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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Chapter-9

In the caf

(Heer was sitting on the table, waiting for Sanjana. Soon Sanjana arrived)

Sanjana: Sorry! Sorry! Mae late ho gai actually traffic itna tha ki mae late ho gai. Sorry!

Heer: Its ok Sanju. Ab bata, aisi kya baat ho gai thi ki tune muje urgently bulaya yahan pe. Kya baat karni thi tujhe?

Sanjana: Arre ruk na saans to lene de. Tune kuch order kiya kya?

Heer: Stop it Sanju! Ab bata kya baat hai.

Sanjana (nervously): umm'Heer actually'.umm'wo mae na'umm

Heer: Han bol na kya baat hai.

Sanjana: Heer ummm'.wo actually I like someone'no no no I love someone.

Heer (excitedly): Kya? Kab? Kaise? Kon hai wo?

Sanjana: Umm tu usse janti hai. Wo humare hi friend circle main se hain.

Heer (thinkingly): humare friend circle se? Hmm kon ho sakta hai.

Sanjana: Soch na tu.

Heer: Noway Kunal!!!!!!!

(Sanjana hit on Heer's arm)

Sanjana: Arre nahi!!! Pagal hai. Wo Kunal nahi hai.

Heer (confusingly): To phir aur kon hai.

Sanjana: Arre tu guess to kar na!

Heer: Sanju please yar bata na kon hai wo.

Sanjana (blushingly): Wo lardka jisse mae pyar karti hun,wo Prem hai.

(Heer become shocked)

Heer (shockingly): Kya Prem!!!!!

Sanjana: Heer mae Prem se bohot pyar karti hun. Tu please meri help karna yar.

Heer (nervously): Kya''help? Mae kya kar sakti hun?

Sanjana: Tu to Prem ki best friend haina. Tujhe kya lagta hai kya Prem bhi mere liye waisa hi feel karta hoga jaisa mae uske liye karti hun. Ha bata na kya mae usse apne dil ki baat bata dun?

Heer! Heer!

(Heer came out of her thought)

Sanjana: Heer kahan kho gai thi tu? Bata na kya mae Prem ko bata dun ki mae usse pyar karti hun.

Heer (uncomfortably): Ummm han'''han Sanju, tujhe apni dil ki baat Prem ko bata deni chahiye.

Sanjana (excitedly): Sachi! To phir thik hai, kal Kunal ki birthday party hai or kal party main hi mae Prem ko apni dil ki baat bata dungi.

Wow! I am so excited! Ok Heer ab muje jana hai or kal ke liye taiyari bhi karni hai. Bye Thank you so much Heer, love you.

(Sanjana excitedly left and Heer was silently sitting there with sad face)

In Maan Villa

(Door bell rang. Teji opened the door and Prem entered)

Teji: Arre Prem kaisa hai tu?

(Prem touch Teji's feet)

Prem: Mae thik hun aunty. Ap kaise ho?

Teji: Mae to thik hun lekin pehle ty bata tu kyun Heer se lardta rehta hai huh!

(Teji asked Prem while catching his ears)

Prem: Ah'aunty maine kuch nhi kiya. Meri Heer se aj koi lardai nahi hui.

Teji: Acha! Tu phir Heer itni udas kyun hai?

Prem: Heer udas hai?

Teji: Han. Abhi thordi der pehle bahar gai thi. Jab se aai hai tab se bilkul chup-chap hai. Muje laga ki shayad tujhse lardai hui hai isiliye udas hai wo.

Prem: Nahi aunty, meri aj Heer se koi lardai nahi hai. Balki meri to aj subha hi usse baat hui thi. Usi ne mujhe yahan bulaya hai. Actually kal Kunal ka birthday haina to usi ke liye gift kharedne jane wale the hum dono. Or mae usse yahan lene hi aya hun.

Teji: Acha! To phir kya baat ho sakti hai?

Prem: Aunty mae jaake usse baat karta hun.

Teji: Han ja. Bus tu hi to ek hai jisse wo apni sari problem share karti hai. Tu ja uske paas.

Prem: Ji aunty!

