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Posted: 13 years ago

ohh thanks forr the greatt updatee 👏

greatt relieff nothingg happened to😭 Premm ,all are safeee
lott of questinss to be answered by Prem 😔Heer nowww
especially Naina 😲Rv worried for their children ,want to know really happenedd , Heer😭 ccepting she failed in her job of tking care of the kids, trying to hide prem mistakee, then prem 😳excepting himself that was his faultt to lock the kids in the room, then sneha😛 defending prem sayingg that room caught fire due to her mistke.
Angry Rv,😡 Naina undtsd situation and cools down
Premm consloess🤗 Heer from naina words and drop her home
Prem in hiss housee decides to move in his life , frgt the past ,give veera❤️her happiness ,tryingg Other ganag of Heer celbrating🥳 their freedm togetherr ,talkingg about tryingg to solve Heers ❤️love prbllm ,abtt confs 😕of Prem Heer pregnanttt , discussing did nt notice 😡
Hopee Prem 😲did nott listen fullyy which he shld have not, may causee prblm again fr Heer
waitinggg forr nextt parttt pleaseee soon
Edited by harshitideewani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
update soon...
eagerly waiting for ur update...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nisha1984

nice part

Thanks very much for loving the part





Originally posted by: kiran_28

oh my God
kya prem ne sab kuch sun liya. - hmmm thats the mystery

i hope sab kuch thik ho - let's see what happens

olover nice update - thanks very much

thanx 4 PM - ur welcome





Originally posted by: AASUS

awaazilicious Hi I'm like *ringing my hands* 😆 too excited while reading the chapter 😆 - hehehe glad to see so excited to read it


I'm happy Prem was ok and Heer was ok too. - yeh it was a close call

You described everything perfectly. The kids did amaze me and I'm happy they confessed to their parents about what they did, which really helped RV to forgive Prem. - well yeh as the truth had to come out na and I'm glad u luved it

When you wrote the line "Prem was all ready to set things straight..." and at the same time switching to other scene where Heer is discussing with her friends I realise he's going to come there and hear what they all were talking about O.M.G.
I never would have expected this twist in the story 😲 - hmmm well thats what is according to the title

Some where Heer is at fault for leading Prem believe about the night they both were drunk. Which I never thought she'd agree to do but she did. Sadly she's going to pay the prize and don't know how long before Prem could come to terms with Heer even if he forgives others incl. his sister 🤔 - yes there are a lot of faults by them all so lets see how many each other forgives

I'm so afraid to read the next part 🤔 - hehehe don't worry alls well that ends well

Please continue when you find time and thanks a lot for new year gift 🤗- thanks a lot for loving it






Originally posted by: vrushika

that was a fab update... - thanks very much

o my goodness...did u just end it there???
again a cliff hanger like last time???? - hehe well thats what keeps u coming back

no plz...now u have to update soon
this update was superb...i loved it... - thanks very much

it was super super supre..i was caught by ut through out... - glad u were

loved it
thank u so very much...
a small reuest pl...update soon..
i cant wait any more...super duper excited - i'll try my best

love
vrushika





Originally posted by: divya4salmank

awsum update dear! luved it! - thanks very much

Heer and Prem both r ohk! thnk god! - yeh it was a close call

Aw...i cn understand RV n Naina reacted dat way! - yeh since their kids were involved

OMG Prem heard evrythin! cnt wait to noe wht happens nxt! - hmmm lets see

thnx for d pm =D - ur welcome





Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

shit shit shitt now prem will nail heer aliveee ohh goddd !!!!!!!!! - hmmm perhaps as he is angry but lets see how much he reacts to it


arwa how can u do this??? lolz hahahah heer will now go mad stammering and apologisinggg
- surely it wud be very tough for her





Originally posted by: sowmya18

loved the update...it was so good... - thanks very much for loving it

god knows what will happen to prem now 😕 - hmmm now lets see

thanks for the pm and continue soon... - ur welcome


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sneha0504

awesome!!!!!

