SS - True Love ~ (20/12) COMPLETED!! - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
it ws amazing!!!!
lovd that prem said once n heer changed!!!!
watng fr the nxt parts!!!!!
pls update soon!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Haila selvy i luv u.... you r too good as i have told u before too... it was amazing specially the dream sequence....update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wooww luvd it.....aww so tht was all dream....lucd the dream scene,...heer is tooo fadt.....bechara prem..heer teasing hi m and making fun of him....this reminds me of main hoon naa....i m luvin the story....continue soon...thanks for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesomeee shots!....
heer is sooo fast!
loved it!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aaawww sad dat was a dream...!!!! wht happened between dem??? eagerly wa8in 2 noe dat...!!! hope evrythin goes well...!!!! the misundrstdin solves...!!!! thx for da pm..~~~ wonderful update luved it.selvy...plz update asap plz...!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
great ss selvy dear
plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it
Prem is on orphan
Balraj helps him
Heer Preet and meher teasing Prem
Heer teasing Prem
Heer teasing others
and that was a dream........... wish it was real
loved it
Prem is soooooooooo adorable
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Thanks friends for your comments.
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Shot 4

Heer is busy making a rocket. Prem noticed her. She didn't notice Prem's eye on her. Professor is facing the board and writing while giving lecture. Heer looked around to struck this rocket into one of her class mates hair. She spot one person for her target today. She is about to threw it in that direction, Prem held her wrist. Heer looked back and saw angry Prem. Heer pouted.

Prem shook his head negatively. Heer dropped the rocket down. She showed her palm 'its itching.' She scratched her palm like kid. She whispred 'I can't control so easily.' Prem showed his hand 'hold my hand until classes gets over.' Heer held his hand. She is not interested in listening the lecture and want to do something, kept quiet for Prem. she was scratching Prem's hand now and then. Prem give a stern look that made her keep quiet.

After the class, one openly commented 'first class without any disturbance.' Heer got angry. 'see because of you they are making fun of me.' Prem shook his head 'no they are praising you for allowing them to listen the lecture without disturbance.' Heer 'they are not having any fear on me. they won't respect me now.' Prem 'respect should come in love not in fear.' Heer little angry but Prem held her hand tight which made her to subside her anger and shook her head.

Heer is sitting in college canteen with Prem, Meher and Preet. They are in their final years of UG. Just few days back Preet propsed to Meher. Heer is not appreciated the way Preet proposed Meher. 'you need to be romantic Preet.' Preet 'i felt love for her. without wasting my time i opened my heart.' Meher 'we love each other then what else you want?' Heer 'the day should be memorable.' she looked at Prem who is busy reading. 'isn't it Prem?' Prem looked at her 'i don't know anything about proposing.' Heer 'Prem' she closed his book. Prem 'Heer, i don't have time now to think about that.' he pulled the book out of her hand and went back to his mission of reading.

Heer 'you are waste Prem.' she turned her attention to Preet and Meher 'now i' tell you how i want my lover to propose me.' she is explaing how she wants her future life partner to propose her with facial expressions. Preet and Meher is totally lost in her words. Prem is quiet and didn't show any sign of interest in her talk. Heer finished 'he should do all this in front of a big crowd.' Prem brust into laugh. Heer angrily 'why are you laughing?' Prem 'do you want a good person or politician as your life partner?' Heer confusingly 'why?' Prem 'only politicians put stage to announce their stupid ideas and plans.' Heer gave him hard punch on his upper arm. Prem 'one thing is clear.' Heer 'what?' he teasingly smiled rubbing his upper arm 'he must be boxer to defend your hard punches.' Preet and Meher too laughed. Heer like a defeated baby gave them a angry look.

Heer, for 100th time she is looking at her mobile thinking that she might have missed any of Prem's call. Today is her birthday. She is expecting him to call her in the morning to wish her first. But she is disappointed. She lazily got out of the bed and got ready to meet her father and brother.

Wearing a salwar with golden and purple work on it, she came down to the living room where Barlaj and Nihal is waiting for her. Both stared at her with a wide open mouth and forgot to wish her. Heer touched Balraj's feet 'papa.' Balraj came out of his shock and blessed Heer. He kissed her forehead 'happy birthday beta.' He hugged her. He took a gift box and handed to her.

