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Posted: 14 years ago

hi friends this is final part

preet and meher rushed to the home chahat asks preet " chachu wats happening why we are going so soon " preet " chahat you have a great surprise there " gunjun " di shall i see it first " chahat " okay done " meher " no gunjun we all going " .

chahat " okay meher ma tell what is the gift " meher " its the best gift nobody can give it to you like this before " gunjun " who selected it " preet " prem selected it .
" chahat " oh when papa selected it " gunjun " if prem papa selected then it must be good only " meet smiled at thier children .
mayank " heer why you so tensed your prem is with you then what " heer " you know i am going to meet my child long back no mother should have this experiance "
nupur " heer you are lucky atleast you got back your child "
prem " heer why you worried chahat will love you " heer " okay i am going to wait in garden " .
heer moves there she waited there she walked in tense suddenly see saw a girl coming towards her .
she stops seeing her and calls her " heer ma you are here chahat di will be happy to see you now granpa is cured na when you will come "
heer was surprised to see gunjun recognising her she took her in arms and says " from now i will be with you only " she kissed gunjun , gunjun " heer ma you know prem papa and di waited for you always come lets go to meet di '
chahat came running to heer and "she just screams ma you cameee" heer took her in arms and kissed her".
chahat cries mamma you wont leave me again na why you left me ". heer " mum did a mistake i wont leave my chahat anytime " .chahat hold around her neck tightly she didnt let heer to go away from her for a moment" .
prem took chahat to shopping as they were leaving . heer just walks in garden " gunjan came running to heer and says heer ma you are here i searched every where " heer took gunjan in arms and asks " did you missed me "
gunjan " heer ma you know prem papa and di always waited for you , they will be happier if you come with us " .
" ma you are coming na " .heer smiles " ofcourse gunjan i will be back and wont go " gunjan asks " promise " heer says " promise now you go and play " gunjan moves away .
prem and chahat arrives .chahaat came running to heer she showed a teady bear to heer and says " ma this is my gift how is this " heer just amased to see wat chahat having in her hand" .
chahat asks wat happened ma " heer kiss her cheek and says " chahat its so beautiful you its your ma 's favorite but papa wont like it " prem smiles .
chahat looks up prem confusingly and she asks " kya papa dont like it ,but papa used to say he loves it more than anything , you forget it ma ".
heer was surprised to hear this but she was quite happy about it" chahat insits her to say something , heer " ha chahat ma was away so long na so i forget it sorry plzz "
heer bent down and says sorry again chahat hugs her from back and says " ma i love you ,you dont leave me na " heer " no way chahat i wont go anywhere promise " .


three months later

heer " chahat check the door somebody is calling na " chahat " ma i am busy with video game " . heer " you naughty girl ,gunjun you and check it " gunjun " heer ma no mood di is not giving game to me i am angry now so cant go ".

meher laughed at heer and says " see our kids grown up we cant get them to work come lets go and check who it is ".
meanwhile preet comes down and open the door .they shocked to see sanjana and harman standing there . preet shuts the door and says useless guys why they come back now " but the door bell keeps on ringing .
he bumps into prem , prem asks " what happened to you preet go and open the door " preet hesitates to do so , prem " what happened to you preet did you joined with kids today ,let me open it ."
prem shocked to see sanjana and harman . heer and meher too come down and both shocked to see them . sanjana " hey dont be shocked we used our brain and now we have taken a decision " .
prem " sanju you used your brain really what is that " heer " harman again you listening to sanjana ,you are going to land in jail " harman laughed and says " no we decided to marry " preet " kya marriage but how could we belive this ".
sanjana " we know its hard for you people to belive but its true we decided we wont comeback in you lives " prem " okay we belive you even if you come back you cant do anything " .
heer " actually you both made us to stay closer we must say thankyou " . both sanjana and harmaan smiled and says good bye to meet and premeer.
preet " atlast every problem solved now we can enjoy " prem " ha preet but you know this sanjana and harmaan are so stupids now had taken a wise decision "
heer " prem he took some girl called nupur na what about her " prem "she was the nihaal's neighbour .i dont know why she came here with harmaan " .
heer " prem i am missing veera so much ,we have to go and meet them " prem " dont worry heer they are coming here ,nihaal started a business. " preet " but there is another surprise for you heer " .heer " what is that "


