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Posted: 14 years ago
i hope whn i wake up tomorw there is a surprise update for mee😉!!!

fingers crossed!!

update plzzz!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyyy I'm a new reader to this ff and I love it :D :D plzz add me too pm list thank u x heer miscarriage :( hope she's ok :( update asap thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
CHAPTER 12...
prem enters heer room...with de feeling of guilt...😭😭
prem reaches her bed nd sees her...her body is fully attched with machines...tears rolling down his cheeks...
eyes red...
prem sits on de stool which is nearby her bed...
nd holds her hand in his ...nd kiss her hand ...with tears rolling...den he kisses her forehead...
holding her hand...tears roling down...
PREM"heer mujhe maaf kardo...mein buht boora hoon...mein ney tumhein buht kaam khushiyan deen hain...balkey khushiyan di hi nhi...heer plz mujhey maaf kardo...mein tumhare bina nhi reh sakta...mein janta hoon jab bhi tumhein khushi milney wali hoti hai mein tum sey chin ley ta hoon...mujhe maaf kardo...
jab tum khush thi keh hamari shaadi honey wali hai tab bhi mein tumhein chod ker chala gaya...aur phir jab dobara tum khush ho to mein ney tumhari khushi cheen li...
mein janta hoon yeh hamara pehla bacha tha...woh bhi humein chod ker chala gaya...
mein ney saach janey bagher tumhein ghar sey nikal dia ...heer plz mujhey maaf kardo...
mein janta hoon meri galthiyaan maafi key laik nhi hain per phir bhi...mujhe maaf kardo...
ill DIE WIDOUT U...PLZ HEEER mujhe maaf kardo..."tears r rolling nd r falling on her hand...
saying de same sentence "heer mujhey maaf kardo...heer mujhey maaf kardo..."he went to sleep...
NEXT MORNING...
HEER opens her eyes nd is shocked to see PREMS state...he is holding her hand...his head on her stomach...
HEer ruffles his hair wid her hand...nd he wakes up...
heer smiles seeing him...prem too smiles...
HEER"GUD MORNING PREM"
prem"GUD MORNING...HEER"...
HEER"PREM tumhari ankehn kyun laal hain...y r u crying???"
PREM"heer plz...mujhey maaf kardo...plz heer"
HEER"PREM...hamara bacha to theek hai na..."
prem is silent...
heer"prem bolo na...bolo kya hamara bacha theek hai???"
unable to control him he gets up nd hugs heer...heer hugs him bak...
PREM"HEER MERI wajha sey hamara bacha is dunyia mein nhi raha...im really sorry"
HEer totally shattered...tears roling😭😭...shocked...
heer"prem nhi ...aisa nhi ho sakta...hamara bacha humein chod ker nhi jaa sakta...hamrey pyaar ki nishani thi...woh humein chod ker nhi jaa sakta..."unable to control her tears...
prem clears her tears...
prem"nhi heer...kuch nhi hota...apney aap ko sambhalo..."hugs her again...
doors open...all JUNEJAS r now present in de room...
GAYA 3"heer...to theek hai na..."
veera nd MEHER runs nd hugs heer...nd heer hugs dem bak...
both at de same time..."r u fine..."
she smiles nd replies..."mein bilkul theek mujhey kia ho sakta hai...jab merey paas itna acha parivaar ho...hmm bolo..."
all smiles...
PREET"chalo...heer bhabi theek ho gayi hain ...so there shud be a party...wat say???"
LALIT"haan tujhe to hamesha party hi chahiye...ullo ka padha na ho to..."
preet"aap ka hi beta hoon"...😆
LALIT"sharam nhi aati tujhe boltey huey...aab apni bakwaas band rekh...haan heer...
kia tujhe party chahiye???"
all eyes r now on HEER...
heer luks towards prem who is smiling seeing her...
wen she luks at others all r holding deir hands asking her to nod in yes...
HEER"no...i dont want...hum aisa kartey hain key hum ghar per hi khana bana ker...bahar garden mein kahaein gay...sab parivaar ho ga..to zyada maaza aye ga...wat say???"
all"ya ya...its f9"...
DOCTOR cums inside...
LALIT"kia doc hum heer ko ghar ley ja saktey hain???"
GAYA3"haan doc..."
DOC"ya...un key discharge papers tiyaar ker diyey hain...baas ap log thodi der mein jaa saktey hain..."
all cheers nd r haapy...
AFTER AN HOUR...
all reaches juneja mansion...
AVNI OPENS de door...
HEER"AVNI tu yahan..."
AVNI"haan heer mein yahan..."
both hugs nd r welcomed inside...
MEHER maya veera kuldi nd gaya3 leaves for de preparation of lunch...
all other sitting in de lawn talking wid heer nd enjoying...
HOPE u all also enjoyed it...
i know i didnt updated it bt guys...i was really busy ...first i hv to prepare for my upcoming exams...nd EID is also cuming gv to prepare for it also...
IM REALLY SORRY😉...
guys i dont know wen de next update ill b cuz...eid ill b on TUESDAY...after tat i hv to attened many parties like PREET...so im REALLY SOORY...
WID LUV
SAIRA⭐️⭐️...
bye ...
do comment...long coments repunzell nd vrushika...😆...
do press de like button
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi saira...

