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Posted: 13 years ago
Arwa I didn't like Prem's dad either. He's so eww 😒 No wonder his family became this chaotic, and because of it Heer's family also got into mess. I forgot to say in my prev. comment. Just wanted to add my 2 cents 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
arwa...i m waiting...pleety pleezzz..update shoon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz arwa thiz tyme a bit early then ur usual time plzzz...!!!

update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS


awaazilicious

This was my reaction

😭

😲

🤔



o m g

This was so emotional and overwhelming. I just couldn't believe my eyes when I was reading it. - aaaw I know it was really sad as the revelation had to come out to bring it to the conclusion

Y'know I'm super duper mad at Prem's mom - I just could not digest that fact she hid this from him. Seriously if ever something like that happen in real life, me too would wish the earth would just swallow and take away that pain. It's so unbelievably sad 😲 😭 - yes she certainly did take a long time to tell him the truth and now he is shattered

I'm too shocked to check out your vm, may be I'll watch another time. - hmmm sure no worries

Heer & Prem sharing pain till the end was v.well done. You brought them to the same spot, which I could see coming as you keep switching scenes. - thanks very much for liking this part

Even Preet's so mad at everyone 😭 o m g. - well yeh he was bound to be as everyone lied to him too

I feel like if I write something, it'll be quite insulting for all the twists & turns you brought in this ch.
So I'll just say I'll wait for next ch. 😒 - aaw thanks

You're an amazing story teller Arwa. Please don't ever stop writing. You'll always blow away everyone who reads your story 🤗 - I'm just glad to have readers like u who appreciate my work that much
Thank you.





Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

oh god arwa what did u do /../??? both in accident i guess now prem wil understand when heer will be struggling with her life...this was unecpected awesum babesss




Yeh I know it was devastating yet it had to be done na for him to realise many things.

Thanks for loving the part



Originally posted by: vrushika

cheating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
not fair!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u left it at a wrong time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
abhi how long do i have 2 wait?????
i seriously cant wait...
for both..this as well as the ss...
y do u always leave them at such points????:((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((( - aaaw I'm sorry but that's the beauty of it na for the interest to keep rolling.

okay about the update..it...was what i should say??????
hmmm...full packet...everything...all emotions...
it was fab...loved it...
it was 2222 good.. - thanks very much for loving it

prem's reaction was natural..but wht heer did that was also not wrong
may be the way they used was to extremity but.. she loves him.. - yeh surely she tried to use the wrong way to get him but her intentions were gud yet still it was wrong na

and omg...i was hell shcoked when gay3 told him..
i was like with my full mouth open... - hmmm yeh it was shocking

and wht was that at the end?????
fullon shocking... - it sure was

now u need 2 update it soon..
plz...i have no patience 2 wait,..
so plz...plz...plz...plz...plz...plz...update soon:) - surely I'll try my best to do so soon


and yeah awesome vm. no words for it...its 22222222 good..i have downloaded it...coz...i loved it...fab fab fba..even i wann make,... chalo u become my teacher in making vm's agree???.fab..thank u for everything - thanks very much for loving my work and it makes me happy when i become inspirational.

and do a favour by updating soon..

loads of love...
vrushika..
tc





Originally posted by: kiran_28

nahi nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta!
pls aisa mat karo
prem nd heer ko to alag kar hi diya hai,
ab heer ka accident bhi karvadiya
dis is really not fair.ok - yeh I know it looks unfair but trust me it was very much needed for the conclusion of the story

or upar se meher ne preet ko sab kuch
bata diya. i hope ab wo koi problem na create
kare. - hmmm yeh let's see how it goes

dis is not done yaar
pls cont soon
thanx 4 PM - ur welcome





Originally posted by: sowmya18

u cannot leave it in such a pt.. - I know it's sad

its was awesome...no words...it had everything... - Thanks very much for loving it

hope everything will be alright soon... - yeh let's see how it goes

do update soon. and thnks fpr the pm... - ur welcome





Originally posted by: divya4salmank

EMOTIONAL YAR! TRUELY AWSUM UPDATE! WRITTEN BEAUTIFULLY! - Thanks alot for loving it

HEER IS RIGHT IN HER PLACE BUT I FEEL TERRIBLE FOR PREM! - yes both are right in their places in a way

OMG PREM N HEER BOTH HAD AN ACCIDENT! I HOPE EVRYTHIN IS FINE WITH THEM! - hmmm yeh its terrible and will have to wait to see wat happens

AWWW PREET IS ANGRY WITH MEHER! HOPE ALL THE CPOOU SORRY COUPLES R AL RIGHT! - well lets c

THNX A TON FOR THE PM - ur welcome

N PLZ DO UPDATE SOON! SRY FOR MISTAKES I M ON MY CELL! - it's ok





Originally posted by: repunzell

my only reaction to thiz update is OMG!!!!


what hav u doneee!!!!????😲 - hehehehe I can understand

loved it, loved it, loved ittt👍🏼!!! - thanks very much

can understand how both prem n heer will be goin through😭 - yeh their life just shattered

can understand heer's anger, prem nay thora zada bool diya tha😆 - of course ghusse me hamesha insaan ziada hee bole jaata hain

but i guess its not totally prem's fault also, i mean he was shown life like that, his father left because of a women n everything!!! n now he is cumin to know she was his real life...how prem would be goin through - yes its a difficult time for him


prem is hurted fully n can't understand what to do, i mean its a bit gayatri's fault, she should hav told prem abt it early before thiz would hav occured!!! - yes certainly she shud have

loved teh way heer is expressing her love for prem , kaisay rahay gi prem keh benaaa😉 - haan yeh ek mushkil sawaal hain

what did u do in the end😲😡!!!!!!

prem n heer met wid an accident...na karo yaaarrr!!!!!!! - well it was needed

i know prem wouldn't be suffering much injuries as compared to heer but plz plz safe both n make their problems solve soon!!!! - hmmm lets see

i want everyone to understand prem's side n i guess it will be heer first to understand it😳!!! - surely as she loves him so much

prem already reliazed his love for heer bt nw will understand it deeply😍!!!!! - oh yes that he will

super duper awesuem updateee⭐️ - thanks once again


HEARTY REQUEST FROM EVERYBODY ESP MEEE THAT PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIZ FF SOONNN plzzz!!!!! can't wait!!!!! - hehehe surely wud try to do so

plz plzzz






Originally posted by: sweetnsourx3

love your ff and the update! so intense and heartbreaking at the same time 😭...can't wait to see what happens next to prem&heer! continue soon! 😃



aaaw thanks a lot for loving it that much. Surely shall update soon



Originally posted by: Oblivious

that was supreb update...bt sad one too...😭... - thanks very much for loving it and yeh I know it was sad yet it had to come to this for the conclusion

hope nothing happens to premeer n everythig gets fine soon ... - hmmm let's see

eagerly waiting for the next update ...
plzzz update soon ...
n thanks for the pm ... - ur welcome
awesome vm ...loved it ...👏 - thank you