Thanks very much for loving it





Originally posted by: repunzell

it was an amazinggg updaeee😃!!! - thanks very much


i'm totally speechless😉!! - aaaw

thank God prem was safe b loved the way heer went to him n hugged him n took care of himmm😍! - yeh it was a close call and well she luvs him to not see him hurt

can understand he angryness of RV n his wife coz they are parents bt sill they forgive prem n heer. that is so cute of themmm⭐️!!! - yeh their kids were in danger and then again they also knew that it wasn't done intentionally

prem in a tremoil of heart n brain, who to listen, poor guyyy😆!!! - hehehe

but WHA IN THE END!!!!????😲!!!

shit prem heard everything!!! - hmmm yeh it was shocking

please don't make him he whole prem back, he was about to confess heer bt please don't make that old stubborn angry premm plzzz!!!! - hmmm lets see

i hope everythin clearifies there n there only instead of him gettin angry n goin away!!! - well there are chances of both

plz don't do that!!!

superb updateee👍🏼!!! - thanks once again

thanks for the pm n update soonnn plzzz!!! - ur welcome





Originally posted by: priyahmt

wow...suprb yaar... - thanks very much

bt..the last part...uff u ended the chapter at such a crucial situvation... - hehe i luv cliff hangers

finally..when prem started to change.. listened to his heart...then this...???? - hmmm there is always a twist in the story

my god..how prem is gonna to react..i don't want prem to back to his rude character once again... - hmmm lets see what happens

just hope that he wil understand heer ...i don't want a separation plsss - surely

pls update soon..can't wait to see prem's reaction...
thnx for pm - ur welcome





Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi


OMG prem find out about their plan.. now what is gonna happen next???? totally rocking part!! - thanks very much and I guess the next part shall reveal it all


can't wait for the next chapter...

continue soon!!!

take care


Thanks very much for loving the part





Originally posted by: Oblivious

beautiful update ...i really loved it ... - thanks very much

premeer scenes were sooo cute... - i'm glad u luved them

waiting for the next part ...
please update soon ...





Originally posted by: harshitideewani


ohh thanks forr the greatt updatee 👏 - thanks very much


greatt relieff nothingg happened to😭 Premm ,all are safeee - yeh it was a close call

lott of questinss to be answered by Prem 😔Heer nowww
especially - yeh they r in trouble

Naina 😲Rv worried for their children ,want to know really happenedd , Heer😭 ccepting she failed in her job of tking care of the kids, trying to hide prem mistakee, then prem 😳excepting himself that was his faultt to lock the kids in the room, then sneha😛 defending prem sayingg that room caught fire due to her mistke. - yeh technically it was his fault and he cared too much for Heer to let her take the blame. and the kids are innocent so they wud speak the truth na

Angry Rv,😡 Naina undtsd situation and cools down - he was bound to be na as his kids were in danger

Premm consloess🤗 Heer from naina words and drop her home - yeh he couldn't see her sad

Prem in hiss housee decides to move in his life , frgt the past ,give veera❤️her happiness ,tryingg - yeh he wanted to forget everything

Other ganag of Heer celbrating🥳 their freedm togetherr ,talkingg about tryingg to solve Heers ❤️love prbllm ,abtt confs 😕of Prem Heer pregnanttt , - yes as everything was solved with only that left

discussing did nt notice 😡 - well thats what generally happens

Hopee Prem 😲did nott listen fullyy which he shld have not, may causee prblm again fr Heer - hmmm now lets see what happens

waitinggg forr nextt parttt pleaseee soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
Please update soon!!
Cant wait to read the next chapter!!
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~~Part 32~~

Everyone became nervous seeing Prem there because none of them were sure on exactly what he heard and if he did then what was going to be all of their fates.

Heer stole glances away from him as she felt too ashamed and guilty. If he heard everything then she was certainly dead and with that her image in front of him was also going to drop. Then again she was going to defend herself and hopefully he'll understand. She was ready to face any consequences.

Veera became nervous and held Nihaal's hand as if she was afraid that Prem was going to take her away from him again. Even if he heard everything she wasn't going to leave Nihaal at all.

Ashlesha, Maya and Kulraj exchanged glances with each other as they could see many things were going to take place so how were they going to handle it. Then Ashlesha knew that if she had fixed everything then she was going to solve it too.

Prem on the otherhand just stared at them accusingly as if he was a beast and was going to gobble them up in one go. Fury was clearly seen in his eyes which had turned red and his lips had curled up into an ugly snarl. Yes he was furious. More with himself rather than the others as for the first time in life he let his mind get carried away by emotions. The very emotions which had let him down.

It was unexpected and Heer hadn't anticipated that encounter at all. They had planned everything perfectly that perhaps they became overconfident and forgot that detail that if one day Prem was to find out the truth then what was going to happen? They had totally ignored it thinking that he wasn't going to. Yet there he stood in front of them all, ready to arrest them for their crimes. She certainly felt her heart racing as she saw him approach towards her. That look on his face looked dangerous and she wasn't sure what he was going to do.

He remained there without any other movement yet his eyes did all the damage. He mentally put his state of mind forward of how disappointed he was. It sure scared them all. "Maza aaya Miss Heer Maan?" he spoke through gritted teeth. "Did you have fun in playing such a game?"

