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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: newt2007
Thanks Grace for this wonderful shot.

Loved Preet calling Balraj 'Pops' its so funny.

Heer fighting with Prem and leaving the house. if she didn't like him then she should chase him out. why she is going out?

There Fine fine is very good. their emotions expressed in silent way.

They way Prem talking to himself and Preet giving some sense to him by one word 'divorce' really wonderful, that made him think about his life with Heer.

On the way he encounters some scenes which opens his eyes.

Most adorable part, confessing their love. Prem telling those gave me thrilling and i really wanted to read Heer's reaction side by side.

Okay we can't think Prem as arrogant person for long. He changed upside down because his name is Prem.

Grace its good work to help us to see Prem as unloving person in the start. Thanks for this wonderful piece.

Hi Selvy,

Thanks for liking the OS.

Heer probably should have chased Prem out but she was so angry she just had to get away from the house. And yup Prem can't be arrogant and uncaring too long...he is Prem afterall 😉

Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

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@...Pwincess...

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

oh Selvy

i loved this OS

it was amazing

pleeease write some more

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: aaminaman
it was so nice yaar i really loved it you wrote it so well and yeah do write os you are so good in writing

Thanks for liking the work.

I'll try another OS sometime 😉

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sowmya18
ahhh...an one shot finally...
loved it...

Thanks for loving it 😃

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya
dat was <3 <3 <3 <3

lovin it! jst luved it! luv the way they fighted! sayin FINE ! dan preet cumin n makin prem undrstd of heer goin away! dan prem realisin dat he luvs heer! the confession! makin out evrythin was jst aowsum! luvd it!!!!

thx for d pm! dear! n yep! wil b wa8in for ur SS n FF! :))))

Hehe...the Fine part I thought was pretty funny. And good old Preet...he always has a plan 😉

Thanks for liking the OS and yes, I'm working on the SS and FF.

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: cutegirl94
It was awesome!! Loved it! hehehe preet eating the tea biscuit was a fun part...Prem and heers scene were sooo good!! 😍
thanks sooo much for the pm!! 🤗

Thanks for liking the OS and taking the time to comment 😃

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: pwincess1
oh Selvy
i loved this OS

it was amazing

pleeease write some more

Selvy? (I'm going to assume you meant Grace) 😛

Thanks for liking the OS.

And I'll come back with some other One Shots 😉

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harshitideewani

@harshitideewani

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

great job grace 👏
please continue sooon very interstinggg love it sooo much👍🏼
waitinggg for next part asap😍

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Khadija

@khajju

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Hey grace😃

b4 i say anything.PLZZZ convert this into OS or FF...i will luv to read more abt it..here goes my comment

luvd this OS yaar❤️...its fantabulous...luike u i also wants to see harshad doing goons orr any other grey shaded character...and here u gave me an OS on it...i luvd the story..how prem was a gunda and then married heer and now end up falling in luv with her...so all junega brothers are living in this house...premeer fighting was soo funny(dnt knw but i found it reallt funny)..the way they wer fighting like crazy cats and then at the end souting at each other FINE! FINE!.. these two😆...preet u r great...in seconds u made prem go and apologize to heer and bring her back..i mean he only said abt divorce and prem got worried and went to bring heer back..the flash backs of premeer wer awwesmeee...woow prem heer in the farmhouse alone☺️...premeer confession and kissing scene was 😍...wooww phingoli too☺️...luvd premmer scenes in the bedroom...hhehe prem asking heer for his dress...naughty boy...aww prem telling heer his past...tht was sooo sad...nywayzz tht was the past...and prem is a good boy now...thanks for pm...and continue soon this one...and sorry i havent commented on other ff and ss...will comment on it soon😊

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Lisa

@Aymee

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Great OS Grace.

It is great to see Prem in a whole different character compared to what we see him as in the show.

I liked how Preet but the fear in him about Heer divorcing Prem. Stubborn as Prem might have been, he really didn't want to divorce her. And when Prem kept remember Heer while he looking at other couples, I thought it was very sweet how much he was missing her.

Their confession and then becoming one was very beautiful.

Thank you Grace for writing this for us.

Thank you for the PM. Whenever you get the chance, do write another OS. We love reading your stories.