Originally posted by: harshitideewani

Thnanks for such an emotional updatee - thanks for loving it so much

ohh So prem heard everything,😡 in anger he started insulting heer , also talks blaming her parents, also scolds veera 😭 Ashlesha for playing a game with him .and also just not ready any expanation - yes he was really hurt by the game they had played

Heer 😭ir really hurted by Prems harsh words and speaks back to him saysing him he did need to blame anyone here , its only❤️ for him ,to bring happiness we did alll this and but he thus not deserve this love - yeh she was also very angry with him after all who cud tolerate insults to that level

Prem comees 😭to know the truth of his life that the person who hated so much was his love and there was no fault of his father it was only the circumstances made things look terrible and without his mothers sacrifice he woul not be leaving this life - yeh it was a very big truth of his life

both prem 💔heer are shattered with truth are on the roads and Heer in savingg Prem , both Prem and heer 😭meet with accident,her on the roadd s uncousious are seriosly need emrgncy, intersting - yes they both r in a bad state so lets see what happens

pleaseee update nextt partt sooon as you can




Originally posted by: harshadeewani

NOOO!! Why do you ended your update at such a point...you better update asap...cant wait to read!! - well to keep all of u coming back hehehe

It was such an emotional part..you have described their pain so beautifully... - thanks very much for liking it

I hope nothing bad happens to Heer and Prem soon let go of his ego and realizes what he actually wants.. - hmmm surely something will happen

Before leaving just wanted to say the update was AWESOME!! - thank you once again

Update soon I am already getting impatient to read what happens next... - sure




Originally posted by: -prime-

Silent reader to ur ff but this part was too good and made me to comment. Waiting for next part.



Awww thanks a lot for reading it so far and finally it made u comment.



Originally posted by: ...Pwincess...

😭😭😭What a sad update - aaaw yeh i know

I hope all misunderstandings are cleared and Premeer confess their love for each other - hmmm let's see what happens next
I hope Preet doesnt create a hurdle between them now 😡 - well u can never tell





Originally posted by: AASUS

Arwa I didn't like Prem's dad either. He's so eww 😒 No wonder his family became this chaotic, and because of it Heer's family also got into mess. I forgot to say in my prev. comment. Just wanted to add my 2 cents 😆




heheheh gud to see u commenting once again. Yes his father was to blame as he spoilt the lives of many




Thanks very much for loving the part that much
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hiya I was a silent reader of this FF of yours...waiting for the next part eagerly...are you updating now..??

and send PMs pls...😊
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~~~Last Part~~~

"Prem! Prem!" she shook him yet he didn't wake up. "Prem get up," she smiled. "Its morning and you're still sleeping?"

He slowly opened his eyes and looked very confused. He saw her serene face staring back down at him and he lay in her lap. However everything around was in a fog so he didn't know where he was. "Heer?" He spoke softly as he felt tired as if he had been through tremendous exercise.

She put his finger over his mouth. "Don't say anything Prem." Her fingers ran in his hair gently as if she comforted him. "Everything is ok now and we're safe." She softly kissed him on the forehead.

Yet he remained confused because he didn't know where they were at all. Last he remembered they had an accident so how did they end up there? "Where are we Heer?"

"Some place where we'll be together forever Prem." Her sweet smile relaxed him yet he still felt uncomfortable with the mystery. "Ab hame yaha pe kisi ka darr nahi or naahi kisi ki parwa. It's only us and our love."

Something was not right and he could feel it. He sat up from her lap and looked around yet he felt himself to be on a plain which felt inbetween air and ground. Where were they? And where were the others? "This isn't right Heer, I mean something is wrong. How did we get here from the accident site?"

She came closer to him and put her hand over his cheek. "Just relax Prem. We are exactly where we should be." She tried to convince him. "The accident was just a medium to help us be together forever with no one there to come in between us. God has given us this chance in the afterlife."

It was then that reality struck on him and he slowly understood what had happened. Yet it was very hard to digest. "After life? So you mean we're dead?" he looked around to catch a glimpse of anyone else to clear his doubts yet the fog was too thick.

Heer handled it very well and remained so composed as if there was no shock for her at all with their state. "We are free Prem. God has freed us from everything. All the worries and sorrows. We only have love to think about and nothing else." She wanted to hold onto him yet he was disturbed.

"So we're dead and everything is over?" he looked lost as well as thoughtful. "There is no more pain or a heavy burden?" he looked at her with hopeful eyes.

In return her smiling face became brighter. "No there isn't." she put her hand out towards him. "We've left it all behind now Prem and now we're going to start all over again."

His hand also went out to grab her's as for the first time he actually loved the idea of it. Just then underneath them it became unbalanced. It was as if there was an earthquake. Prem looked around as to what happened and he held Heer close to keep her safe. He knew she was afraid. What was going on?

The fog around became dense and both of them were too afraid. She tried to hold onto him yet she felt her hand slipping out of his. She called him over and over again yet she couldn't hold on any further and soon she disappeared in the fog.

"Heer!" he spoke out with shock as he gained consciousness. He was totally shaken by whatever he saw and his heart raced on miles. He soon caught on and then saw where he was.

A comforting hand made him relax and he saw his mother beside him. That meant he was in the hospital so that was just a bad nightmare. Or was it a warning. He became stiff and looked towards Gayatri sharply. "Maa, Heer'Heer kaha hain?" he really had to know what happened to her after the accident. He saw her flip over the car himself.

Gayatri tried her best to avoid that question and continuously tried to calm him down. "You're supposed to relax Prem. You've hurt your head badly so it's not right for you to be so stressed."

Yet her attempts failed because he desperately wanted to know where Heer was. "Maa please tell me what happened to Heer?" he was restless and tried to get off the bed but Gayatri prevented him. "Maa I have to see Heer."

