurt heer.

Wow so next update will be rocking I think.

yay premeer's outing and hide and seek games.

Sounds interesting.

Take care dear

Love you

Originally posted by: lakshmi_3004

😆 frankly i was scrolling down for more!!😆 it was a bit short but i know how much tough is it to write😊

it was a pleaseant surprise that you will include a french kiss😳😆 but i can imagine it very well ...as HC has nearly done it many times.😆 i can imagine prem's ringed soft hands cupping heer's face his thumb pushing heer's chin-up...😳😳

but the line where prem explains about his action starting from "mana ki...till mauth ki baraabar" i LOVED it hon...i remembered HC so clearly..

when he mentioned about his death..i rememberd PH covo on 1st sep 2009 about chaahat's custody and says her each tear is his death

try to incorporate some more small nitbits (like today's office work) about real life which will make this FF more realistic

Originally posted by: Oblivious

it was amazing update ...loved it ..

premeer scenes were awesome ...

thanks for the pm ...

please update soon ...

Originally posted by: -Sadi-

Prem so easily made heer to say I love you.. and loved the office romance.. and the kiss hayyeee... loved the update

do continue soon.. looking forward to the next part.. thanks for the pm...

take care

Originally posted by: seema.sharma86

Kiran plss update soonn

The update was awesome dear