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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
now heer in a problem
god has some problem with them always doing this with them
but god bhi unhe hi tang karte hain jo unke favourite ho....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
nice update
waitng for next part
why heer is sad
what is in that letter
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
nice part
sanjana acting goodyor really changed.
what is in that courier. don't sperate Prem and Heer
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
thankyou friends i will edit part 7 soon. thanks for your encouragement
Edited by kiddu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
hi friends this is part 7

heer took the phone and says hello , prem " heer i want you to meet immediately i have to say you onething surprise for you" heer just says okay and puts the phone down. heer lost in thoughts she dont know what to do know she decides whatever happens will happen so i should tell everything to prem " heer decides to tell about the letter and the news to prem.

heer went to prem's house she opened the door she was shocked and surprised to see her parents there and whole gang of relatives. lalit comes to her " heer beta we decided to announce engagement today marriage wont affect your business so we decided to surprise you " heer smiles and get blessings from him. veera and preet teased prem and heer .but heer smiled for everything prem was surprised by her behaviour he asks

"heer do you have any problem " heer suddenly says nono nothing w---h---y you asked prem " prem " you not arguing with preet or teasing him you just smiling do you have any fear of marriage " meanwhile preet interfere nahi prem heer is pretending to be a nice girl in front of so many relatives i know tomorrow she will give back every thing poor veera she has to getby today itself . heer smiles again prem " look preet she is still doing so today if we tease her she wont reply comeon let us enjoy the best chance we got" .heer " prem i want to talk to you plz prem " preet " okay i am moving" heer " no no preet you stay i just say i have to tell you an info about me"

preet " heer meher calling i come in few minutes " preet moves . heer " prem how you like kids " prem " heer i love kids a lot why you asking now"
heer " if i ask you something will you answer honestly prem just looks her

heer continues "prem if i cant give birth to a child will you marry me , prem i just got the report it says i cant give birth to a child if i marry you you wont get your chahat so plz leave me dont marry me "

in sanjana's home

sanjana jumps in joy visaka asks " sanju what happens why you jumping like this " sanjana " heer is going to stop the rishta with prem . stupid girl she met accident and got injured in stomach it is a minor injury but i just changed reports as heer cant be a mother and unfit for marriage"
visaka " will heer says this to prem " sanjana " ofcourse she will but prem always love children so it will be a shock to him and heer wont give shock so she will leave him " visaka " you have to move carefully sanjana you shouldnot let heer to marry prem let us see what happens now"

in prem's house
heer goes on begging him dont marry me bcoz i cant bring chahat in your life . prem stands up he walked towards heer . he gave a tight slap to heer and shouts " whats your idea about my love, are you my true lover what you think about me , i loved bcoz your character good nature , i loved your heart not your body , heer look i loved to have kids but if you cant then we adopt or go to surrogate mother it's all a simple problem why you worrying yourself ,i am ashame of you heer you didnt trust me na "

heer " no prem i dont want to give saddness in your life" prem " oh god heer if you are not in my life it is the biggest sorrow of my life dont talk stupidly heer look our marriage is going to happen if not you wont be see me alive in the world"

heer runs to prem and hugs him i am sorry prem , prem says let this matter to be with us dont say to any one . heer says okay . prem consoles her and they went inside to join with the crowd as nothing had happened.


next day
sanjana fumes in anger she shouts visaka our plan failed . visaka " i already told it is such a stupid idea how could prem leave heer for this reason no sanju a true lover wont leave her in that situation" sanjana " no problem still i can seperate them " visaka " how by same nonsense plan " sanjana " nope this time i am going to give heer a heavy surprise by bringing back harman in her life " visaka" who is this harmaan " sanajana " hmm heer has to give the answer " visaka " what nonsense is this " sanjana " no di i dont know why heer always fear even hearing his name something is there so i try to find him and give it heer as a marriage gift"
both laughed loudly.

in park

prem " heer i want my old heer back so just erase that thing in your mind ." heer " you mean the girl who teached you how to wear the seatbelt right? prem " ho heer still you remember that it is our first meeting na " heer " ha prem do you know at first i decided to reunite you and sanjana but you escaped form her." prem " hmm but poor guy escaped from a fox and caught by a lion " heer hits his head and shouts mr prem juneja i am going to kill you " prem " oh do it i will escape from you na " heer chase him they ran into the beach and falls down both stands up " prem " hey kulfi i just want to eat it you stay here i come with kulfi okay" heer nods her head .

prem wents there . heer just watches the sea waves suddenly she hears the sound " heer dear how are you, you fealing fearless without me na so i came here " heer turns around to see harman and she was shocked to see another person with him.
she just stares at them .harmaan says hey heer whats up she is my wife nupur .heer says hai she hestitates to speak. prem arrives and sees nupur and surprised .nupur " prem heer is your wife " prem " ofcourse we are going to marry " harmaan " okay heer i will meet you later". both prem and heer looked tensed at nupur and harmaan .
hi friends i finished my part7 plz read and do comment if it is bad or not shall i continue ?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
nice part but why new characters in every part
any how it is good
waiting for next update
i think harman and heer were friends
i hope sanjana misunderstands
is this nupur and harmaan good or bad?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

lovely story!...

continue soon!
plzz add me to ur pm list!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
loved the way Prem loves heer........ a true lover .........
but tht sanjana hate her & her stupid plans........
now wht is this harman mystery
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
hey it ws awesome.......
anothr twst n the story!!!!!
pls do continue!!!!!
wanna read it further!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60


who is this nupur?????????????and what is harmans connection with heer............so many twists hmmmmmm....................continue asap..........................

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