"You can't go Prem. You're not in the condition to do so. Marte marte bacha hain tu jaanta hain." She had tears in her eyes.

Of course he knew that as Heer saved him and took his fate upon her. He just couldn't let anything happen to her and if it did then he would never be able to forgive himself. He just got off with desperate need to leave the room and find Heer.

A helpless Gayatri tried a lot to stop him yet he wasn't in the mood to listen to anything. She followed him to make sure he was alright and if possible to return him back but by his determination she knew it was going to be difficult.

Due to his head injury his vision was hazy yet that didn't stop him from going down the hospital corridor. The nurses and ward boys noticed him and also tried to stop him yet he went total deaf ears. He was only interested in finding out where Heer was.

Finally he came across her family members and he knew that she was somewhere there in one of the rooms. He moved forward holding onto the wall as the dizzy spells had gathered him tremendously.

"What are you doing here?" a disappointed Preet burst upon Prem when he saw him approach. "Ab kya dekhne aaye ho Prem ke wo zinda hain ke margayi?" he stopped him from going forward.

Prem understood Preet was very upset yet he didn't want to waste anytime arguing with him because he wanted to just know how Heer was. "I'm not here to argue with you Preet so let me just go and see Heer." He tried to go forward yet Preet obstructed his way.

After Preet had found out the whole drama that had happened he hated Prem further and then he was devastated when he heard about Heer's accident from Kulraj. He had dropped everything and reached Delhi as fast as he could. Then when he found out that Prem was also involved in the accident it didn't take him much time to figure out who was responsible for it. "You better stay away from my sister do you get that?" he slightly pushed Prem back. "You've caused enough damage and now I won't allow you to ruin her life further." He saw that Prem wasn't listening. "I said leave her alone. If you don't then I'll make sure you do."

From the dangerous look that Preet gave to Prem, he understood that his rights on Heer had finished. He himself had diminished them after had insulted her. He just stood there watching over the members and their unity. They all were there to comfort each other but who was with him? No one. He was totally alone.

As he slouched down onto the floor he remembered all those harsh words he had said to Heer and felt almost too ashamed of himself. She had risked her life to save him and he had simply done nothing but hate her for betraying him.

Gayatri caught up with him and brought him up and then walked him back to his room. She could see his condition was bad too and it wasn't just the physical, he was mentally injured too. She shouldn't have told him the whole truth yet he had angered her so much that she was forced to let it all out. However she hadn't been aware of the consequences then. After the accident she knew he was not in the right state of mind and he needed nothing but love.

Once back inside his room, she lay him down on the bed and he complied without any resistence. "Dekha Prem teri itni saari ghalatiyo ka nateeja?" her hand rested on his head affectionately. "You only shared hatred with everyone yet all those around you only shared their love with you. Per tune oski kabhi qadar nahi ki or aaj sab ko kho diya hain tune." He didn't reply back. "You always blamed your father for his mistakes. Yes he was at fault yet that didn't give an excuse for you to behave in the exact manner and isolate yourself from your loved ones. Veera always had one wish and that was to gain her elder brother's love and affection. You took care of her like a business man but never as a brother. Yet she only thought of your happiness. Or tune oski khushiya hee cheen li jo ke Nihaal me basi hain?" He still remained mute and she knew everything registered in him. She didn't want to stress him further so her tone was more subtle yet what had to be said had to be said. "Aur Harman? You always had a family even though you never cared but Harman had to live without one and the biggest drawback was your hatred towards him. All he wanted was your love. Aaj agar Harman ka pyaar tere liye nahi hota na to aaj tu zinda hee nahi hota." Prem stared at her with shock as he couldn't understand what she meant. "You were quite critical due to your head injury and immediate blood supply was needed or else you would have heamorraged. It was Harman who gave his blood as only his matched with you." Prem still remained bemused. "Aakhir khaar khoon hee khoon ke liye kaam aaya na or tune ose hamesha apne se dhoor hee rakha phir bhi osne sage bhai hone ka farz nibhaaya." She wiped her tears. "I'm going now to see if he is alright. You've always had my affection to the most yet he has always been without a mother." Then she left the room.

He was left with a lot going on within him. He was emotionally broken and his heart ached as if someone had shattered it to pieces. He remembered how as a child his father had taught him how God always punished for your sins in unexpected ways. Finally he understood what it meant as he was being punished for all his bad deeds.

Later at night he still lay awake ruminating over all his mistakes. Then he looked outside the window and saw the lights were dimmed and it had become quiet. He slowly got off his bed and softly landed his feet onto the cold floor. Then he slipped out of the room on a slow pace as he didn't want to get caught by any fast movements.

His intention was to reach Heer's room. He wanted to see her and make sure she was alright as no one told him anything about her and her condition. If he had been critical then how was she? She had a fatal accident than him as she rolled over the car. He just had to see her and make sure she was alright. His heart was still beating which meant she hadn't left him. The connection had always been there yet only then had he started to feel it. Before entering he checked if anyone was around and then he quietly opened the door and entered.

The room was dimly lit and he saw her lying on the bed. He heard her soft breaths as she slept comfortably. Yet it tore him apart seeing her all bandaged like that. It was his fault that she was in so much pain and that pain was endured by him too. His quiet steps took him towards her bed as he didn't want to wake her up.

As he looked upon her tears flowed down his eyes. Her pretty face was lost behind the wounds and it was his entire fault. He had never expected anything of the sort would have happened. He had spent his life hating everyone yet at that time he hated himself the most. He didn't deserve anything just like she had stated to him.

A few of his tears fell onto her hand which made her twitch. She slightly opened her eyes and was amazed to find him there in front of her. When she had gained consciousness the first thing that had come in her mind was Prem. Was he alright? She had saved him so had it gone to waste. Yet no one had answered her and since then had become too restless to see him. And there he was finally in front of her and her heart relaxed to see him alright. He was safe.

His gaze fell on her and their eyes locked in an enchanting spell. There was so much they wanted to say to each other yet no words made any sense for that moment. Both knew how much they had died to see each other and to make sure they were alright and how they were relieved to find each other alright just as they had hoped. Yet he felt very guilty and soon moved his eyes away from her. "Why did you do this Heer?" Why did you risk your life for me?"

Her hand was near his onto the bed so she lightly tapped it which made him turn towards her. Her voice was nothing more than a whisper yet the silence in the room made it sound very loud. "Because I love you Prem." After that she closed her eyes and fell back into deep slumber due to her high medication.