(Then Prem goes to Heer's room)

In Heer's Room

(Heer was standing near window thinking about the conversation that she had with Sanjana just few hours ago.)

Just then

BHOOO!!!!!!

(Heer got scared and Prem starts laughing)

Heer (irritately): Prem pagal ho gaye ho kya tum. Tumne meri jaan nikaldi thi stupid!

Prem (laughingly): Hahahahaah tumhara chehra dekhne layak tha hahahaha!

(Heer starts crying and hitting Prem)

Prem (laughingly): Ah'.. sorry sorry!

(Prem notice that Heer is crying and become worried)

Prem (worriedly): Heer kya hua? Tum ro kyun rahi ho?

(Prem asked cupping her face)

Heer (wiping her tears): Kuch nahi, mae thik hun.

Prem: Nahi kuch to hua hai. Maine aise tumhe bohot bar daraya hai, pehle to tumne aise kabhi react nahi kiya. Kya baat hai? Apne Prem ko nahi bataogi? Hmmm?

Heer: Nahi Prem aisi koi baat nahi hai, bus sar mein thorda dard ho raha hai.

Prem: Acha to chalo hum bahar chalte hai. Tumhara mood bhi thik ho jayega. Or phir Kunal ke liye gift bhi to kharidna hai. Chale?

(Heer nodded her head and Prem wipe her tears. Then they left for mall)

At Shopping Mall

Prem: Heer tum batao na hum Kunal ke liye kya gift khareden?

(Heer was lost in her thoughts)

Prem: Heer! Heer!

(Prem snap his fingures in front of Heer's face)

Heer: Han''kya Prem!

Prem: Wohi to mae janna chahta hun Heer, ki tum kya soch rahi ho. Please Heer, muje batao ki kya baat hai. Heer agar tum pareshan hoti hona, to phir mujhe bhi chain nahi milta. Kya hua? Batao.

Heer: Wo Prem aj mae caf mein'''

(But she was interrupted by Prem's phone)

Heer: Tum pehle phone pe baat karlo.

(Prem nodded and answer his call. It was Sanjana)

Prem: Han Sanju!

(After hearing Sanjana's name Heer become alert and again saddness took over in her heart)

Sanjana: Prem kaise ho? Maine tumhe disturb to nahi kiya na?

Prem: arre nahi actually mae Heer ke sath mall aya tha, Kunal ke liye birthday gift kharedne ke liye.

Sanjana: Oh acha! Maine to bus aise hi call kiya tha. Kafi din hogaye the na tumse baat nahi hui thi.

Prem (teasingly): acha muje miss kar rahi thi.

(Hearing this Heer become more sad and uncomfortable)

Sanjana (blushingly): Han aisa hi samajlo. Ok phir kal milte hain. Tum aaogena?

Prem: Han ofcourse! Kunal ki party mein na aake uske haathon marna thordina hai.

(Both Prem and Sanjana starts laughing and Heer become more curious)

Sanjana: Thik hai to phir kal milte hain. Bye!

Prem: Ok bye!

(They disconnect their call and Prem turn towards Heer. Heer was lost in her thoughts)

Prem: o meri chater-pater, phir se kahan kho gai?

Heer: kahin nahi!

Prem: Ab batao kya baat hai.

Heer: Nahi Prem koi baat nahi hai. Sach mein!

Prem: Thik hain Heer agar tum nahi batana chahati to thik hai. Lekin agar tumhe mujhse kuch share karna ho then I am always there for you!

(Heer nodded her head)

Heer (smilingly): I know!

Prem: Ab chale?

Heer:Han chalo!

Prem: First ofall smile! C'mon smile! Smile!

(Heer smiled)

Prem: That's like my girl! Ab chalo!

(Then they bought gift for Kunal and Prem droped Heer home)

[Guys this was the 9th chapter. Please do give your long comments. Thank you😊]

i liked the charechter develpoment👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_28

Chapter-10

(Meher and Preet both are sitting in Kunal's house waiting for Kunal to come downstairs)

Meher: Preet, what do you think Kunal bhaiya ne achanak hume yahan kyun bulaya hoga.

Preet: Pata nahi Meher, ab to Kunal bhai hi ake hi batayenge.

