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Posted: 14 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: hibbaamir

thnxx bt i think next tim33 ill update de longgg 1...
thnxx alot...
buht mazaa ata hai tumhare saath baat karney mein...

awww...thts so sweet of u telling😊!!! mujhay bhi maza ata hai...i just love makin new frnds n keepin touch wid thm⭐️!!!!

yesh u will update soon n a long one😃😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92

guys i got de tim333...so im updating here goes it...b happpy...

CHAPTER 11...

VOICE "DOC aap chaliye mein apna blood doon gi"
DOC "thnxx alot...hamein waisey bhi blood ki buht zaroort hai...plz cum fast..."
dey leave frm there...
after 10 to 20 mins dey cum...
DOC " we all r thnkful to u ...u helped us alot..." nd doc leaves frm there nd moves to ICU...
PREM "thnxx alot...bt wats ur NAME???"
PREET" HAAn aap kon hain???...aur aap ney hamari help kyun ki???"
VEERA"yes...WHO R U???"
VOICE "ya ya...u all shud know m3...I AM AVNI SHARMA...frend of heer...heer ko mein hi hospital ley ker ayi thi...heer ko shuroo sey dukh jheelney ki adat thi...jab us key maa babuji ki death hui thi tab woh buht roi thi...aur phir us ki chachi ney bhi us key saath buht buraa kia...bechari ko buht kam sukh milay...us ko her muad per dukh hi milay...aur kuch nhi mila...haan jab mujhe pata chla keh us ki shaadi ho gayi hai...to mujhe laga tha keh woh apney parivaar apney pyaar key saath kush rahey gi...woh kabhi nahi roy gi...bt yahan to kuch aur hi hai...kyun PREM tumhein kia hamari heer pasand nhi ...tum us per vishwaas nhi ker pay..."tears were rolling down her cheeks nd so were everybody ...
PREm tried to control himself nd spoke...
"tum hamarey barey mein itna kaise jaanti ho...????"
Avni"woh to...heer ka accident hua tha...to behoosh honey sey pehley woh baar baar tumhara naam ley rahi thi...us ki ankhen laal theen...mujhe dekh ker woh thoda sa muskarai thi...aur phir tumhara naam ley ker behoosh ho gayi...she luvs u alot...tab mein ney andaza lagaya tha keh zaroor kuch hua tumhare aur heer key beech...isliye mein ney yeh sab kaha im SORRY..."
GAYA3"nahi beta...tum kyun maafi maag rahi ho...maafi to humein maangni hai heer sey...tumhara buht buht shukriya keh tum waqt per heer ko hospital ley ker ayi..."nd GAYA3 hugs her...
AVni" nhi aunty ...yeh to mera farz tha..."
all junejas have tears in there eyes...
AVNI"aap sab kyun ro rahey hain...aap logon ko to bhagwaan per vishwaas hona chahiye keh heer ko kuch nhi hoga...agar prem tumhara aur aap sab ka pyaar HEER key liye sacha hai to heer ko kch nhi hoga..."...after talking she moves towards MEHER...
"MEHER tumhein bhi mein yaad nhi..."she hugs her...
MEHER"nhi...mujhe kuch yaad nhi...bt heer ki dost to ho na..."both smiles nd hugs each other agin...
MEHER"thnxx alot keh tum ney meri heer di ko bacha.ya..."
AVNI"will u all stop thanking m3...u r making m3 feel embarrass😳...wasey tumhein pata hai prem ...heer shuroo sey aisei hi thi...her ek ki madad karti thi...ek dafa mujhe skool mein chot lag gayi thi...tab doctors ney kaha tha mujhey khoon ki buht zaroort thi...tab heer ney mujhey khoon dia tha...aur tab mein ney socha tha keh hope mein bhi kabhi heer ki madad ker paon aur aaj dekho mein ney us ki madad ki hai..."
PREM"thnxx alot avni... thnxx alot...u saved my heer..."
AVNI"no prob..."she said smiling...
doctor came out of ICu...nd all rushed towards him...
DOC"UN ki miscarriage ho gayi hai...bt she is f9 now..."
all shocked nd confused luking at PREM tat he may know it
PREM" MISCARRIAGE...????...bt she wasnt pregnant..."all shcoked tat prem even didnt know abt it
doc"wat???..aap un key pati hain aur aap ko nhi pata she was almost a month pregnant.."and doc leaves frm there
VEERA"haan bhai...she was..."
PREM"veera tumhein pata tha ...aur tum ney..."
veera"heer bhabi ney mana kia tha...unhon ney mujhe nhi bataya tha...woh to office mein doc sey baat ker rahi thin to mein ney sun liye tha...woh buht kush theen...magar unhon ney mujhey bataney sey mana kia tha...woh aap ko aap ki bday per surprise dena chahti theen...aur aap ki bday day after tomorrow hai..."
tears starts to roll down on de cheeks of prem nd whole junejas...RAjveer...ash...nd AVNI...
...😭😭
its almost 10 oclock at night...
PREM" aap sab log ghar jaiye ...mein heer key paas rahta hoon..."
prem eyes r red...
GAYA3"nhi beta mein...'😭
PREM"maa nhi ap jaiye..."
bauji"but prem..."
prem"no but shut...aap sab log jayie...mein ney kaha na..."
all understood tat PREM wans to b alone...so all left for their houses...
ITS ALMOST 12 at night
nd tears r rolling down frm PREM eyes.😭😭...hes crying nd cursing himself for all wat had happened...😭
DOC"she is totally out of danger now..."
prem"doc can i c her...plzpzlzplzzz"
DOC"okay...bt dont disturb her..."
PREM leaves frm there and is abt to enter de room...😊😊...
its mine tim3 to get out of my room...
so tas all for today...its a long update i think so...
do comment and press de like button...
WID LUV
SAIRA
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
wow tht was a surprise update⭐️!!!

thankooo👏!!!

bt heer miscarriagee...shittt...shittt😔!!!! how will prem face heer now?? hope heer forgives prem n they quickly overcumme thiz situations😭!!!

now u hav to update as soon as possible...left on a cliff hanger!!!

update soonn!!!

thnx for the PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
wow...awesome...sorry for the late comment!!
itz amazinggg...👏...plzz update d next asap...cant wait...😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
lovely update...
i thought heer would have a misscariage...
thanks for the pm...
do update soon...
waiting...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
nice update
bt...oh no...heer miscarriagee...no no no...😭😭😭..
pls do some magic...poor heer...
and now how will prem face heer????????
pls update the next part soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: sowmya18

lovely update...
i thought heer would have a misscariage...
thanks for the pm...
do update soon...
waiting...

u though nd i wrote...😊
how can i neglect sum1s thought.😛...hmmm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98

Loved the part… read both the parts together…

Chapter 10

Heer's accident….hope that she is time and noting happens..

Raj is such a sweet heart … he promised to help prem and forgave him… love him for this…

And who is that person who told to give blood to heer?

Chapter 11

Avni… heer's friend… thank god she came on time to save heer…

What…. Heer lost her child …. Omg … what will happen when she will find out… I get angry at prem as somewhere it was his fault😡 … but hope this doesn't strains prem and heer relationship….

Lovely parts… emotional one…

Thanks for the pm…

DO CONTINUE SUPER DUPER SOON!!!!


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Posted: 14 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: repunzell

oiii...update kab karogiii??

oiii...wen i get tim3...hahaha
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hibbaamir

oiii...wen i get tim3...hahaha

aur apkoo yeh TYME kab milaayyy gaa???

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