Those words ran in his head as he made his way back to his room in the mode of an automated machine. His mind was boggeled with everything that Gayatri had told him and then there were Heer's words. His whole life had taken a major turn and he was left at crossroads from which he didn't know which path to take.

It was only when he was in his room that he broke down beside his bed falling onto his knees. He cried out in pain and just wanted to shut those voices as they tormented him. He had made several mistakes and he simply couldn't control it anymore. His pain had reached its peak and it shed out with his tears.

After five minutes he felt a comforting hand smoothering his head. He looked up and saw that his head was softly nested on his father's lap. Just seeing him made him cry so much. "Boaji I've been a very bad man. I've ruined everything and now everyone is angry with me." Prem cried as his head remained on Lalit's lap. "I never knew that one day my arrogance would lead to this and now I'm in so much pain seeing all those who were close to me in pain. Why did this happen Boaji and why did you leave me?"

Lalit caressed Prem's head with a lot of love. "No Prem, don't cry like this. I know you made a lot of mistakes yet it's only human to make mistakes. I made a lot of mistakes due to which a lot happened." He looked sad. "I didn't get another chance to rectify them but Prem you've got another chance." Prem didn't say anything but let out silent tears as his father continued. "You can make everything correct. You've got to make everything correct."

"But how Boaji? Maine sab kuch kho diya hain to ab kese waapis aayega?"

"You still haven't lost everything. You can amend your ways and mistakes and start all over again." He held Prem's head in his hands as he looked him into the eye. "I know my son is very strong and can fight this. Nahi beta aise rote nahi." He wiped his tears. "You've always been the strength of the family and if you break then who shall take care of everything? No, you've got to gear up and I know you'll do the right thing. I believe in you Prem."

His father's words had been very comforting and he had died for his guidance for such a long time. He hugged him and broke down missing him very much. "I really need you boaji. I really need you." He cried further.

"I'm always there with you Prem as I'm within you only."

Just then Prem woke up and saw his father had disappeared. He searched around for him yet he was nowhere to be seen. He then understood that his father's spirit had only come to comfort him and give him the strength which he required. He knew it was about time to set many things straight and he was going to do it just like his father had faith in him.

2 weeks later in Mumbai

The Juneja residence was all lit up and decorated ready for the all the festivities and ceremonies. After a long time happiness had returned back into the family and it was all due to Veera. People ran from here and then getting last arrangements done and making sure everything was in place as the guests arrived one by one filling the whole place within a matter of a few hours.

The place was showered with flowers and it simply looked the most beautifullest interior of any wedding. Prem had personally atteneded all the arrangements by himself which was very shocking for everyone especially his servants and caretakers. Never before had he done any work by himself and instead had ordered them around yet there he had been doing everything by himself and even helping them out. He surely had changed and it was for the better.

He had mended his ways with Harman finally and asked forgiveness for all the harsh treatment he had given hi mtill date. Of course Harman held no grudges and for the first time the two brothers hugged and felt so light hearted. Harman was the happiest that day to have finally got his elder brother and his love.

Then the second thing he amended from his mistakes was that he personally went to Nihaal and had asked for forgiveness for everything he did to him. Nihaal also had obviously held nothing against him and finally they became on very good terms like friends. Then he had requested Nihaal to marry his sister and give her all the happiness she deserved.

Therefore the wedding had been fixed and the day had come. Prem hadn't rested since he had set the proposal and had become busy in all the arrangements making sure no straw was undrawn in her perfect wedding.

Veera surely had been very happy to see that side of him and finally she got her elder brother which she had yearned for years. That very first hug that he gave her was like being in heaven for her. It was just unexplainable and she didn't want that moment to end ever.

There was also another reason for the ceremony. Prem knew very well that Heer was going to attend Nihaal's wedding and it was his big chance to meet her again. After they had been discharged from the hospital he couldn't have gathered enough courage to meet her again or even talk to her on the phone. He felt terribly guilty and wasn't sure if she would have forgiven him or not. Yet his hopes were high that she was going to come in the wedding and he would get to talk to her.

Several hours passed by and finally the wedding ceremonies were over. Veera was overwhelmed leaving her family behind especially her mother and Prem. Both of them had been very significant in her life and of course Harman had always been there. He was there as the elder brother she wanted, yet Prem was a different story. He was like a father figure to her so she cried a lot when she departed from him. He conforted her and convinced her not to cry further as she wasn't going anywhere. Juneja residence still remained her house and she could come there whenever she liked just like before.

That wasn't the only sorrow he had. All his hopes had gone down the drain because Heer didn't turn up. She was nowhere to be seen and he felt very low. How was he ever going to get through her when he just couldn't be brave enough to talk to her? There was so much to tell her and so many mistakes to amend yet destiny wasn't working with him at all.

He sadly returned back to his room after everyone had left and everything else was taken care of. He sat with only one light on as it helped him dwell on in despair. However his solitude didn't last long as his cell phone disturbed his thoughts abruptly. Initially he had no intentions of picking it up because he was too distressed but then did anyways seeing that the rings weren't ready to come to a halt. "Hello?" He missed to see who had called him on the ID.

"Hey Prem, I'm sorry I couldn't make it to the wedding." It was RV. "I really got hung up with the meeting that I couldn't leave and then Naina couldn't really come alone in this condition."

Prem just sighed and leaned back on the arm chair. "It's ok RV." He shut his eyes as tiredness took over him. "I understand."

Of course RV noticed something was wrong by his tone. "What happened Prem? You sound so low."

That was missed by Prem as he was lost in his thoughts yet RV asked again and he became alert. "Huh?" he listened to RV again and he understood what he asked. "No it's just that Veera is gone now and it's a new feeling having her go away like that."

RV knew that wasn't the full reason. "I know there's something else bothering you Prem so why do you even try lying to me?"

It was true. Over the months that RV had known Prem he was able to guess many things so there was hardly a time Prem was able to keep a wall in front of him for RV to not find out about his condition. "It's just'well it's just'" he didn't say it. He couldn't say it as he didn't know what to say.

Then again RV understood, "she didn't come did she?" when he heard just a soft hiss from the other side he knew that was the case. "How will she come Prem if you don't even talk to her? I mean after your accident you never called her."

Prem thought over that. "I know I should have RV yet I just can't build enough courage to do so. What if she doesn't want to talk to me?' that thought really pierced his heart. "Perhaps that's why she is avoiding me."

