ff~Will You Forgive me~ chp 9 pg 48 3/11 - Page 5

Originally posted by: angelina_angel

loved th flashback!!!
but wats the mistake??
aahh!!! its killing me??
n by the way its nit a boring flashback...its a cute one but was a very short one😔
update soon

Originally posted by: swa291

thanks for the pm&update
wondring what prem done that made heer hate him
will be waiting to know the reason
update soon

luv
❤️ Swa

Originally posted by: crystall

Hey...

Just read both the parts of ur ff !

Loved them !

Loved the flashbck !

Wht mistake has Prem done !

Waiting for next update !

Plzz add me to ur pm list !

Originally posted by: -BabyCupid-

Awesome update!
Loved it!
But again short!!!!
Update soon!
Thanks for the pm!

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314

nice concept......do continue soon.......pls pm me when u update next.......

Originally posted by: NIMMY

loved the flashback...........par what happened between them

Originally posted by: compiler

nice part
loved it
pls pm me when u update next

Originally posted by: Hajz95

it wasnot borring kuz of PHene i loved it

awesum

keep up the good work

Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzzzz asap

Hi people! Here is another part. A lot of you are asking about Prem's mistake but I can only say that you have to wait and be patient aur wo kehte hain na ke "SABR KA PHAAL METHA HOTA HAI." Anyway enoy reading this part.

PART 3

A girl comes out of the operation theatre wearing a green coat and came to the man who was sitting on the chair. Keeping a hand on his shoulder she says, "Congratulations! Apka beta hua hai."

The man stands from his place and says, "Thanx so much Dr.Meher."

Meher smiles and says, "Ye to mera kam hai."

A nurse comes to Meher and says, "Doctor apka phone aya hai."

Meher says, "Ok. Main aati hun."

Meher goes to her cabin and picks up the phone, "Hello."

On the other side of the phone a man says, "Hello Dr.Meher Sharma."

Meher smiles and says, "Boliye Mr.Preet Juneja."

Preet says, "Shukr hai naam to yaad hai."

Meher says, "Kaise apko bhool sakte hain."

Preet says, "Humari shaadi main sirf 1 week rehgaya hai aur tum ho ke everytime hospital main."

Meher says smiling, "Preet ye mera kam hai."

Preet says, "Waise tumhare thora sa farz meri family ki taraf bhi banta hai PB arahe hain aj aur humein airport jana hai unhein receive karne. Kal he to tumhein bataya tha, I hope tum bhool na gaye ho."

Meher says, "I know Preet mujhe yaad hai. Main abhi abhi ek delivery se free hui hun bas hospital se nikal he rahi hun."

Preet says, "Tum wohi intezaar karo main tumhein pick karta hun."

Meher says. "ok." And both hung the phone.

Note: Meher is a gynecologist.

Preet after picking Meher from the hospital heads to the airport waiting for his PB.

Prem came out of the airport when wind blows and hits his face Prem has an unknown feeling that his life will take a new turn.

Then he heard Preet's voice, "Hey PB."

Prem turns around and found Preet infront of him, he hugs Preet.

Preet says, "Finally apse main milraha hun after 1 year and 8 months PHEW."

Prem smiles and says, "Kahan hai meri bhabhi?"

Preet says, "Wait." And calls Meher.

She comes out of the car and goes where Preet and Prem are standing. Meher stands beside Preet and smiles at Prem. Prem at the first sight of Meher is satisfied by the choice of Preet.

Preet puts a hand on Meher's shoulder and says, "This is Dr.Meher I mean Meher. My would be wife and your bhabhi aur Meher ye hain mere PB, Mr. Prem Juneja."

Meher putting her hands together, "Namaste Prem Bhaiya."

Prem says, "Namaste."

Preet says, "Kia yahin khare rehne ka iraada hai. Ma apka ghar per intezaar kar rahi hungy."

Prem says, "To chalo."

All three sit in the car.

Preet while driving the car, "So PB aj kal kia life mein chal raha?"

Prem says, "Nothing special Preet. Life bas chalrahi hai zinda hun magar zindagi ki chah nahin."

Preet finds this a bit weird his PB never speaks this way.

Meher says, "Pata hai Prem Bhaiya Preet se apke bare main itna suna hai ke I was so excited to meet you." Excitement is clearly visible in her tone.

Preet says, " Haan PB. All the time apse milne ka he bolti thi."

Prem says, "Thank you so much Meher magar I don't deserve all this. Main itne pyaar ke qabil nahin hun."

Preet says, "Kia hua PB?"

Prem says, "Kuch nahin Preet. Ye sab churu tell me about your love story."

Prem tries to distract Preet's attention somewhere else. He doesn't want Preet to know about whwat he has done to Heer coz he knows that his brother thinks him as the most perfect human being and loves Heer a lot. He won't be able to bear all this.

Preet asks Meher, "Bata dun."

Meher says, "Batado ab Prem Bhaiya se kia chupana."

Preet starts narrating his story.

Preet's story in his P.O.V.