Her eyes remained cascaded towards the floor because she felt guilty enough to look him in the eye. The others also didn't know what to say in their defence so remained quiet as he continued.

His accusing eyes locked everyone else one by one in the room and he was most displeased with Veera as she was his own and yet she also played such a game with him. "And you called me selfish." He commented as he glared at her. "I never expected this from you Veera. Yes I've always done things which only make me happy and satisfied yet at least it hasn't been over someone else's mockery." She also stole glances away from him and had tears in her eyes.

Then his next target was Ashlesha as she stood there nervously biting her nails away. Even though she was very much used to his scolding and rude comments, at that time she saw a complete dangerous side of him. "And you Miss. Ashlesha." He snarled. "You're a big plan master aren't you?" obviously she didn't answer but just felt anxious further. "Let me guess it was just another part of your entertainment package. Yet I don't blame you. Tumhaari to zaat hee aisi hain."

Ashlesha shot up at that comment as she felt a knife go right through her. That comment was totally unbearable and so not true and she felt instant tears brewing up in her eyes yet she pushed them behind her eyes to remain strong. Manmeet held her close to comfort her and also to hold her back from saying anything at that moment.

Finally he came back to Heer as he was really enraged by what she did. Some where he was hurt too as he had made up so many hopes in his heart by then about what he was going to do in the future and here he saw them all shattered away with a harsh shove of reality. "When I first met you, I'd made the impression that you're just an immature silly girl who is out there just fooling around and isn't that much smart." Heer wasn't pleased and tears flowed out of her eyes. "Yet I guess I was wrong because you turned out to be very smart. Itni asaani se mujhe itna bara dhoka diya tumne." He turned away from her as he didn't want to show her his hurtful tears. "I always thought of you as this silly innocent girl to whom I got attracted to." He turned towards her in a whiplash. "Yet you turned out to be a clever manipulator." He made an angry face. "However I can't blame you. Tumhaare to khoon me hain dhoka dena." Heer felt a lightening stroke hit her as he said that. "Your father decived and double crossed my father and then your so called lovely brother deceived our whole family." He was really furious remembering everything. "Ek number ke chaalsaaz log ho tum sab ke sab or sabse bara to wo Preet hain jo bara hee mahaan banta ghoomta hain per asal me ek number ka kamina hain or..."

Heer had lost her patience and she just straight on slapped Prem across the face. "Bus Mr. Prem Juneja! Bus!" her eyes were red with angry tears. "I've been listening to your taunts for so long which doesn't give you the right to go on saying whatever you want." Prem hadn't still recovered from the slap. "You've insulted me quite enough and I've also beared it yet if you'll insult my family and my father then I'll never tolerate it." She pointed her index finger towards him as she bursted out with fury. "How dare you question my upbringing and the prestige of my family? Aap hote koun hain yeh faisla lene ke liye? Just because you have a bigger status, a bigger name doesn't make you more respectable than us Mr. Prem Juneja." Prem turned towards her now, still with that snarl. "Ek parivaar ki izzat oske rutbe se nahi aati. Wo to parivaar me ekta or onke pyaar se aati hain." She rubbed him off. "But what will you understand about respect when you don't have it for anyone. You don't even have any respect for yourself or you wouldn't have had said so many disguting things right now." He just turned away from her because he couldn't tolerate it anymore. However she wasn't going to stop. "My father was a good man. Always loyal to everything he did." Tears flowed out as she continued. "He taught his children all the good principals in life." She wiped her tears and stood in front of him as if she challenged him. "How dare you question my father's loyalty? Who gave you the right?" he tried to look away yet she forced him to listen. "Is looking at the world with so much conceit a good principal?" he turned to the right yet she didn't stop and stood in front of him there. "Is putting everyone down so you appear surperior a good principal?" He turned to the left and Heer was forced to stand in front of him there also. "Is being so cold hearted and insulting everyone a good principal?" He just tried his best to avoid her but there wasn't anything that was going to stop her. "Answer me Mr. Prem Juneja! Do you have any answers to this?"

Prem decided to remain mute as the anger inside him hadn't calmed down due to her ranting. Of course what she said was right yet he was never going to accept his mistake.

