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Sunshine

@SunShine_A

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#481

hey

Am new reader😆, just came across this fic and read about 10-12 chapters and what brilliantly done, just loved all the bits of chapter, finally after ages got something to read on PH or say on Desh, after ages like actually something so nicely sketched and the way every character of the story is involved in some or the other part is certainly commendable job, while reading I was actually remembering my favourite fics which I read when I came to IF, its not like any similarity is there but its just one that this is done very nicely like they were, involving every single character, providing new story and actually making a room for reader to read and imagine the things going on in front.

Lovely job

will get back after reading couple of more and hopefully with a better and proper comment😆😆

Ashlesha

edit - Posting here and commenting on fics after like ages😆😆

well nothing to do with you but felt like adding🤣

Edited by Ashlesha09 - 14 years ago

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-SnowKid-

@-SnowKid-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#482

it was awesome update grace.........
premeer mornin scene was so lovelyyyyyy.....😳........love every moment they share........
love gay3......she is so carin n undrstandin.......
prem lied 2 heer dont knw y they r hidin scotch from family.....just tel them truth..........n sort out prblm...........
anyways........lookin forwrd.......story is gettin more n more interestin......
thnx for d pm...........update soon nxt part.......n ur SS too😳.........waitin

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Abigail (Abby)

@-Abigail-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#483

Great update Grace😊

We can surely see that when juneja brothers work together on something their sense flys out the window! and Harman really lost scotch?!? He is guilty but he should have been a bit more responsible and Preets dialogues just crack me up😆, even in a tensed situation he makes me laugh

Veera, maya, meher and Ashlesha scenes were fun! poor veera was so confused and she got hungry😆, their reactions to Nihaal's I love you day were just Fab!

and Gosh did nihaal actually just make up a I love you day!😆, O poor boy, why doesn't he just tell veera about his feelings! maybe he's too shy! should learn something from our prem jaanu😉

and Gaytri's lesson to Heer👏, I'm glad Gaytri did that and now heer woudn't compramize with her health! I just loved it the way Heer went to her bedroom and into the arms of her husband! awwwww😳

Eagerly waiting to see what other craziness juneja brothers do! Hope they find scotch soon

Thankx for the Pm and such a lovely update...it made me laugh!😃

Update soon😊

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aliyah

@rhtpkcm

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Posted: 14 years ago

#484

heyy, please update soon, this is 1 of my favourite ff's!

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sharmeeli

@sharmeeli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#485

🤗LOVED the update dear!!!🤗

but where is baby Scotch????😲😲

plzzz update ASAP😳 and thanks for the PM dear😳

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: newt2007
nice update Grace.

Loved the morning scene between Prem and Heer.

Prem concern for his wife is chweet,

WOW Heer Juneja knows how to sleep while doing her kitchen work.

Good Heer slept in Prem's arms. Oh Heer smelled baby powder smell on Prem. but Prem has answer for that.

Veera feels butterfiles in her sotmach is because of indigestion. Girls talk is nice. Understanding Happy I love day by Veera is😆

i'm wondering the little scotch is not al all crying. how?

now these 3 are noticed by people in the par. Prem escaped.

what Prem and heer are not ready for kids? shocking.😲

now Preet and Harman lost Scotch. happy but why Harman wants to find that girl?

Stroy moving interstingly. waiting for the next part

In my world much like the world of TV...baby Scotch is just cool with everyone 😆 I know probably not too realistic here...but I have met a baby before who had no problems with being passed around. Someone would just take her from Mom and the baby was all cool with it...she'd just go hang with random people from Mom's work place and she was fine 😆

Yes, Veera is a bit 😳 about the "I Love You Day" 🤣 but we will see from Nihaal's side in the coming chapters what he was thinking 😉

As for Prem and Heer not ready for kids...they just got married. They want to spend some time being a married couple before jumping into the who family thing. Some times you need that time for yourself. It takes a lot of responsibility to bring a child into this world and you have to be prepared and be able to handle all the emotional as well as financial things that come with becoming a parent. Thanks for taking the time to comment Selvy 😃

Originally posted by: sowmya18
hey...
wonderfull update...

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Originally posted by: rhtpkcm
thankyouu for the update,, update soon

Originally posted by: rhtpkcm
heyy, please update soon, this is 1 of my favourite ff's!

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Originally posted by: anuu2010
awesome update grace
loved it

thanks for pm

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Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya
luvin it!!!!!! gay3 luv u!!!!!! such gr8 mother in law! aawww!!

luv prem n heer!!

wa8in for d nxt!

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Originally posted by: aaminaman
Superb update grace harmans in great trouble ohh i lobed premeer part and how she smelled baby powder I loved the girls talking andwhen is it going to reveal about the baby and yeah update soon don't make us wait so long

Prem was lucky Tanu was recently born otherwise he would have a lot of explaining to do 😆 Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

Originally posted by: -salma-
awesomeeeeee update !!
waiting for more !!

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Originally posted by: brainychild92
i'm with meher on this one.. happy..i love you day? haha!! i woulda googled that if someone texted me (just to make sure its not an international holiday or somethin..lol)

poor scotch.. pata nahi kahan hai voh.. continuee soon!!

Veera probably should have done that...we will see Nihaal's side in the next coming chapters 😉
pata nahi kahan hai voh? I don't understand Hindi...what does that mean?
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Originally posted by: -alisha-
lovely.......specially the baby powder part..........rofling.......really nice part......do update soon

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: anushyap
i loved it!!! please update soon!!

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Originally posted by: princess5341
uh-oh wheres scotch? : )
update soon!!!

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Originally posted by: Aymee
Great update Grace.

Really??? Was that easy for Harman to lose Scotch? I do feel bad for Harman because I know he's feeling guilty for his actions but he could have a little bit more responsible 😡. I hope they find her soon.

