FF - RISHTA III COMPLETED!! - Page 84

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update waiting seems to be the story is going to conclude oh no dont do this i want the story to move on.
waiting for more premeer and meet scene
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved this part.
sanjana's entry was awesome.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part
preet helping gungan n trying 2 be romantic wid meher owoh r i'm dreaming or wat hhehe😆
prem nd heer scence was lovely
is sanjana is turned good or she is acting 2 be good can't beliene her Sudden change 😕
thanx 4 updating n 4 da PM😊
WAITNG 4 next...
update sooooon...
Edited by H-xx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hahhaa.. wow for the first time
I am sayin this but Sanju good job yaar...hehehe
thnks for the great update
love Meet scene..heheh.. not a machine heheheh
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 107 (Last Part)

In the mansion, Chahat is sitting in front of TV and waiting for her Papa's award ceremony. She sat in the bed hugging a pillow. Harshu and Aditi are sitting in front of Chahat and actively biting some of their toys. Gungun came and sat next to her. 'di, I want cartoon network.'

Chahat 'gungun, now my papa, your dad, dadu and didi will come in this.' Gungun surprised 'in this TV.' Chahat 'my papa is going to receive an award.' She said excitingly.

Gungun also got excited when they showed Juneja's entering the function hall. Chahat jumped 'chachi come fast.' Megher came in with Vaishali in her hand. She placed her on the bed and sat next to her. Chahat excitingly 'see my papa. How sweet? My mamma.' She clapped.

After the award function, Juneja's returned home. Chahat ran to Prem. he picked her up in his arms and kisssed her. Chahat 'Papa, show me.' Heer handed the memento to her. Chahat picking up it in her hand 'its nice Papa.' She kissed his cheek. 'I love you.' he kissed her back 'I love you too beta.' She leaned and kissed Heer cheek.

Heer 'where is Harshu and Aditi?' Chahat 'they are sleeping in my bed.' Prem and Heer with Chahat went to their room.

Preet went to his room. Megher followed. Gungun and Vaishali are already sleeping. Preet kissed their cheek. He turned and saw Megher putting his coat inside the closet. He moved and hugged her from back. Megher 'so you are in romantic mood today.'

Preet gently biting her ears 'is it wrong?' Megher truned towards 'I didn't say like that.' she ran her fingers through his hair 'I will be surprises if Juneja didn't get romantic mood.' Preet looked at her confusingly. Megher 'when your brother is so romantic all the time without even bothered about his surrounding. Then you must be' she sighed 'little bit. You must be atleast 25% romantic.' Preet hugged her. 'I'm always but little bit shy to express.' Megher smiled 'this is another style of Preet Juneja.'

Chahat wanted to sleep with Harshu and Aditi. So Heer allowed them in Chahat room. After putting Chahat to sleep, Heer went to change. Prem sitting on the bed working in his laptop. He changed after sending a mail. He saw Heer coming out of washroom wearing night gown. He quickly went to Chahat room and gave kiss to them.

He came back and hugged Heer who is standing in front of mirror. He kept his chin on her shoulder and nuzzled her ear lobe with his nose. Heer enjoying his move titled her head back to lean on his shoulder. He kissed her throat. She turned to him. He pulled her closer holding her waist. She teased running her index finger on his cheek 'father of 3 kids and best business man and '.' she paused with a teasing smile. Prem busy rubbing his nose on hers 'and.'

Heer pushed his face gently away and brushed her finger on his lips 'romantic husband.' Heer let out a teasing smile 'once upon a time.' She shook her head in negative 'not now.'

Prem tried to kiss her throat. Heer giggled and acted as if she is protesting. Prem 'Still I'm a romantic husband. Do you have any doubt in that?'

Prem pushed her on to the bed and fell on her 'I'll clear your doubt now.' Heer with a fake angry 'Prem, you have 3 kids.' Prem 'I know dear. It doesn't mean that I have to stay away from romance.'

Heer teasingly 'I thought you become old.' Prem with a fake angry face 'what? old? Who? Me?' he stretched his hand to switch off the light 'today I'll show you I'm not old.' Heer let out a teasing laugh and she tried to escape. Prem 'Heer I want to celebrate.' Heer 'so' Prem 'I want to enjoy this night.'

He didn't allow her to talk further. He know she too wants to make this night special as they were happy. He started kissing her face lovingly. She wrapped her hands around his neck. 'Prem do you remember the day first we become one.' Prem 'yes. I remember every second of that night.' Heer 'you made my every cell feel you. I want that now again.'