(Soon Kunal came downstair)

Preet: Chalo finally apke darshan to hue.

Meher: Han Kunal bhaiya kahan the ap hum kab se apka wait kar rahe hain. Apne hume yahan kyun bulaya hai?

(Kunal in very serious mood)

Kunal: Preet, Meher muje tum dono se bohot zarori baat karni hai.

Preet: Kya baat hai bhai, ap itne serious mood mein.Anything serious?

Kunal: Han Preet baat bohot hi serious hai. Muje tum dono se Prem or Heer ke baare mein baat karni hai.

Preet (confusingly): PB or Heer di ke baare mein?

Meher: Un dono ke beech mein phir se koi jhagra hua kya?

Kunal: Nahi Meher, un dono ke beech mein koi jhagra nahi hua.

Meher: To phir kya baat hai Kunal bhai?

Kunal: Prem or Heer ke baare mein tum dono ka kya khayal hai?

Preet (confusingly): Matlab????

Kunal: Matlab ki Preet agar Heer teri bhabi or Meher Prem tere jiju ban jaye to?

(Both Preet and Meher looked at Kunal shockingly)

Meher: Kunal bhai yeh ap kya keh rahe ho?

Kunal: Tumhe nahi lagta ki Prem or Heer ek dosre se pyar karte hain lekin abhi tak yeh baa two dono samaj nahi paye hain.

Preet: Han Kunal bhai, ap thik keh rahe ho. PB or Heer di ek doosre se bohot pyar karte hain lekin abhi tak samaj nahi paye hain. Apko pata hai bhai jab hum log Maan Villa gaye the na dinner pe to Heer di sabko daal serve kar rahi thi or galti se unhone garam daal apne haath pe girali thi.

Meher: Han or unki chinkh sunke Prem bhai ne to poora ghar sar pe utha liya tha.

Kunal: Prem Heer se kitna pyar karta hai ki uski choti si takleef bhi Prem se bardash nahi hoti hai. Par pata nahi kyun yeh dono kyun nahi samajte yeh baat. Kahin aisa na ho ki bohot der ho jaye.

Preet: To phir hume hi kuch karna chahiye, un dono ko pyar ka ehsaas dilwana chahiye.

Kunal: Isiliye to tum dono ko yahan pe bulaya hai taki hum teeno milke Prem or Heer ko yeh ehsaas dilwa sake ki wo dono ek doosre se kitna pyar karte hain.

Meher (excitedly): Wow! This sounds so interesting!!!!!

Kunal: To kal ki party se hum apna mission 'Prem or Heer' shuru karenge.

Preet: Ok so done!!!!!

Kunal and Meher: Done!!!!!

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Next day at Kunal's house

(The party was going on and Kunal was welcoming the guests and he was greeted 'Happy Birthday' by them. Soon Sanjana arrived.)

Sanjana: Hi Kunal, Happy Birthday!!!!

Kunal: Thank you so much Sanju.

Sanjana: Kunal Prem nahi aya abhi tak?

(Kunal looked suspiciously at sanjana. By seeing Kunal's look'.)

Sanjana: Ummm'. I mean Prem or Heer abhi tak nahi aye?

Kunal: Nahi abhi tak to nahi aye, lekin ate hi honge, tum chalo andar. Make yourself comfortable.

(Sanjana nodded and went inside. Soon Prem, Heer, Meher and Preet arrived. All of them hugged Kunal and wished him Happy Birthday)

Kunal: Arre bhae sirf wish karne se kaam nahi chalega. Kuch gift-shift laye ho ki nahi.

(Prem winked at Heer and she smiled naughtily)

Prem: Oh shit! Heer hum gift to ghar pe hi bhul gaye.

Heer: Arre han Prem, jaldi-jaldi mein to gift lana hi bhul gaye.

Kunal (shockingly): KYA!!!!!!! Tum log mera gift bhul gaye. Arre yeh kya baat hui. Aise thordi na hota hai. Yeh to galat baat hai. Nahi nahi this is absolutely wrong. Yeh to bohot hi galat baat hai. Tum log mera gift aise kaise ghar pe bhul sakte ho. Aise thordi na hota hai'''''''''

(Kunal kept on blabbering and Prem, Heer, Meher and Preet started laughing at Kunal's hilarious reaction)

Kunal: Arre ek to tum log mera gift ghar pe bhul gaye ho or upar se has rahe ho. This is not fair!!!!!!!!!