I loved Gayatri's idea for Heer to learn her lesson. Gayatri did the right thing. When Teji was concerned about Heer, I agreed with her concerns at first but after I found out this was all Gayatri's plan for Heer, I was really proud of Gayatri. She really loves Heer a lot and she didn't want her jetlag take a toll on her health. She did the right thing. What I like about Gayatri in your FF is that she has a great control of her family in a good way. First, Lalit, now Heer 😆. I wonder who will be the next victim....errr I mean the next person to mess with Gayatri. 😆

Veera, Ashleesha, Meher and Maya scenes were the best. Veera walking back and forth to the mailbox was funny. When Veera told the girls about Nihaal's "I Love You" Day wish to her, all three of ladies' reactions were hilarious. If I was one of those girls, I would have reacted just the way Ash did for sure. 😆

This "I Love You" Day must be some sort of Nihaal's crazy idea of his to admit how he really feels about Veera. 😆. He is perfect for the family. He should join Prem, Preet and Harman and baby Scotch. Those three could use another person like him to help them with their crazy ideas and plans. 😆

Thank you for the PM. Thank you for making me laugh again. I hope the guys find Scotch soon and Veera finally admits her feelings to Nihaal.

Gayatri was the great matriarch of the family until the CVs killed her character 🤢 😡
As usually I like fixing things that the Desh CVs ruined 😆 So my Gayatri is what she was suppose to be in Desh till the end. Anyways, no matter what some men/husbands think the woman/wife rules the family...when she puts her foot down it's pretty much the end of the conversation. Nobody wants to cross the mother/wife of the house.

Lisa, have you ever watched the Cosby Show? I love the humor in that show. It was a show that ran from 1984-1992 and the re-runs are show in syndication. Cliff thought he ran the house but his wife Clair and five children really controlled things. Clair laid the law down while the children drove Cliff crazy with all the usual normal childhood antics of growing up they got into. It is my all time favorite comedy show.

Nihaal...Nihaal...what is this boy thinking? We will see in the coming episodes 😉

Poor Harman...he should have been more responsible but you'd be surprise how easy child abduction is...if it didn't happen we wouldn't have a special division of law enforcement and government services dedicated to that 😔

Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

Originally posted by: sadhz
it was awesome update grace.........
premeer mornin scene was so lovelyyyyyy.....😳........love every moment they share........
love gay3......she is so carin n undrstandin.......
prem lied 2 heer dont knw y they r hidin scotch from family.....just tel them truth..........n sort out prblm...........
anyways........lookin forwrd.......story is gettin more n more interestin......
thnx for d pm...........update soon nxt part.......n ur SS too😳.........waitin

Yes the brothers are being a bit stupid about the baby and we will see what lessons they will learn from hiding Scotch. Ssshhh...don't ask about the SS 😳 haven't touched that but an update will come just don't know when 😛 Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

Originally posted by: seshatree
NICE....

Hi! Welcome ⭐️ It's always nice to hear from a new reader.
Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

Originally posted by: ...Harshiti...
Great update Grace😊

We can surely see that when juneja brothers work together on something their sense flys out the window! and Harman really lost scotch?!? He is guilty but he should have been a bit more responsible and Preets dialogues just crack me up😆, even in a tensed situation he makes me laugh

Veera, maya, meher and Ashlesha scenes were fun! poor veera was so confused and she got hungry😆, their reactions to Nihaal's I love you day were just Fab!

and Gosh did nihaal actually just make up a I love you day!😆, O poor boy, why doesn't he just tell veera about his feelings! maybe he's too shy! should learn something from our prem jaanu😉

and Gaytri's lesson to Heer👏, I'm glad Gaytri did that and now heer woudn't compramize with her health! I just loved it the way Heer went to her bedroom and into the arms of her husband! awwwww😳

Eagerly waiting to see what other craziness juneja brothers do! Hope they find scotch soon

Thankx for the Pm and such a lovely update...it made me laugh!😃
Update soon😊

Yup, the Juenja bros really have lost it. You would think a smart business man, a lawyer, and a schemer/planner...they would have been able to handle this without any issues and do the right thing...ah, boys 😆

Harman should have been more responsible shouldn't he?

We will see in the coming chapters...what exactly was Nihaal thinking.

Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

Originally posted by: sharmeeli
🤗LOVED the update dear!!!🤗
but where is baby Scotch????😲😲

plzzz update ASAP😳 and thanks for the PM dear😳

Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

Edited by iheartChai - 14 years ago

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swati

@sweta2005

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#488

r u updating now waitinggggggg

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Preeti

@Preeti.xo

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#489

Edited my spot page 75

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: Ashlesha09
hey

Am new reader😆, just came across this fic and read about 10-12 chapters and what brilliantly done, just loved all the bits of chapter, finally after ages got something to read on PH or say on Desh, after ages like actually something so nicely sketched and the way every character of the story is involved in some or the other part is certainly commendable job, while reading I was actually remembering my favourite fics which I read when I came to IF, its not like any similarity is there but its just one that this is done very nicely like they were, involving every single character, providing new story and actually making a room for reader to read and imagine the things going on in front.

Lovely job

will get back after reading couple of more and hopefully with a better and proper comment😆😆

Ashlesha

edit - Posting here and commenting on fics after like ages😆😆

well nothing to do with you but felt like adding🤣

Hey Ashlesha...Welcome ⭐️ It's always great to hear from new readers. Thanks for liking my work from what you have read so far 😳. Hope to see you around with more comments from you. This is my own personal ode to Kis Desh since I really fell in love with a lot of the characters from the show...of course I've put my own spin on some of their personalities and fixed some of them too 😆 as this is my own crazy story of the Junejas and Maans. Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃

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