Prem 'as you wish dear.' He started kissing her as their hands unbuttoned each others dress. He slipped his right hand through her night coat and touched her bare back and pulled her closer. His left hand is under her head. He buried his face into her shoulder. Her right hand is on his hair and left hand on his bare back.

He lifts her body with his hand and passionately kissed her lips. One hand holding her head and other hand removed her night coat, still kissing her lips. She moaned and clutched the pillow tightly when his lips touched every bit of her body. He tickled her tender part of her breast with his lips. When they made love she gently bite his shoulder and moaned 'Premmm' he whispered 'Heer, you made my life meaningful. You gave all the happiness to me. I love you Heer.' Heer whispered 'I love you too Prem. I'm luckiest woman in this world.' Soon they drifted into happy and peaceful sleep.

Morning, Prem woke up before Heer. Heer is lying on his bare chest. Prem stroking her hair and admiring her face in the morning dim light. He looked at the clock. 'Still has time.' He hugged her tighter which made Heer open her eyes. He kissed her forehead 'good morning.' She kissed his cheek 'good morning.' They remain silent for a while.

Heer looked up when she saw Prem giggling. She gave a questioning look to him. Prem pulled her up to touch her cheek with his. 'I just recollected the day you came to me for the interview.' He laughed 'I still remembered the nervousness on you face.' Heer shyly smiled 'I never thought you'll fall for me.'.

Prem smiled 'I never thought this shy girl will make my life complete.' Heer hit his chest gently 'because of you. You gave all your love to me.' Prem 'you sacrificed your life for me.' Heer 'you gave meaning to my life.'

Prem 'that is because we always had relation which we understood.' He nuzzled his lips on her cheek 'only after our marriage.'

They heard Aditi's giggling sound from Chahat room. Heer quickly rushed to the washroom picking up her night suit. Prem putting his dress went to check them. Harshu and Chahat are sleeping peacefully. Aditi's kicking her legs and enjoying herself alone. Prem kissed her cheek 'enjoying alone.' He picked her up in his hand.

Soon Heer came out of the washroom. He handed Aditi to her and went to get ready. Before Prem come out of washroom Harshu and Chahat also got up. Heer gave them shower.

Prem sat on the bed leaning his head on the board. Chahat ran to him sat next to him leaning on his chest. Prem kissed her forehead. Harshu and Aditi crawled to his lap. He kissed them. Heer sat next to him on the other side leaned on to his shoulder. He kissed her forehead. They all kissed Prem. Prem smiled 'I'm the luckiest husband and father.'

Chahat 'one minute papa.' She ran to her room. She came back with a picture which Prem drew for her as Sagar. One bear hugging two bears. 'papa, you have to put two more here.' Prem 'bring one paper and pencil.' He made Harshu and Aditi sit on the bed. They started crawling around on the bed.

Prem started to do pencil shading. He did one bear leaning on a big bear with one little bear on its lap and the big bear holding one big and one small bear on its lap. Chahat clapped 'nice papa.' She laughed 'bear family.'

Hearing Chahat clapping and laughing, Hashu and Aditi also sat on the bed and started clapping and laughing. Chahat knelt before them and pressed her face on them. They all laughed. Prem and Heer hugging watched their lovely kids.

Premeer are Happy. They lived happily with their kids. Premeer's love become inspiration for their next generations.
Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

I like to give my thanks to all those who supported me with your encouragement to write this FF. Thanks a lot to all those pressed LIKE button.

When I started this FF - Rishta, I never thought i will be able to write 100 episodes. It all because your continuous support.

My big hug 🤗and love to all those spend time to give your precious time to read and comment.

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I'm Sorry if I missed any one in this list. I also like to thank all the silent readers.

Luv Selvy
Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mind blowing update ⭐️.........but ur last chapter to this FF 🥺........loved the premeer moments nd meet as well.......chahat is soooo sweet nd the rest 4 kids r also cute........ur FF was one of the best one i've read on IF nd ur the most lovely writer who update very regularly 👏........that is the main thing i love abt u nd ur writing style is amazing ⭐️.......thanks for writing such lovely FF on premeer nd keeping them all alive in our heart 🤗🤗🤗........not only this FF but all ur other FFs on premeer r awesome......pls do send me a pm wenever u write anything on premeer😳......love u loads.......will miss ur FF a lot 😭.........but definitely will read ur other FFs nd comment 😃.......
Edited by anishajk99 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww....
thx 2 u 2...
its because of u dat v r able 2 have premeer living in our hearts even after da show finished.....
lub eww....

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome awesome awesome part....
the bear part was very nice.....
this ff ended 😭

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