RV had known there was something between Prem and Heer since the first time he had seen them together in his Holi party. After that he had always thought how they would end up together yet there were so many complications in between them. Still he knew that their relation was meant to be. "Dekh Prem yeh baat sahi hain ke aksar bohat saari bus aati hain or jaati hain to kabhi ek miss ho bhi gayi to dusri miljaayegi. However there is always only one bus which will take you to your right destination and not anywhere else. If you miss that bus then you've missed your chance of reaching on time." It was an ideology yet he knew Prem was intelligent enough to understand it. "I'm sure I don't need to convince you anymore. I suggest you call her now Prem and tell her everything. Only then will things be solved."

The call had been beneficial and it gave Prem more motivation so after he cut RV's call he dialed Heer's number. As the call rang on the other side his heartbeats increased. Some how hesitation took over him and just before anyone answered his call he cut it quickly. It was easier said than done. The guilt was too heavy for him to make the move. He just felt that perhaps she was better off without him and he had to move on.

Just like that time passed with not one day where he wasn't lost in her thoughts. However work became his first priority once again especially when there was a lot of pending projects left. Of course he hadn't fired Ashlesha and had become very soft towards her. He didn't even allow her to quit the job because he knew he wasn't going to find a better and efficient personal assistant than her. So she remained and continued her work better than before with his new attitude towards her. It wasn't only her but towards his entire staff which was a huge shock for everyone. Then again it was a good shock and a good change. The whole atmosphere had changed.


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Edited by awaazilicious - 13 years ago
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One month later

Prem just returned back from a tired day's work when he saw many cars and trucks parked outside the mansion. He wondered what was going on and saw many people working on decorating outside and many things were being shifted. A big tent was also being hung up. Of course he recognised that they were preparations of a wedding but whose?

He walked up to the guard. "What is going on here?" he enquired.

The guard became stiff in his position as Prem approached. "Sir, Preet sir has returned and a preparation of a wedding is going on." Prem looked as if he had just seen a ghost. "I heard that both the Maan sisters are getting married together."

That certainly took the ground away from Prem's feet. He couldn't believe it was true. How could Heer marry someone else? He felt his heart shatter to pieces at that very moment and felt as if he couldn't breathe. The guard enquired if he was alright and Prem just left from there.

He reached his room and threw the bag with full force taking all his anger out on it. He just couldn't digest that Heer was going off with someone else. He certainly had taken too long and he had to face the consequences. Yet he couldn't allow her to go away like that without her knowing what he had to tell her. That was very important.

Then again it was her choice and perhaps she had chosen someone else over him. She was bound to do it after all the pain he gave her. It was very natural and he had to be happy for her. Yet he knew he couldn't do it because now when he knew exactly how deeply he felt about her he couldn't just let her go. No he couldn't. However what could he do now when she was getting married? All he had left was despair and nothing else so he just let fate take its pace and if Heer was happy in that decision then he was ready to accept it.

The next few days were spent with him ignoring the arrangements happening next door. He buried himself in work totally so there wasn't a single time to think about Heer's wedding and the pain he was going to go through after it. She hadn't arrived yet which was a good thing in a way because then he would be able to keep himself composed. If she would have arrived then he wouldn't have been able to hold back and would have revealed everything. It would have just ruined her happiness again as before.

Then the big day came and he heard all the hustle and bustle yet he decided to remain in the safe closure of his room. It was going to be too painful and he also knew if he was going to come in front of her then she would also feel the pain. He didn't want her to go through any pain anymore.

Yet a lot of time had passed and everytime he felt he could handle it his nerves got higher. Finally they were ready to burst and he knew he couldn't stay quiet any longer. He had to stop things that happened. It just wasn't right and he had to stop Heer from making the big mistake. She wasn't going to stay happy with a compromise.

He dropped everything and rushed out of his room and down the stairs as if there was no tomorrow. He rushed all the way out of the mansion and out of the gates to reach next door. The guests were all over the place and it was a crowd yet Prem dodged through them to get inside. It seemed almost difficult for him to enter without an invitation but then again he was Prem Juneja who hardly needed an invitation to go any place.

He was lucky to pass through in the swarm of guests and he reached the main hall. Apparently the ceremony had begun and the bride and groom were sat inside the sacred mandap. He was late yet the ceremony wasn't over so there was still hope. With a lot of courage he barged through and stood in front. "STOP! THIS WEDDING CAN'T TAKE PLACE!"

The whole hall halted and looked towards him in alarm. All of them were horrified to see him react like that and why did he do that? There was uproar as everyone got busy in discussion.

Finally Preet stepped out totally mad with him. "How dare you come here and put up this show? What is the meaning of this?" he didn't want to put up another show so he spoke quietly yet affirmatively.

Prem's gaze only remained on the bride who sat with her face covered. Her body language told him how much she was hesitant about the marriage and he just wasn't going to let anyone take Heer's happiness away. He was going to stop her from making the mistake. Preet's words registered and he turned towards him. "Dekh Preet aaj me tujhse koi behes karne nahi aaya hu lekin yeh shaadi me nahi hone dunga."

It boiled Preet's blood further. "What nonsense! I won't allow you coming in my house like this and putting disruption in our celebrations." He put his hand over Prem's chest as if warning him to leave and not go further.

"Preet just let me say what I want to and then you all can decide what you want to do." He pleaded yet saw how Preet was determined to throw him out as the auspicious time was going out of hand because of the interruption. However Prem was not one to give up so he pushed his way through and stood in front of the bride. "Tum yeh shaadi kyu karahi ho?" The bride rolled the edge of her duppatta on her fingers nervously. "You know you'll only be ruining your life with this decision so why did you agree? I know that it was important for you to get married yet why did you choose him?" He didn't really pay attention on, who the groom was. "If you should be marrying someone then it should be the one you love and you know and I know that person is me."

Again the crowd fell into discussion with horror with that revelation. They simply couldn't understand what drama was going on and it was very disturbing.

Preet just came and grabbed Prem. "That's it Prem, just leave." He tried to pull him back but Prem strongly remained in his position.

"Please don't do this and ruin both of our lives. You know you'll never stay happy. Your happiness lies with me and you know that and I know that too." He continued to plead to the bride whilst an anxious Preet tried to remove him from the spot.

Just then a voice from behind them spoke up. "Then why didn't you tell this till now?"