Her heart felt pierced and it hurt her deep down. "You thought I was stupid, silly, innocent girl. Yes I was stupid and silly as well as innocent enough to believe a man like you has a heart somewhere buried inside the coldness." She wiped her tears yet it didn't help as more followed immediately. "I was stupid enough to ever fall in love with a man who doesn't deserve any sort of love at all. Are pyaar to dhoore wo to kisi izzat ke bhi kaabil nahi." Prem glared at her yet she wasn't afraid of anything she said. She knew truth always hurt and it was about time someone opened his eyes. "You think we all cheated you. Then yes we did but not to make fun of you or insult you. I did everything for my love and make you realize your love too and make you a better person. Yet I think I was wrong. I was wrong to believe such a deed could happen because you don't care about anyone but yourself." She went and stood beside Veera and Nihal. "What is Veera's fault in this? When she came and told you, you totally refused and set her up with a stranger only for the status?" she made a disappointed face. "You were only bothered about yourself and your farce position. Veera ki khushi jai bhaar me mujhe isse kya." She saw how he stood there with that same snarl as if he didn't want to listen. Yet she was going to finish once and for all as he had pushed too far. "And then you left her with no choice and what did she do? Only secure her life to remain happy with the person she loves. Is that a crime?" then she went and stood in front of him again. "If it is a crime in your eyes then you definitely don't deserve to have her as a sister. "Manmeet, Ash or ham sab yeh sab kuch kyu karahe the. Sirf apne liye nahi, balke ham sab ki khushiyo ke liye. Or sabse bari to aapki khushi ke liye Mr. Prem Juneja." She pointed her finger at him again. "Ash was doing everything she could to make sure you got your happiness and didn't have to suffer anymore yet you called her all sorts of names. If you blame her for doing that so then you definitely don't deserve anyone's concern or affection."

Even though he wasn't ready to accept anything her pain was slowly transfusing inside him and he also felt really sad. Then again his ego was bigger which didn't allow him to display any regret or remorse whatsoever.

There wasn't anything else left to say so she just finished her argument. "I really curse that day from which I developed these feelings for you and I curse myself for ever had stooped to such level just to gain a man's love who doesn't even deserve anyone's love. You insulted me, my friends and my family. There is nothing more left for either of us so it would be best if you just leave right now." Even with a lot of attempt she couldn't hold back her tears. "Just leave from our lives and just get lost." She couldn't handle it anymore so she ran from there up the stairs and locked herself in her room. She cried her heart out leaned against the door and eventually dropped onto the floor.

It was correct, there wasn't anything left to say anymore. Prem grabbed Veera's hand and dragged her out with him completely ignoring her pleads or Nihaal's requests. He was totally mad and in that state was capable of doing anything.

Prem's house

When they reached he dragged Veera out with him holding onto her wrist tight. He didn't even care of how much he had bruised her already. He was simply very enraged. His destination reached when he stood in front of Gayatri in her room. "Lijye maa sambhaal ye apni laadli ko." He threw Veera aggressively onto Gaytari's lap.

"Prem!" she was obviously outraged with his unruly beahviour. "What are you doing?" she took Veera in her embrace as she cried her heart out.

The fire within Prem had blown out of of proportion by then. "I'm doing what I should have done long time ago. It was because of so much freedom and your, spoiling which has brought to this day where she went behind her own brother to decieve him and conspire against him." Gayatri stared at him in confusion. "She totally digraced our family today and is nothing but a dark spot to it." Then he just left from there towards his room.

Gayatri still held onto her daughter as she cried to her mother nonstop. She comforted her and wanted to know at the same time as what happened. Gradually Veera told her everything that took place at Manmeet's house and by the end she again burst into her arms and cried her heart out. She didn't want to live anymore yet Gayatri scolded her not to say anything or do anything as stupid as that.

Inside his room, he busily stuffed all his clothes from the cupboard inside his bag. He was going back to Mumbai as he just wanted to leave the cursed place. Half way through he just threw a piece of clothing roughly across the bed and just sat down totally disturbed.

His mother watched over him and she also didn't look that much pleased yet could understand why he behaved such a way. However it didn't make it correct so she had to put him straight. "What have you done Prem." She accused him as she walked inside the room. "Do you have any idea how many lives you've just ruined?"

He remained cross. "I don't want to talk about it maa. All I know is that my life has been ruined since the beginning of my life." He didn't look up at her and just sat with his face rested onto the back of his hands.

"What are you saying Prem?" she found it unbelievable. "Uptill now, you've had everything in your life and have done everything according to your rules and you're still complaining?" she shook her head. "Itna khudgarz or pathar dil insaan shayad koi hoga tumhaare jesa."