I was going to office when I saw a pregnant woman crying in pain. I took her to hospital. I went to the receptionist and said, "I need a doctor. I think this woman is having labour pain."

The receptionist said, "Wait sir. I call the doctor."

Then she called the doctor.

Then a lady clad in a baby pink salwar suit wearing a white lab coat came and asked me, "Is she your wife?"

I couldn't speak anything I was so mesmerized by her beauty her pink cheeks, her rosy lips. She puts her hand on my shoulder. Her touch gave me electric shocks allover my body and I came to my senses.

She asked, "Are you deaf?"

I said, "No. Woh actually I m not her husband mujhe ye rastey mein milein I think she is having labour pain."

The girl said, "Ok."

She turned to the nurse and said, "Take her to the labour room."

The nurse said, "Yes Dr. Meher."

She then went to the labour room and looked at her all the way until her figure disappeared.

I said, "Meher hmm nice name. waise Preet aur Meher saathn main acha lagta hai. Waah Preet tujhe kahin love at first sight to nahin hogaya." and smiled.

I was standing outside the labour room when I heard the sound of a crying baby. Meher came out of the room and said, " Ap abhi tak yahan?"

I said, "Ji wo jab tak inki family main se koi aa nahin jata main yahin rukta hun."

Meher was impressed by the person she had met for the first time because of his kind-heartedness. She said, " Ji humne unse unke husband ka number lelia hai wo jald he aajayege apko takleef ki ab koi zarurat nahin hai ap jasakte hain."

I was not in a mood to leave maybe because I wanted to spend sometime with meher, I was finding excuses to stay as I said, "No! No its ok I'll stay unke husband jaise ayege main chala jaonga."

Meher said, "Waise app jaise bohot kam log hote hain jo dusrun ke liye itna sochte hain. Ap bohot ache hain."

I blushed at Meher's comment, "Thank you."

Meher laughed maybe she had seen my blush I mentally kicked myself for blushing so madly in front of Meher.

Meher said, "Waise apka naam?"

I said, "Preet, Preet Juneja."

Meher said, "Ok and I am Meher Sharma."

I said, "Pata hai." At which Meher raised her eyebrows, I continued, "I mean us nurse ne apka naam lia tha tabhi mujhe pata chala."

She smiled and then our eyes met, I must say these were the most beautiful eyes I had ever seen in my whole life. Our scene was interrupted when we heard someone say, "Dr. Meher."

I curesd that person for disturbing us but then what the scene I witnessed infront of me brought a wide grin on my face Meher looked down shyly and I could say that her already pink cheeks were crimson red now maybe cause she was blushing I smiled at her.

She said nervously, "Ji main he Dr. Meher hun aur ap?"

The man said, "Wo apka phone aya tha ke meri wife ki delivery hui hai."

Meher said, "Ji. Congratulations apke twins hui hain."

The man said happily, "Thank you doctor.

Meher said, "hmm. Main apko room main lechalti hun."

I looked at her a bit sad as it was time to leave.

Meher looked at me and said, "It was a pleasure meeting you Preet."

I smiled, "Hope to see you soon Meher."

She smiled at went inside the room.

It was my first meeting with Meher and after that I find ways to meet her, we became good friends but I felt something else for her more than friendship, it was love. I love her and maybe she also knew that but it was really important for me to know does she feel the some for me but I was frightened maybe she doesn't love me and I loose the only relation we both are sharing which is friendship but I gained a lot of courage and made my mind to propose her and left everything on God.

And the day came when I called Meher to met me at her favourite restaurant. I was waiting for her clad in a black suit playing with the forks and spoon nervously. So many questions were going through my mind what if she says no? What if she ends our friendship? But still I keep all those questions aside and put a determined face that no matter what happens I'll not give up. It was a DO AND DIE situation for me.

The wind blew and I could sense her presence. Yes she is here. I raised my head and my eyes fell on the entrance. There she is clad in a white shalwar suit looking like an angel. I waved my hand to her and she came to where I was sitting. I was lost in her beauty she is so beautiful.

I told her to sit on the chair as a gentleman and tried to start a conversation, "I thought tum nahin aogy."

Meher said, "Wo sorry actually last moment per ek new delivery aagaye thi that's why I'm late."

I said, "It's ok. Waise I must admit you are looking beautiful."

She looked at me a slight blush appeared on her cheeks, our eyes met and I could read that she has something for me and this encouraged me even more. I took out the ring from my pocket, stood from my place and knelt down infront of her, "Meher aj main tumse apni dil ki baat kehna chahta hun. Tumse milne pehle main bilkul ek different Preet tha mere liye larkiyaan was just a time pass, mujhe pyaar vyaar pe bilkul bhi lagao nahin tha magar tumhein dekhne ke baad he mujhe tumse pyaar hogaya. It was love at first sight Meher. Pata nahin tum mere bare main wo feel karti ho bhi ya nahin liken main in sab ko ek taraf rakh kar tumse ye kehna chahta hun ke. Dr. Meher Sharma I LOVE YOU. WILL YOU MARRY ME?"

