~~'MILAN'~~-part 25 and on pg120[28th may]

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

awesome
do continue
add me to ur pm list
Divorce on the first day of marriage itself...
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Update soon..

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

i think the title should be like this
PYAAR THO HONA HI THA
its just my opinion
because prem ka pyaar kho dhek kar sabi ladikiya yehi kahengena.

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Anisha Jayakumar

@anishajk99

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Woooow superb start........loved prem.....but heer asking for divorce nd that too in their 1st nyt 😲 .........sounds interesting.......pls add me to ur pm list.........pls do cont asap........

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Dolly

@kptl

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

wow....amazing....
never heard someone ask for a divorce on a very first night of marriage...
something different....do cont asap

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-scarlett-

@-scarlett-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Great concept

the first chapter was nice

except the end where she wants a DIVORCE??

Thank u

can u please add me to ur pm list

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Harpreet Randhawa

@-BabyCupid-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Hay awesome concept!!
Can u plz pm me or maybe u did and i didn't get a chance to read it!!
Anyways cant wait to read more!!
Actually i was kinda of thinking the same thing for one of my ff's that Heer is married to Prem but she loves someone else and Prem is ready to give her a divorce but it will take some time and in that time Heer's getting away from Prem!!
Anyways if this was kinda ur idea than plzz pm me and let me know that i'll think of something else!!
Thanks!
DO Pm me!

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sukrutha

@Sukrutha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio
gr8 concept!!!
add me 2 ur pm list!

thanx for liking it
surely will add u 😊

Originally posted by: Ayesha103
amazingggg! but why dus shewant a divorceeee!? :'( update asap and add me 2 pm list!

ull come to know soon 😉
sure 😊

Originally posted by: heer193
hmmm......prem so excited
bevkuf heer. divorce?
shaadi hui nahi and she needs divorce
ek minute is it a plan of prem's sis
by the way
its a nice concept
do add me to pm list

i know prem.....was so excited
be shaanth 😆
thanx for liking it 😊

Originally posted by: aishwaryagayen
hey so lastly u on with an fff with jhatka goshh married and needs a divorce at first night this is gonna be heart breakign and interesting m waiting hope u wont left me on a cliff hanger for long and take the revenge updt soon

yeh....at last
lets see.....
illnot take revenge 😆 dont worry
ill update asap 😊

Originally posted by: alisha_harshiti
lol i loved it........its all his behens plan na???divorce hahaha...gr8...do update soon

thanx 😊
lets see
sure

Originally posted by: azfee
If i were Heer, I would ask for a baby!!!
Not divorce!!!
Hahahaahz, nice part, do update and add me to ur pm list...
And yes, regarding the title, what about, 'Never Leave Me'?

BABY!!!!!!😆
surely will update soon....

Originally posted by: premspadhu
awesome thanx
do continuesure
add me to ur pm listsurely will
Divorce on the first day of marriage itself...wierd na...
Eagerly waiting for the next part.wait..😆
Update soon..sure

Originally posted by: anishajk99
Woooow superb start........loved prem.....but heer asking for divorce nd that too in their 1st nyt .........sounds interesting.......pls add me to ur pm list.........pls do cont asap........

thanx
even me 😳
hhhmmmmm........yeh......
thanx again
sure 😊

Originally posted by: kptl
wow....amazing....
never heard someone ask for a divorce on a very first night of marriage...
something different....do cont asap

thanx
now u hear 😆
sure 😊

Originally posted by: 0711rokxoxo
Great concept
the first chapter was nice
except the end where she wants a DIVORCE??
Thank u
can u please add me to ur pm list

thanx😊
sure

Originally posted by: -BabyCupid-
Hay awesome concept!!
Can u plz pm me or maybe u did and i didn't get a chance to read it!!
Anyways cant wait to read more!!
Actually i was kinda of thinking the same thing for one of my ff's that Heer is married to Prem but she loves someone else and Prem is ready to give her a divorce but it will take some time and in that time Heer's getting away from Prem!!
Anyways if this was kinda ur idea than plzz pm me and let me know that i'll think of something else!!
Thanks!
DO Pm me!

thanx
ill send u pm😊
sure

Edited by blufate.14 - 15 years ago

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sukrutha

@Sukrutha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: samrocking30
awesome
do continue
add me to ur pm list

thanx for liking it
surely will continue 😊

Originally posted by: newt2007
its wonderful.

asking divorce in her first night. very sad.

Poor Prem. can't bear his dissppointment.
continue soon.

thanx for liking it😊
i know its sad but what to do

Originally posted by: annwesha kayal

nice start !!

do cont asap..

plz add me to ur pm list.

