New SS: Nafrat Chapter 3 Oct.24 pg.25

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Harpreet Randhawa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: kptl
it really sounds interesting
will be waiting to know da reason y dey hate one another dis much..

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Harpreet Randhawa

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#42

Originally posted by: Naina2127
heyy this sounds really interesting...can't wait until your next update!

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Originally posted by: NIMMY
awesome but whts woth the nafrat and all

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Harpreet Randhawa

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Originally posted by: sofsunmannee
hey nyc concept
really very amazing
do conti it soon

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Originally posted by: sonia7
do continue

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Originally posted by: luv_kdmhmd
nice summary do cont it
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Harpreet Randhawa

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Originally posted by: bd670816
hey nice concept...
do continue..

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Harpreet Randhawa

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Hay guys i know that i haven't updated my other ff's but i want to do atleast one capter f this SS so please bare with me i will try to update a ff today too!! So here's the first chapter!

Chapter 1 "Heer babbhi let's go to ur new room" said Veera and Heer smiled a fake smile while Meher, Kulraj, Maya,and Veera took her to her's and Prem's new room. Meher was Preet's (Prem's youngest brother) wife and they had a love marriage Kulraj was Prem's older sister and was married to Kiran and Maya was married to Harmon Prem's middle borther. Veera was there youngest sibbling!

"Heer tum bed par beto aur hum PRemmmm co lekar atea hai" said Kulraj as Heer smiled while they left. After they left Heer took off her dupatta "Finally in the Juneja house" said Heer going to the dresser and sat down on the chair and started to take off her jewelry when she noticed pictures of Prem and Veeru so she got up and went to the night table where the picture was and picked it up "sorry Veeru no room for murders like u" said Heer and took the picture out and ripped it into half.

Just than Prem walked in and fast walked over to Heer and snachted the picture from her and yelled "HOW DARE U" yelled Prem "what ever do u mean?" asked Heer in a inoccent voice "dont u dare" said pointing his finger at Heer "don't u dare touch my brothers picture with thoes dirty hands of ur's" said Prem "my dirty hands??" asked Heer "well my hands might be dirty my boold isn't like urs" said Heer.

"im not a murders sister or brother" said Prem "u knOW WhAT UR BROTHER did" yelled Heer "MY BROTHER IT wAs UR BROTHER" yelled Prem "MY BROTHER Was JUST DOING HIS JOB TOWARDS HIS COUNTRY WHILE UR BROTHER WAS MAKING OUR CONTURY LOOK BAD BY DOING DRUGS" said Heer and Prem slapped Heer.

"HOW DARE U SlAP ME???" asked Heer "HOW DARE U RIP MY PICTURE??" asked Prem "i did u a favour that murder was making u look badder than u already are" said Prem "and by the way MR.Juneja if u slap me again i promise that i will pay for the big time" said Heer and took her clothes and went into the washroom.

"im sorry Veeru i..i... couldn't save u" said Prem looking at the picture with tears and remembering the times he had with his brother. By now Heer was out and was wearing a knee lenght night gown. "U know u shouldn't waste tears over a murder" said Heer with attitude "JUST SHUT UR FU****D up MOUTH" yelled Prem "why huh???why should i when ur brother didn't even think twice about killing my brother than why should i think tiwce about what i should say???" asked Heer "UR BORTHER KILLED MY BROTHER" yelled Prem "ofcourse u would like that wouldn't you" said Heer.

"YES I WOULD LIKE THAT SO I COULD KILL UR BROTHER AND MAKE HIM SUFFER" said Prem "but since he is not here i would love to make u suffer and than end up killing u" said Prem "ohh really well listen to this" said Heer "i only came into this house to take revenge and i know that's why u married me so Today Mrs. Heer Juneja makes a promise to and u and gives u a challenge. I promise that they day that my brother died the place where my brother died at that place I WILL KILL U" said Heer and her words echoed around the room.

"The way my brother suffered U WILL SUFFER TOOO" yelled Heer "and i challenege u, i challenge u to see if you can stop ME" yelled Heer pointing at Prem with tears in her eyes. "FINE Than TODAY I Will Make a PROmise TOO I Promise TO KILL U AT THE SAME PLACE AT THE SAME TIME And THE SAME WAY UR BORTHER KILLED MY BROTHER" yelled Prem with tears "1 year from now i will kill you at the time my brother died" said Prem.

"Well we will see on who dies and who lives!! We will see who will get punished and who will go free!" said Heer.

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"Prem Heer these are ur tickets" said bauji "but for what?" asked Heer "ur Honymoon" said Lalit "Great idea bauji this way i will get a chance to make Prem suffer" thought Heer "Thank you Bauji anjana mai he sayee leiken app mere aur Veeru ke madath kar rahaa hai" thought Prem "Watch out Mrs. Maan just wait and watch what i do" whispered Prem into Heer's ear.

"PREM GET IT OFF" yelled Heer "NO OPEN UR MOUTH OR ELSE THIS COCKROACH GOES DOWN UR NIGHT SUITE" SAID PREM "NO" yelled Heer turning her face aside "as u wish" said Prem

I know short but how was it????please do let me know!!

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Harpreet Randhawa

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Maheen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

hey

interesting start,
wow now that is some kind of hatred between them two, and the story is totally different to the normal ones i've read lol
i wonder if their "nafrat" will ever change into love...hmm

well cant wait for more
do continue soon

Maheen xx

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