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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#661

love update graceand thanks for updating

sry if i'm late 2 comment

bt lovely

i thnk premeer shld hv their own kids instead of adobting juhi.. plz

update next asap

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Lisa

@Aymee

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#662

Great update Grace.

I am happy Prem understood Heer's sudden outburst. It is great to see that they really do care about Juhi's future.

My favorite part of Heer and Prem's conversation:

"So are you saying...if we were going through something and you started feeling attracted to another guy...you would tell me about it?" Prem probed trying to make sure he understood what she wanted.

"Yeah, I guess something like that...but more about problems," Heer said. "You know you always hear about how relationship start falling apart between couples because they aren't communicating. I just don't want that to happen."

"I don't want that to happen either," Prem agreed and then mumbled, "...and I'll make sure to beat the crap of that guy so you aren't attracted to him anymore."

"Prem..."

"What, I don't want some guy looking at my wife. You're my wife...I'm your husband...nobody should be looking at you or anything," Prem said rather possessively. "I'll break his hands so he can't hold your hand...and his legs too so he can't walk anywhere near you." He then saw the look on his wife's face and stopped his light remarks. "Honey, I promise we'll talk. We'll talk things through. I love you and nothing is more important to me than you."

Prem is so possessive about his Heer. Prem's lines @ bold, I couldn't stop laughing when I read these parts. 😆

Veera and Ash's conversation was funny. I could actually picture Ash's reaction when Veera told her about Prem wanting to see Heer in a bikini. 😆

As for Nihaal, I hope he stops playing chicken and tells Veera how he feels about her before it gets out of hand. He must have forgotten what happened with Prem, Heer, Ash and Prashant 😆

I felt really bad for Kiran. I wish he could cut ties with his bio mom. What a horrible woman she is. For Kiran to say this much shows how much he hates her. I really hope the plan he, Prem and Heer came up with will work. I wonder if Ajay will accept his daughter.

I can't believe Maya's mom was friends with Hetal's mom. 😲 It looks like she has something in mind when she found out that Maya is dating a Juneja.

Prem and Heer's office romance was very 😳. It is great that Heer is being professional when it comes to work but I wish she was naughty like Prem once in a while. Their conversation about their children was too cute.

I hope your PM problem has been resolved. I am glad Preeti was able to help. I am looking forward to your next update. Sorry for replying late. 😳

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Motibah

@Ilovepie.

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#663

Aww Grace that was an amaaazing update! :D The Premeer scene were absolutely adorable! 😍 now im just hoping things between Kirans sister and her husband are sorted out so Premeer can be freee 😆

Dying to know what happens next so update asap, oh and this is Motibah btw. I changed my username 😃

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Biya

@biyaahmad

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#664

hi!sorry for late commenting,holding ears.

premeer scenes was so cute,sweet and adoreable.they are realy perect for eachothert.their conversation about baby matter and telling things to each other was so nice😊 specially,prem's jealousy and his dailogues😆 shows how he possesive about his heer.so sweet.

and ya when he say"I' m holding mine right now,"🤗awww i really luv this line.😳

ash and veera scenes was so funny.and hope nihal can't break veera's heart.

kiran and premeer conversation was so nice.i really pity on kiran. how can a mother do all this with her childs,only for money?😲but their decision telling ajay about scotch was right.hope ajay accept his doty.

omg!omg!omg!heena is related to vinay.😲after seeing harman,she is surly planning some thing.

premeer romance in office hmmm.😉but they both r really cute. awww.a jealous heer.so,she is also possesive about prem.and their conv about chahat and chota prem was soo cute.🤗 but when will they come?😍

please update soon.😊

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#665

Hmmm...seems like I've lost some readers 😕 not that many people hit the Like button like usual

Originally posted by: brainychild92
i got the pm but the link didn't work.. o well i got it tho..lol

that was cute... now where were we..lol

so hina is related to viney...hmm... continue soon!

Yes we will see how Heena's relationship with Vinay and Maya's mother will affect everything for Hetal, Juhi, Ajay, and Kiran.

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Originally posted by: sowmya18
hey...
wonderful update ...
loved their romance...