Preet: Kunal bhai relax apka gift car mein hai mae abhi leke ata hun.

(Preet left from there to bring Kunal's gift from the car)

Heer (laughingly): Kunal tub hi na sach mein nautanki hai. Itna barda ho gaya hai lekin aj bhi bacho ki tarha gift ke liye rota hai hahahhahah

Prem: Heer jis din Kunal mature ho gaya na us din kayamath ajayegi.

Kunal: hahahah very funny!!!!!!!!

(Meher saw her friend Tanisha)

Meher: Di, mae Tanisha ke paas ja rahi hun ok.

(Heer smilingly nodded her head)

Heer: Kunal Misha or Ash nahi aye abhi tak?

Kunal: arre kabke agaye hai wo log. Aur ate hi meri jaan khana shuru kar diya un dono ne ki 'Kunal please hume tum apne kisi hot friend se mila do na, please'.

Finally ab wo dono Manmeet or Kabeer ke sath busy hai.

(Both Prem and Heer starts laughing and then Sanjana came there)

Sanjana: Hi Heer, hi Prem!

(Seeing Sanjana Heer's smile vanished which didn't go unnoticed by Kunal)

Heer (uncomfortably): Hi Sanju!

Prem (smiling widely): Hi Sanju! Kaisi ho?

Sanjana (blushingly): Mae thik hun Prem tum kaise ho?

(Both Prem and Sanjana starts talking. Seeing them talking Heer becomes sad and Kunal was observing Heer's expression)

[That was the 10th chapter guys😊. Sorry for the delay, actually I was busy with my college admission]

i wanna know how would have Prem looked saying shit😆..good development in charechters
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Originally posted by: kiran_28