Both men froze especially Prem as he became confused. That was Heer's voice yet instead of coming from infront it came from the back. He turned around swiftly and found her standing there behind him. If she was there then who was the bride? He quickly turned back towards the bride curious to know who it was.

The bride opened her veil and revealed a cheerful Ashlesha. She looked so delighted with Prem's confession that she even forgot how he literally came and interrupted her wedding and almost ruined everything.

Heer quickly came and grabbed Prem's hand and before anymore drama took place in front of everybody she dragged him away from there to an empty room.

There were many discussions again yet Preet pleaded to the priest to continue with the rituals as time was getting out of hand. He was going to sort Prem out later when things had died down and people had left.

Back inside the room after Heer shut the door she looked fumed. "What is the meaning of this Mr. Prem Juneja? Aap samajhte kya hain ke jab chaahe aap kahi pe bhi pohoch sakte hain or apna haq jama sakte hain?" she folded her arms across her chest.

He understood what he did was unacceptable and yes he had been selfish enough to do it. "I'm sorry Heer but I couldn't just stand and let you make the biggest mistake of your life."

"My biggest mistake was to ever fall in love with you." She looked at him sharply. "You never gave me any time of rest or happiness. All you gave was pain and sorrow." She sighed. "Ab kya lene aaye hain yaha pe, ek or tamasha apni khushi ke liye?"

Her words scorned him yet he knew he deserved them very well. However he had to amend that only. "I know Heer that I've hurt you tremendously and for that I don't deserve any forgiveness. Yet I know one thing and that is from the day you've entered my life it has changed completely. You were a new spring of hope for me to see the right paths of life. You were the one who helped me fight my inner demons and to come over the path of love from the path of hate. You were there to guide me through my hard times and to see a brighter side of life. Aaj agar mujhme koi badlao aaya hain Heer to wo sirf tumhari wajese hain." He went closer to her and then bent down on his knees. "I'm guilty for all my crimes towards you and I'm ready for whatever punishment you have for me. Tumhaara haq hain Heer kyu ke maine kabhi bhi tumhe wo pyaar nahi diya jo tum mujhme dekhna chahti thi. Maine tumhaare saare sapne tore diye or bohat takleef pohochai tumhe. Lekin ab me sab samajh chukka hu or tumhaara dard bhi mehsoos karsakta hu. I know it's not enough by me just saying this but I'm truly very sorry for everything I did. I'm sorry for never being that affectionate, compassionate and romantic person you'd always wished for me to be. But it was you Heer who taught me the meanings of these words. You taught me how love isn't a medium which gives you pain and sorrow. Instead it gives you happiness and satisfaction of completing life."

Heer couldn't understand how to digest everything he said as she couldn't believe it was the same Prem Juneja in front of her. She wanted to listen to him further.

"I've always been running after happiness and thought it was only in gaining power over others and stealing their happiness. Yet after you came in my life you taught me that how real happiness lied in other people's happiness. Or meri khushi tumse hain Heer." He looked at her with that passionate look and it brought tears in her eyes. "I know you would probably want to discard me out of your life after what I did to you. Yet I don't believe that your heart has totally forgotten me. Me manta hu ke mujhse juri saari yaadein tumhe dard hee deti hogi. Hum nayi yaadein banadenge ek saath Heer." His eyes became moist as he continued. "Yaadein zindagi ki hoti hain or tumhaare bagair ab meri koi zindagi nahi. Hamara kal jesa bhi hoga hum ose saath banayenge. And we'll make it beautiful together. Yet if you're not there in my life then I've no today or tomorrow. Na mera koi aaj hain or nahi koi kal. So Heer will you make my life beautiful? Will you grant me the happiness of this whole world? Kya tum mera aaj banogi Heer? Will you marry me?"

It was too overwhelming for her and her face was flooded with tears. She had waited so long for him to say all that and finally when he did she was unsure on how to react. Was it true? Or was it just one of her unbelievable dreams? He actually sat there in from of her proposing. It really was true and all her insides jumped up and down with joy. Finally she got what she wanted. He really was there saying everything she wanted to hear from the very first day she had set her eyes on him. Her tears were unstoppable yet they were of joy and not sorrow. The happiness was too much for her to handle and she didn't know any other way to express it. She bent down in front of him and then kissed him softly on his lips totally taking him off guard.

It was the first time when she had approached him with the kiss and he didn't resist or become stiff and simply dwelled into the passion. He held her close as he deepened the kiss. He had missed her a lot and finally he understood the true meaning of the feeling of being in love with someone and the kiss held a lot of importance. Before it had always just been his stubbornness to get what he wanted yet now it was to gain her happiness and turn his life full of it too.

She didn't have to say anything as the kiss said everything. She felt a different sensation that time than before as the kiss was of love and not just done out of a forceful act. Before he had always showed his authority on her yet right then he showed nothing but compassion. He truly was sorry and truly understood the meaning of love.

As the kiss broke the whole room was flooded with cheers and hoots. Both of them separated quickly and were surprised to see all those others coming out as if they were already present in the room. Then again perhaps they were as they came out from all four corners. They had listened over everything and saw everything so did that mean it was all planned.

"You set me up again Heer?" he looked at her accusingly.

However before he could have gone on again like before and before Heer smacked him again, Veera made things perfectly clear. "Now before you burst on Heer here bhaiya, let me tell you that this time it wasn't her who planned any of this. Yet if we wouldn't have done then I'm sure you wouldn't have said all that to her right now."

Prem still looked bemused as he saw his sister and Nihaal celebrating along with Harman and Maya. If that wasn't enough for him to digest then along came the newly wed bride and groom - Ashlesha and Manmeet. Preet also followed them.

"Of course you wouldn't have done anything if we wouldn't have been behind you all along Prem Sir." She smiled. "The only way you were going to reveal everything to her was if you found out that she was going away from you. Thus you found out that she was getting married so you couldn't hold back and as expected you turned up to stop it." She seemed so excited as if she had won the first prize.

All Prem could understand was that he got the wrong information on purpose so then he would have been forced to say everything. In other words he had been trapped and he couldn't believe everyone were involved. "Preet I...I really am'"

Before Prem could have said anything else Preet stopped him. "Don't say anything Prem. I've heard and seen all that I wanted to. I always thought you were the worst choice for my sister yet today I feel I couldn't have found a better person who would keep her happy. Jo insaan ose itne dukh den eke baad ose itni khushiya de sakta hain osse accha koun hoga?" Both men hugged each other and genuinely felt very good towards each other. After all they were going to be family.

