New FF 'Will We Fall In Love?' Chap.7 pg.60 Aug.22

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Harpreet Randhawa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: annwesha kayal
great update !!

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#292

Originally posted by: Ayesha103
awwwwwww! poor prem heer hope both get closa 2 each otha! wonderful update :D!update asap

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Harpreet Randhawa

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#293

Originally posted by: _Mariam_
Hey awsome part
oh no Prem and Heer fighted

hope things sort out between them asap

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Harpreet Randhawa

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#294

Originally posted by: newt2007
nice update

Heer is rude on Prem.

OMG they fought. but feeling sorry.

I know i know!!
Will update soon!
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Harpreet Randhawa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: meeshti.
hey !!!
awesome update 

loved it 

heer is soo smart...............

but both premeer are thinking they cant be in a relationship !!

but son they will realise , they are wrong 

heheh

update soon

Maybe or Maybe not!!!

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srikrithi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#296

nice part.
feel bad for prem & heer.
continue soon.

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Harpreet Randhawa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: srikrithi
nice part.
feel bad for prem & heer.
continue soon.

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Harpreet Randhawa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#298

Hay guys i know why arn't i updating well i actually have exams going on so that's why but i wil update more FF's over the weekend since i only have open book exams!

Chapter 5

Heer was thinking "OMG how can i be so mean and that to to Prem i have to apologzie!!" thought Heer and went outside where Prem was and she saw him talking to some employees so she just thought of waiting for him to finish.

Heer thought that this was taking soo long she thought that she will talk to him at home and turned around and just than Prem had turned around and saw Heer walking the other way and he thought that she is still very angry at him.

Prem went into his office and saw Heer doing something with her phone sitting on the couch so he just went and sat on his chair and started to work. Heer was getting mad that Prem wasn't talking to her so she thought that if he wants to talk to her than he will.

Prem was finally done all of his work and than he came up to Heer and said "Chalo" he said and left. They were in the car and still no convo. not even at home. But the time you new it 2 months had passed by and Premeer didn't talk to one another!

Heer was getting more and more angry and here Prem just thought that she doesn't want to talk to me. One night Prem came home at 12:30pm the latest he had come and when he came inside his room he was lost in some thoughts and didn't hear Heer ask him "Prem tum itna late ku?" asked Heer but Prem just passed by and got his clothes and went inside the washroom.

Heer was very mad but now she was very sad too she ran and sat on the bed with her back to the board and her legs to her chest and started crying. "nahi bath karni hai to math karo mujie koe fark nahi parta" thought Heer. When Prem came out of the washroom he was shocked to see Heer crying like a baby.

He quickly ran to Heer and sat beside her and asked "heer tum ro ku rahe ho?" asked Prem in a caring tone "tumhai ka?" asked Heer turning her face the other way "Heer plzz batao" said Prem pleading "phele tum batao ke tum intne late ku ayae?" asked Heer "vo kuch kam agya tha" said Prem "now ur turn" he said.

"tumare vaja sai" said Heer facing Prem and Prem was shocked "okay im lost what did i do now?" asked Prem "it's not what u did do it's what u didn't" said Heer "WHT??" asked Prem in confusion "ya.. it's been wht like 2 months and you haven't talked to me once" said Heer "well u could of" said Prem teasing her "i did today but u didn't listen" said Heer

"Ohh sorry" said Prem holding his ears "don't do that" said Heer removing his hands from his ears "abb chalo muje booke legi hai" said Prem "kana lagado" said Prem wiping Heer's tears and Heer smiled and nodded. She put the food out on the dining table and her and Prem ate happily! "Prem" said Heer while eating "hmm" said Prem "agar mai kahu ke mujhe divorce chaiea to?" asked Heer and Prem was shocked!!!

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Edited by -BabyCupid- - 15 years ago