That made Prem flip and he jumped off the bed with excitement. "Haan me hu khudgarz. Hoon me khudgarz. But I don't see anything wrong with that? After all I got it in inheritence didn't I?" Gayatri glared at him. "Yes maa you know very well that baoji was such a selfish man that he left his family for his own needs. Did he care about other people's happiness? No." Quiet tears developed in his eyes. "Did he fulfil his family's wishes? No." Gayatri also cried at his pain. "Did he care what will happen to his children before he ran away with that other woman? No. When he turned a cold stone towards the one who cared about him and only did what he wanted then what is wrong with me doing the same?" of course it was a hypothetical question. "Tell me maa. Finally when I wanted to change and go onto the path of love and affection, it also shattered down which proved how much fake it all is." His eyes were red with fury mixed with sadness. "So why it was wrong of me being stone hearted? Why? Why am I being accused of being selfish when my father never thought twice before running off with that wh**e?"

Gayatri slapped him across his face for saying such a disgusting thing. "How dare you talk about your father like that?" she was really angry. "Kuch hosh bhi hain tujhe ke kya bakwaas karaha hain?"

It was the seond slap he had received that day yet his anger just grew. "Truth always hurts maa." He said bitterly.

Yet it didn't please her at all. "Truth, you're talking about truth? You don't even know the truth so you don't even have any right to say such foul words against your father at all." Her eyes pierced through him as her anger grew. "Jis aurat ko tu itni ghatiya gaali de raha hain na jaanta hain wo koun hain? Teri maa hain wo." Prem was struck down with a thunder bolt. "Yes she is your mother, the one who gave birth to you."

Prem was in strict denial and held onto Gayatri with desperate need. "What are you saying maa? No it's not true as you're my mother."

"Yes I am your mother but not the one who gave birth to you." He slowly released her. "Believe it or not Prem but it's the truth. Shipra hee teree sagi maa hain Prem."

He shook his head. "How could this be true?" He moved back in shock. "No it can't be. It can't." He just didn't want to believe it.

Gayatri held him to calm him down a bit. Then she made him sit down and touched his cheek with affection on the same spot where she had slapped him. Both had tears in their eyes. "I know this is very hard to take but it's the truth beta. Your father hadn't betrayed his family for another woman. Yet your grandfather was strictly against him marrying your mother so he forced marriage with me upon him." Prem sat patiently listening to everything. "He didn't have much choice so he married me yet on the wedding night he told me everything between him and Shipra and of how he couldn't forget her. Especially when she was pregnant with his child. Of course I was shattered and felt like my whole life was ruined. What was I to do now? There wasn't any way to break out of the relationship so I accepted my fate and I gained a lot of respect for him. He was honest in everything he did and he never lied to me about anything. He also made sure I got all my rights as his wife and there were no compromises. But yes he didn't love me. It made me very sad but at least he wasn't going around behind my back and it was hard for me to accept another woman in his life but for his happiness I was ready for that sacrifice too." She cried and Prem also let down silent tears. "She was pregnant and your father didn't want the child to be illegimate. So he requested me to accept the child when it was born so he would have a name and the world would be able to look at him with respect." Prem stared at her as she continued. "Your mother made the biggest sacrifice of life giving you up to me. Do you know why? So you could have a better life full of love, respect, luxury and status. And you're here today bad mouthing that woman? Jiske wajese aaj tu is aish oh araam ki zindagi me hain. Jiskee wajese itna naam kamaya tune or izzat, osi ko tu aaj gaali deraha hain?" she was furious again. "You certainly don't deserve anybody's love and respect at all. Your father was a really good man and he loved his family a lot which didn't only include me, you and Veera. It included Shipra and Harman. Jis bhai se tune zindagi bhar nafrat ki yeh soch ke, ke wo sautela hain, asal main hai tera apna saga bhai." Prem felt really hurt at that thought. "Are sauteli to me hoon or Veera. Your mother became pregnant for the second time and your grandfather found out about it. He was furious and he wasn't going to accept the child as his grandson as it was illegimate in front of him. I was also pregnant with Veera. Yet your father was stuck between the two and he didn't know what to do. He couldn't leave me or Shipra. He didn't have a choice. However Shipra had to go away and your father remained in mourning after her. Then it was me who told him to go to her. She needed him and so did his just, born child but it was too late. When he got to her she had already died giving birth. Your father was devastated and he brought Harman home. Obviously your grandfather wasn't going to accept him. I tried a lot to convince him that I shall raise him like my own but he wasn't ready." She paused to wipe away her tears. "I couldn't see him like that so I told him to leave the house with Harman. It was the only way his future was going to be secured." She then looked at Prem. "Tere baoji apni marzi se hum sab ko chore ke nahi gaye the. Maine hee bheja onhe kyu ke tere or Veera ke paas me to thee lekin Harman ka kya kasoor tha in sab me? He needed a father and a well kept house. That's when your fatehr's best friend Balraj came in hand who helped him, raise another house just to secure Harman's future. Or tune apne baoji ke dost ko bhi ghalat samajh liya or onpe itna ilzaam lagaya ke sab kuch barbaad kardiya tune. If it wouldn't have been for Balraj Mann's generosity then this status and postion that you most arrogantly flaunt, wouldn't have existed. He gave up everything to make sure you and Veera had a secured future after your father left us. Tune apne baoji ke saare sapne tore diye or aaj tune apni maa ki wo saari qurbaaniya ko kuchal daala or aag lagadi onhe." She got up equally angry and upset. "You've really disappointed everyone Prem in your false ego and principals. You've gained the whole world yet have lost all those who could have loved you." Then she left the room crying away. She was really upset with how she had to finally reveal the truth.