Then Prem turned towards Ashlesha after getting out of the hug. "I was so harsh on you yet you still looked out for my happiness?" He felt guilty again.

In return Ashlesha just smiled. "You see Prem Sir, I value my friend's happiness a lot and I knew how much Heer loves you and only you can keep her happy."

"Thank you." For the first time it was very genuine.

"Aaah," she folded her arms across her chest. "Don't thank me as I was only one of the pawns in this whole drama. Asal ring master to koi or hee hain." She winked at him and laughed.

It sure astonished Prem after the ongoing new information he got. He had already found out that all of them were involved from day one in patching him and Heer together but there Ashlesha just revealed that the real ring master was someone else. Now what did that mean? Who was this new person whom he had missed?

His questions were soon answered when a gentleman stepped inside the room with style. "Her circus ka ring master hota hain or is drama ka choreographer tumhaare saamne khara hain."

Everyone turned and all had smiles except for Prem who was full on just astounded. He couldn't believe it was him all along and yet there were no leads towards him at all. "I can't believe it was you RV?" he gaped.

RV just smirked and then Naina joined him and walked towards Prem. "I know you must be really blown off right now with the information but let me tell you one thing my dear friend. Raj and me have always been famous for our love story and that has always given us a lot of inspiration to help all those lovers out there to make their lovestory a success too."

RV walked up to Ashlesha and stood in between her and Manmeet. "Or jese tum apni behen se bohat pyaar karte ho, me bhi apni behen se bohat pyaar karta hu." Prem still looked confused as where was his sister and where did she come from. Obviously RV cleared the confusion. "Prem, meet my darling lovely cousin sister Ashlesha."

Definitely it was a shocker for him yet he was able to understand the whole plan from where it began. It meant that Ashlesha had planned the whole thing with the help of RV. "To tumhaara yaha aana or mera proposal accept karna koi business planning nahi balke yeh planning thi?"

After a short pause Naina said, "Well it was a business proposal initially which turned into personal only after Ashlesha called us and asked for our help. When she told us the story of you and Heer we were so intrigued as it so much reminded me of our lovestory. And then Raj can never refuse anything to Ashlesha so we took upon the challenge and came here. First we wanted to meet you and understand you properly before we set out the plan."

Then Ashlesha took over. "Or bhai tum or Heer ko os Holi party me saath dekh ke hee samajh gaye the ke kuch kuch zaroor hain. Then the whole plan was set between all of us where he instructed and we followed."

The way she said all of us he understood that everyone present there including Heer knew about who RVand Naina were and it was only him who was left in the dark. He sure felt stupid right then that he had thought something else when all that time everyone simply played around with him. Obviously for his benefits but why hadn't he seen it all before? He also understood why each time RV and Naina showered so much love in front of him to make him realize what he missed and for him to rectify his mistakes. Yet he had always ignored it.

"And my friend, hold your heart for a little longer as there is a bigger surprise for you than just us." RV informed Prem followed by a chortle. He sure loved giving surprises and there he enjoyed Prem's state the most. It was priceless.

There were too many revelations at once and Prem held onto his head. "Oh God I think I'm going to get a headache." He sat down and Heer took care of him. "Ab kounsa bomb phore ne ke liye baaki hain?"

"Well..." Naina took a dramatic pause "...Raj certainly was the ring master yet his strings were also pulled by higher authority." Prem waited with anticipation for Naina to raise the curtain off the real person behind it all. "Presenting to you..." she moved Veera and Maya apart "...Mrs. Gayatri Juneja."

As soon as Prem heard that and saw her he almost lost balance yet Heer held onto him. He was just awestruck to find out that his mother was behind all of it. Yet how and when?

Once again RV cleared his confusion. "Don't look so bewildered my friend. Nothing would have really happened without her permission."

The headache surely looked heavy as Prem held his head. He went over everything and just didn't know whether to be disappointed or just really glad to have so many people who cared about only him. He found out Gayatri's story of how after Veera told her what happened at the cruise with him and Heer, and then he came late being stuck on the island with her. She became curious and called Ashlesha and from then both of them made the plan to patch the two up. Calling RV and Naina was also done by her permission and everything else also was done according to her orders except the pregnancy fiasco which was only Ashlesha and Heer's ploy.

Alas everything in the end was sorted out and finally all were happy to see their hard work payed off. Prem had realized all his mistakes and had amended them. He had asked forgivness from nearly everybody and the biggest and most important thing was that he proposed to Heer and spoke out all his feelings which had been bottled up for so long.

2 weeks later

Festivities and celebrations had returned once again to the mansion in Mumbai. Yet this time it was a combined one and not only one sided. The partition was broken and just like Lalit and Balraj had always dreamt, the mansion became one with both Junejas and Maans living together.

The whole mansion was lit up with light decorations and veils of flowers. The whole place had been showered with beautiful colours of various combinations here and there making it a pretty sight for any onlooker.

Various coloured materials were draped around the hall along side the lights and not one corner was left looking plain. It was a grand occasion surely as it was the best wedding anyone was going to have attended.

The place was flooded with tremendous guests and all died to see the bride and groom. It was unbelievable for many who knew Prem that he was getting married. That was one of the reasons why they made sure they attended to see him for theirselves. It was a once in a lifetime opportunity for them.

Of course the family members were the happiest and had been busily running around to make sure everything was up to date. Whilst Meher, Kulraj, Ashlesha and Maya were busy with getting the bride ready, Preet took care of all the other arrangements especially the hospitality of all the guests.

The mandap was also decorated really well with flower veils making it look one of the best. Everyone had mingled in with each other as the wait continued for the auspicious time to begin for the ceremony. Just then there was uproar amongst a group of women in the hall. They squealed out loud when they set eyes on the groom entering the hall alongside his family. He looked handsome as ever in the red and cream sherwani. There were very rare cases when people had seen him in such traditional attire so they simply feasted their eyes on him the most.

RV and Naina also were present from his side. Even though Naina's due date was near she didn't want to miss the wedding for which they had planned so much. Therefore she also attended. It was only their plotting which had come to this day so they were going to be present to give their well wishes for the couple.

Kulraj and Meher performed the entrance ceremonies and then the groom walked in alongside all the people which came with him. Meher had already delievered a cute little boy last month and surely the happiness in their family hadn't died.

