~~'MILAN'~~-part 25 and on pg120[28th may]

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Whypadhu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

nice update.
I hope all the problems will be solved soon...I just want them to be happy all the time.
Update soon....
Thanks for the PM.

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sweet scorpio

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

nice update!

poor prem!...=(....i m feeling really bad 4 him!

i hope rajveer never comes back!

continue soon!

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newt2007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

nice update

poor Prem instead of happiness he recd a shokc in his first night.

Heer is leaning on Prem for emotional support. so she is already started thinking him as her own.'

divorce within a day of marriage is not possible. court will surely give them some time. hope within that time Heer falls for Prem.

you left with 'lekin' what he is going to tell now?

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...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

awesome first part and character sketch....

why does heer want a divorce?????

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...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

2nd part was wonderful....

heer wants a divorce on thier first night itself......poor prem......

does he love her?

continue soon!

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Sanjana

@harshiti8

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

nice part...poor prem😒...he got such a big shock on the first night...update asap..tnks 4 the pm

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: nspn.92
nice update.
I hope all the problems will be solved soon...I just want them to be happy all the time.
Ek aur sach oh..will be waiting to read the next part.
Update soon....
Thanks for the PM.

thanx 😊
wait.....wait... 😆
ok sure
😊

Originally posted by: Ayesha103
it wasnt borinnnnn! i luvd ittt! but sad that she wants a divorce! but no worries shes gonna get attached 2 prem 4 sure welllllllll....... hu wudnt?! lol

woooww thanx
lets see
😊

Originally posted by: minaz296
nice update

thanx 😊

Originally posted by: anishajk99
gr8 update.....poor heer,feeling sorry for her......but prem is also suffering sooo much......i hope premeer will not be divorced.......pls do cont asap....

even me but what to do
lets see
sure 😊

Originally posted by: kptl
oooh no....feeel really bd for heer bt also more for prem....
hp dis raj turns out to be bad guy.....or jst might be using her....nywy..jst dont make em get divorce..yaar plz....

even me but wat to do
lets see... 😉

Originally posted by: heer193
i don't thnk it was at all boringreally!!!!!!!! then good
chalo sach to bahar ayai know
i hope heer aur rajveer na milelets see
but lagta hai we have similar sort of thinking
in my ff i did the sameOOOOOohhhh.....i see
heer loving rajveer
and prem waiting for heer

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio
nice update!
poor prem!...=(....i m feeling really bad 4 him!
i hope rajveer never comes back!
continue soon!

thanx 😊
mee to yaar
les see 😉
sure

Originally posted by: newt2007
nice update

poor Prem instead of happiness he recd a shokc in his first night.

Heer is leaning on Prem for emotional support. so she is already started thinking him as her own.'

divorce within a day of marriage is not possible. court will surely give them some time. hope within that time Heer falls for Prem.

you left with 'lekin' what he is going to tell now?

thanx
yes ofcourse she would lean any other person also 😆
yeh....dheko aur dekthe jaao
wait for that 😉

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18
awesome first part and character sketch....
why does heer want a divorce?????
2nd part was wonderful....
heer wants a divorce on thier first night itself......poor prem......
does he love her?

thanx for liking it 😊
thanx again
yes he does 😊 peheli baar hi fida hogayaa tha 😆

Originally posted by: harshiti8
nice part...poor prem...he got such a big shock on the first night...update asap..tnks 4 the pm

thanx
sure
welcome
😊

Originally posted by: sweta2005
update plzzzzzzz waitingggggggg

ill update 2moro for sure 😊

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

CHAPTER 3

Prem :lekin….
Heer :"Kya baat hai"
Prem:"who actually I cant give you divorce so soon ,I mean atleast till we are staying here in Ludhiana.
Heer:Why????
Prem:Agar maa bauji ko patha chal gaya tho unko bohut dukh hoga….un donon ka dil toot jayegaa…..

