New FF: Left Over : part 5on page 21(27th nov) - Page 4

Originally posted by: NIMMY

loved it............

thank s 4 the pm

Prem and heer dont want to marry each other as they were left by there siblings

Prems car got bumped in heers car........ and they fight...........

and heer god she is one arrogent girl and Prem Mr. angry young man

they end up fighting always

why lalit behaves like that wid Prem

Originally posted by: Ayesha103

Pllllz continue brillliant :)

Originally posted by: crystall

Hey....

Great story !

Loved it !

Premeer fights are lovely !

Waiting for next !

Update soon !

Thnx for pm !

Originally posted by: -salma-

great start ...loved it .............

waiting for the nxt

thnx 4 d pm 😊

Originally posted by: newt2007

funny start

Poor Prem and Heer alsway has to stick to left overs of their sibling

now both are going to do MBA in same sollege.

first meeting of was very funny and Heer 's curse made me laugh. poor girl don't know that she is going to marry him.

Originally posted by: Tas17

it was very nice, esp from the Delhi part. The characters are very funky and interesting...only Lalit seemed a bit kharoos, but again it works for the story. Thanks for the pm or i would've missed it. Waiting for the 2nd part.👍🏼

Originally posted by: -BabyCupid-

Nice!!
love the concept!
Please update soon!
Thanks for the pm!

Originally posted by: anuu2010

oh thankyou jyo dear . 😆premeer wont hug so soon in my ff

Originally posted by: -Jyo-

No worries i like them fighting in ur ff😉