ff~Will You Forgive me~ chp 9 pg 48 3/11 - Page 3

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PART 2

~FLASHBACK~

Heer rings her house doorbell and Prem was standing right behind her trying to convince her. Teji opens the door and Heer rushes to her room while Prem enters and gives a puppy look to Teji.

Teji is Heer's mother and loves both Prem and Heer. She is very friendly to both of them and Prem calls her Teji ma.

Teji says, "Phir se laraye?"

Prem says, "Ji Teji ma. Pura din university main bhi baat nahin ki mujhse aur ap to jaanti hain ke waise he mera paarhai mein maan nahin lagta aur upar se Heer mujhse baat nahin kar rahi thi."

Teji said, "Hua kia hai?"

Prem embarrassingly looks down and says, "Woh larki ka chakkar hai."

Teji says with a fake anger, "Phir to theek he naraz hai."

Prem says surprisingly, "Ap bhi Teji ma? Plz Teji ma meri madad karen na."

Teji says entering the kitchen, "Nahin bilkul nahin. Galti teri hai to ab tu he usay manayega main help nahin karne waali."

Prem says, "Theek hai nahin karen mein khud he kuch karlungi."

Prem goes near the fridge takes something out and heads to Heer's room.

Heer comes out bathroom after a shower she was wearing her bathrobe drying her hair with a towel. She was about to open her bathrobe to change her clothes Prem enters her room without even knocking the door and says while putting his hand on his eyes, "Woah! Woah!"

Heer shouts embarrassingly, "Tum yahan kia kar rahe ho? Tumhein pata nahin hai ke kissi ke kamrey mein aane se pehle knock karna chahiye."

Prem removes his hands from his eyes and goes near Heer, "Liken main to tumhare kamrey main bachpan se aise he aata hun bena knock kiye."

Heer says frustratingly, " Woh bachpan ki baat thi ab hum bare hogaye hain Prem."

Prem says smirking, "Kitne bare hogaye hain?"

Heer says angrily, "Uff Prem tum kabhi nahin sudhroge aur main samjha kisko rahi hun THE PREM JUNEJA ko aur waise bhi main tumse baat nahin kar rahi thi na."

Prem says, "Plz maaf kardo na."

Heer says, "Kyun maaf karun huh? Jao na apni Chandni ke paas."

Prem says, " Oh come-on Heer! Woh to sirf ek time pass thi tum to meri best friend ho na."

Heer says, "Mujhe tumhara yahe attitude bura lagta hai tum larkiyon ko time pass kyun samjhte ho?"

Prem says, "Plzz Heer ab ziada bhao mat khao ok. Dekho ab mujhe maaf kardo mein sirf tumhare liye ma aur Preet ke saath Chandigarh nahin gaya aur ab tumhi mere saath aisa karogy to kaisa chalega."

Prem's family also use to stay in Ludhiana but coz of some business thing they both went to Chandigarh.

Heer says, "Maine kaha tha ke mere liye rukho. Khudi bol rahe thay ke main tumhare bina nahin parh sakta. Pata nahin wahan ke log kaise hunge."

Prem says, "Acha jaise tum nahin bolrahi thi. Prem mat jao tumhare bina main kaise rahungi. Tumhein to pata he hai na ke yahan per tumhare siwa mera koi nahin hai dost."

Heer says, "Woh to main aise he. Han to main nahin jaati thi ke tum jao."

Prem says, "Ab aya na unth pahaar ke neechay. Chalo ye sab churo main yahan kisi aur kam se aaya tha." Keeping the bowl of chocolate ice-cream infront of her which is both's fav ice-cream, he says, "Ab to maaf kardo. Sorry."

Heer examining the bowl of ice-cream infront of her, says, "Waise ye kal wali he ice-cream hai na jo humne aadhe khakar fridge main rakhdi thi. Ice-cream aadhi hai to maafi bhi aadhi milegy."

Prem says while kneeling down infront of her, "Plz Heer SORRY. Will you forgive me?"

Heer says after thinking, "Hmm OK. Maaf kia."

Prem gets up and says, "Thank you."

Heer says, "Ab kia tum room se jaoge mujhe kapre change karne hain."

Prem says, "Ok."

Takes the bowl from Heer's hands and says while leaving the room, "Jaldi kapre change karke aao phir saath milkar ice-cream kehte hain,"

Heer smiles at his childishness and says to herself, "Pagal hai."

~FLASHBACK ENDS~

Prem smiles at the thought that Heer had always forgiven his mistakes so maybe this time too he'll be forgiven.

But the second he becomes sad when his from the inside says, "Prem teri pehli galtion main aur is galti main bohot farq hai. Tune jo kia hai that is unforgivable."

It was announced then the flight has reached Chandigarh.

The aeroplane lands at the airport of Chandigarh.

Precap: Prem in Chandigarh, a Meet scene and more flashback.

I know this one is a bit boring part but it was important so as to show the kind of relationship Heer and Prem shared in the past. Don't forget to leave your valuable comments…

gr8 part...luved the flashbck...

wht mistake has prem done.....wa8iin to noe...

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Loved the flashback. What has Prem done to Heer that she won't forgive him. Plz update soon