My first FF: we are one happy family[Part14=Pg 24] - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
nice part
wat happen to chahat?where is she?
update soon......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
hey awesome update
i read all the parts they are great
i wonder what happened to chahat
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
thanks you for sending out sneha with a good name. we all hated Sneha presence in the serial but you gave a nice picture to her character. luvd it. wonderful.
chahat is a cute girl she understood the situation. those words were very nice.
Where is Chahat gone now? hope she is fine.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
PART 5

They checked almost all the rooms but there were no sign of Chahath. And soon after that everyone started looking for Chahath. When everyone was standing in the hall, they heard Chahath calling Heer from the kitchen. Prem reached kitchen first and he was stunned to see what he was seeing.

Everyone looked inside the kitchen to see why Prem is so horrified. As everyone saw inside the kitchen, they felt the same. Heer felt like she is going to get faint so she held kuldi hand and Meher supported her to stand.

Inside the kitchen, Chahath was standing with a knife. Prem slowly moved closer to Chahath asking to give the knife to him. But instead she warned everyone not come near her. "Don't come close to me. Otherwise I will hit…" Prem cut in and said "Chahath, please give me the knife. Be like a good girl."

Suddenly Heer got fainted. Prem ran to Heer. Chahath threw the knife and came to Heer; she started to call her mother. "Mummy, Wake up! Please… I was only acting. Please…" then she saw Heer opening her eyes. She hugged Heer tightly and said, "I was just acting mummy." "And to stop your drama, I also acted of fainting." Heer winked at Chahath and replied with a cute smile.
"Oh I see, so this is what happening! And here I was like getting heart attacks." Prem said still with a worried face. "That's why I say you are very unintelligent" said Heer and Chahath added "be like us" and everyone laughed. "But what were you doing here?" asked Kuldi. "Good question" and she continued. I was getting hungry, and mummy and daddy was busy packing Sneha's stuffs so I dun wanted to disturb them." Heer made a cute face. "Then I came here and saw no one here. After that I started looking for Ramu kaka and he was in the garden. I wanted to eat sandwich but there was no bread. He went out to market buy it. After that when I was trying to cut an apple I heard you people calling me! So I thought of doing something like that." Chahath hugged Heer and said, "but mummy is so brilliant" and everyone laughed.

Soon everyone went for their rooms and Ramu kaka was soon there. Heer started making sandwiches and Prem went out with Chahath.

And when Heer was feeding Chahath, Mr. and Mrs. Basu came to take Sneha's stuffs and everyone said bye to her and luckily there was no tear in Chahath's eyes.

After almost an hour later Prem was sitting with Chahath in his bedroom watching cartoon. Chahath was lying on Prem's lap and he was caressing her hairs. Heer was in the kitchen helping Kuldi and Maya to make dinner.

It was after the dinner, Prem was doing something in his laptop while Heer was with Baoji. In Baoji room Heer was applying Baam in his forehead as he was having headache. He was missing Gayatri so badly that his eyes were wet. Heer asked him to call Gayatri but he refused to call. In addition to it, Baoji said Heer never talk about Gayatri to Prem as it will only give pains to Prem. Heer left him when she felt like he was wanting to be alone.

In their bed room, Prem was still doing his work and Chahath was still sleeping. So Heer got ready to sleep and sat next to Prem and hugged his hand. Prem closed his laptop and then Heer asked him about work. Prem saw the moon and he walked up to the window with Heer and stood there hugging her from back and rested his chin on Heer's shoulder.

After sometime, Prem made Heer face to him. He slowly made his Heer's face closer to his. He brushed his nose against hers. In need, he rubbed his lips touching hers and he tried to capture her lips.

But suddenly they heard Chahath crying calling "Mummy" and Heer ran to Chahath so did Prem. As soon as Heer sat next to Chahath she quickly hugged Heer and Heer hugged her back. Heer was in tears because of the tears coming from her angel's eyes. Prem was watching them sadly. "Chahath, Now mamma is with you. Stop crying! Be like a good girl." Heer wiped Chahath's tears. Prem sat next to Chahath and gave a tight hug and said, "We are with you! Now stop crying!" Then he asked Heer to bring something to eat as Chahath hasn't eaten anything from afternoon. Chahath refused to eat; however Heer went down to kitchen to get something to eat. When she returned to room with milk and some fruits, Prem was standing at the window with Chahath showing and telling her about the moon. As soon as Heer called Prem to bring Chahath Prem came with her. He sat in the couch next to Heer and made Chahath to sit in his lap. Prem started feeding Chahath thus Heer went to Chahath's room to get her night dress.

