SS - Man Disposes God Proposes ~ COMPLETED!! - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
i loved both shots ................. i am sooo happy that prem changed his attitude and decided to accept chahat aftr realising that chaht is his doughter...............

cant wait 4 the next................. update sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome updates !
So now Prem knows that Chahat is his daughter !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow
nice concept(i should say ... as usual....)
really u r such a gud writer...
and m glad now m also part for ur readers list
really loved the ss
waiting for the truth....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey slevy sorry for the late comments your update was superb loved the two parts continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on1st anniversary
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awesome ss
plz update next parts soon
waiitttttiiiiinnnnggggggggg
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Posted: 14 years ago
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friends
Thank you very much for your wonderful comments.
Thanks a lot for your patience. i tried hard to update y'day but couldn't find time to typing.
I'm updating now. Truth will be revealed.
Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Shot 5

Prem seriously 'I'm not joking. Only me and Heer know the truth of Chahat's birth.' All are shocked. Lalit 'Prem, what are you saying? You only told her as' Prem interrupted 'yes. dad. Rishab gave wrong information.' Gay3 angrily 'how can you blindly blame one girl?' Prem 'I made a mistake ma.' he looked at Heer with a pleading eyes. 'sorry Heer,' Heer still didn't come out of the shock staring at him.

Ash 'you never told me about having one family in India.' Lalit 'Prem, when did you married Heer?' Prem looked at Chahat and kissed her cheek 'you go and play in the garden. Papa will come and join after sometime.' Chahat shook her head. Prem sent Chamba to be with Chahat in the garden. Chahat ran to garden.

Prem looked at his family. Lalit repeated his question. Prem 'no dad. I didn't marry her.' Lalit 'then how Chahat will be your daughter?' Teji looked at Heer who is still staring at Prem. 'Heer beta, do you know Prem?' Heer slowly shook her head up and down. Teji 'is he Chahat's father?' Heer looked down and calmly 'yes.'Teji 'how is it possible? Did you went to Canada' she looked at Prem and Heer confusingly.

Lalit ordered 'Prem Heer tell the truth.' Gaya3 looked at Heer with concern 'Heer tell the truth.' Prem 'ma,'

~~FLASH BACK~~ (Prem and Heer)

Prem grew up in Canada but his father and mother are very traditional. Prem likes to flirt with girls. He wanted to enjoy life with his friends. Prem want to go to disco and night clubs to have fun with girls. But his all efforts failed and he got punishments from his mother. Even the news about his small friendly hug to a girl reaches his father before he reaches home. His mother Gaya3 will be standing in the living room in Kali avatar. She will start scolding him for hugging a girl. This increased every day. Finally Gaya3 ordered 'if you touch any girl then I'll chase you out of this house. you have to beg for your food.' Prem got tensed.

Rishab, his friend gave him idea. Before joining his MBA, Prem decided to visit India to attend his firend marriage. Rishab promised to introduce a girl in Mumbai. So that he can have fun with her. Lalit and Gaya3 thought Prem is going to attend marriage. They gave him permission to be in India only for two days. Lalit is clever and ordered to bring his friends marriage CD to confirm the news that he atteneded the marriage. Prem agreed as Rishab told him that one night is enough to have pleasure.

After attending the marriage, Prem went to his room in a hotel which is famous for those illegal activities. As Prem gave good money. He got a very decent room with all the facilities. Rishab went out of the room 'I'll send a girl around 9 in the night. You have full night to enjoy. Early morning you go to the airport.' Prem agreed. Rishab 'give her big amount she will do anything for you.' Prem is happy and excited to touch a girl for a first time.

Heer's parents died when she was only 5 years old. From that day, her mausi was the only loving soul for her. They are very poor. Even Mausi worked hard and earned money for their living and Heer's studies. Y'day she suddenly fainted. Heer took her to nearby hospital. They took some test and confirmed that her liver is damaged and need to do treatment immediately to save her. They asked her to pay 50,000 immediately to start the treatment. Heer begged them to start the treatment. Doctor 'I'll start the treatment but you have to pay the amount t'row morning.' Heer agreed. Her nighbour Janu is married and staying near their house. She and her husband are very kind to Heer and her mausi. Heer asked her to stay with Mausi in the hospital and went to get money. Except one gold chain she didn't have anything to sell to get money. First she decided to keep the chain in Pawn broker shop to lend some money. later she decided to sell but no one is ready to pay more than 1000 Rupees.

