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Daffodilee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Tas17
gosh...another awesome part anu.👏
Gayeri.....eerr....how could i forget her...😡

now, i really can't wait to see how prem reacts🤔

Preet and Meher is such a sweetheart.....can't wait to see how they fall in love😍

Great conversations between Prem-Heer😳

God Bless U deary.🤗

Do update soon😊

Take Care☯️

Luv ya...❤️

Tasneem😎

thank you dear for your appreciation i am glad you liked it

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Daffodilee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: NIMMY
Prem and heer always fighting
prem saved heer but again they fight

well they love fighting wid each other

and prem is starting to like heer

and heer knws tht he is Prem Juneja and wants him to hate her

but the goons attck prem

and said tht heer was behind all this and prem hears

he is in icu.........get well soon Prem

G3 is behind all this ............but why

hope tht heer finds out

and prem also

thank you namru

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Daffodilee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: sadhz
it was fabulous part anu........loved it..............wow prem is fallin for heer........this gay3 arhhhaaaaaaa.........oh my prem.......update sooooooooooooooooooooon

thank you sadhana

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Daffodilee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: crystall

Awesome update !

Loved it !

Waiting for next !

Update soon !

Thnx for pm !

thank you dear

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Daffodilee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: shivangi2092
superb yaar!!!!!!!!!!!

really liked it!

gud that both started liking each other!

plz continue soon!

thankyou shivangi dear

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Daffodilee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl
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finally read da update...

awwwwwwwwww i looooooooved prem & preet scene.... my poor preet 😆 😆 😆 i just love dese two brothers awwwwww sooooooooo adorable!!!!!!!!!!! really loved readin dat bit...

anu, plssss update soon cz i had fun readin ur ff....

big hug 🤗

thank you di i am glad you liked it. thanks for the appreciation

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Daffodilee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

hi friends thanks for your comments 🤗 i thank you all who commented ,pressed like button and silent readers of my ss thank you very much . here is the next part

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Daffodilee

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Posted: 14 years ago

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part 3

heer was shocked . the doctor continues " sorry prem got consious three hours before but to check his stability we didnt informed you all . now he is fine . " .you can go and see. preet rushed to the room . he goes near prem and asks " are you okay prem ". prem " preet its paining terribly". heer and meher enters the room . preet asks " how it happened. " prem looks angirly at heer .heer was shell shocked.

prem continues " this arrogant girl fights with those strangers . i was caught in the middle " .heer realived to hear those words . she thinks herself " thank god prem didnt heard those words " .prem asks " why you fight with them ".
heer " prem i dont know who are they ". prem " then why they tried to kill you ". heer " i swear i dont know ".

prem took a month to get full recovery . , heer ,meher and preet became friends . heer and prem continues to be the tom and jerry . heer never confessed that she is the girl with whom prem is engaged.

meher invites preet and prem to her birthday party. prem comes in saying " who made this decorations such a bad taste ". heer " what bad i spent a whole night to arrange this ". prem " so what its bad taste . you wasted lot of time in it". heer " noway its good you only had bad sense ". prem " what me no its yours ".preet " okay okay i am hugry let us go and cut the cake. prem and heer gives a stare and goes inside.

prem and heer sits in the hall meanwhile meher wents inside the kitchen to bring some juice . preet goes in . preet " meher shall i help you ". meher " preet dont disturb me ". preet " i want to say you one thing ". meher " what ". preet " i am not sleeping now a days ". meher " take sleeping pills ". preet " meher i cant eat properly even i am in hungry ".

meher " change the cook may be taste is bad ". preet hits his foot on the floor and says " why not understanding what i am saying ". meher " okay tell i am listening " . preet " meher i cant even listen the class, cant sleep, cant eat whats happening to me ". meher " you are crazy ". meher tries to go away with a smile.

preet " meher i want to know a thing " .meher " what do you want preet ". preet " do you love anyone ". meher " ofcourse i am in love ". preet was shocked he asked in frustration " is he good ,handsome ".