As she was done, Heer gave Prem the night dress and went to kitchen. While Heer returned back to room Chahath was sitting in the couch with Prem's laptop and Prem was sitting with her. "What is she doing?" asked Heer in a concern voice and Prem replied "playing game. Heer! Just now she woke up! She slept for almost six or seven hours. Now she won't be feeling like sleep. Let her play. I will sit with her and you go and sleep." Chahath didn't like the idea of Prem waking up to keep an eye on her, so she asked Prem to sleep. So Prem decided to sleep on the couch with Chahath. Heer locked their bed room and told Chahath try to sleep soon.

She played games for about three hours and finally she started getting sleepy. Therefore she closed the laptop, took Prem's hand along with lied in his hand. After that she hugged tightly in Prem's tummy and from her other hand she started playing his hair and soon after that she was asleep.
About 3 am Prem was feeling uneasy so he woke up and saw Chahath sleeping. So he took Chahath in the bed and with hugging her again he went to sleep.

In the morning, Heer wakeup little early and found Chahath sleeping next to her. She smiled seeing how father and daughter were hugging each other. She placed her face on Chahath's and with her right hand she hugged Prem. Quickly she placed a kiss on both of them and got off from bed.

As soon as Heer came out from bathroom she got ready and went down stairs to make morning tea. Heer came with the trace and kept it on the table and sat next to him. She whispered his name in his ears, but he ignored Heer. And then she placed a kiss on Prem's cheek and called out his name little louder. This time he muttered something. Heer replied saying "I don't get it, say it little louder" then Prem faced to Heer and brought her closer. He wanted to capture Heer's lips but before he could do that he felt a kiss on his cheek!


so here is the update... plsssss guysss dont forget to click the like button if u like it. and plsssssssssss comment.... thankyou
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
nice one
heer the intelligent of all 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
awwww...tat was so cute.....
mother like daughter....they sure know how to shock ppl.....
so sneha is out of da house wid her respective parents and now.....abt gay3..hope she understand soon and come back wid clear mind.........
this was mind blowing....update soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
PART 6

Quickly Heer freed herself from Prem seeing Chahath giggling at them with half of her eyes opening. Prem brought Chahath in between he and Heer and they three shared a cute hug. Suddenly Prem jumped up and then said, "you both are forgetting something" that made Heer and Chahath steal a glance. Prem was just looking to the corner of his room with big smile on his face. That gave Mother and Daughter an important time to talk with eyes. They just ignored what he was telling and Chahath started talking about her life without Sneha. Prem's mood got off seeing how Chahath and Heer ignoring him. But then he joined Heer to calm and give Chahath their full support to make new friends. They spend all most fifteen minutes listening to their angel's cute takings. Then Heer went Chahath's room and got her towel and her stuff to get ready to school.

"Prem, have your tea." Heer made the order. "Chahath go and take a shower, big girl" said Heer cuddling Chahath. While Heer was going with Chahath Heer heard Prem calling her. "What happened?" she asked and Prem replied, "Umm, I will make Chahath ready to school. You go and make the breakfast!" Chahath was really excited but Heer was shocked hearing that. "Why are you making that face? Just let me try. Please, Heer!" Heer argued, "But Prem! Not today! We have to get ready fast." This time Chahath spoke. "Come on mummy!" but before Chahath could say anything further Heer cut in, "You faked me the other day saying you got ready yourself." And then she turned to Prem and said "But Maya got her ready, am I right Mr. Juneja?"

"Busted" said Prem and Chahath at a time. "Yes!" said Heer and looked at Chahath, she quickly walked towards the washroom. Again Prem stopped Heer. And this time Heer agreed. "If you want to help me, then okay! But I warn you, if you take so much time to make her ready den I will get mad!" Prem gave Heer a side hug and said "you see, from today on wards you will ask me to get her ready to school every day" and Heer hit Prem's chest. She took Prem's pant and his shirt and kept it in the bed next to Chahath's uniform stuffs. Prem was watching her keeping a big smile on his face which made Heer to smile. As soon as Heer left the room, Prem started knocking in the washroom door asking Chahath to come out fast. Soon Chahath was out and Prem in structured to wear the uniform. "Papa will be right back" said Prem and went inside the washroom.

In the room, Chahath was struggling to wear the Uniform. She started calling Prem for help. When Prem came out of washroom wearing his towel, he couldn't help smiling when seeing Chahath. "Papa, Chahath doesn't know to wear the uniform. It's difficult for me to put my hands in. and you're…" Prem cut in said "Come on Chahath! Sorry! Give me! I will teach you how to wear it." Prem made Chahath wear the uniform and when she was done, he asked her to wait while he wears his stuffs.