see see see who is
the first to comment
its me me me me me me me me
yippe yippe yippe yippe yippe
i m to very happy:)
😛
i m feeling like dancing...

okies okies nw coming back to the update...
it was very sadd at the starting
i was feeling like crying..😭😭😭😭
they lost their first baby
how sad..

really feelong bad...
bechara prem he was blaming himself
for all these
actually at starting even i had gt a bit angry..
but he loves her so much

i really felt 222222222 bad
whn he said maine tumhe hamesha dukh diya hai...
so sad yaar saira...
if u had nt ended up it in a good situation
here a flood might have comne... hehehh:)😉


heer might have felt so bad na...
poor heer ..
why miscarriage...??????
yeah hw can i forget u r saira the great
atleast this is better..
if u had shwn.. a six year leap
with prem leaving heer and all then i wld
have frgtn u are ma sweet sis
and wld have ...
nthng...
kuch hua hi nahi to kyun soche???
but if u ever try 2 do it..
then i dnt knw...

( just joking)😊


i wld never do 2 u anythng...

okies okies back 2 the update
loved the way heer hugged prem..
but she dnt anythng...
and whole night prem kept on crying hw sad na...

and heer came 2 knw abt the truth i cld imagine her condition
but no worries
coz her prem was there..
they can have another child..
but first child is first...

and wow heer is fn nw...
i thght lot of melo drama
but thank god...
nthng of that sort..
preet really is funny guy...
loved his and lalit's conver...

and they are gng out ...
that's cool
may b it helps heer 2 come out of her pain..
prem will also feel nice
good idea saira...
akhir aap behan kiski hon
so obviously ideas to ache ayenge hi na...

and heer is so lucky to
have such a good family
they all love her so much

finally all misunderstanding clear..
so nw no more tensions
until and unless u thnk of introducing smthng
which i expect u'll nt do
correct???
be a good girl saira...
bilkul meri tarah
lolz

so finally heer is home..
with her family
that's better...
she will be fn soon...
so fingers crossed

and heer would b so happy 2 see her friend..

HOPE u all also enjoyed it...
i know i didnt updated it bt guys...i was really busy ...first i hv to prepare for my upcoming exams...nd EID is also cuming gv to prepare for it also...
IM REALLY SORRY😉...
guys i dont know wen de next update ill b cuz...eid ill b on TUESDAY...after tat i hv to attened many parties like PREET...so im REALLY SOORY...

i enjoyed it...
oh yeah by dear sis is studying fr exams na..
so

mera naam roshan karna .. lolz
and yeah
in advance...


also enjoy ur parties like preet...


nw cm the thank u session
thank u so much fr a wonderful update
thank u
fr the pm...
thank u thank thank u thank u
for evrythng

cant help it
so do update soon
asap
asa u get time...
dnt make us wait too long..
okies????


i loved the update


u r so sweet..

thank u once again fr updating...


do comment...long coments repunzell nd vrushika..

so here is my long comment...

love u 2222222222 saira

take care...

and yeah i m waiting...






Edited by vrushika - 14 years ago
Hcsee17 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
dats a nice update but after a long time pls update ur another fanfictions also...
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...heer is finee...plzz update the next part soon yaa...
lovely ff!!
repunzell thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
sairaaatlast an updateee😃!!!

but today i'l give both like n dislike comments...hope u don't mind😛!!!!

okay so first like comment :

the update was veryyy goooddd...i was actually imaginin the prem in tht scene whn he was cryinggg😳!!! awwwy babyyy!!!

loved the way heer cope up n was smilin wid the familyyy⭐️...strong womennn👏!!!!

and the most important thing...heer forgives premmm...uhuuu🥳!!!!

now dislike comment😉:

although i don't dislike anythin in the update bt the only thing which i noticed n wanted to be tht way was the interaction of prem n heer was tht long n emotional in the hospitalll!!!!i mean thora zada hona jaiye tha naaa😳!!!they lost their baby so u shuld hav shown the way they hav cope up...like hugging...talkin n a cute fight ...hahhahahha


bt anyway i lobe the updateee❤️!!!!

thankooo!!!!