The silence in the room totally disturbed Prem too much. Her words still rang in his ears about his reality and he just couldn't understand how to digest it. It was very difficult indeed as his whole life he had lived a lie and for that he had lost everything right then. He remembered everything Heer said to him and then Gayatri. He felt shattered completely and broken. "How could maa have said that I'm not her son?" his eyes were numb and his heart pierced. "How?" he dropped on the floor out of agony. He just couldn't believe that he wasn't Gayatri's son and was Shipra's son whom he had hated his whole life. He felt ashamed of his own actions and just totally hated himself for all the things he had done and everything he had ever said against his parents. He cried his heart out. "Why did this happen to me? Why?" There was no control over his emotions. He felt as if there was no meaning to his life anymore.

Manmeet's House

Heer had still not come out of her room. She had spent hours crying and just dwelling on her ill fate. Her love for Prem had meant a lot to her and now everything was scattered all over into tiny pieces. The pain was too hard to tolerate.

Gayatri had called several times to talk to Heer yet the others told her how Heer hadn't come out of the room and they all were extremely worried. They had even tried to get inside but she didn't answer so they were left in despair. Everything had turned upside down and now no one had a clue as what was going to happen next.

Inside the room, Heer was lost in her reverie of all the moments she had spent with Prem. Her first encounter with him and then her cute little fights. Then her intimate moments with him which she had held very scared against her heart. His essence was still mixed in with her's which had transferred after each kiss she had shared with him or from even just the closeness of a few minutes or seconds. It had always meant a lot to her and she just felt like a fool to have ever thought he would have felt the same way. He never held anything for her and she just hated herself too much for have had ever allowed him to come that close to her.

On the streets of Delhi

The night was dark when Prem left the house still in the very devastated state. He hadn't eaten anything whole day and had remained in his room. Then he finally got out when the light had left and in a way he felt it was a refuge for him and his sorrow. The dark sky reminded him of his dark life which had lost all its light. The truth had been very bitter and he had never expected that turn to ever come in his life. He was too overwhelmed to think what he would do with the new information. He wasn't what he was which hurt him more. The woman whom he had loved all his life turned out not be his mother and the one whom he hated all his life was in fact his real mother. Why hadn't Gayatri told him all that earlier? He just wondered as he wandered around on the lonely night streets with not very much population. Only numerous cars went from here and there but not crowded.

However he couldn't forget about Heer's deception. The truth about his past didn't at all justify what she had done with him. He had truly fallen in love with her yet she had made a mockery out of it and proved that perhaps he wasn't made for love. Yet why did it hurt so much?

Beijaan dil ko, beijaan dil ko

Beijaan dil ko tere ishq ne zinda kiya

Phir tere ishq ne hee, is dil ko tabah kiya

He had a bottle in his hand which he had already half drank. He wanted to bury all his sorrows away into intoxication yet he knew his pain was never going to go away.

Tadap tadap ke is dil se aah nikal ti rahee

Mujhko saza di pyaar ki, aisa kya gunaah kiya

To lut gaye, haan lut gaye

To lut gaye hum teri mohabbat main

Half way through he dropped on his knees in the middle of the road. Angry tears flowed out of his eyes thinking what he had done in his past life to have deserved such an ill fated present life.

Tadap tadap ke is dil se aah nikal ti rahee

Mujhko saza di pyaar ki, aisa kya gunaah kiya

To lut gaye, haan lut gaye

To lut gaye hum teri mohabbat main

Tadap tadap ke is dil se aah nikal ti rahee

Mujhko saza di pyaar ki, aisa kya gunaah kiya

To lut gaye, haan lut gaye

To lut gaye hum teri mohabbat main

The whole day had spent and Heer hadn't left her room. All the others had worried about her a lot yet she was lost in her misery. She just couldn't see her life without Prem anymore. All his memories still ran in her mind as she sat crounched up in the corner, with flowing tears.