prem " heer mayank left ambala business for robby ,he is starting a new branch in delhi ,so your brother and my friend is coming to stay with us. " heer " really prem am so happy for that really missing mayank so much ,you know he never let me sad,he used to fulfill all my wish ".
preet " prem i think she is teasing you " . prem " ha preet what to do , mayank did like that but same way nupur did to me ,this heer only concentrating on chahat ,not me .he showed fake faces " .
heer smiles and hit him and says " fine now i take care of you ,see i am going to cook for you today "
prem " you mean laddoo with salt " heer " no salt this time , i decided to put chilli powder today " and heer hides behind meher . prem started to chase her " . everybody laughs at them . atlast both prem and heer fell down on each other and starts laughing .
prem stood up and says " heer i never belived i would be happier again " heer " ha prem you atleast had clue that i am alive but for me it was more trouble but everything disappeared now " " why you still keeping daljeet chachi in mumbai house" .
prem " heer 6 months before maya eloped with a guy i dont his name " " so i just left her alone there " .

heer " okay prem now we can live happily na no body will come in between us " meet comes there smiling and says " shall we come right now .

prem " from the day of marriage you tease us ,so you can " preet " thats good comeon letus go its time we promised kids that we take them out " heer " okay we go " .prem " ha if we broke promise we cant manage kids so we go now " the four laughed.


the family united .and they lived happily bcoz nobody come in their lives . let us wish them for their happy lives


friends i just finished this ss in this part so plz read and say how it is?

Edited by anuu2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

🤗 thank you my dear friends for supporting me in writing this ss

i just copy pasted names from like button no order followed.
zigzagway, -salma-, moon_mine, heer193, samrocking30, shivangi2092, suha_hasini, snehaheer21, crystall, sonia7, newt2007, sweet scorpio, shahrukh_divya, 0711rokxoxo, NaDzGirl , -Jyo- , Sweta2005 , cute1122, heer193, Nimmy ,Sadz, Brainychild92, iheartchai, aishwaryagagen.
sorry if i missed any names
thank you so much friends for your sweet comments its only bcoz of your support i just finished my ss thank you friends.
🤗 thank you to all members who pressed like buttons , those who comment on it and silent readers of my ss . once again my sweet thanks for you all
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Anuu
Edited by anuu2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Journey of bcoz of u was awesome
Last update was simply superb
Heer & kids scene were amazing
Ow nw prem love teddy bears..............hw sweet
Awesome premeer scenes............................
ladoo scene was hilarious
Glad to know that Mayank-nupur & nihal-veer r cming to delhi
Finally they all united..........If end is well then all is wel............
Thank sooooooooooo much for giving us such an wonderfull story
Hope u cm up with another wonderfull ff



With luv
Jyothi
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Posted: 14 years ago
gonna miss it
Loved this update
Chahat got the best gift........best surprise...........her mom
loved it when she asked who selected it...... and they say Prem........
Yep Prem selected heer........nope not only heer HIS HEER
loved gungun ang chahat.......................
gonna miss PREMEER
MEET
MAYUR
and last but not the least.............
sanju weds harman was hilarious wid preet closing the door at their face...........
the way kids refused to open door
and Prem will get mirchi wala ladoo that was hilarious
last scene PREMEER pyar and sweet sweet takrar was the bst
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
loved the scene Chahat and Heer meeting.
at last they are happy.
nice ending. thanks for giving a wonderful SS.
write more like this.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Perfect ending !
Great story !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 14 years ago
the ending ws very sweet!!!!!!
the reunion ws perfect!!!!!!
nthng cud hv been better than this!!!!!
sanjana n harman also decided to marry!!!!!!!
i jst simply lovd it!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi anu,

ohhhh wow i cant believe it finally ended..... it ws such a sweet ff and i really enjoyed readin it dear although i joined it after some time. it really helped to ease myself as i miss premeer like hell😭

plsssssss start another ff soon sweetie...

big hug🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome FF
luved the end
thnx for pm
premeer scene was awesome

Edited by samrocking30 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb ending!....
the way chahat met heer was minblowing!...
glad to see everyone happy!...

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