Now fresh set of tears started to roll down……from her almond shaped eyes till her neck and she dint even care to wipe them off……
She was more feeling bad because she is becoming the reason for others sadness ,not only Prem but she is giving pain to his parents and family also,but what can she do…….nothing is in her had now

Prem saw her crying and…..
Prem:plzzzzz Heer tum roo[cry] math…..meine kahan ki tumhe yahan… Ludhiana mein Divorce nahi mil sakta par Mumbai mein mil jaayega……
Heer:Mumbai????wahan par kyun...
Prem :Don't you know????
Heer:What???
Prem:I stay in Mumbai.....mein wahan par hamare saare hotels ko sambaalta[take care] hoon....aur mein yahan shaadi ke liye aayaa tha....kyun thumhe nahi pata???
Heer Dad ne kuch bhi nahi bataaya iss baare mein.....
Prem:koi baat nahi abb toh pata chal gaya na.....Do you have any problem in staying there????
Heer:No......mujhe kya problem hoga mein kahi bhi rehaloongi[stay]"she said this in a sad tone turning to the other side.
Prem:teek hai....hum ek hafte[week]ke baad Mumbai jaa rahe hai....
Heer just nodded her head
Prem:tum soo[sleep] jao.....
Heer:teek hai.......... agar tum jaaoge toh tab naa
Prem:mein bahar kaise jaa sakta...hoon....."Prem was not understandin anything
Heer let out a weak smile after a long time at his stupidity.
Heer:bahar nahi tum bed par soo [sleep]jao aur mein yahan sofa par...
Prem:Nahi Heer tum kuch jyaada hi... tak[tired]gayi ho so sleep on the bed,its very uncomfortable here.
Heer:No prem its......
Prem cut her in between
Prem:nahi toh Divorce nahi milega...soochlo"in a naughty tone
Heer:blackmail kar rahe ho....."in a serious tone and raising her eyebrows but still she liked the way he was playing with her.
Prem:aisa hi samjho.....
Heer teek hai,ill only sleep on the bed
Prem smiled at her and heer back at him and they went to sleep.

Heer while sleeping was thinking how good Prem was how he brought a smile on her face that to after a long time.She had never so happy or she dint even smile after Raj left.She felt she had nothing or no one to tell about her feelings ,what she feel,her heart was full and she wanted to share everything with someone but she dint have anybody ,not even her mother.By now she was crying silently so that Prem wont come to know.
But today she smiled.....Prem made her smile and Heer felt atleast she got some for a short time maybe but still she can share everything with him cuz she already told everything in her heart......Now she had a good Friend.She smiled thinking all these and went to sleep.

On the other hand Prem was feeling more sad.Same things ringing like a bell in his mind
She loved someone else
She wants Divorce.........
Other thinkings also came to his mind...like how will he tell his parents and his siblings
What may they think....Bauji may feel guilty for choosing this girl for me
He slept trying to solve this puzzle.

In the living room

Lalit,G3,Kulraj,Preet,Veera and Balraj were sitting in the living room and were still chatting
Lalit ,G3 and Balraj were talking about how the marriage went on....
Lalit:shaadi toh teek se hogaya.......without any problem.....
Balraj:haan Lalit mein ohut kush hoon meri beti ek acchi ghar ki bahu bangayi hai,im happy for her" smiles..
G3:aap chinta math kijiye woh kush toh rahegi hi.... hamare ghar mein toh.... 2 bandhar joh.... hai
usse dekhte hi woh......saara dukh booljaayegi
All the 3 laghs.....at he statement

Here On the otherside Kuaj,Preet and Veera were planning some things to tease premeer 2moro as soon as they come down......but hearing G3's statement Veera and Preet came to know she was talking about them......
Preet only to Kulraj and Veera in a soft voice"aaj tak sirf ye chaand mujhe chidatha tha
aur maa toh bauj se bhi aage nikalgayi mere sath Veera ko bhi.........
isiliye meine maa ko kaha tha ki bauji se door[far]raho par woh... sunti nahi
Veera made a sad pout and Kural started to giggle and hit on Preet's head playfully......

After that they all went to sleep......waiting for another new day to come to bring more happiness in their life.....
But this was only their thought,hardly they knew what had happen inside those four walls....that is premeer's room.

Balraj is staying at Juneja's place for this night so that he can see his daughter and leave to his place....
He came here after Heer entered Prems room.

Hope u all like it😃
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Edited by blufate.14 - 15 years ago