Ajab hain ishq yaara, pal do pal ki khushiya

Gham ke khazane me lute hain phi, miltee hain tanhaiyan

Suddenly she felt someone's comfortable embrace behind her. The realization struck her that she rested against someone's chest which was very consoling. The essence was familiar and she totally loved being there as her sorrow slowly disappeared.

However as soon as she turned around she nearly dropped onto the floor because the image was only a fiction of her imagination. She just burst out into tears.

Kabhi aasoo, kabhi aahe

Kabhi shikve, kabhi naale tera chehra nazar aaye

Tera chehra nazar aaye, mujhe din ke ujalo me teri yaadein tarpaaye

Teri yaadein tarpaaye, raato ke andhero me tera chehra nazar aaye

She couldn't handle the loneliness of the room anymore so she rushed out of it. Everyone was alarmed to see her in that state yet before any of them could have stopped her, she ran out of the house. Of course others followed after to see where she went. She just ran and ran as if there was no end. Just to get rid of all her pain.

Machal machal ke is dil se aah nikal ti rahee

Mujhko saza di pyaar ki, aisa kya gunaah kiya

To lut gaye, haan lut gaye

To lut gaye hum teri mohabbat main

Prem continued walking into the dark night with no destination at all. He felt his life didn't have any pathway at all. He was lost. He was totally drunk and simply couldn't see anything else around him. The passing by cars didn't bother him and people giving him strange looks hardly mattered. All he could think about was his scornful life left ahead of him. If he would have had a wish then he would have wished he would have never fallen in love with her. At least he wouldn't have gone through all the pain.

Agar mile khuda to, poochunga khudaya

Jism mujhe deke mitti ka, shishe sa dil kyu banaya

Or ospe diya fitrat, ke wo karta mohabbat

Baha re wa teree kudrat

Baha re wa teree kudrat, ospe dediya kismet

Kabhi hain Milan kabhi furqat

Kabhi hain Milan kabhi furqat hain yahi kya wo mohabbat

Baha re wa teree kudrat

He wanted to scream out loud as if it was going to relieve him of the pain. Yet he knew very well that it was going to stay his whole life.

Sisak sisak ke is dil se aah nikalti rahi

Mujhko saza di pyaar ki, aisa kya gunaah kiya

To lut gaye, haan lut gaye

To lut gaye hum teri mohabbat main

She had ran quite much and finally stopped at a lonely corner and just burst into violent tears. She screamed her pain out.

Tadap tadap ke is dil se aah nikal ti rahee

Mujhko saza di pyaar ki, aisa kya gunaah kiya

To lut gaye, haan lut gaye

To lut gaye hum teri mohabbat main


Videomix

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tDJifHxXobM&list[/YOUTUBE]


No one had known that life could have taken such a turn. Till yesterday, he was totally sure how much he cared and loved for Heer but after what happened that morning he wasn't sure about anything. Perhaps he had been true about how love gave nothing but emptiness. He had trusted her and she had broken his trust. He carried on walking stumbling here and there due to the intoxicated state.

Manmeet's house

Kulraj had stayed behind as the others had gone after Heer. She was terribly tensed and called up Meher to inform her about everything. She knew not to stress her in that condition yet she knew that she was equally waiting to know.

Meher was surprised alright after hearing all the bitter words exchanged by both Prem and Heer. She knew how devastated Heer was going to be and she wished she could have been with her. Both the women consoled each other and assured that Heer was going to be safe wherever she had gone and would be found soon.

Apparently her conversation was heard by Preet and he looked very much displeased. The only part he understood was about Heer running away. So many things had gone about behind his back and he hadn't had any clue. He wanted solid answers.

When Meher cut the call she found him standing there. By the looks of it she could sense he heard everything and now it was time for judgement. Of course they had known that the day would come eventually when they had to reveal the truth to him yet with other things going on she hadn't paid attention to it.

He walked up towards her with the same disappointed look. "What is going on Meher?" before she could speak he warned her. "I want to hear the truth and nothing else."

Therefore she wasn't left with any choice so she narrated the whole plan from the beginning till end. How they had planned to fix Heer and Prem's relation and all the things they had done for it.