Heer tried many shops in Mumbai for money. No one is willing to give money without any valuable item. When she is coming out of a shop a girl of her age met her. She looked like decent girl. 'Are you in need of money?' Heer shook her head 'ha I need money to save my Mausi.' Girl 'how much?' Heer '50,000/-' Girl 'I can help you.' Heer face lit up. Girl 'but you should not ask me any question?' Heer agreed. Girl 'I'll take you to a man. He will give you the amount but you need to obey to him.' Heer agreed without any second thought. She needs money now that is the only thing in her mind.

Girl took Heer in a cab to a hotel. On the way she called someone and confirmed that that person has to pay 50000 and she is on the way with the party. Heer fearfully followed the girl. Girl stood before a room 'listen, actually its my chance but I got money more than I wanted. So I'm helping you.' Heer 'thanks.' Girl 'knock the door. do what he instructs?' Heer agreed. Girl moved away.

Heer with the jope of getting money to save her Mausi fearfully knocked the door. Prem opened the door. With a polite smile he asked her to enter. He closed the door behind them. Heer looked around the room. Prem carefully studied her structure before stepping towards her. He pointed the table 'there your money is ready. 50000.' Heer is happy to see bundle of currnecies. Heer 'thanks.' Prem still standing behind her and her eyes are on the money. Prem touched her shoulder. Heer is shocked. Prem leaned forward and she can sense his breath near her ear 'do you want more?' Heer shook her head 'no its enough.' Prem 'you have to be with me for this amount.' Heer innocently shook her head without understanindg the meaning of his words.

Prem pulled her zip in her back of the dress. Heer jerked. Prem whispered 'I fulfilled my promise now its your time.' Heer felt like killing herself for making such a big mistake. She wanted to run out of the room ignoring his offer. But her Mausi's suffering face and the bundle in front of her eyes made her to stand till. Prem kissed her back. Wet lips sent shiver into her body. as a 19 year old girl this gave some unknown feeling to her.

He took duppatta out of her neck and threw away. Heer stood like a staute fighitng between Money for to save Mausi or her virginity. Pushing her salwar tops aside he started kissing her bare sholder. He moved to her front kissing her collar bone. He took his hands and kissed her palms. He placed it on his chest. He hugged her and rubbed her face in her chest above her dress. His hands moved down to lift her salwar top. Heer wanted to stop him but her love for Mausi made her to lose herself. She decided to agree to him because she won't get money if she runs away from him. she need to pay the money in the hospital t'row morning. where she will go for the money now? its infront of her now.

He moved down and rubbed his lips on her bare stomach. He pulled her salwar top up through her head. He removed his dress and carried her to the bed. He undress her completely. She closed her eyes tight. Next few hours, he fulfilled all his desire to touch a girl. Initially he hesitated to enter her. When he found that she is virigin, he made complete sex with her. He kissed her every cell of her body. She is really tired. Finally he slept keeping his lips on her chest.

Heer slowly got out of the bed thinking he is sleeping. She grabbed her dress and went to change. She took shower to erase her mistake. She took the bundles and about to move out. He pulled her back into his hug. She feared. He kissed her cheek 'thanks.' and let her go. Prem quickly packed his things and went to airport.

Heer ran out of the room without looking back. She was aimlessly walking towards the hospital. Only his face registered into her mind. She couldn't come to conclusion about her decision. Its early hours still dark. She managed to reach the hospital. Janu who saw Heer rushed to her 'did you got money?' Heer showed the amount. Janu is happy. Heer 'how is Mausi?' Janu 'they shifted her to ICU.' Heer ran to the counter to pay the amount.

After 30 minutes, Heer and Janu are sitting in front of the ICU with worried face. Doctor came out 'Sorry, your Mausi is no more. We tried but she didn't survive.' Heer screamed. Janu tried to control her.

After one hour, Janu's husband managed to get few rupees from his friends and did all the final rites. Owner of the house mercilessly sent Heer out of the house as soon as the body was taken to graveyard. Owner took all the things for their pending rent amount.