He was very impatient to see Heer because it had been mere torture for him to have stayed apart from her since the day the wedding date was set. Apparently everyone in the house weren't finished with their set of games and decided to keep them apart before the ceremony. He died day and night to see her now that she was so close yet he was kept away even with a lot of his attempts to sneak over to see her.

Now that the groom had arrived everyone died to see the bride. Of course she was going to be equally a delight to see to match up with the groom so they just couldn't wait.

It had been almost half an hour since Prem had arrived and still Heer hadn't come down. He wanted time to race on forward for the auspicious time to begin and finally his bride would come down and he could look at her with all his will. There were going to be no restrictions or anyone else coming in between them.

He didn't have to wait any longer because as his thoughts ended his eyes moved towards the stairs and just froze in place. There she was and he was blown off his feet.

Heer was clad in the red bridal attire and looked stunning. As she took each step her heart raced faster. Each step took her closer to Prem and she couldn't believe her dreams were finally coming true. It was that very ceremony in which she had first seen him in traditional attire and since then had dreamt of her wedding and him looking amazing. Seeing him right there as she had wished was simply overwhelming.

Everyone in the crowd were equally delighted seeing the made for each other couple and all gathered around as the wedding ceremony took place. Finally the two people who had begun with fights and bitterness had ended with the pureness of love and marriage.

Suhaag raat

Prem's room was decorated with veils of flowers and candles. The room was only lit by them and the moonlight coming from the windows. The wind softly blew the white curtains in the air and let in the soft breeze making the room cooler.

Heer set on the king sized bed which was showered with rose petals. It sure felt very different to be in his room and sitting on his bed. The place where she had only imagined was actually in her grasp and she was literally there. It was an unexplainable feeling. There was hesitation too as to how she was going to react in front of Prem and what was he going to do. It was their first night and really the first time they were going to come that close so she was unsure of many things.

If she thought she was the only one with those feelings, then she sure was going to be surprised to know that Prem was more nervous than her. He had never done anything of that sort before so he was totally unsure on how he was to act romantic and lure her towards him. What did women really like them doing and what did they hate? All those questions ran in his head as he entered his room.

Yet as he did he just forgot everything as she looked mesmerizing sitting there waiting just for him. He was lost in her serene beauty and automatically his feet took him towards her. He couldn't see anything else or feel anything else. He just wanted to capture that moment forever in the camera of his eyes from where he knew no one was going to be able to delete it.

She in turn also stared up at him and couldn't get her eyes off him. Of course her anxiousness increased with every second because not only was she unsure on what she had to do but on what he was going to do.

Both their eyes were locked onto each other forgetting all rest when all of sudden Prem stumbled over a foot stool and he fell right onto the bed with a terrible thud.

It shocked Heer yet there wasn't much time to stop him from falling. Soon she got out of the shock and helped him get up. "Oh no Prem, are you alright?"

He surely felt stupid. Out of all the things, he had to do something like that. She sure was going to be impressed? Like as if. He pulled himself up and just looked away from her to hide away his embarrassment. His first night and he goofed up. That was just great.

The next few minutes they just sat there in silence fidgeting here and there because both didn't know what move to make next. He was busy thinking about what she would like and wouldn't and she was busy worrying on what he was going to do. Never had they thought that there was going to be such a dilemma.

Alas the silence was broken yet they both decided to speak at once. They just laughed and then fought over who was going to go first by telling the other to do it first. They simply weren't getting anywhere so finally Prem decided he was going to go first after all.

"You're looking out of this world Heer. Just like my angel." His comment made her give a shy smile and she cascaded her eyes downwards. "You really have turned my life around Heer and have made it more valuable. Thanks for coming in my life." He softly kissed her forehead and then moved down to both her eyes. Then her two cheeks and finally he softly kissed on her lips. At first it was a quick encounter and then he looked deeply in her eyes and saw that measure of determination of how much she fully trusted him. So he devoured her lips full on with the hungry passion which had been satiated.

Soon he pushed her back resting her against the pillows as he took possession of her body one by one. He didn't have to think anymore as it all happened automatically. There was nothing to have been practiced as when he performed the act he felt he knew exactly what he was doing and how. He surely satisfied her in everyway and she couldn't have asked for a better lover.

No one had known that one day a love story which wasn't planned at all was going to take place and become the best love story in history.

THE END


Ok guys the journey of this ff ends here. I thank all my readers whom have appreciated my work from the beginning and helped me get so far. It sure is sad at the end yet its always left on a happy note.


Thanks to you all once again.

Edited by awaazilicious - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww :'( this ff has ended...i m really sad...
Please can u give us an epilogue of what happened after their marriage as in kids etc...
It would b gr8 if u do so as it is my fav ff and i cant get enough of it i am GREEDY READER :)...i have read it from the very beginning though i have been a bit kanjoos about commenting but it was always one of my fav ff...
Can u plz give us an epilogue it is my humble request but then it is your choice...
The update was Awesome..!!
The way everything disclosed in this part was very well written...
Prem's confession to Heer was very touchy and romantic...
Thank you for such a lovely ff...
Keep writing more on Premeer...
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWWW IT ENDED! WIL MISS THIS FF! AWSUM ENDIN DEAR! CONFESSION WAS JUST PERFECT! EVRYTHIN WELL! ROMANCE WAS TOO GUD! THNKU SO MUCH FOR A WONDERFUL FF! PLZ DO WRITE ONE MORE! M THNKU FOR ALL UR PMS
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Posted: 13 years ago
hello arwa...this was a beautiful disaster/... m so happyy and sadd as well coz u ended this
plan mein nahi thi luv story was beautiul .. for me the angry young prem and the oh not so innocent heer worked awesum
i never thought u l be ending this nowww andd god!! i donno what to tell u
i really thought reading the first part like what the hell why is arwa so damn eager to end this that she killed both and let them meet in heaven ??
then u took up the pace and i was just gone in the story
ofcourse it takes more than an accident or our bull head prem juneja to confess but the last stroke just did it ...
ahhaha everything was planned hahahah all puppetsss
aww btw i lyved the suhaag raat ... eee .. prem fallin down .. all messy ... definitelyyy not an usual scene
we will miss this .. but ofcourse u l bring the characters back for us through ur other beautiful works
i bid an adieu to this awesum ff...
luv
aishu

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