Chapter-11
The party was really rocking.Heer was standing in the corner watching Prem and Sanjana dancing. Just then Kunal came and stood beside Heer. He smirked watching Heer's expression.
Kunal: Arre Heer tum yahan akeli khardi kya kar rahi ho. Dance kyun nahi kar rahi?
Heer (looking at Prem and Sanjana): Nahi Kunal mera mann nahi kar raha.
Kunal: Arre aise kaise chalega. Atleast ek dance to banta hai. Mere sath hi karlo, waise bhi koi lardki to muje ghas dalti hi nahi. Kum se kum tum to mere birthday ke din mere sath dance karlo. Please!
He extend his hand towards Heer.
Kunal: Please!!!!!!!!!!
Heer smiled and Give her hand in Kunal's hand. And went with him to dance floor.
On the same time on dance floor
Prem: I don't believe ki tum itna acha dance karti ho Sanju. Tum to chupi rustam nikli.
Sanjana (blushingly): Arre nahi aisi baat nahi hai. Bus aise hi thorda bohot dance kar leti hun.
Prem smiled and then he saw Heer and Kunal are dancing. Seeing Kunal's hand on Heer's waist, Prem's blood boiled. He don't know why but didn't like the fact that Kunal and Heer both are dancing so closely. Though he knows that Kunal and Heer are only friends, not more than that. But something was bothering him.
While dancing Kunal saw Prem was glaring at them. Kunal smirked.
Kunal (thinks): Oh ok so now Mr. Prem Juneja is jealous. Ab ayega maza. Very good Kunal keep it up!
Then Kunal purposefully tucked Heer's strands that was falling on her face, behind her ears. This made Prem more angry and jealous . Heer looked at Kunal confusingly.
Kunal: ummm'. Wo kuch nahi Heer, actually tumhare balon mae kuch laga hua tha to bus wohi hata raha tha.
Heer: Oh acha!
Prem was continuously looking at Heer and Kunal, but soon he was interrupted by Sanjana.
Sanjana: Prem muje tumse kuch baat karni thi.
Prem: Han bolo (then again looking at Kunal and Heer) kya baat karni thi.
Sanjana (nervously): ummm'' Prem yahan bohot shor hai. Kya hum bahar chalke baat kar sakte hain. Please.
Prem (irritately): Sanju yahi bata do na.
Sanjana: Prem please!
Prem (unwillingly): acha thik hai chalo.
Heer saw that Prem and Sanjana are going out and become more sad. Kunal was observing Heer's expression.
Kunal: Kya hua Heer aj tum itni chup-chap si kyun ho?
Heer: Nahi Kunal aisi koi baat nahi hai.
Kunal: Noway! Mae maan hi nahi sakta ki koi baat nahi hai. Kuch to baat hai. Khair chordo, mae abhi ata hun ok.
Heer smilingly nodded her head.
Preet was secretly drinking Beer with his friends. Just then Kunal and Meher came there.
Kunal (hitting on Preet's head): Abe saale! Yeh kya kar raha hai tu huh!
Meher: Oh Preet! Tum beer pee rahe ho, mae abhi Prem bhaiya ko batati hun.
Preet: Arre nahi nahi! Maine kuch nahi kiya. Wo bus yeh log zid kar rahe the isiliye mae to bus taste kar raha tha thordi si.
Kunal: Acha taste kar raha tha! Beta tuje to mae baad mein dekhunga. Abhi to tu or Meher Prem or Sanjana ke peeche jao. Wo dono abhi abhi bahar gaye hain. Un pe nazar rakho or pata karo ki un dono ke beech mein kya baatein ho rahi hai, ok.
Meher: Ok bhaiya!
Preet in James Bond + SRK style
Preet: Bond! James Bond! Naam to suna hi hoga, hmmm!
Meher hit Preet on his arm
Meher: O antic piece, nautanki band kar or chal ab.
Preet :Aj kal to kisi ke talent ki to koi kadar hi nahi hai.
Meher (irritately): Prrreeettt
Meher dragged Preet outside and Kunal laughed at them.
Outside
Prem: Kya baat hai Sanju, kya baat karni thi?
Meher and Preet was hiding behind the bushes. Preet was continuously irritating Meher by doing James Bond's acting.
Sanjana: ummm Prem yeh baat mae bohot pehle se hi tumko bata dena chahati thi, lekin''
Prem: Sanju saf- saf batao ki kya baat hai.
Sanjana (nervously): Prem mae kehna chahati thi ki mae'''.
Prem: Han bolo!
Sanjana: Prem I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mae tumse bohot pyar karti hun. I really love you Prem.
Prem, Meher and Preet were shocked
Preet (shockingly): Haila! Kahani mein twist!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Meher (shockingly): Prem, Heer aur wo!!!!!!!!!!!!
Preet (shockingly): Nahi Meher! Prem, Heer aur Sanjana!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love Triangle!!!!!!!!!!
Prem was looking at Sanjana shockingly
[Guys that was the 11th chapter. Now what will be Prem's reaction and how will he react, this will be revealed in next update]

i liked preet-meher banter!!
i liked prem's jealousy!! i loved it so much!
i think the propose waali baath was a bit blunt!
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Chapter-12

Sanjana took Prem's hand in her hand.

Sanjana: Prem I really love you. Believe me Prem. Mae tumse pagalon ki tarha pya''.

STOP IT SANJU!!!!!!!!!!! Prem angrily interrupted her

Prem: Are you out of your mind or what. Tum janti bhi ho ki tum kya bol rahi ho. Hosh mein to ho tum?

Sanjana: Poore hosh mein hun mae. Mae janti hun ki mae kya bol rahi hun. Dammit I love you!!!!!!!!!

Prem (angrily): BUS!!!!!!!!!!!! Sanju agar yeh koi mazak hai then I'll request you, stop it right now, warna'''.

Sanjana (cryingly): Tumhare liye mera pyar koi mazak nahi hai Prem.

Prem regret for shouting on Sanjana

Prem: Sanju I am sorry. Muje tumpe chilana nahi chahiye tha lekin tum yeh kya keh rahi ho. Hum to dost haina, to phir tum kyun yeh pyar ko beech mein la rahi ho.

Sanjana (cryingly): Prem muje to laga tha, that you love me, you care for me!