Nihal kissed her forehead 'happy birthday my dear.' Both hugged. He handed her his gift. Heer 'bhaiya, why you both stared at me when I came down the stairs?' sadly 'you both even forgot to wish me.' Nihal 'today for the first time you are wearing salwar.' Balraj 'you never liked traditional dress.' Nihal leaned closer to her and teased 'what happened today my dear sister?' he winked at her. Heer shyly smiled and moved away.

Heer is about to open both the boxes, Nihal 'Heer, first pooja then you can see our gifts.' Heer kept the boxes on the couch and went to pooja. Heer is surprised to see pandit doing some pooja. 'papa, why this year?' Balraj 'I felt in my heart.' They never celebrate any function at home like other big shots. Everything is family affair. Except wishing each other and giving gifts they never arranged any special parties. Balraj 'you are in final year of your studies.' Nihal 'next year you will be celebrating your birthday in your MIL's house. So we thought of celebrating it in different way.' Heer 'but I don't want any party in the evening.' Balraj 'only this pooja. Nothing more.'

After pooja, Heer sat in the couch and opened the gift boxes. She opened her papa's gift. She found a two pair of bangles. Nihal's is one diamond necklace. Heer 'so you both decided to chase me out of this house this year.' Nihal put hands around her shoulder 'if you want you can stay with us even after marriage.' Heer happily 'ha. I don't want to go anywhere.' Nihal 'but your husband has to agree for that.' Heer sadly 'don't say that you already selected a guy for me.' Balraj 'not yet. But soon.' Heer 'papa, please I want to do MBA.' Nihal 'you can do that after marriage.' Heer pouted.

Heer heard 'Happy birthday' when she entered Prem's cabin. Heer looked at the direction of the sound. Prem is standing with a smile. He is holding a bunch of flower and a small gift box in his hand. Heer with an angry face 'you are the last one to wish me.' Prem smiled 'either I should be first or last. Middle never counts.' Heer 'I was waiting for your call from midnight. Prem 'so you thought only about me on your birthday.' Heer shook her head like kid. Prem 'okay one more time I'm wishing you happy birthday.' He handed her the flower and the gift box.

Heer excitingly 'thanks.' she kept the bunch on the table and opened the box like a kid. Prem watched her with a smile. Heer pulled out a thing out of its box. She looked at the gift once and Prem. 'I'm 21 Prem.' without any happiness 'I'm not a baby.' Prem 'don't you like my gift?' Heer 'I like it but its not useful. I crossed the age of playing with a teddy.' Prem 'I didn't present this to you.' Heer confusingly 'then'.

Prem 'to your kid.' Heer 'to my kid?' she kept the teddy on the table. Moved closer to Prem 'Prem, why all are talking differently today.' Prem 'who?' Heer 'morning papa and bhaiya talked about my marriage. now you are talking about my kid? I didn't understand anything.' Prem 'simple Heer. this year you will get married. Next year you will become mother of a baby.' Heer 'okay. Why are you giving gift now for that.' Prem 'after your marriage you will forget me. I don't even get the news about your baby. So in advance I'm giving gift.'

Heer kept her hand on his chest. She ran her fingers through his hair 'I'll inform you first.' Prem shook his head negatively. Heer 'as soon as I get pregnant, I'll inform you even before informing to others.' Prem 'but it wont be nice.' Heer 'that is my wish.' Prem 'we'll see.'

Heer put her hands around his neck. Prem is standing with his hands inside his pockets. He neither push her aside nor huged her. Heer 'Papa and Bhaiya are ready to bring a partner for me.' Prem shook his head. Heer 'you gave a gift to my baby.' Prem shook his head. Heer 'now I have to select a name for my baby to complete this process.' Prem 'very good you understood.' Heer face changed into thinking. Prem 'what are you thinking now?' Heer 'boy or girl. that is my confusion now. does any one clear this doubt now?' Prem 'I'm here to clear your doubt.' Heer looked at him with interest. Prem smiled 'girl.' Heer 'okay then.' She paused while Prem watched her face carefully. Heer 'ha. Chahat.' Prem 'nice name.' Heer 'now we got everything but I don't know who is my husband.' Prem smiled 'I don't have answer for this. Ask your papa.'

