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saira

@hibbaamir

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#171

heloo ...everybody another surprise...as today is my fav bday SRK!!!...nd my frend i mean sweta...so its for u sweta...

CHAPTER 16...

THEn goes on de dance...

spot lights on premeer...

PREm like a prince moves towards heer...sits on one knee...hand infront of heer

PREm"wud u like to dance wid me...PRINCESS..."smiling

HEER"ya...y not sure...MY PRINCE"smiles

both moves towards de center...nd so do all couiples...maya nd harman...preet nd meher...lalit nd gaya3...avni nd veera r standing...kuldi nd kiran...avni playing wid children...

veera smiling luking at her happy family...

thinks"mujhe aaj woh party yaad hai jahan per nihaal ney mujhey girney sey bachaya tha aur mein ney batameezi ki thi...aur shayad uus ko thapad bhi mara tha..."tears in her eyes...

again thinking"i know HE LUVS ME ALOT...use ney buht dafa yeh baat mujhe samjahaney ki koshihsh ki magar mein...i luv u nihaal...i luv u nihhaal...plz cum ...plz cum bak...my nihaal..."

tears rolling down her cheek...

cuming bak frm her thoughts...smiles seeing her bhaiyas nd bhabis dancing sooo luvigly...

prems hand on heers waist nd heers hand around prems neck...nd song is going on smoothily...nd so their bodies...

BOTH of deirs head r touching now...prem moves his lips to heer nd heer closes her eyes...more near...more near...more near...more near...more near...more near...more near...more near...(suspense)..."KISS"...

PREET"tantataa..."laughs...

all other laughs...premeermoves aside embarrassed...

preet"PB aap ko kia sirf ek hi kaam hai...public mein kissing ...muaaah"

prem gives a stern luk...all others laugh...

AVNi taps preet shoulder...he luks bak

preet"wat??"

avni"mera khayal sey tumhein bhi yeh kaam sikh lena chahiye...tum yeh kaam kyun nhi kartey...dekho dekho ..aisey romance kartey haiin...kuch sikho apney pb sey...romance kartey hain to itna pyaar hai dono main..."smiles...so do all...

preet.."ahaan...badi ayi pb aur bhabi ki side leni wali...aisey bhi mein public mein romaNCE NHI KARTA...apney room mein koob karta ..."

all"""awww..."

prem"bolo...bol...kitney romance karta hai...humein bh to pata chaley..."says giving a wink to tease him more...

AVNI" ahen ahen...dekho dekho kis tarah preet aur meher blush kar rahey hain...hey mein fidaa ho jaon in dono per..."

all luaghs...

veera"OMG!!!!...preet tum yoon romance kartey ho..."JULITE TUM KAHAN Ho...mujhe romance karna hai jaldi ayoo na...plzzz"...hahaha...

all brust into loud laugh...where preet nd meher r totally red...

preet"veera teri to..."

bauji"bas bas...buht deir ho chuki hai...ab sab ja ker so jao..."

preet"MRCHAND...aap ko tab hi kyun bolna hota hai jab mein bolta hoon...y??????"

bauji " kyun key jab andhera hota hai to CHAND bahir ata hai...aur to ANDHERA HAI..."

PREET"excuse me!!!!!"

MEHER"stop it preet..bas karo..."holding his hand...

preet stands staright widout saying anything...

VEEERAA"aha so obident..."

AvNI"veera samjha kerna...agar preet ney baat na maani to...MEHER kamrey mein kiss nhi dey gi..."both shares hi5...nd laughs...

prem joins

PREM"bechara...kitna shweet lag raha hai gusey mein...kuch nhi hota...aisa hota hai baby..."laughs...

bauji"bas ab chalo..."

all leaves...

nd so do I...

hi i wan long comments...right.???

tata...ignore de mistakes...

WID LUV...

SAIRA⭐️

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#172

loved the update

awesome job

premeer always romantic..

preet bhi na..

super cute..

every scene was superb..

the dance

the party..

everythng perfect togather...

really thank u...

thank u so much dear for update and pm..

love

vrushika

Edited by vrushika - 13 years ago

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repunzell

@repunzell

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#173

awww...mine too is SRK fvouriteee...hez a rockstarrr⭐️!!!

cumin to the update...it was soo cuteee😃!!!

everytyme preet teased prem bt now it was his turn😆!!!

veera, avni n prem teasing prem it was hilarious...culdn't stop laughing🤣!!!!

loved it...

update soon n plz premeer sceness alsoo plzzz!!!!

thanks for the pm dudeee////loved it

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sowmya18

@sowmya18

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

lovely update..
thanks for the pm...

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

YAY!!! we got an update!!!!

Loved both the parts...

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kiran

@kiran_28

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#176

nice update
awww all r teasing preet nd meher. dat scene was really cute yaar
but i m waiting 4 more premeer romantic scenes
pls cont soon
thanx 4 PM

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Saira thanks for updating on Vrushika's request 😃

Ch 15 looked like it was rushed - but it was nice to find out what was going on.

Ch 16 PH dance and the scene following that was interesting.

You were thinking what will be next - are PH will become parents again ? or is there new twist on the story after the party with any of the Junejas ? or anyone going to be visiting them ? 😆 😆 😆 My thinking is so similar to what happens in the show sorry 😆 If you are interested to continue, then you can think along these lines. Or you can surprise us! I love reading one shots - if FFs are taking up so much of your time then it's best to write OS. It's only a suggestion.

All the best!

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priya

@JugniPH

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#178

wow..nice updates...

really loved the premeer scenes on chp 15..heer is soo bold..wow..

and every one is teasing preet and meher...soo cute...

can't wait to read more...

so update soon...k?

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Mrs. Gossip Monger

@Surreal_Dreams

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#179

superb update...enjoyed reading...

plzz update the next soon...

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saira

@hibbaamir

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: AASUS
Saira thanks for updating on Vrushika's request 😃

Ch 15 looked like it was rushed - but it was nice to find out what was going on.

Ch 16 PH dance and the scene following that was interesting.

You were thinking what will be next - are PH will become parents again ? or is there new twist on the story after the party with any of the Junejas ? or anyone going to be visiting them ? 😆 😆 😆 My thinking is so similar to what happens in the show sorry 😆 If you are interested to continue, then you can think along these lines. Or you can surprise us! I love reading one shots - if FFs are taking up so much of your time then it's best to write OS. It's only a suggestion.

All the best!

ill act upon ur suggestion after my cuming up exams...

soon ur request ill b fulfilled...*praising u*😉

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