Heer cried sitting on the road alone. Janu and her husband took her to their home. Janu confusingly 'Heer, how did you managed to get 50000?' Heer told her how she got that amount. Janu and her husband are shocked. Janu 'if you get pregnant what will you say to the world?' after breaking their head for solution Janu's husband came out with one idea.

He told Heer to go to Ambala. Janu too felt that is the only safer place. 'I'll give a letter to Teji Ma. She will protect you.' Heer agreed. Janu's husband advised Heer to introduce her as divorcee so that there won't be any confusion even if she gets conceived. Janu too found that as correct way.

~~END~~

Ash clapped 'thanks for revealing the truth. Now this is the proof that she is a prostitute.' Prem roared 'no she is not.' DJ 'how do yo know Prem? only Prostitutes sleeps with unknown man.' Heer cried looking down. Prem 'I thought Rishab sent her to me. that day he confirmed me that he didn't sent Heer. Actually the girl who sent him got big party so she guided Heer to me.' Ash 'that means she is also doing the same business.' Prem 'she is not. just now she told her part.'

Ash laughed 'that is well scripted story. You can give this to any creatives of Indian Television for a mega serial.' She laughed 'wonderful story' Prem 'its true. Until I met her here I don't know her name. I don't know anything about her.' Dj 'then its sure she is that type of girl.' Prem 'she is virgin at that time.' Ash 'may be she started doing that. You are her first customer.' Teji 'Prem, do you remember the date you met Heer for the first time?' as they exchanged the date, Prem came to conclusion 'she is here after two days of that incident.' Teji declared 'so she is not that kind of girl.'

Ash 'how do you know Chahat is your daughter?' Prem 'I saw the DNA report.' Ash looked at Gaya3 when she 'I only asked to do DNA test for Prem, Heer and Chahat.' Ash 'you too auntie. I thought you allowed her to stay in this house for property.' Gay3 'that is to convince Prem.'

Ash 'Prem, you never crossed your limit with me then how will you behave so low with her.' Prem 'because I never felt the way I felt with Heer. not only first love, first sex is also unforgettable.' Ash is shocked 'what do you mean? You only proposed me.' Prem 'yes. when I left India, I wanted to have that pleasure with some other girl. But my parents won't allow for that. So I decided to propose a girl. that is why I propsed you. you and my parents agreed. But when I took you out everytime with the intention of touching you I got only Heer face in front of my eyes.'

Ash 'you cheat. Now when you got this girl you are trying to chase me out of the house. for that you are framing stories.' Prem 'its true I never loved you. I want to enjoy you lucky I couldn't do that too.' Argument continued between Prem and Ash. Finally Ash shouted 'for this prostitute' Prem shouted angrily 'don't call her like that. she is my daughter's mother.' Ash shouted in return 'a girl with baby but without husband is called like that only.' Prem held Heer hand and dragged to the small mandir inside their house. Elders egerly followed them. Heer is confused. Before Heer could understand what happening around her, Prem took pinch of sindoor and filled her maang. Prem 'she is my wife now. Prem Juneja's wife.' Ash and her parents are shocked.

Heer slapped Prem. Prem is shocked. Heer 'what are you thinking about me? do you think I'm a doll to dance to your tune? That day you didn't give any option to talk. Blindly you blamed me when you saw here. When I sent to you note about Chahat's father you didn't believe me. Now you are acting like mahan.' Ash is happy that Heer is rejecting Prem. now Prem don't have any other option than coming back to her.

Prem 'I agree that I didn't give chance to open your mouth that day. I blamed you. I'm sorry for that. But I didn't get any note from you.' Heer 'don't say lie. As Ash said you are acting for property. Chachi didn't write anything on my name. I too don't want that. So leave me.'

Gaya3 'Heer, When Lalit ordered you to leave this house, you sent all the files to Prem through Ramu. He didn't notice when a piece of paper fell out of it. I took that paper and read the message that you sent for Prem.'

