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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey PHriends, atlast em here with update!!

okay now just warning u...this one is totally out of this world!!!..and yeah in next update Heer will be in Canada😆😉☺️...just bear this one!!!
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Part 3
After getting exhausted they went to cafe and had their lunch. then they came home with lots of bags in thier hands!!
"Typical girls" Nihaal said as both girl entered the house with shopping bags.
"wat....wat did u say?"
"array kuch nahi..mei ne kia kaha"
"dont act like..u dont know anything"..Veera frowing
"ohh plz ab ap dono shuru mat ho jana"
"jao tum dono fresh ho jao, mei khana laga deti hoon..beschara nihall kab se tum dono ka intezaar kar raha hai" teji said coming from the kitchen
"Jee maa"both said like a GOod girls and went to their rooms.

Its was 6pm in india and in canada it was 8am..Heer thougth to call Prem as today he has an important assignment so she dialled his number

"trin trin"..Prem's cell ring. He picked up the phone.."Heellooo"in full sleepy voice
"awww poor baby..seems like didnt sleep well haan"
"Heer!!! yar stomach infection!! sari raat washroom mei hi guzari" in realy sad voice
"wat r u serious?"
"nahi mazak kar raha hoon"
"OOh sorry..i mean kal tou tum theek the"
"pata nahi kal Preet ne kia khila dia"...he said "i will not leave him!!"
"us ko baad mei dekhna..aj ki presentation ka kia hoga?"
"Dont worry i have asked maya she will do that..okay Heer have to go now"
"kahan.??Prrremmm tumhari tabiet kharab hai---"
"Heer em going washroom yar"
"oohh kay..bathroom ke paas hi rehna and medicine le lena"Heer said Laughing
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"Veera ..meri Prem se baat hui us ko stomach infection ho gaya hai" Heer said while preparing dinner..
"acha ohh God..yeh larka pata nahi kab apna khayal rakhe ga" veera looking worried now.
"ohh ussay kehna tha keh doctoe ke paas jaye"teji said
"Maa..i asked him he said he have medicine"
"HHmmmm" teji exlaimed and thougth to call him after dinner.
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Here prem was cursing that time when he went with Preet!!
His thougth intrupted by a phone call, He received a call it was veera
"Hey Bhai..Heer ne bataya tumhari tabiet karab thi..ab theek ho?
"Bas kuch theek hai ab"
"apna khayal rakhna..Bhai nihall calling call u later okay.. and haan bathroom ke paas hi rehna.."
"acha jee"
He just cancel the call..and received the call from teji..
After enquiring his condition..she also advice to be near washroom..Prem got frustated..
"yar in sab aur kuch nahi mil raha kehne ke lie..ehle Heer then Veera and now anty" he said to himself
Mean while his phone again ring..he saw its Preet
"Prem ti theek hai..maya ne bataya tu nahi aa raha??"
"Preet ke bache..kal kya khila dia mujhe"
"sorry yar mujhe kia pata tha...is mei meri kia galti hai"
"acha presentation ho gayi?"
"nahi bas ja raha hoon..acha sun bathroom ke pas--"
"nahi mei bathroom mei hi rahon ga..dont worry.." Prem said angrily and cut the Phone
"array bhalai ka zamana hi nahi raha..aik tou advice do aur phir dant suno" Preet said innocently!!
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Rest of days went like ordinary days!! ..but only one thing was changing..and increasing and that was Prem and Heer's

nervousness...their thrist of meeting eachother!!
and finally the day came!!

************************** Hope u liked it!!! waiting for ur comments!!!
Edited by Noor_PremHeer - 15 years ago
khajju thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
hey noor...woww first one to comment....it was verryyy funny....heheh...poor prem....lvd the advice part.....bathroom ke pas hi rehna....hehe....woww premeer meeting....plzzz update soon and big one plzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
Great😳 do UPDATE soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
awesomeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggg for next asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
Nice update noor...
but i m still waitng for heer to meet prem..
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
awww poor prem!!!! 😒 😒 😒
feeling pity for him!!!!
evryone gv him one advice only!!!!! 😆 😆 😆
nyws great to knw dat they wll meet n the nxt part....
so nw eagerly watng for the nxt part...
update it asap!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
It was funny update,bechara prem. Um i am egarly waiting for ur next update. thanx for pm, continue soon...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

wow dear it was very funny update,especialy bathrom ke pas rehna😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
#90

waiting for next update😃

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