New FF: Left Over : part 5on page 21(27th nov)

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Jyothi N

@-Jyo-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Annu it was hilarious

Glad ur started nw one😃

Ow y lalith is soo strict towards prem

Loved Tom & jerry fights b/w premeer

egarly waiting too see wt happens next

Continue soon...............................

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sherma

@sherma

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

interesting concept.thanks for pm.do continue soon

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Namrata Kumari

@NIMMY

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

loved it............

thank s 4 the pm

Prem and heer dont want to marry each other as they were left by there siblings

Prems car got bumped in heers car........ and they fight...........

and heer god she is one arrogent girl and Prem Mr. angry young man

they end up fighting always

why lalit behaves like that wid Prem

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Hey....

Great story !

Loved it !

Premeer fights are lovely !

Waiting for next !

Update soon !

Thnx for pm !

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-salma-

@-salma-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

great start ...loved it .............

waiting for the nxt

thnx 4 d pm 😊

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newt2007

@newt2007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

funny start

Poor Prem and Heer alsway has to stick to left overs of their sibling

now both are going to do MBA in same sollege.

first meeting of was very funny and Heer 's curse made me laugh. poor girl don't know that she is going to marry him.

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Tasneem

@Tasneem-17

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

it was very nice, esp from the Delhi part. The characters are very funky and interesting...only Lalit seemed a bit kharoos, but again it works for the story. Thanks for the pm or i would've missed it. Waiting for the 2nd part.👍🏼

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Harpreet Randhawa

@-BabyCupid-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Nice!!
love the concept!
Please update soon!
Thanks for the pm!

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Daffodilee

@Daffodilee

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: brainychild92
whats up with lalit's attitude? is prem adopted? do mayank and prem have a mom or step mom or is she dead?
great part.. thansk for the pm.. add me to the list:D

continue soon!!

thank you dear nope prem is not adopted . some reason behind it . i reveal in later parts . yes gayathri will be introduced in coming parts