By the end Preet looked furious. "So much happened and you guys kept it from me. How could you Meher?" he gave her an accusing look. "I never expected this from you and how could you guys have ever thought that I'll ever allow it to happen?" Meher just looked downwards feeling guilty. He held her with a strong grip. "You knew very well how much I hate that Prem Juneja yet still you went against my wishes and ruined my sister's life." Then he left her. "I'm really disappointed in you Meher." He turned away.

Meher knew he was really hurt yet she was also hurt by his words. "I know what we did was wrong but it had no wrong intentions. We were only trying to restore Heer's happiness." Preet still didn't agree. "Believe it or not but Heer loves Prem and he does too. No matter how much you try you can't remove that love out of her. You just can't." she cried and left from there towards her room.

The whole atmosphere had turned into sadness and aggression. He hadn't wanted to burst out on her like that yet his sister was in trouble so he couldn't control himself.

Back on the streets of Delhi

The passing by cars continuously honked at Prem to move out of the way yet he had become deaf to everything. He didn't care about anything anymore and nothing mattered. He walked on as if there wasn't any life left in him and was just a dead soul passing by.

Many cars diverted to the side and moved on yet it wasn't just one way traffic. A car in full speed came from the front and it honked several times. Still Prem's attention remained elsewhere and he didn't move out of the way.

Coincidently Heer was around in the same area and she heard the honking. Her attention turned towards it and then she was startled to find Prem walking right towards it. She couldn't believe what was happening. "PREM!" she yelled out as she ran in the direction to save him.

The car didn't stop and neither did Prem. She ran as fast as she could. "PREM!" he couldn't hear her or didn't wish to hear her. She didn't care; she just needed to save him. She ran and ran until just at the nick of time she pushed Prem out of the way with a hard shove.

Unfortunately the car hadn't had time to change its direction and Heer got hit by it. Due to high speed of it she tumbled all the way over the car and rolled down onto the road.

Prem's spell had broken and he saw what happened. He saw Heer fly in the air after being hit by the car and he was just stunned. He couldn't believe that just happened. However when she pushed him he fell really badly onto the road and hit his head onto a stone. His vision soon became blur and then it was blank.

Both Prem and Heer had passed out onto the road after the terrible accident. Many people had gathered around to help them out of it yet no one knew who they were. Yet they still helped to call emergency in order to save them.

Edited by awaazilicious - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awaazilicious

This was my reaction

😭

😲

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o m g

This was so emotional and overwhelming. I just couldn't believe my eyes when I was reading it.

Y'know I'm super duper mad at Prem's mom - I just could not digest that fact she hid this from him. Seriously if ever something like that happen in real life, me too would wish the earth would just swallow and take away that pain. It's so unbelievably sad 😲 😭
I'm too shocked to check out your vm, may be I'll watch another time.

Heer & Prem sharing pain till the end was v.well done. You brought them to the same spot, which I could see coming as you keep switching scenes.
Even Preet's so mad at everyone 😭 o m g.

I feel like if I write something, it'll be quite insulting for all the twists & turns you brought in this ch.
So I'll just say I'll wait for next ch. 😒

You're an amazing story teller Arwa. Please don't ever stop writing. You'll always blow away everyone who reads your story 🤗
Thank you.


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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god arwa what did u do /../??? both in accident i guess now prem wil understand when heer will be struggling with her life...this was unecpected awesum babesss
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Posted: 13 years ago
cheating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
not fair!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u left it at a wrong time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
abhi how long do i have 2 wait?????
i seriously cant wait...
for both..this as well as the ss...
y do u always leave them at such points????:(((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((
okay about the update..it...was what i should say??????
hmmm...full packet...everything...all emotions...
it was fab...loved it...
it was 2222 good..
prem's reaction was natural..but wht heer did that was also not wrong
may be the way they used was to extremity but.. she loves him..

and omg...i was hell shcoked when gay3 told him..
i was like with my full mouth open...
and wht was that at the end?????
fullon shocking...
now u need 2 update it soon..
plz...i have no patience 2 wait,..
so plz...plz...plz...plz...plz...plz...update soon:)


and yeah awesome vm. no words for it...its 22222222 good..i have downloaded it...coz...i loved it...fab fab fba..even i wann make,... chalo u become my teacher in making vm's agree???.fab..thank u for everything
and do a favour by updating soon..

loads of love...
vrushika..
tc
Edited by vrushika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nahi nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta!
pls aisa mat karo
prem nd heer ko to alag kar hi diya hai,
ab heer ka accident bhi karvadiya
dis is really not fair.ok
or upar se meher ne preet ko sab kuch
bata diya. i hope ab wo koi problem na create
kare.
dis is not done yaar
pls cont soon
thanx 4 PM

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