~~'MILAN'~~-part 25 and on pg120[28th may]

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Harpreet Randhawa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Hay awesome update!!
Plzzz No Divorce!!@!
THanks for the pm!!
Update soon!
Thanks!

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Sanjana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

ausm part...I hope heer soon falls in love wid hr "good friend"...nd plzzzz no divorce...update asap.....thanks 4 the pm..

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-scarlett-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Thnks for the pm.. very nice update...hmm...

Prem the naughty little intelligent genius... hehe his extendin their

divorce date..heheh.. i think eventually this guy will make

up excuses or **unintentionally** the circumstances will make

them stay together...hahaha..

Very nice family scene... G3 i think is gettin bored issiliye

Preet aur Veeera ki tang khich rahi hai...

Aur chand thak gaye hain... hehe...

thnks!

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sweet scorpio

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

premeer will stay in mumbai.......wonder wat willhappen ther???

i think 1 week is enough 4 prem!

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Ayesha103

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

heyyyy awesum update! hope heer falls 4 premmm! feel sorry 4 prem! anyways do update asap!

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sonia7

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

awesome update

please add me to your pm list

thanks

update soon

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

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Edited by blufate.14 - 15 years ago

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Dolly

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

awww...how sweet of him......
poor prem...nd feel really bad for heer too....

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sukrutha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

CHAPTER 4

[SIZE=2]NEXT DAY MORNING

Prem got up before Heer and saw the clock and it was already 7:00.He saw that Heer was still sleeping,he kept on staring at her,atlast he came to world when he heard his mother scolding some servant outside, so he opened the door and saw down from the balcony.His mother was scolding a servant for breaking her favourite vase.Prem went back to the room without bolting the door and quickly went to take bath.

After 2 to 3 mins Heer also got up,turned and looked towards the sofa and found that Prem was missing ,she was thinking were would he go at morning itself.That is when she heard the sound of the shower and came to know that he was in the bathroom.So she she slept for a while.

Prem came out and Heer also got up and saw Prem with his towel around his waist standing in front of the mirror making faces and trying to give a good style to his hair.He dint notice Heer staring at him.

Now Heer was staring at him without her conscious.This was obvious as she couldnt resist staring at him.Even after all that happen at night she was still staring at him.(isnt that wierd)

Heer came to this world when the clock gave a small beep as it was 7:30.

Heer(to herself):"ye tum kya kar rahi thi tum kisi aur...... ohhhhhhhhh........god"hitting lightly on her head.

Heer took her towel and went to the bathroom and that is when he came to know that Heer had woke up.By now Prem was ready.
Heer came out wearing a blue saree while wiping her wet hair and was looking gorgeous....as usual
Prem was reading some file and when he saw her he kept on staring at her.........he went on and on still she settled herself on the dressing stool.She put a very little makeup and kept a small bindi and when she was about to put her mangalsutra and sindoor she hesitated a bit and looked at Prem who was busy acting as if he was reading the file through the mirror.

Prem was stealing glances at her and when she looked at him through the mirror he understood something was there and asked

Prem-"kya baat hai Heer"
Heer just nodded her head in negative and applied sindoor and wore her mangalsutra.
By now heer was having tears in her eyes. She got up wiping her tears turning towards the door.
Prem who was watching all these
Prem:kya baat hai Heer plzzzzz mujhe batao,main thumhe aise roote huwe nahi deksakta.Thum mujhe sab bataa sakti ho...pllzzzzz tell me.
Heer:mein ...mein.....roo rahi hoon?........nahi toh...
Prem:Heer jooth math bolo maine dekha.Dekho Heer koi bhi dhukbari baat baatne se dukh kam hota hai......plzzzzz plzzzz tell me...think me as your friend.
Heer now felt like telling him,not only this matter but everything.....she dint feel like hiding anything from him

Heer:"maine socha tha ki mein ye sidoor aur manngalsutra Raj ke naam se pehnoongi..........par...."she starte crying but not that loud.

Prem felt bad hearing this but he couldnt see his angel crying like this
Prem:Heer bus kuch din aur baad mein sab kuch teek hojayega,thumhe thumhara Raj miljaayega.....dekhna mein thumhe usse doondne mein madad karoonga......"even though he found it difficult to tell.

Heer:"saaaaaaccchh........."a big smile appeared on her face hearing this.
Prem gave her a assuring smile.
Heer:thank you so much Prem.and game him a short and cute little hug which a friend gives to another friend....

Preet and Veera had come to call them and what they saw was obvious for them,Heer hugging Prem
,but for Heer it was not anything like that.Here Prem was stunned for a minute."Did she hug me?????"and his heart was jumping at her touch now....not able to control Prem also hugged her back.and smiled

Preet and Veera got their prey now and were not gonna leave them for sure.
Preet and Veer together:"hhmmm...aahhhmm......"as if clearing their throat......................</font>

HOPE U ALL LIKE IT........ 😊

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Edited by blufate.14 - 15 years ago