Heer kept her head on his chest and pressed herself on to him tightening her grip around her neck. Prem 'Heer, what are you doing?' he tried to remove her hand. Heer 'today I'm birthday baby. So you have to fulfill all my wishes.' Prem shook his head in acceptance 'what do you want?' he tensly 'but don't tell me to get something expensive.' Heer 'I'm not greedy.' Prem 'hope so.'

Heer 'today evening I want to spend with you.' Prem 'Heer, I can't take you to any hotel.' Heer 'you take me to roadside tea shop that is enough.' Prem thought for a while 'okay I'll take you to riverside.' Heer excitingly 'thanks.' she kissed his cheeks and hugged him tight. Prem didn't hug her. He tried to move her apart 'Heer, we are late for the class.' Heer didn't move away 'we need to go to college only to collect our hall tickets. We can go little late.' Prem 'okay. Now move away.'
Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shot 5

Heer went to college earlier than Prem to celebrate her birthday with Preet and Meher. Prem joined them later in the hotel for lunch. Then they collected the hall ticket. Heer 'Prem, we'll go.' Prem 'okay come. Its your day.' he smiled. Prem went to cycle stand to take his bicycle. 'Heer, don't tell me to take taxi. You have to walk with me.' Heer shook her head in acceptance. They started walking. Prem is walking pushing the cycle and Heer beside him. When they came out of the college, Heer stopped Prem. Prem confused. Heer 'Prem, we'll go in this cycle.' Prem 'how?' before Prem could react, Heer sat on the front bar in between his hands. Prem with a smile started peddling the cycle.

They reached the riverside. Area is quiet and away from crowd. Prem kept the cycle near a tree. Heer tucked her hands into his upper arms. They walked towards the river. Heer looked around and found a place is very silent and won't be visited by anyone. Heer pointed a tree 'we'll sit under that tree.' Prem accepted. Prem sat down under the tree comfortably leaning his back. Heer is waiting. Prem 'sit Heer.' Heer shook her head and pulled his legs apart. Prem 'Heer, what are doing?' Heer 'do what I say.' Prem slightly separated his legs. Heer sat in between his legs. Prem 'Heer. what is this?' he looked around.

Heer leaned her back on his chest resting her head on his shoulder 'its cold and we'll feel warm if we sit closer to each other. Heer hugging her body sat quiet. Prem is resting his hands on his knees. Both were talking some random things. They didn't notice time passing away quickly. Heer started rubbing her exposed upper arms. Prem 'Heer, its getting cold. Lets move from here.' Heer 'I'm not feeling cold.' Prem understood that she won't move away now. Prem 'Heer, I'm feeling very cold. We didn't bring anything to cover us.' Heer took a bag. Prem wondered why she is holding such a big bag. She never had that habit.

Prem is surprised to see her pulling a lengthy shawl out of it. Heer 'cover us with this.' Prem is about to cover her, Heer stopped 'Prem, cover yourself then cover me.' Prem confused. Heer 'first put around you.' Prem did as she said. Then she held the two edges and covered her comfortably inside his cage. She moved backward and pulled his hands on her. Both were inside the shawl. Her shoulder is inch away from his mouth. She kept his hands on her stomach.

He felt tickling effect inside his stomach. He is silent and don't know how to get out of her grip. She adjusted herself and his chin landed on her shoulder. His lips near her ear lobe. Her scent pulled him towards her. she rubbed her palm on his hands. Heer whispered 'Prem, give me a birthday kiss.' Prem is shocked. Heer pleaded 'Please Prem. only one.' Prem looked at her face and melted. His hormone is already triggering up. After few seconds of hesitation he pressed his lips on her cheek. He didn't pull it away. he slowly moved his lips on her cheek in gentle manner. She closed her eyes. His hands started caressing her stomach under the shawl. Heer titled her face to give way for him to move his lips. She felt his hands moving up on her body to reach her chest. his lips moved down to her throat as she lifted her body a bit to expose her neck resting her head back on him. He kissed her throat.