Prem: Ofcourse I love you, I care for you but as a friend Sanju. Tumne pata nahi kya kya soch liya. Sanju mae''' I don't have words. Muje samaj nahi araha ki mae tumse kya kahun. Listen Sanju tum mujse pyar nahi karti ho, tumhe sirf lagta hai kit um mujse pyar karti ho but its not true. Its just infatuation, attraction that's it!!!

Sanju muje bohot bura lag raha hai tumhe mana karte hue, lekin mae tumhe dhoke mein nahi rakhna chahata. Tum samjh rahi hona, mae kya kehra hun. Sanju please don't take me wrong but jo pyar tum mujhse expect kar rahi ho wo pyar mae tumhe nahi de sakta. I m sorry Sanju!!!!

Sanjana cryingly looked at Prem and then ran from there.

Prem (yelled): Sanju listen to me!!!! Sanju!!!!!!!!!!

But she went from there in her car.

This whole scene was watched by Meher and Preet.

Preet: Thank God!! PB ne use mana kar diya.

Meher: Bechari sanjana di, muje unke liye bohot bura lag raha hai.

Preet: Oh Meher!!! Kaisi behan ho tum. Tumhe us lardki ke liye bura lag raha hai jo tumhari behan ki sautan banna chahati hai.

Meher: shutup Preet!!!!!!!! Mera wo matlab nahi tha. Mae to abhi bhi yehi chahati hun ki Prem bhai mere jiju bane. Lekin insaniyat ke naate muje Sanjana di ke liye bohot bura lag raha hai. Bechari ka dil toot gaya.

Preet: Meher Sanjana ke liye sympathy dikhana band kar or ab chal yeh breaking news Kunal bhai ko batate hai.

Meher: Han chal

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In the party

Heer was standing with misha and ash.

Misha: You know what Heer, Kabeer is such a nice guy. Pata hai wo bhi mujh me interested tha.

Misha and Ash was continuously talking about Kabeer and Manmeet but heer was lost in her own thought

Heer (thinks): Prem or Sanjana bahar kyun gaye hai or abhi tak aye kyun nahi. Kahin Sanjana Prem ko apni dil ki baat batane ke liye to nahi leke gai hai bahar. Agar aisa hai to ab tak to usne Prem ko bata diya hoga. Pata nahi Prem ne kya jawab diya hoga. Kahin Prem ne sanju ko han to nah'''.

Heer! Heer! Ash interrupted her thought. Heer looked at ash and Misha.

Ash: Heer tu kahan khoi hui hai. Hum itni der se tujhse baat kar rahe hai, lekin tu to koi jawab hi nahi de rahi hai. Kya hua?

Heer: Kuch nahi ash. Actually muje meri tabiyat kuch thik nahi lag rahi. I think muje ghar jana chahiye.

Misha: Kya hua Heer?

Heer: Kuch nahi bas thorda sa sar mein dard ho raha hai. Mae Kunal ko bye bol ke ati hun ok bye.

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Preet: Han Kunal bhai humne apni ankhon se dekha hai yeh sab.

Kunal: Muje to yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai. Shuru mein pehle shak to hota tha ki Sanju Prem ko pasand karti hai lekin maine soocha ki shayad yeh mera veham hai. But sau baat ki ek baat Prem ne Sanju ko mana kar diya iska matlab Prem ke dil mae Heer ke liye special jagaha hai.

Meher: Kunal bhaiya, Prem bahi ne Sanjana di ko mana kar diya isse yeh kaise pata chalta hai unhone Heer di ke waje se mana kar diya?

Preet: Meher tum manhoos batein kyun kar rahi ho. Shub- shub bolo!

Meher (irritately): Preet tum'..

Kunal interrupted them

Kunal: Arre bas karo yar. Tum dono ko bus moqa chahiye jhagra karne ka.

Then Kunal saw that heer was coming to them only

Kunal (whispering): acha suna, ab chup ho jao. Heer idhar hi arahi hai. Use is bare mein kuch pata nahi chalna chahiye.ok?

Both Preet and Meher nodded.

Heer: Kunal mae ghar ja rahi hun.

Kunal: Kyun? Itni jaldi?

Heer: Kunal actually mere sar mein bohot dard ho raha hai. That is why!

