OS || Tears - Page 2

Originally posted by: iheartChai

Running all right...you split them up! 🤔 I'm soo sorry! :( I knew I'd get a reactions like this 😆 but I just had to write it! I know it'll sound kind of weird but I LOVE writing sad stories and listening to sad songs - I know it's crazy but it's true! 😆

So can we have a second shot at least one with Heer carrying Prem's child? Aww, I wish I could write a sequel to this one but I can't :( It's gonna be hard for me cuz I imagined the ending like how it is. Really sorry! But don't worry I will make up for it with another one shot that will be happy! :) Thanks for the comment Grace! :)

Originally posted by: sweetnsourx3

OMG that was soo sad 😲...nooo why did he just leave 😭 why is he going to dieee 😭 poor heer 😔😔Really sorryyy! :( But you know why I wrote this! ;) hehehe lol even if it was tragic i really loved itt, it was really well written! 😉 Awww thank you! :D Glad you liked it! i'm glad irene made you write an os! haha maybe we should have more hurricanes so you'll write more! 😆 LOLL! I don't think we want another Irene coming our way, but don't worry I will definitely write more! :) Thanks for the comment! :D

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Awww that was absolutely beautiful Gari! 😳 Honestly I think any incomplete/sad endings are just so much more beautiful than when it's all happy 😛 Awww thanks Meeru! 😳 I totally agree with you! I love sad endings more than happy ones! hehe we are soo alike! 😉

I loved the way you showed that he saw her at the train station so he knew that she still loved him despite the lies in his letter😳 mhmm I still wanted to show the love they had even after they separated. :)

Awesome writing again Gari! Thanks Meeru, you're the best! :) Love youu! 🤗

Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi

Lovely touching OS..

Premeer separated..

The os was very beautifully written...

Originally posted by: priyahmt

nice os...bt sad one tooo...pls continue and bring them together pls...i can;t see my premeer away from each other...

Originally posted by: aaminaman

Ohhh it was so ni e but I don't want them to be separated. Plllsss continue it with heer being pregnent and prem findidng it out plsss

Originally posted by: Ayesha103

Awesome so possibly can heer pregnant :O looking 4wrd 2 n upd8, ad me to pm list please :D

Originally posted by: additi10

awww it was sad but lovely well written awesomeee OS

Originally posted by: sadhz

Awesome OS...bt sad ... prem is goin to die n hav only 1 month to live...*sad* ...poor heer
i want sequel ...if possible do write...😛
again great work