Originally posted by: NIMMY
Heer ki abhi shaadi hui hai Prem se and she wants divorce.....Nahi
plz update soon

surely will update soon

Originally posted by: nspn.92
nice update.[B]thanx
Divorce on the first day of marriage itself...i know its wierd😕
Eagerly waiting for the next part.wait.......😆
Update soon...i will
Pls...Do add me to ur PM list.i will add😊

Originally posted by: mandy60
awesome update
Divorce on the first day of marriage itself...
continue soon

surely will continue soon😊

Originally posted by: harshiti8
ausm part...update asap nd plz add me in ur pm list..

thanx for liking 😊
surely will update soon

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sukrutha

@Sukrutha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: premspadhu
i think the title should be like this
PYAAR THO HONA HI THA
its just my opinion
because prem ka pyaar kho dhek kar sabi ladikiya yehi kahengena.

already there is a ff with this name
no worries now i got 1 😉

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sukrutha

@Sukrutha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#30

CHAPTER 2

Heer:mujhe DIVORCE chaahiye..........
Prem was shocked to hear this,he was both shocked and sad at the same time
dont no why but he felt this was all dream,to check whether this is a dream or not,Prem lifted his hand up and touched his cheeks........
NO he was not dreaming,this was all true HIS WIFE was asking him Divorce on their FIRST NIGHT,the night which is really special for a newly married couple....
At the same time he was thinking that she was very daring to ask Divorce on the first night itself.
So many emotions and questions where running in his heart and mind.Why does want a divorce?Is something wrong with me?Dint she like me ?WHY?WHY?WHY?Whats the reason behind this.
He was literally crying now but he held his tears back so that he will not show that he is weak.

Heer was feeling a bit bad for asking him like this as a volcano erupting suddenly.But what can she do,she wants divorce asap.She cant stay with anybody else.
Heer:Premm.....
Prem came back to the world..
Heer:Im sorry... mujhe jald se jald divorse chaahiye...
Prem couldnt bear anymore
Prem:"WHY Heer why......whats the problem tell me and he asked all the questions in his mind
dint you like me???agar thumhe ye shaadi pasand nahi tha toh tumne shaadi hi kyun ki haann....batao"now he was angry on her.

Heer was now crying
Heer:"mein kabhi bhi nahi chaathi thi ki ye shaadi ho"
Prem:"toh phir tumne iss shaadi ke liye haan kyun ki???"
Heer:"naa hi kisi ne mujhse poocha aur naa hi maine kuch kahan,mujhe kuch bhi kehe ne ka mauka hi nahi mila"
Prem:"Atleast ye batao ki tum iss shaadi se kush kyun nahi ho??"

Heer was now thinking whether to tell him or not,what will happen if I tell???many questions came to her mind.Atlast she opened her mouth...
Heer:"mein ....mein....kisi... a..ur...se......ppp.....yyaaa....r kartihoon....

Prem was now more sad,his wife loves someone else.But now he cooled down and asked her
Prem:"toh phir tum usse shaadi kyun nahu ki..."
Heer:"kaise karti main kaise "now she started crying hard and was about to collapse...
Prem went and held her by her shoulders and made her sit on the sofa and asked her
Prem:"tell me now" now he was feeling bad for her cause he came to know that some thing was wrong...
Heer and Prem were now sitting on the sofa,Heer started to tell
Heer:"mein ek ladka se pyaar karti hoon.uska naam hai RAJVEER.......woh bhi mujhse pyaar karta hai.....lekin baauji.........ko woh ladka pasand nahi hai kyunki....woh hamaari takkar ka nahi hai
woh ek hostel mein rehta tha aur uska baap uske padaai ke liye paiise bejh the the.lekin ek din accident mein uska baap margaye.tab se woh ek kaam karke paisa kamaaya kartha tha......
ye sab honeke baad mein ne usse mere dad se milwaane gayi par unhone ek he baar mein naa kardiya,agar mein usse puchthi toh kehte hai ki woh accha ladka nahi hai
par woh kya janthe uske baare mein
woh tho kuch bhi nahi jaanthe Raj ke baare mein.........
baad pata nahi kya hogaya Raj toh Ludhiana chodke chalaagaya"now she was leaning on Prem and crying hard which she was doing all alone all these days.
and then she continued
Heer:pataa nahi kyun chalaagaya........ humne socha tha ki hum US jaake aage ki padaayi sath mein complete karke wahi settle hojaayenge.agar yahi rahete toh bauji hume chain se jeene nahi dethe........aur age ka toh thum janthe ho

Heer:baauji ne tumhe dekha,pasand kiya aur shaadi bhi karaadi.........
now she was crying more and more
with her Prem was also crying by now.
Heer:I want Divorce thaaki mein teri upar bhooj na bane......
im once again sorry Prem....meine ye bhi socha ki agar shaadi hojaaye toh mein iss ghar ki ho jaaungi aur bauji mujh par jyaada hak nahi jatha sakte...then i thought of all these

Prem:I can understand...iss mein thumhara koi galti nahi hai.....
"agar tumhe Divorce chaahi ye toh miljayeha"he told this with so much of difficulty that no one can imagine........
Prem:lekin.........

i know this is a bit boring part par sach ka bahar aana bhi toh jaroori hai na😆
hope u all like it
sorry for any mistakes
plzzz comment and press the like button 😊

Edited by blufate.14 - 15 years ago