Kunal: Han to tum upar jaake guest room mein thorda aram karlo. Mae tumhare liye medicine bhijwata hun.

Heer: arre nahi Kunal iski koi zarurat nahi. Tum khamka takleef utha rahe ho.

Kunal: arre Heer isme takleef ki kya baat.

Heer: Nahi please! Mae ghar jana chahati hun please.

Kunal: Acha thik hai. Tumhari tabyat thik nahi hai isiliye mae tumhe rokunga nahi. Lekin tum jaogi kaise? Prem to pata nahi kahan hai?

Preet: Di mae apko ghar chord deta hun?

Meher: han aur mae bhi apke sath chalti hun.

Heer: Arre Meher, Preet tum dono yahin ruko, enjoy karo. Don't worry I'll be fine.

Preet: Lekin Heer di!

Heer: maine kaha na mae chali jaoungi. Tum dono enjoy karo. Ok

Kunal: acha thik to phir mae driver ko bol deta hun ki tumhe ghar drop karde. No arguments now!

Heer: acha thik hai

Meher: Di apna khayal rakhna ok, ghar pohonch ke muje call karna. Mae Preet or Prem bhai ke sath ghar time pe ajoungi.

Heer nodded and then left from there.

[So guys here is a 12th chap. Sorry for the delay😊]

wow!! nice one!! i can imagine prem rejecting!!😆...he is so so handsome👏
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Originally posted by: kiran_28

Chapter-13

Prem was standing in front of the mirrot in Kunal's washroom splashing water on his face continuously thinking about sanjana's proposal.

Prem (thinks): Kya maine galat kiya kya sanju ko mana karke. Lekin mae use han kaise kar deta' jabki maine uske bare mein us tarha se kabhi nahi socha.

"Knock! Knock! Prem are you there? Tum thik to hona? Kunal asked.

Prem came out of the washroom wiping his wet face.

Kunal: Kya hua Prem are you alright?

Prem: Han Kunal mae thik hun. Bas dard ke mare sar phata jar aha hai.

Kunal: lo karlo baat! Tumhare bhi sar mein dard ho raha hai kya. Aj kya 'headache day' hai kya. Ruko mae tumhare liye medicine leke ata hun.

Prem (confusingly): mere bhi sar mein dard ho raha hai matlab? Or kiske sar mein dard ho raha hai?

Kunal: Heer ke sar mein!!! isiliye to wo jaldi ghar chali gai.

Prem: Heer ke sar mein dard ho raha or wo ghar bhi chali gai?

Prem (thinks): Sanju ke chakar mein Heer ke bare mein to mae bhul hi gaya. Or wo muje bina bataye hi ghar chali gai. I hope uske sar zyada dard nahi ho raha ho.

Kunal: Prem chal niche chalet hain party mein.

Prem: Kunal tu chal mein abhi ata hun.

Kunal: acha thik hai tu jaldi aaiyo, ok?

Prem nodded. Kunal left from there and Prem starts dialing Heer's number. Heer was lying on the bed thinking about Prem and Sanjana. Then her phone starts ringing. She saw Prem's name was flashing on the screen.

Heer (thinks): Prem zaror apne or Sanju ke bare mein batane ke liye call kar raha hoga.

She took her phone in her hand and cut the call. Prem was shocked. Then again he dialed her number and again she cut the call.

Prem (frustrated): Dammit! Ab yeh Heer ko kya ho gaya. Bar-bar mera phone kyun kat rahi hai. Pehle Sanju or ab Heer. Aj ka to din hi kharab hai.

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In the party

Prem came downstairs. When Preet saw Prem is coming ti them, he winked at Kunal and they starts talking about Heer loudly.

Preet (as loudly as he can): I hope Heer di ke sar mein ab zyada dard na ho.

Prem stopped in his track for a second when he heard Preet talking about Heer's headache.

Kunal (whispering to preet): Preet gala phardne ki zarurat nahi hai. Apni normal awaz mein bol.

Preet: sorry Kunal bhai!

Kunal (in his normal voice): Han Preet tu sahi keh raha hai. I hope ki ab Heer ki tabiyat thik ho.