Chahath was sitting in the bed when he came out from the washroom. Come here with your jacket and tie. Chahath obeyed Prem and soon she was standing next to Prem with the stuffs. While Prem was trying to tie the knot of her tie Chahath was playing Prem's mobile phone and Prem was really getting disturbed. So at last he said, "Your mom is wrong. You're much difficult to make ready than me." Chahath replied "yes! I have to" then Prem asked "why?" Chahath replied saying, because I am the one and only Chahath! I am Mamma's daughter! So…" subsequently Prem had the flash back of he and Chahath's first meeting. It made him smile and then he said in a cute "um mamma's daughter" and then he started helping her wear the socks, after that he helped his angel to wear the shoes.

Chahath was almost ready, the only thing left was combing her hair. Prem was trying to do it and Chahath was making fun of his father being so helpless. "Making fun of papa" asked Prem with a puppy face then Chahath smiled and said "no! Making fun of your work!" that's were Prem saw Meher crossing their room. He called off "Meher! Come over here!" As soon as Meher entered the room Prem locked the door along with requested to comb Chahath's hairs. Then Prem made Meher to keep this as a secret from Heer. Meher promised and did the combing thing. Prem was really pleased, while Meher was above to open the door they heard Heer shouting and banging on the door.

They had no idea what to do suddenly Meher gave the idea of hiding in the washroom so Prem and Chahath supported the idea. As soon as Meher was in, Prem opened the door and saw a very angry Heer standing in the door. "What took so long you to open the door?" asked Heer and then Prem brought Chahath in front of her and said, "Look, I have made her ready." Heer was so surprised to see Chahath's hair combing nicely. "You did this?" Heer asked and Prem said, "Who else will do?" and then Heer went inside the room. "Where are you going?" Prem asked giving Chahath a concerned look. "Washroom." Heer replied and then Chahath spoke, "mummy! I am very hungry! Can I have my breakfast now?" "Yeah Heer, she must be really hungry" supported Prem. Heer looked at them and said, "Prem! You go down with Chahath, Breakfast is ready. Meher will be there…" then Prem cut in said, "no Heer, there is no Meher…" and then he paused along with, he touched his pocket and tried to get out from the talk. Then he said "My mobile, I think it's ringing" Heer rolled her eyes and suddenly her eyes caught Prem's Mobile phone on the table and she pointed there. "I don't understand what's wrong with you both! Now Chahath, you go with papa down stairs. I will be back soon" ordering this, she again walked up to washroom. Over again Prem called Heer and when she turned to look at him, she heard a noise from toilet. Chahath and Prem covered their ears when she rushed to there. She called off to them from her shoulder, "I am sure, you people have done something there." And then Prem and Chahath stared at each and they had a horrified look in their face.

Heer was shocked to see Meher trying to take the things on the washroom floor. "What are you doing here?" and Meher replied "di, woh… woh… no water coming from our… bathroom… okay I am leaving" and Meher came out from toilet. Then she looked at them, without saying a thing she went off. Heer saw Chahath covering her mouth trying not to make a sound. Then she realized that Prem was trying to leave the room. At that time she called Prem, and he stopped without turning. "Come over here" Heer ordered and Prem came shaking his body.

When Prem stood closer to Heer, she took Prem's ears and said, "cheating, huh?" Then Chahath burst out laughing, "Poor papa." And then Prem said, "Heer what are you doing to me in front of my daughter?" Heer replied, "Don't you know what I am doing?" Prem replied back in a baby voice, "Don't insult me in front of my daughter." Heer smirked and repeated the word "insult". Chahath was watching her parents with a big smile on her face, seeing this Prem winked at Heer. And Heer asked "why are winking at me now?" Prem smiled playfully and said "I won!" and Heer has no idea what he was trying to say then she let go off his ears. By the time Chahath has left the room. "I always want to see my Chahath smiling and My Heer enjoying my each and every movement. See how you people are enjoying making me a cartoon" saying this Prem ran off and Heer shacked her head thinking "this Prem will never change."

In the hall Prem was waiting for every one wishing him on his birth day and nobody did it. So he was really upset thinking that everyone in the house has forgotten his birth day as no one has celebrated his birth day. He was completely lost in the thoughts when Heer was feeding Chahath. And everyone was busy having their breakfast but no one seems they have noticed the very upset Prem. atlas Meher did. She called Prem then he sat in the chair and looked at Heer who was still busy feeding Chahath and she seems lost in Chahath's world. He smiled himself and thought, she must have forgotten my birthday. But he really wanted to celebrate his birthday with Chahath and Heer as this is the first time they are together for his birth day.


hey guyss! i hope u will like this part... njy and dont forget to press the like button as well as do comment.... thank you for ur support!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
prem trying to get chahat ready was😆😆😆
poor prem , none remember his b'day.
continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
tats really cute little family scene...
m sure surprise is waiting for prem on his bday
no one can forget his bday....
luv meher helping her jiju....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
Thanks for the pm...
the update was really sweet
loved the scenes
Prem trying to get chahat ready was hilarious
I think daddy needs a bit more training..
Thnks.. continue...

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