Prem 'what message ma?' Gay3 'you have the right to know that Chahat is your daughter. Its true.' Prem 'why you didn't show that to me?' Gaya3 'I know you won't believe that in that situation. When I recollected the scene I noticed a fear in your face. I understood that there is some story behind that. I stopped Heer to collect proof. I compared the date she entered this house and your visit to India. Both had only two days difference. My work became easier when medical camp team came to collect blood. I asked the doctor to do the DNA test for you,Heer and Chahat.' Prem 'got it Heer. I didn't see that paper.'

Heer 'even then, I'm not ready to accept this relation. You always doing for your convience. Even for this you will have some reason.' Ash 'see Prem, she is treating you' Prem interrupted 'its between me and my wife. I don't want third person's advice.' Ash is shocked. DJ thought it is no use to be here. She dragged her daughter to their room. After 10 minutes Ash and DJ left the house with their belongings.

Teji 'Heer,' Heer 'no Chachi, I won't listen to you in this matter. I'm not ready to accept this sindoor.' She is about to wipe off the sindoor, Teji held her hand 'no beta. Don't do that. I won't force you to live with Prem but I want you to be in this house with sindoor.' Tears came out of her eyes 'hope you will respect my words.' Heer shook her head 'but please don't force me to be with him.' Teji 'I won't.' she looked at Prem. Prem 'I won't disturb her Bua. But I'll be waiting for her.' Heer ran into her room.

Gay3 pat Prem cheek 'don't worry she will soon understand your love.' Prem 'ma I'm sorry.' Gay3 'I'm angry on you but you are getting pusnishement from God for that. Heer's ignorance itself is a punishement to you. So I won't punish you.' Teji looked at Prem and give a hopeful smile. Prem smiled back with confidene. Prem went to see Chahat in the garden.

Chahat 'papa, why you took so long?' she ran into his arms. He grabbed her in his arms and kissed her cheek 'mamma needed some clarification.' Chahat 'is it over?' Prem 'ha. Why?' Chahat pleaded 'I'm hungry papa.' Prem took her in. 'mamma is busy. I'll ask Dadi ma to get you dinner.' Chahat 'mamma is always busy.' Prem smiled. He made her sit in the dinning table 'ma, we want to have dinner.'

Chahat 'papa,t'row children's day. Teacher asked us to come with our parents. Will you come to my school papa?' Prem 'sure beta. I'm Chahat's papa.' she kissed his cheek 'thanks papa.' Teji sat next to them 'what is going on here?' Chahat 'dadi ma. t'row my mamma and Papa are coming to my school.' She looked back at kitchen in search of Gay3 'did dadi ma too busy?' Teji and Prem laughed.

Prem placed sleeping Chahat in Heer's room. He saw Heer sitting on the bed hugging her knees. Her eyes are blood red in colour shows her anger and pain. Only tears rolling down her cheeks. Prem felt pain in his heart. Eventhough he kept sindoor on her maang to erase that name which she got because of him, he don't think he is in love with her. He felt sorry for hurting her. That made him to keep sindoor on her maang.

Prem 'Heer, what I did may be not acceptable. But I'm Chahat's father. I don't have any doubt in it. I want to fulfill my duty as a father. I'm not forcing you to accept me as your husband just because I kept sindoor. I'll do my duties as a father and husband until you get married to someone. I'll not force you to take any decision. But I won't allow you to leave this house unless you marry someone who can give my daughter same love.' He placed a sindoor daani on her dressing table. 'I'm placing this here. You give this to a person whom you want to marry.' He silently walked out of the room.

Heer stared at the door which he closed behind him. Her anger increased recollecting thinking 'how dare he can ask me to marry someone? What he is thinking about me? Does he thinks I want a bed warmer like him. He destroyed my life and now talking about my life.' she wiped her tears. 'Are you planning to attract me with your good words? This time I'm not innocent to fall into your trap.' She got ouf the bed 'I'm not going to stay here.' She pulled out a bag and started packing her things.

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Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.

Edited by sweta2005 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update so G3 new that Chahat is Prems daughter and she planned all this.
Will Heer leave the house and go or will Prem stop her???
Update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part
So its prems fault & he blamed heer for his mistake
Glad to know that G mom supporting heer
Mens do all mistakes, ask sorry & they expect to be forgiven, How rediculous
Hope heer wont forgive him any time soon
Let him prove himslef to her, Hw can he call her as prostitute with knowing anything abt her????????????????
Nw he is acting like mahan.............................................



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