Heer jerked opened her eyes when Prem saw her face 'Heer, come lets go home.' She looked at their posture. She is sitting leaning on his chest resting her head on his shoulder. Shawl is covering them but his hands on his knees. She is caressing her stomach with her hands. She got disappointed. She thought 'again it's a dream. I don't even get a kiss.' She is sad. Prem again called her. she 'umm.' Both got up. both went near by teashop.

Prem ordered tea and some hot snacks. Heer like a kid sat next to Prem in a wooden bench with her plate. Prem is about to put first bit into his mouth, Heer held his wrist. Prem looked at her confusingly. Heer took his hand to her mouth and ate. Prem smiled. When Heer gave him one bite he accepted it with a smile. Heer is very happy.

Prem stopped his cycle in front of big Mann mansion house gate. Heer got down from the cycle 'good night Prem.' she kissed his cheek and ran into the mansion. Prem stood admiring her until she disappeared. Prem peddled the cycle towards his room with a smile. Heer ran to her room happily without noticing her father and brother are watching her.

Their exams are over. All the students are running towards the auditorium. Heer confusingly 'why are they running like this?' Meher 'Prem is going to propose someone.' Heer 'what?' she looked at the girls running 'for that why they are running to auditorium?' Meher 'he is going to propose her in front of the college.' Heer 'is he gone mad?' Meher 'don't you want to know about his girl?' Heer 'sure. She must be lucky.' Meher 'seems to be jealous.' Heer shook her head 'not like that. Prem is very handsome and brilliant.' Meher 'then come.' Heer mobile rang 'you go. I'll be there after attending this.'

Meher stood next to Preet who is anxiously watching Prem. Meher whispered 'do you have any idea?' Preet 'nope. He didn't tell anything to me.' Meher 'don't say lie. Your are his best friend. He must have given some clue.' Preet 'Heer is very close to him.' Meher 'I don't think she knows about this.' Preet 'if I'm not wrong Heer is that girl.' Meher happily 'is it?' she looked around for Heer 'where is she?' she took the mobile and hurried Heer to come to auditorium. Heer attended the call and rushed to auditorium as Meher asked her to hurry up.

Prem is standing in the stage. His eyes are searching for his love. Girls are eagerly waiting for him to open his mouth. Even few of professors want to know who that lucky girl is. They are very much sure that Prem has good future. As Prem saw her entering the auditorium, his face brightened. Few turned towards the entrance seeing his face glowing like 1000 watts bulb.

Heer walked in. Meher ran towards her 'why are you late?' She dragged her in and they stood next to Preet.

Prem opened his mouth.

'your first look at me gave strength to face this world.'

'your smile gave me confidence to mingle with crowd.'

'you are always beside me whenever I found myself alone.'

'you showed me the true love exists in this world.'

'My heart beats for you. My mind filled with your love.'

'I want you to be with me to conquer the world of love for you.'

He stepped down from the stage as he saying these words. holding a bunch of red roses he walked towards Heer. All were glued to Prem as he stepped slowly.

He knelt before her 'I love you Heer.' He extended his hands to give her the bunch of roses to her. 'will you accept my love and be my wife?'

Heer stared at him with shock. She took the bunch. Prem is happy with a wide smile. Crowd is about to cheer. Prem is about to ask her hand for kiss. Preet elbowed Meher 'my guess is right?' Meher happily shook her head.

Heer threw the flower bunch down and crushed with her sandals. Entire crowd is shattered when Heer threw the flower bunch down on the floor and crushed with her heels. Preet and Meher are shocked. Complete silent filled the auditorium. Meher is about to stop Heer. Heer shouted 'you begger, how dare you propose me? did you ever thought once about my status? You are got seat here through my father. I'm the only daughter of businessman who is the owner of many millions. You are a ordinary staff in my office. Can you touch my boots?'