Meher looked at me shocked, mixed expressions were playing on her face, I closed my eyes in defeat but the next what I heard brought a wide smile on my face, Meher said, "Yes Mr. Preet Juneja, I LOVE YOU TOO AND I'M READY TO MARRY YOU."

I stood up and hugged her. I said, "I was so scared agar tumne mana kardia to."

Meher said, "Main to kabse intezaar kar rahi thi ke when will u ask me?"

And Preet stops his story, "And here we are PB, I took Meher to Ma and she liked her, we got engaged and now in a week we are getting married but ap kyun nahin aye meri engagement main?"

Prem says, "Wo office ka kam tha."

Preet says, "To apke liye office is more important than your own brother."

Prem says, "Aisa nahin hai Preet."

Preet smils and says, "I was only kidding PB."

Preet stops the car in front of a luxurious mansion. All three come out of the car and head towards the mansion. Preet rings the doorbell. A servant opens the door and says, "Prem baba, ap aagaye?"

Prem smiles and says, "Ji Ramu kaka."

Preet says, "Ma kahan hai? Acha Ramu kaka ap PB ka saman unke kamre main bhejwadijiye."

And all three go inside. Preet shouts, "Ma PB aagaye hain."

Gayatri comes out of her room and hugs Prem, "Prem to aagaya. Tujhe pata hai meri ankhen tujhe dekhne ke liye kitna tarap rahi thi." Her eyes get watery.

Prem says wiping her tears, "Ma ab main aagaya hun na."

Preet says, "Agar ma beta ka roona dhoona band hogaya ho to khana milega. I'm very hungry."

Gayatri says, "Ok main khane ka intezaam karti hun."

Meher says, "Main ma ki madad karti hun."

Prem heads towards the stairs to go to his room. When Preet stops him.

Preet says, "Kia hua PB? Ap itne upset kyun lagrahe hain? Is everything fine?"

Prem says, "Kuch nahin Preet. Everything is fine. Aur Preet you are very lucky ke tumhare paas tumhara pyaar hai. Meher hai tere paas. Usay humesha khush rekhna kabhi aisa kuch mat karma jis say wo hurt ho aur baad main tu apne appko maaf na karsake."

Preet finds his PB's behaviour weird. His PB is not that way he was always a fun-loving type of a person who always remains happy and keeps others happy as well. But the person he is seeing today is totally a different person who is going through a lot of pain. Prem is smiling but this doesn't reach his eyes who are speaking of pain. Preet knows that is PB is going through something that he doesn't know.

Prem enters his room. His luggage is already there. Prem takes out a kurta pajama from his bag and goes to have a shower. Prem comes out of bathroom and then thinks of unpacking his bag. While doing it, he finds a pic of his and Heer. It was a picture from a diwali function in which both were smiling and his mind rushes to the memory where Heer gives him the pic.

~FLASHBACK~

Heer gives Prem the pic and says, "Prem ye pic tumhare liye. Remember diwali party main mere ghar per."

Prem says looking at the pic, "Wow Heer I am looking so handsum in the pic."

Heer says, "And what about me?"

Prem says, "Tum bhi achi lag rahi ho."

Heer says pouting at him, "Sirf achi."

Prem says, "Khush hojao atleast maine itna to kaha."

Heer says, "Ji thank you very much ke apne meri tareef ki. Khush?" and rolls her eyes.

Prem says, "Tumhein pata hai ke tum ek ajooba ho. Tumse shaadi karne se pehle koi bhi thousand times sochega."

Heer says, "Mujhse shaadi karne se pehle koi bhi shaadi karne se pehle sochega liken tumse shaadi kon karega." And laughs.

Prem says, "Acha to ye baat hai main abhi sirf ek larki ko bulaon ka aur she'll be here. Demo dekhna chahogy?"

Heer rolls her eyes and a girl passes from there and Prem says, "Arey listen."

The girl turns and says, "Are you calling me?"

Prem nods and goes to her winking at Heer and leaving a completely angry Heer.

Prem says, "Hey sweetie. May I know your name?"

The girl says, "Prem I can't believe ke tum mujhse pooch rahe ho?"

Heer glares at both of them and leaves the place Prem tries to follow her but the girl stops him giving speeches on how she is feeling right now.

Heer goes to an empty classroom and takes out her books to study when she heard the sound of someone closing the door. Heer raised her head from the book when she finds Rishabh there smirking at her. Heer's stomach churns with an unknown fear.

Rishabh comes closer to Heer, she stands up from her place she can see Rishabh smirking all the way until Heer is trapped between Rishabh and the wall.

PRECAP:

Gayatri says, "Bas beta bhool jao jo bji tumhare saath hua hai. Move ahead in your life."

Prem says, "Kaise bhool jaon Ma maine jo us raat Heer ke saath''"

PHEW it was one long part. The next part will be the continuation of the flashback. Sorry for any mistake and I hope you all liked it and don't forget to leave your valuable comments and press the like button.