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Originally posted by: sweta2005
awesomeee too good v ery nice part waitinggg for next asap

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Originally posted by: Oblivious
Thanks for a awesome update Grace ...😊
Loved it.

waiting for d next update...

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Originally posted by: divya4salmanyk
awsum update..!!

luved prem n heer scenes...specially d end masala...! hehehe!!

i guess chahat is on d way...kiddin.!! heheheh...!!!! romance durin office hours ... !! :-))))

Romance during office hours...Prem was being so naughty 😳
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Originally posted by: sadhz
awesome update...loved d romance in office ☺️ then shower scene☺️...prem is so naughty...
do update soon nxt part

Prem is so naughty but that's why we love him nah? Heer is so lucky 😳
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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#666

Originally posted by: ...Pwincess...
"...and I'll make sure to beat the crap of that guy so you aren't attracted to him anymore." 🤣

Great update Grace 👏

Hmmm Kirans mum knows the bindars

wonder what shes going to do now

Loved Premeers talk about Girls sniffing Prem 🤣

jealous Heer

awww

Heer was so jealous but she had every right to be I mean girls were sniffing her man 😆 Prem's got a jealous streak in him too...he'd break people's bones 😆
Yes, we will see how things unfold with Heena knowing the Bindars.

Originally posted by: harshitideewani
Thanks awesome update grace👏 and for the pm preethi😃
Lovelly scenes of ❤️Premeer icecream at midnight and also the romantic❤️ sceness betwwen them , clearing the confusions😕 betwwen each other and also the private😎 lunch and also trying to help kiran to sort out his problemmm, really loved the last part place for chahat 😃and alos keep place in your ❤️heart for chota Prem😉

Hope nihal doesnt hur Veera but convince her 😭

waitinggg for next update intersting.😍

Yes, Prem needs to keep a place in his ❤️ for his future children...I promise the little ones are coming.
As for Nihaal and Veera we will see what happens in the coming chapters. I'm going to be wrapping things up pretty fast so things can move forwards 😉
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Originally posted by: rhtpkcm
Thankyouuu sooo much!!! I lovd the update,,, your a very good writer,,, i wanna see some more of your work!!! :)

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Originally posted by: vrushika
love update graceand thanks for updating
sry if i'm late 2 comment
bt lovely
i thnk premeer shld hv their own kids instead of adobting juhi.. plz
update next asap

We will see how everything unfolds with Heena, Kiran, Hetal, Juhi, and Ajay
Thanks for taking the time to comment. Glad you liked the chapter 😃

Originally posted by: Aymee
Great update Grace.

I am happy Prem understood Heer's sudden outburst. It is great to see that they really do care about Juhi's future.

My favorite part of Heer and Prem's conversation:

"So are you saying...if we were going through something and you started feeling attracted to another guy...you would tell me about it?" Prem probed trying to make sure he understood what she wanted.

"Yeah, I guess something like that...but more about problems," Heer said. "You know you always hear about how relationship start falling apart between couples because they aren't communicating. I just don't want that to happen."

"I don't want that to happen either," Prem agreed and then mumbled, "...and I'll make sure to beat the crap of that guy so you aren't attracted to him anymore."

"Prem..."

"What, I don't want some guy looking at my wife. You're my wife...I'm your husband...nobody should be looking at you or anything," Prem said rather possessively. "I'll break his hands so he can't hold your hand...and his legs too so he can't walk anywhere near you." He then saw the look on his wife's face and stopped his light remarks. "Honey, I promise we'll talk. We'll talk things through. I love you and nothing is more important to me than you."

Prem is so possessive about his Heer. Prem's lines @ bold, I couldn't stop laughing when I read these parts. 😆

Veera and Ash's conversation was funny. I could actually picture Ash's reaction when Veera told her about Prem wanting to see Heer in a bikini. 😆

As for Nihaal, I hope he stops playing chicken and tells Veera how he feels about her before it gets out of hand. He must have forgotten what happened with Prem, Heer, Ash and Prashant 😆

I felt really bad for Kiran. I wish he could cut ties with his bio mom. What a horrible woman she is. For Kiran to say this much shows how much he hates her. I really hope the plan he, Prem and Heer came up with will work. I wonder if Ajay will accept his daughter.