Prem stood up 'Heer. you' Heer cheaply smiled 'I expected this from you. I acted as if I'm in love with you. do you know why?' Prem shook his head negatively. Heer 'to punish you.' Prem confusingly 'Punish?' Heer 'yes. you informed my brother about my behavior here on the first day itself. Because of you I got scolding from my brother that too in front of you. for that. because of you i didn't get respect from any of our classmates. until you entered this college all are fearing for me and giving respect but you took adavantage of me and gave lectures to change my character as if i'm the only evil in this world.' Prem is shocked and words refused to come out of his mouth. Heer 'how is my plan Mr. Prem Juneja? ' she laughed 'at last i won. you can't forget this for your entire life.' she snapped her fingers 'Heer Mann won't forget anything so easily. have a nice life Prem Juneja.'

Heer walked out with a voctory smie Meher tried to stop Heer. But Heer walked out. Prem is standing there shattered. Entire crowd felt sad for Prem's state. They all moved out of the auditorium. Some criticized Heer's behavior. 'she is very pride girl. she is not in love with him only to insult him.' Some said Prem is trying to trap Heer for money. Some is sad that Prem's true love failed. Prem heard many people talking about him badly. 'its like a lame person loving to drink the honey in the top. He is no match to Heer.' He is shattered and fell to the ground covering his face.

Preet shouted at Meher 'go and stop Heer.' Meher ran out 'you stay with Prem.' Preet held shattered Prem in his hand.

Two years Later, New York.

Prem Juneja is standing in the 15 floor of his office located in the NY city. Two years back he is an ordinary person struggled without anything. Today he is the owner of millions. He is the one of the growing leading business man in US. How it is possible? Prem took a deep breath 'I became a businessman because of a girl whom I loved more than me.' his face changed into anger and hate 'Heer Mann, your pride and arrogance brought me to this height. i'll face you oneday with my wife to teach you a lesson.' He let out a smile 'somehow I love you for ignoring my love.' Prem 'Now I'm in top 100 business man in the world.' He laughed but his eyes threw out tears of sorrow. He still misses his Heer. He tried hard to forget her but she refused to go out of his memory.

Ash entered Prem's cabin and saw Prem staring at the sky blankly. She walked to him. She touched his shoulder 'Prem' Prem looked at her with tears. Ash 'Again you started thinking about that stupid girl. She dumped your love.' Prem walked to his desk 'she didn't love me. She showed fake love one me. But my love is true.' Ash 'your love is true but she doesn't derserve you.' Prem resting his palm on the table looked down 'she is my first love. i can't forget her so easily.' he looked up 'I'm sorry Ash.' Ash 'i can understand you Prem. i won't tell you to forget her.' Prem 'thanks' he walked to Ash gave a gentle side hug 'i'm lucky to get you as my life partner.' Ash smiled 'okay. come. Papa is waiting for you in the conference hall.'
After Heer's insult, Prem went to his room. He packed his things and decided to shift his place. So that Heer won't come to him to torture again. Prem walking aimlessly on the road with confusion. He saw a car dashed on the tree. the crowd gathered around the car. a man is hurt inside. a young girl is trying to comeout of the car. Prem dropped his things. he helped her to come out of the car. then he took the man to the near by hospital.
When the man opened the eyes, girl told about Prem to him. man is happy and wanted to help him. He is a NRI, Balwant Singh. he came to India to settle some of his family properties meet with accident while going to near by town. Ashlesha is his only daughter. When Prem asked him job, Balwant happily offered him a job. During Balwant's stay in India, Prem was with him taking care of every matters. they stayed for two weeks only to do arangements for Prem's travel. within a month Balwant returned to US with Prem.
Prem had expereince in all the tenders and handling projects from Nihal worked brillinatly. Balwant admired his work and supported him. Balwant on request by Prem arranged to receive his certificates from the college. So that no one will come to know about his whereabouts.
Prem wanted to stand on his own decided to start a business after few months. Balwant handed him a abonded hotel and helped him to get loans. Prem worked hard and opened many hotels in US within this 2 years.
he is also partner in few of Balwant's business which is handled by Ash. Prem and Ash became friends. Prem shared his bitter past to Ash. She liked him. She expressed his love for Prem to her father who asked Prem. Prem readily agreed as he wants to live in this world happily to teach a lesson to Heer. They got engaged and marriage is fixed in two months.
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Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago

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