New SS: bcoz of you completed page 32

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi friends this is my new ss please read and comment
Character Sketch
prem juneja " a romantic guy , very easy going funny person, successful businessman , he always like to help girls. now he is in love with sanjana."
heer maan " a smart outspoken girl she enjoys the life and took all things poistively . never gets sad for anything . she accepts the life as it comes."
sanjana " a reserved type girl who gets angry for small things . she is in love with prem"
preet sharma " prem's best friend"
part1 -page 1
part2- page 2
part3 -page 3
part4- page4
part 5- page 6
part6- page7
part7 - page 9
part8 - page11
part9-page 14
part 10 - page 18
part11 - page 20
part12 - page 23
part 13 - page 28
part 14 - page 32
plz read and comment
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part 1
It is a morning time in a ramphal company man 1 " why prem going so fast to sanjana room " . girl 1 " it's asusual fight we fed up with this they fight in morning and unite in evening " .man2 " no its seams not so".
sanjana " listen prem i wont forgive you this time " prem " sanjana plzz listen it was a joke " sanjana " joke you mean it but i cant just get out i dont want to see you again" . prem " okay i am going you want this na but onething plzz remaind prem juneja always loves you" and he moves with tears sanjana looks the way with tears.
months passed prem was getting ready to open his new venture in brisbane so he came to airport to catch the plane. he saw a scene a girl wearing a salwar with a treditional hairstyle and some people took arti and something . he just laughs." and then moves.
the girl sits next to him in the flight . she just untie her hair and removes flowers and then she did some makeup. prem was surprised by her behaviour . the girl turns to him and says " hey dude i am heer we are going to travel ten hours so not bad to intoduce ourselves she goes on speaking. " she took prem's mobile and says " waste guy no girl name in your mobile " prem " laughs at her my dad is so strict he wont allow friendship with girls so close most of the numbers are girls but i keep it in boy name"
heer " ha me too do like that only we too have same both nature is it ?. prem says yes and his mind goes to the first meeting with sanjana
Flash Back
prem and his friend rajveer his child sneha went to temple. prem took her in arms and mistakenly bumped with a girl. the girl " hey child dont you tell your father to take care of his way " prem " hey am i looking like a father of a child . i am not married ". sanjana " sorry i am sanjana i mistook you ". prem " thankgod i didnt take my niece with me then you may have said me as father of 10 year world " . sanjana smiles and went away"
Flash back ends.
heer " prem you know i am going brisbane for a project . but i dont like this have to work in a routine i dont have friends " let's be friends . prem " i think we already started " heer laughs " okay dude here is my address.
prem says " okay we will meet again " . the flight lands in brisbane. she says bye and went to see the person waiting for her . she saw a girl having her name board. heer goes to her. prem who stands away was surprised to see sanjana recieving heer. he tries to moves to them."
heer " sanjana plzz wait i have to say bye to my friend i met in flight " sanjana asks where is he , heer shows the direction of prem standing in distance . sanjana shocked and she draggs her to car saying " you are innocent dont talk with unknown persons ". heer confused but goes with her. prem ran towards them but stopped by officer for clearance and missed them.
i finished part 1 plzz read and tell how it is
will prem again meet sanjana and get her love back. will prem and heer fall in love.? this is my concept.
plzzz read and comment friends
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome start
i think you should conitnue soon
your concept is great
update soon
add me to your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome start yaar
do continue n add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome!!!!
pls add me n ur pm list wen u mk one!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesme.....tooo goood....continue sooon and add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Prem loved sanjana.......nahi

and Heer and Prems first convo. was soooo funny.....cute
tht sanjana is back..
lets see wht happens nxt
will heer and prem fall in love
or
prem gets stuck wid tht sanjana
plz pm me when u update nxt time
plzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it!!
Interesting story!
I was waiting for this kinda story to come out i was actually gonna do a FF like this but since i have about 12 i didn't!!!
GLad u r!!
Please pm me when u update!!
Thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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prem loves sanjana............... nahi
plz continue soon
and can you please add me to your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi friends this is second shot
shot 2
prem tries to call heer's number but sanjana cuts the call saying to heer " see now he is trying to call you dont give such number to unknown persons okay " heer confusingly nods her head to avoid further convo about prem . " . sanjana is heer's project head and heer has come to assist her . sanjana treats her as a good friend. "
after some days heer was walking in the road . she speaks in mobile and walks carelessly. a car came fast towards her but she didnt listened and contunies talking . suddenly a hand pulled heer to other side and heer and prem rolled down in ground. heer jokingly asked " what prem looks like you were waiting here to get a chance to save a beautiful girl ." prem gets anger and moves from there. heer followed him calling his name.
prem enters into a train . heer followed him and she sits and asked him to sit near her. prem just stands meanwhile a gay person comes near prem . prem got disturbed and getoff the train . heer who runs behind him says " kya prem did you like only gay friends not girl friends ha? ". prem " what do you want now " heer " hey dude i just joked why you took it serious come let us have coffee". prem " okay but now no mood come let us walk".
heer " prem oh time up i forgot it sanjana is waitig for me . i have to go " prem " okay heer you go why you always running behind anyone" . heer " because i love to run " . prem " is it how fast you can run". heer " i dont have answer but my friend harman's dog knows about it " prem shouts kya ? heer " ha prem that dog doesnt likes me t always barks at me so i put chilli powder on its face so it starts to chase me . but i ran too fast and escaped you know " . prem " chilly powder !! on a dog so interesting who gave this stupid idea? heer " harman after that only i got to know he played prank on me " . prem laughed . heer " its okay prem it's time i am going. " prem see the path smilingly.
the next day prem again meets heer in a gift shop. prem " heer for whom you are selecting gift. " heer " for sanjana she is angry on me so i have to cool her by giving a gift " prem " oh what you selected " heer " two dove "
prem " no sanjana wil get angry on you if you give this " . heer " do you know her already " . prem " yes we loved but now seperated ". heer " is it hey plz tell me how you both meet and how u proposed and seperated it will be thrill to hear a love story ". prem " heer now i have no time tomorrow i surely tells you okay". heer nods her head and they moved away.
prem met sanjana on the way " sanju how are you " . sanjana " look prem dont call like that call me by full name i dont want to continue your relationship. " prem " you going to regrett for this " . sanjana " is it thankyou very much now just leave the way ". prem stunned by her behaviour.preet comes there " prem it is useless just leave her in her ownway you dont feal for her " prem " preet come let us move ".
prem heer meets in a park . heer " prem tell me when you met her first . prem tells her the temple incident " . heer " after when you met her
Flash Back
prem went with rajveer to attend preet's engagement with meher. there he bumped into sanjana . rajveer again you ?? . sanjana why ask your friend to be happy bcoz he is lucky to be bumped with a beautiful girl". prem " beautiful girl where is she ?. sanjana " you teased me wait and watch". she rans to a police officer says something . the lady moves towards them . prem and rajveer hides but the lady search him. prem and rajveer runs out with fear. sanjana laughs behind them . prem atlast learns from the police officer that sanjana told her that both prem and rajveer are the vvips she has to treat her well to earn good name " . after knowing that prem and rajveer starres at sanjana but she escaped in her car".
Flash Back Ends
heer laughs what a girl she is so tricky na . prem smiles yes she is so good and caring but too possassive that is her problem. "
this is end of part2 will heer fall in love with prem after knowing entire story?will prem accepts heer or sanjana? will sanjana forgive prem ? what wrong prem did ? this is my story line
friends plz read and do comment how it is

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