I can't believe Maya's mom was friends with Hetal's mom. 😲 It looks like she has something in mind when she found out that Maya is dating a Juneja.

Prem and Heer's office romance was very 😳. It is great that Heer is being professional when it comes to work but I wish she was naughty like Prem once in a while. Their conversation about their children was too cute.

I hope your PM problem has been resolved. I am glad Preeti was able to help. I am looking forward to your next update. Sorry for replying late. 😳

Prem is possessive of his Heer...after all he knows he's got a great catch and Heer's just as possessive about him too.

We will see what happens with Hetal, Juhi, Ajay, Kiran, and Heena...and how involved Heer and Prem will have to become.

Nihaal and Veera...we will see too what happens to them...obviously Nihaal isn't thinking properly 😆 he's forgotten what his sister had to go through.

Originally posted by: Ilovepie.
Aww Grace that was an amaaazing update! :D The Premeer scene were absolutely adorable! 😍 now im just hoping things between Kirans sister and her husband are sorted out so Premeer can be freee 😆

Dying to know what happens next so update asap, oh and this is Motibah btw. I changed my username 😃

Hey! I like the new name. Yes things will definitely be explained in the following chapter and we will what will happen to Hetal, Juhi, Ajay, Kiran, and Heena.
Thanks for taking the time to comment. Glad you liked the chapter 😃

Originally posted by: deshdeewani
hi!sorry for late commenting,holding ears.
premeer scenes was so cute,sweet and adoreable.they are realy perect for eachothert.their conversation about baby matter and telling things to each other was so nice😊 specially,prem's jealousy and his dailogues😆 shows how he possesive about his heer.so sweet.

and ya when he say"I' m holding mine right now,"🤗awww i really luv this line.😳

ash and veera scenes was so funny.and hope nihal can't break veera's heart.

kiran and premeer conversation was so nice.i really pity on kiran. how can a mother do all this with her childs,only for money?😲but their decision telling ajay about scotch was right.hope ajay accept his doty.

omg!omg!omg!heena is related to vinay.😲after seeing harman,she is surly planning some thing.

premeer romance in office hmmm.😉but they both r really cute. awww.a jealous heer.so,she is also possesive about prem.and their conv about chahat and chota prem was soo cute.🤗 but when will they come?😍

please update soon.😊

Prem is such a sweetie 😍 he loves his wife very very much.

Nihaal is definitely going through some things...he needs to stop being a chicken and say something. It's not fair to Veera for him to be hiding and running away.

Kiran and his bio Mom Heena...a very complex relationship...we will see how everything unfolds with the Bindars, Hetal, Juhi, and Ajay in the following chapters.

Don't worry little Chahat and chota Prem will be coming 😉

Thanks for taking the time to comment. Glad you liked the chapter 😃

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sreyap92

@sreyap92

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#667

I freaking love this story pls add me to pm if possible you are doing a great job and the little romances and fights they have seem soo real!! 😉

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: annokhi
its owsum👏

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Originally posted by: sreyap92
I freaking love this story pls add me to pm if possible you are doing a great job and the little romances and fights they have seem soo real!! 😉

Thank you for taking the time to comment. Glad you liked the chapter. You have been added to the PM list 😃 It's always nice to gain a new reader

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repunzell

@repunzell

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#669

i comment on ur FF AT FIRST SIGHT yesterday :)!!

me the silent reader turned unsilent😉😃!!!

thiz FF is outstanidingly amazing, marvellous...u describe each n every emotion so brillantly mA...u're a rock star⭐️...!!!!

cumin to the FF...seriouslly saying i just read the premeer part in thz FF...not concerned wid others😛...coz i <3 premeer so much keh baqi kuch nhi dekhta😃...!!! n the PREMEER asusal is amazingg...i wuld hav killed u if they were at tht moment adopting Hetal...thank god they aren't nt yet n hope nt aftrwards also...!!! i want they own kids😳!!!!

thank u for the update n do update soonnn plzzz!!!!