KAISE YEH PYAAR HAI(17/1) pg 105 DISCONTINUED - Page 3

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...Nikhita... thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
nice start and character sketch.....
waiting for the first part!
and good title too.....
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

First of all a big thnq u to everyone for the response ive received I never expected such a response n here is my very 1st chaptern all suggestions to be taken even if it is positive or neagative

Both the Maan's n the Juneja mansions are side by side which look exactly the same, they have a common lawn, pool, gym etc. Normally both the families are found in each others houses chit chatting or doing something. Since kiran's parents died in a car accident three years ago the Maan's took the groom's side during kiran n kulraj's marriage which bought kiran close to both the families n then after he started living wid them as the son of balraj n teji since the whole Maan family had emotionally blackmailed him saying now he is their son n he couldn't refuse heer since he shared a sister bonding wid her n always got reminded of sneha whenever she was wid him n so he was taking care of their business along wid nihaal n prem

Both the families were seated in the lawn n having breakfast on the dinning table kept in the lawn, it was their daily routine as later on they wouldn't find time for each other as someone would go to office n the others to college. Everyone was present on the table except for prem n heer. Everyone keep starting at the food n both the houses .Just then a servant named saida enters there who has been working at their place since the birth of kulraj n nihaal n is the caretaker of the house

Saida- what happened why isn't anyone having their breakfast especially when ive made the cooks prepare everyones favourite?

Gayatri- Is she feeling alright? She was feeling well only na yesterday?

Teji- yes she is feeling well only'she was intrupted by preet

Preet- then y cant we listen to it?

Teji- is he feeling well?

Gayatri- he is feeling well then?

Mehar- then y cant we listen to it? Have my ears gone spoilt?

Saida- stop it mehar its not necessary that the day should always start the same way?!

Veera-but dj(the kids call saida as dj asin daijan shortcut k3g style) we have become used to it now till it starts the same way the food wont be digested by any of us

Raj- I totally agree wid her n everyone raises their hands saying so do we

Saida- oh stop it now all of u

Just then veera's phone rings n before she answers the call we hear a girl shouting on the top of her lungs saying prem!!! n everyone is satisfied wid it n leave a long breath n start their breakfast while both prem n heer come from the maan mansion fighting n hitting each other n everyone starts laughing since it was a regular site for them

Heer- uncle look wat ur son has done to my dress n shows her dress which has all ink stains on it

Lalit- Prem'y did u'.do this? he asks between his laugh

Prem- Dad she was the 1st one to start it

Heer- Me? Wat did I do?

Prem- oh since u have forgotten Miss Female Ghajini u threw me into the swimming pool yesterday night

Heer- I am not any female ghajini k n that was yesterday

Prem- ya n I didn't take my badla yesterday so here it is tit for tat n everyone starts laughing for that

Heer- AAAAHHHHHHHH

Balraj- k now both of u stop fighting n come lets have breakfast n heer go n change ur dress u have to go n check ur results also na'n laughs wid everyone

As heer just moves a little bit from the table prem says I don't know y u ppl let her join MBBS now she will become a doctor n kill people in the name of a surgery that is ofcourse if she passes!!

Heer- I heard that

Prem- see she always has her ears to whatever I say!!

Gayatri- Prem!!

Prem- u always support her only

Teji- don't worry beta I will support u

Prem- that's y I love u soooo much aunty

Finally heer comes n sits down n just starts having her breakfast while prem says bukhad kitna kayengi? ur results have released n ur sitting n having food over hear god knows what u will do in the hospital?

Heer- that is none of ur business

Prem-what do u mean its none of my business I was the one who suggested Harman to opt for law so that he can help u

Heer- help m?! as in wat way?

Prem- when ur surgery will fail n the patients family will file a case against u atleast we will have a lawyer at home who wouldn't give some lame reasons as in not to take ur case so'before he could continue heer throws a a glass on prem which he easily catches n shows his tongue out

Teji- k now all u kids listen to me n especially u both pointing towards prem n heer today sneha parents are coming to decide the date of nihaal n sneha's marriage for which everyone says oohhhhoooo while nihaal is blushing

Gayatri- n we don't want to show them the circus family to which they will be sending their daughter to'so both of u behave urself looking towarda ph

Heer- y is everyone pointing out only us

Prem- exactly tell all of them also no

Lalit-we would but its always ur fight that takes the centre of attraction

Prem n heer just open their mouth to say something but looking at their dads faces they shut their mouths n say yes dad for which all their siblings start laughing but instantly shut up when they receive daggers from ph's eyes. Balraj n Lalit laugh n leave for the office while prem goes inside his room to get as he has a meeting to attend n while the ladies discuss about the preparation for today n the others teasing nihaal n all he could do was just blush madly n they hear prem shouting heer!!! N comes out n asks her where the hell are my clothes?

Heer- how would I know where are ur clothes prem? She asks in a very sweet tone wid a innocent look on her face

Prem- oh shut up I know its all done by u only sp dont put that innocent look k

Teji- wat happened beta?

Prem- aunty all my clothes are missing from my closet? N everyone laugh at it

Teji- heer where r his clothes?

Heer- the causals r wid the beggars n the suits are in the pool n everyone starts laughing wid a hand on their stomach

Prem- what!!!!!

Heer- ya it wouldn't be nice if the beggars would beg wearing Armani suits right?

kk now all of u plz tell m how was it?? N be frank um ready to know that it was bad!!!!

Edited by premheeralcohol - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
gr8.............luved it..
was a funny...update..
updaye nxt part asap...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
so nice
loved their cute fight.
beggers beggin with armani suits. omg. really laughed fromt he begining to end.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
it was really so sweet ff.............but u see the font size is very small dear......pls change it....dnt mind............

and prem told heer about harman becoming lawyer to save heer that was really funny..................:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
hey it was really awesme love tht nok jhok btw premeer they awsme it was really funny tht armani suit frm beggars😆😆 i was really laughing just updating it asap dear loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
that was cute.. bohat ladayi jhagda hota hai..lol

thanks for the pm.. really enjoyed myseld..

continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Premeer fights were great !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
great update..haha premmer fight was cute....normally it would have been meet..nice change....pls do also focus on meet if u can...thx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
nice update....it was quite hilarious! 😆
loved premeer's relationship here.....and the pranks they play on each other!
continue soon....
and thanks for the pm!

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