EID MUBARAKKK!!!!
hibbaamir thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vrushika

hi saira...


see see see who is
the first to comment
its me me me me me me me me
yippe yippe yippe yippe yippe
i m to very happy:)
😛
i m feeling like dancing...

okies okies nw coming back to the update...
it was very sadd at the starting
i was feeling like crying..😭😭😭😭
they lost their first baby
how sad..

really feelong bad...
bechara prem he was blaming himself
for all these
actually at starting even i had gt a bit angry..
but he loves her so much

i really felt 222222222 bad
whn he said maine tumhe hamesha dukh diya hai...
so sad yaar saira...
if u had nt ended up it in a good situation
here a flood might have comne... hehehh:)😉


heer might have felt so bad na...
poor heer ..
why miscarriage...??????
yeah hw can i forget u r saira the great
atleast this is better..
if u had shwn.. a six year leap
with prem leaving heer and all then i wld
have frgtn u are ma sweet sis
and wld have ...
nthng...
kuch hua hi nahi to kyun soche???
but if u ever try 2 do it..
then i dnt knw...

( just joking)😊


i wld never do 2 u anythng...

okies okies back 2 the update
loved the way heer hugged prem..
but she dnt anythng...
and whole night prem kept on crying hw sad na...

and heer came 2 knw abt the truth i cld imagine her condition
but no worries
coz her prem was there..
they can have another child..
but first child is first...

and wow heer is fn nw...
i thght lot of melo drama
but thank god...
nthng of that sort..
preet really is funny guy...
loved his and lalit's conver...

and they are gng out ...
that's cool
may b it helps heer 2 come out of her pain..
prem will also feel nice
good idea saira...
akhir aap behan kiski hon
so obviously ideas to ache ayenge hi na...

and heer is so lucky to
have such a good family
they all love her so much

finally all misunderstanding clear..
so nw no more tensions
until and unless u thnk of introducing smthng
which i expect u'll nt do
correct???
be a good girl saira...
bilkul meri tarah
lolz

so finally heer is home..
with her family
that's better...
she will be fn soon...
so fingers crossed

and heer would b so happy 2 see her friend..

HOPE u all also enjoyed it...
i know i didnt updated it bt guys...i was really busy ...first i hv to prepare for my upcoming exams...nd EID is also cuming gv to prepare for it also...
IM REALLY SORRY😉...
guys i dont know wen de next update ill b cuz...eid ill b on TUESDAY...after tat i hv to attened many parties like PREET...so im REALLY SOORY...

i enjoyed it...
oh yeah by dear sis is studying fr exams na..
so

mera naam roshan karna .. lolz
and yeah
in advance...


also enjoy ur parties like preet...


nw cm the thank u session
thank u so much fr a wonderful update
thank u
fr the pm...
thank u thank thank u thank u
for evrythng

cant help it
so do update soon
asap
asa u get time...
dnt make us wait too long..
okies????


i loved the update


u r so sweet..

thank u once again fr updating...


do comment...long coments repunzell nd vrushika..

so here is my long comment...

love u 2222222222 saira

take care...

and yeah i m waiting...






was it comment or update a comment...lolzz😆...
thnxx alot sis...
i realy luved ur comment...
hibbaamir thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: repunzell

sairaaatlast an updateee😃!!!


but today i'l give both like n dislike comments...hope u don't mind😛!!!!

okay so first like comment :

the update was veryyy goooddd...i was actually imaginin the prem in tht scene whn he was cryinggg😳!!! awwwy babyyy!!!

loved the way heer cope up n was smilin wid the familyyy⭐️...strong womennn👏!!!!

and the most important thing...heer forgives premmm...uhuuu🥳!!!!

now dislike comment😉:

although i don't dislike anythin in the update bt the only thing which i noticed n wanted to be tht way was the interaction of prem n heer was tht long n emotional in the hospitalll!!!!i mean thora zada hona jaiye tha naaa😳!!!they lost their baby so u shuld hav shown the way they hav cope up...like hugging...talkin n a cute fight ...hahhahahha


bt anyway i lobe the updateee❤️!!!!

thankooo!!!!

EID MUBARAKKK!!!!

hmmm...next time ill try to give more scenes of premeer...
keep reading...
ur comment was luvly ...
luved reading it...
thnxx alot ...muaah...sis...
repunzell thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hibbaamir

hmmm...next time ill try to give more scenes of premeer...
keep reading...
ur comment was luvly ...
luved reading it...
thnxx alot ...muaah...sis...

will be waiting for more premeer 😳!!!

btw the update will be after Eid na?

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