FF ~~Falling for you~~ Part 8 pg38 Updated 2/10/11 - Page 20

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey,
I love ur FF.
Really nice!!!
PLzz add me 2 ur pm list.
Update soon.
Preeti.
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy
really like ur ff, lol its quite nice, and funny :D
cant wait for the next part
by the way can u please add me to you pm list? thanks
Maheen xx
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Xxcoolchick1xX

Hey,

I love ur FF.
Really nice!!!
PLzz add me 2 ur pm list.
Update soon.
Preeti.

thankyou
i have done
thats very sweet
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

heyy

really like ur ff, lol its quite nice, and funny :D
cant wait for the next part
by the way can u please add me to you pm list? thanks
Maheen xx

sure
i have done
thanx alot
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na😈 you do it first
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pwincess1

na😈 you do it first

No Chance then..
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🥺poor me
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now stop being sad😳
ill do something😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
last tome i updated it was the 4th October 2010
oh god i didnt realise
actually i lost the update!!!
im trying to find it and then i'll update it for sure
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Posted: 14 years ago
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for liking my work 😳
and for those who commented
I know its been ages since ive updated anything, nearly 4 months!!
im so sorry actually im very lazy😳
anyway im trying to make an interesting update though i dont think its working
another thing is that after this part they'll back home and we'll have more of a premeer focus
as i know there hasnt been much of them or Meet
you will still be part of it but i will only have afew of you in each part so you get longer parts
and i will do it in turns to make it fair
i hope that makes sense, if not please ask me
okay now for the long awaited update...
Part 7

The sun rose letting it rays of sunshine spread across the woods and the clouds raced across the sky.

The moaning voice of college students was all that could be heard. They were all exhausted after Annwesha's birthday party and had gone to sleep very late.

Meher pulled at Heer who was still asleep.

"What are you doing? Can you not see I'm sleeping?" Yelled an annoyed Heer as she pulled her pillow onto her face

"Calm it! I only came to wake you up, Sir told me to and anyway have you seen the time? You're not at home you know, you're in the woods.

"Whatever "said Heer I'm so going to get you back for this, I was having such a great dream, you just have to disrupt it don't you? She said while getting up.

Noor and Namrata had made breakfast for everyone while Mrs. Smith made an announcement

"As you all know, it's the last day here for us, so me and Mr. Jones have thought of us all playing a cricket match, can you all get ready quickly and then we'll arrange teams"

Everyone cheered up straight away and started to get ready.

"Heer your toast is on the plate near the fire! Hifza said to Heer.

"Aaaaaw thanks" replied Heer. When she looked at the plate all that was left were a few crumbs.

"Who ate my food?! Yelled Heer. "I'm starving".

"Oh, sorry I think I must have eaten it" replied Prem meekly.

"It's not fair, you always eat my food! Yesterday you ate all my cake too.That's it; don't talk to me now, ok

"You offered it to me" replied Prem taken back by what she said.

"No I didn't you just ate it!"

"You shouldn't have given it to me then, should you?" he replied.

"Whatever" said Heer.

"Don't worry; I'll buy you a whole loaf of bread and a massive cake so you stuff your mouth, happy? He said a bit annoyed.

"Hey, you two stop fighting" Said Khatija.

"Heer, ill make you some more toast, ok. Now calm down"

After Heer had eaten they headed off to the place where they were going to play.

"So it team time" Said Mr. Jones

"Team 1, Prem...Emm... Heer..."but he was interrupted by a ...

"No way!!"replied both Prem and Heer at the same time.

"Fine then, you can choose your own teams"

"Who wants to be on MY team? Asked Prem.

"Me" said Meher.

"Me" said Sia, Noor, Hifza, Namrata, Harpreet, Naina, Neha and Ayesha.

"Ok, so who wants to be in MY team" asked Heer.

"Me" replied Preet.

"Me" replied Khatija, Sadhna, Mimi, Bhoomika, Nikhita, Sneha, Sonia and Waqas.

"Right, so it's done. Let's play."

"MY team is batting first" declared Heer.

"Who cares, we'll still win" smirked Prem.

Heer didn't bother to reply. Prem threw the ball at Heer who was the first to bat.

She hit it and scored a 4.

Everyone in the team had a go and then it was time for a break.

They all had a drink and it was time for Prem's team to bat.

Prem was the first to bat. Heer bowled to him. She threw it and the ball went out of sight.

"That was a sixer" declared Mr. Jones.

"No it wasn't. He cheated." wailed Heer.

"How?" asked Mr. Jones.

"Well, he....he...I don't know but he just did" said Heer.

"Calm down" said Mimi. "I know you're still angry since this morning".

"Leave her, she's just jealous" smirked Prem.

"Go away and why would I be jealous of you? I have better things to do unlike you" replied Heer.

Everyone enjoyed the game and had a bat each on Prem's team. The score was tight. Meher was batting. Only 1 more run was needed for Prem's team to win.

Prem was sat on a chair watching with a drink in his hand. Preet threw the ball and Meher hit it. It launched into the sky and Heer ran towards it. She slipped but was caught by someone. She closed her eyes and held on. Slowly by slowly she opened them, feeling safe. It was Prem. Like always it was Prem who had saved her.

They stared looking at each other, eyes interlocking and mouths wide open. They came out of their world when everyone came rushing towards them.

"You caught the ball, Prem!!" yelled his team members.

"What, no I didn't" replied Prem.

"Yeah, you did"replied Sia."So what's in your hand?"

Prem looked at his hand and saw the ball. He had caught it.

"Looks like we win" said Preet.

"No, you don't get out like that, i mean shes on my team"clarified Prem,

"So what Prem, rules are rules, We win" smirked Preet.

All of Heer's team started to rejoice.

"Anyway, i was being generous, its who i am"replied Prem.

"Haha, very funny" replied Heer.

"So you're not angry anymore?" asked Prem.

"No" replied a cheerful Heer."I'm not".

That was the end of the game.

Everyone was really hungry after that.They got out the remains of food that they had left and shared them out as they were about to return home in afew hours.

Heer felt a tap on her back so she turned around. It was Prem, she moved to the side so he could sit next to her. He handed her a chocolate muffin and said that it was for her as he ate her breakfast earlier on in the day. Heer was touched. She couldnt believe it.
"Prem, pinch me. Im dreaming. Prem Juneja is giving ME his food..Especially a CHOCOLATE muffin....WOW"
"Im being serious"said Prem, "or else i'll just take it back, all the more for me".
"HHhMmmm...." she said and started to laugh. "I knew you would say that" she laughed. "you share it wit me".
"Well, duh i wasnt going to give it ALL to you..do you want me to starve???"
Heer chuckled. "Here" and she halved it.
It was time to pack away and they sat in the coach ready to set off for home. Prem sat near Heer and they talked. Afew minutes later prem felt his shoulder heavy and realised that Heer was aleep. He smiled at her face which looked as innoccent as a baby. He just stared at her and then he too fell asleep.
i know its not very good and the cricket match is not very detailed but i dont really play cricket so...i dont really know about the rules etc.
Plus when i started this SS i wasnt planning on carrying on and had no story so im a bit stuck.
Please can you guys suggest any ways in which you would like this SS to go. If you have any ideas please write them in your comments. I will definately take them into account.
Thanks alot for reading and please comment
Edited by pwincess1 - 14 years ago

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