Prem came to them and stood beside them.

Prem (worriedly): Heer ke sar mein zyada dard ho raha tha kya?

Kina: han Prem Heer ki tabiyat bohot zyada kharab thi. Infact use to kharda bhi nahi hue ja raha tha.

Kunal winked when Prem was in his deep thought.

Prem (thinks): ghar jane se pehle mae Heer se milke jaoung. I know wo mujhse oakka naraz hogi. Or isiliye wo mera phone bhi kat rahi hai.

Kunal: waise Prem Sanju bhi nahi dekhai de rahi hai. Tuje pata hai ki wo kahan hai.

Hearing Sanjana's name Prem become uncomfortable.

Prem: umm'. Nahi Kunal, uje nahi pata.

Kunal: Acha! Shayad ghar chali gai hogi.

Prem: Kunal I think ab hume ghar chalna chahiye. Bohot der ho rahi hai.

Kunal: Arre lekin thordi der or ruko na tum log.

Prem: Nahi Kunal please! Der ho rahi. Jana hoga. Happy Birthday once again.

Kunal: Thanks Prem.

Prem hugged Kunal and left from ther with Preet and Meher.

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Prem stopped his car in front of Maan Villa. Meher got down.

Meher: Thank you Prem bhaiya, thank you Preet. Ap log thordi der ke liye andar aaiye na.

Preet (purposefully): Nahi Meher der ho rahi hai. Ab hume chalna chahiye, kyun PB?

Prem: Preet I think Meher thik keh rahi hai. Hume andar chalna chahiye. Heer ki tabiyat thik nahi haina to uska bhi hai-chal pooch lenge.

Both Preet and Meher smirked.

Meher: Han Prem bhaiya aaiye na andar.

Trio went inside the Maan Villa.

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Teji came out of the kitchen hearing the door bell and she opened the door.

Teji: Arre agaye tum log? Party kaisi thi?

Preet: Party bohot achi thi aunty. Maza agaya.

Prem: Aunty Heer ki tabiyat kaisi hai ab?

Teji: Uski tabiyat ab thik hai.wo apne kamre mein hai.

Prem: Aunty kya mein Heer se mil sakta hun?

Teji: arre yeh bhi koi poochne wali baat hai kya beta. Ja jaake mille use.

Prem: Thank you aunty!

Prem went upstairs

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In Heer's Room

Heer was sleeping on her bed. Prem came inside and sit beside her. And starts stroking her head.

Prem (thinks): Mae janta hun heer kit um mujhse naraz ho kyunki party mein maine tumhe zara bhi time nahi diya. Isiliye tum mujhse bina mile hi agai. I am sorry!

Then Prem covered her properly with blanket and softly placed a kiss on her forehead.

Prem (softly): Good night meri chatter-patter!!!!!!!!!!!!

And left from there by giving last last glance on her.

[Ok guys this was the 13th chapter. I know ki maine bohot der se update kiya. I am really sorry. Nowadays I am really busy with my college. So isiliye aage ke update bhi thorde late milenge. I am telling you in advance]

nice chapter hon! nice ...but its high time premeer meet😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
PLS KIRAN
SUNDAY GONE
MONDAY GONE
TUESDAY GONE
WHERE IS THE UPDATE
PLSS SSS WE NEED A UPDATE
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Posted: 13 years ago
PLS KIRAN TODAY WILL U UPDATE
WAITING
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_28

sunday ya monday pakka!!!

Kiran when will u update yaar ??????? It's wednesday now😔

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Posted: 13 years ago
i m really sorry guys
i know as per my promise i should have update nxt part now
but wat can i do now yaar i m really busy with my assignments and internal exams 😭
pls forgive me!!!!


Abhi precap se hi kam chalalo

Precap:-
Prem: Heer tum "I love You" bol rahi ho ya nahi
Heer: NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!
Prem: Acha thik hai mat bolo mae bhi dekhta hun tum kab tak nahi bolti. Agar tumse "I Love You" na bolwaya na to mera naam bhi Prem Juneja nahi.



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PIR KOI NAUK JAUK HOGAIII PREMEER KE BEECH MAIN DATS SO SWEET PLS UPDATE SOONN

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