meher " no he is little bad not handsome somewhat good looking ". she adds " he cant think , eat, sleep, listen class properly ". preet " then why you choosed that stupid guy ". meher " do you really want me to leave him ". preet " yes yes he is not fit for you "

meher runs from there with a smile saying " yes yes he is such a stupid i must have left him ". preet " what his name ". meher shouts " still you want the name what a person i loved he is such a fool". she runs away.

preet thinks why meher choosed that guy he recollected her words and felt something . he runs to see meher. meher was standing in the garden. preet goes behind her . he fell on his knees keeps the hands folded and asks " meher will you accepts this fool ". meher " by god atleast now you understand my love.

they both hugged happily. meher " we came hear to unite prem and heer . preet " dont worry meher we will do something to unite them . meher " yes we have to do something".

prem " heer can i have a coffee " . heer goes and brings it . he take a chip and says " so you dont know cooking too ".heer starres at him . prem " really heer it is very bad ". heer " i regret for saving you ". prem " heer if you dont mind shall i ask you a question ".

heer " what ". prem " why they shouted your name really you dont know them ha ? . heer " do you trust me ". prem " yes heer i trust you we used to fight but we are not bad enemies to hurt each other but who are they ". heer " really i dont know prem ". prem " hmm now i understand you are waste you dont know anything ". heer " fine what you know about me ".

prem " arrogant ,careless, spoiltbrat but sweettheart , good hearted girl ". heer " i won your heart ". prem " what are you gone crazy ".heer " no prem thats what i want you to think about me i got success in it ". prem " you are confusing me ". heer " no prem i just wanted to confuse you ". prem " you will never repent ". heer " thanks for the compliment you waste guy ". heer " you are a coward ".

prem got angry and asks what she said . heer " simple can you go before your dad and say you dont want to marry me ". prem " what do you mean why i have to say him . i am engaged with another girl. i have to say only i dont want that girl not you". heer "oh prem i am that girl ".

prem was shocked he shouts " it means i loved the the girl which my brother left noway i dont want this . why you came to me and made me fall into love with you , now saying every thing ". heer " wait when i made you to fall in love you are such a lier cant trust your friendship ". prem looks at her angirly and he storms away from the house. preet and meher who were in the garden sees prem going angrily . preet runs behind prem . prem asks preet to drive car to home . preet drives calmly.

meher goes inside . heer hugs her and says success meher i got rid of him . he will never comeback to me . meher slaps heer. heer was shocked.

in ambala

gayathri is in her room . lalit came " gayathri i want to do mayank -nupur's marriage as soon as possible ". gay3 " why ji you are doing like this . look lalit ji we should do after six months not now ". lalit " but why ". gay3 " lalit ji please accept my wish ".

lalit " okay done ". he goes away . gay3 immediately calls daljeet . daljeet " hi gaythri ji how are you ". gay3 " not fine ". daljeet " i understand gay3 ji our plan backfired and your son suffered but now everything will be fine ".

gay3 " daljeet i dont want that heer to enter into my house ". daljeet " i know gay3 ji you want my daughter ashlesha to be your bahu ". gay3 " dont mistake me daljeet even i accept any girl but not this heer ".

gay3 continues "i will defame her and make her own family to throw her away from her house ". daljeet " hope you will succeed ". gay3 " ofcourse this time i got very nice chance i wont leave her".

meher continues " what are you doing heer why you rejected him ". heer cries " meher first i didnt loved him but he fell on me even i am doing all bad things ". i am ready to accept him but if i do so his life will be in danger".

meher " what rubbish ". heer " no meher see this letter ". meher reads the letter she is shocked.

preet stops the car at garden. prem says " preet she she cheated me ". preet " just close your eyes and think from your heart did you hate her ". prem but she is ". preet " oh prem bhaiyya and nupur loving for past three years . your marriage idea came only before six months so your reason is not logical "

he insists him to do so . prem closed his eyes . preet asks " think from your heart did you hate heer ". prem hestitates to say answer but says " no i love her ". preet smiles then problem solved . prem " take me to heer's home.poor prem dont know he is going to get a heavy blow in his life".

will prem accepts heer?, will heer accepts prem ?, why gaythri dont want heer as her bahu?.

hi friends i just finished part3 plz do read and comment how it is

Edited by anuu2010 - 14 years ago