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iheartChai

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: harshitideewani
great job grace 👏
please continue sooon very interstinggg love it sooo much👍🏼
waitinggg for next part asap😍

Thanks for liking this One Shot.

I probably won't convert this into a FF or SS but I may come back with other One Shots based upon these characters/personalities 😉

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...Pwincess...

@...Pwincess...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: iheartChai

Selvy? (I'm going to assume you meant Grace) 😛

Thanks for liking the OS.

And I'll come back with some other One Shots 😉

ooops..sorry😳

yh Grace

Selvy writes alot so i said her name by mistake

sorry Grace

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: khajju
Hey grace😃
b4 i say anything.PLZZZ convert this into OS or FF...i will luv to read more abt it..here goes my comment
luvd this OS yaar❤️...its fantabulous...luike u i also wants to see harshad doing goons orr any other grey shaded character...and here u gave me an OS on it...i luvd the story..how prem was a gunda and then married heer and now end up falling in luv with her...so all junega brothers are living in this house...premeer fighting was soo funny(dnt knw but i found it reallt funny)..the way they wer fighting like crazy cats and then at the end souting at each other FINE! FINE!.. these two😆...preet u r great...in seconds u made prem go and apologize to heer and bring her back..i mean he only said abt divorce and prem got worried and went to bring heer back..the flash backs of premeer wer awwesmeee...woow prem heer in the farmhouse alone☺️...premeer confession and kissing scene was 😍...wooww phingoli too☺️...luvd premmer scenes in the bedroom...hhehe prem asking heer for his dress...naughty boy...aww prem telling heer his past...tht was sooo sad...nywayzz tht was the past...and prem is a good boy now...thanks for pm...and continue soon this one...and sorry i havent commented on other ff and ss...will comment on it soon😊

Sorry khajju I don't think I will convert this OS into a FF or SS.

But I may come back with other One Shots based upon these characters/personalities 😉

The fighting could be taken either way...I meant it to be sort of funny how they were just shouting at each other...with FINE and how Heer was like I'm really going this time and Prem not really caring at all, etc.

Preet is totally awesome...all he had to do was mention divorce and it made Prem panic...hehe...he's the best I tell you.

As for Preet and Harman being brothers with Prem...I never really got into that because this was suppose to be a One Shot and I know we naturally assume when we see these names that is how they are related but in this storyline they aren't real brothers. Prem is the leader of his little group so they call him Bhaiya or Boss.

Gray character Prem is something new...but I don't think I got into all the gray stuff here...this was more of the softer side of his goonda character since he was apologizing and trying to win back his wife.

Thanks for liking the One Shot 😃

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Divya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: iheartChai

Hehe...the Fine part I thought was pretty funny. And good old Preet...he always has a plan 😉

Thanks for liking the OS and yes, I'm working on the SS and FF.

i m here online nly! pokin my head into ur FF n SS both seein as 2 wen u update😛

wa8in eagerly!

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Aymee
Great OS Grace.

It is great to see Prem in a whole different character compared to what we see him as in the show.

I liked how Preet but the fear in him about Heer divorcing Prem. Stubborn as Prem might have been, he really didn't want to divorce her. And when Prem kept remember Heer while he looking at other couples, I thought it was very sweet how much he was missing her.

Their confession and then becoming one was very beautiful.

Thank you Grace for writing this for us.

Thank you for the PM. Whenever you get the chance, do write another OS. We love reading your stories.

Hi Lisa,

Thanks for the encouragement. Seeing Prem in a whole different avatar is always something nice to see. I wasn't able to delve into his goonda side...I'll probably write something on that in a later One Shot.

I think no matter how many Premeer stories I may write I will always have Preet there 😆 he's like the voice of reason sometimes or in other cases partner in crime...aaahhh, love my Preet.

Thanks for living the One Shot and taking the time to leave a comment 😃

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midnight_blue

@midnight_blue

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

wonderful shot Grace..loved reading it..i would love to read more premeer os..n it would b great if u could continue it as ss 😊

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: maryaa8688
wonderful shot Grace..loved reading it..i would love to read more premeer os..n it would b great if u could continue it as ss 😊

Thanks for liking the One Shot 😳

Unfortunately I probably won't be making this into a SS or FF but I'll probably be back with more
One Shots based upon these characters/personalities.

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Fatima

@-Fatima-

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

hiya grace🤗
My goodness garce this OS is damn damn amazing u r really brilliant in writing totally love reading this OS.really really sweet & cute love the way u describe all the thingz.U should give more on shotz try as a matter of fact whatever u write is alwayz fabulous
keep rocking
luv
Fatima

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Abigail (Abby)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Grace oh grace your just awesome at writing!👏

another Great piece of writing...Loved the OS

It was a delight to see Prem in a whole new character

I could actually imagine Premeer/Harshiti fighting like kids!😍😆, their just really good at it

and It was so sweet when prem kept on remembering Heer after she had left, good that he realised his love and didn't let her go!

when prem was saying all those dialogues about you deserve someone better than me and I'll talk to your dad and you'll be free from me > that just took my heart away I could feel his pain of losing his love even before he got it and the fake smile he had to put on awww but he did get heer so All is well!😃

Their love confession and becoming one part was so cutee😳

The whole OS was very sweet and cute...would love to read more OS's from your side grace...please do write more I love reading your stuff its just sooo good!

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: -Fatima-
hiya grace🤗
My goodness garce this OS is damn damn amazing u r really brilliant in writing totally love reading this OS.really really sweet & cute love the way u describe all the thingz.U should give more on shotz try as a matter of fact whatever u write is alwayz fabulous
keep rocking
luv
Fatima

Awww, Fatima...your making me 😳 thank you for liking the One Shot.

I'll try to come back with more One Shots based upon these characters/personalities.

Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

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