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Posted: 15 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Hajz95

me afraid of u aishu alot

aur ab darna bhi chiyeee
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya




oye hoye...

thnku so much yar...aishu aab bol...

dost dost na raha divya listen tk my side n i l tell u the story ab hajra ko do chaar battein suna de n m ur story teller
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

dost dost na raha divya listen tk my side n i l tell u the story ab hajra ko do chaar battein suna de n m ur story teller



chal sorry aishu......
n now takin no one's side.....sab dost hai...not fightin haan...chal na aishu bhi to batade...plz...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya



chal sorry aishu......
n now takin no one's side.....sab dost hai...not fightin haan...chal na aishu bhi to batade...plz...

sorry for whatt babyyy
and now u ronline hun diplomatic answer kya pilaya tune hajra sse ye to diwnai ho gayi teri
noo no non ono main nahi batane wali itnnoo batein boli mujhe main ni bataungi


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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
i guess its almost 5 weeks that ur updating false commitment 😡.itna badaa update deney ki kya zaruirath thi aishu 😡.am really very very happy for ur new thread yaar itna gussa kyun hoti hai 😆.congratzz for ur new thread 🥳 yeh update kahan shuru huaa aur kahan qatam i dint get it aishu 😕 this is the only surviving ff for me n other readers i hope aur uske saath bhi kanjooshi......not fair.now b fast n take chahat to hospital if u take months to update next chapter she will die 😆 😆 😆.update next part soon.

love
saba
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen

sorry for whatt babyyy
and now u ronline hun diplomatic answer kya pilaya tune hajra sse ye to diwnai ho gayi teri
noo no non ono main nahi batane wali itnnoo batein boli mujhe main ni bataungi




ok as ur wish...if u don't wnt to tell....its k...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: premeeristry

i guess its almost 5 weeks that ur updating false commitment nooo iss baar jaldi kiyaa tu bhi to never forget resever kar baithi hai usse updt karrr aur iss barr maine jaldi kiyaaa to gussa ho reli hai 😡.itna badaa update deney ki kya zaruirath thi aishuits divya asked me so okk next timeee no updtes without 10 pagess of microsft word but u hv to wait wo months then 😡.am really very very happy for ur new thread yaar itna gussa kyun hoti haime gussa saba tu to saath de sab mile mujhe sta rahe hai 😆.congratzz for ur new thread thnks🥳 yeh update kahan shuru huaa aur kahan qatam i dint get it aishuit wasnt os menaningless aajkal english samajh ni aati kyaaa 😕 this is the only surviving ff for me n other readers i hope aur uske saath bhi kanjooshi..i l give u fewl inks of better ffsss hihihh....not fair.now b fast n take chahat to hospital if u take months to update next chapter she will dieys my bechari chah but wht if my plan is like tht only ??? 😆 😆 😆.update next part soon.abhi to ye kiya now ek week i l rest thnk i l thnk

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saba

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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
nice update
but chahath ko kuch bi nahi hua naa
plzzzzzzz premeer ko milaona jaldi
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
update the next part asapp
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Aishu di !!!!!!!!!!!! yeh hangcliffer???!!!!!!
Yeh toh sara sar naa insafi hai yaar... itni saari emotional baatein
pehle kehdi aur phir Chahat ki jaan.😡😡
aur abb bichari ko latka ke baad mein update karogi... 😭😭
please update soon atleast for the lil Chah 😉
pata nahi kitna khoon beh gaya hoga heheheh😆
Ms.Chindi itna chota update nahi chalega...I want to read more yaar... ur jst too good
aur haan gussa mat hona... but I totally agree with Saba 😆
Awesome update...really reminds me of Hashu in the barish scene
with the whole description... I really think he should keep down his
temper... hhahahahahah Heer ne kya muh tod jawab diya hai....hahah
nice.. *sigh* I was hoping for a PHingoli heheh😳😳
Poor Heer, how does she cop up wit all the mess in her life...
this Harshad better do something abt Chah and not stand like a duffer
pls pls pls update soon...😲😲ayooo mein toh kuch kehna hi bhoolgayi
Congratulations sis for the second thread...really hope you get more readers n
ideas so u continue writing like always 😃👏⭐️
Edited by 0711rokxoxo - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
first of all cibgrats for ur second thread.....awesme updte.....harshad is too mean yaaar...luvd heer and harshad scene....omg chahat....hope she is fine...warna hamari heer ka kya hoga.....nywayz thanks for pm...update sooon plzzzxx.

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