My first FF: we are one happy family[Part14=Pg 24] - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome update
thanks for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
very cuteeeeeeeee part!!!!!
prem getting chahat ready for school and meher helping was very sweet....😆
hope heer and chahat are planning a surprise for prem's birthday....
continue sooooooooon!
and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
it was a wonderful update
it is very cute scenet between Prem and Chahat.
none remembered Prem birhtday. very sad.
may be big surprise waiting for him
I have a request to KDM creatives. they can use this to create KDM sequeal. if the writer permits.
really really wonderful update.👏 its lovely. continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
HEY IT WAS AWESOME.....😊 NOW I REALLY MISS PREMEER ON MY TV...PLZ U DO CONTINUE....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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atlast we r getting prem's bday 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
awesome update
hope so heer and chahat are planning a surprise for prem's birthday
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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all the updates were awesome
thanks for sending sneha to her parents
in this update all the scence were so cute i loved it a lot
we hav never seen prem's b'day in the serial so this b'day shd be a grand one
for the past few updates u didnt send the pm so pls send pm regularly
and thanks for this pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ohh sowi Rishi87 that i missed sending you PMs. Insha Allah I will try my level best to update soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great part
lol i think there is a surprise party cumin up...
do continue soon
xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Part 7

When Chahath was done Heer went to get Prem's lunch box from the kitchen. To his shock, Heer is not going to drop Chahath to school with him. It made him feel worse so he didn't say anything and went straightly to the main door. Seeing this, Baoji glanced at him and smirked. And then kulraj whispered in his ears, "our poor Prem! Have you seen his face when he was having the breakfast…?" Baoji nodded and said Heer to go and give the lunch box to Prem; otherwise he might not eat anything. Everyone giggled and Heer went out.

Prem was getting in to the car when He saw Heer coming with lunch box. He stood there trying to show off that he was doing something in his cell phone. "Prem, here is your lunch box" Prem took it from Heer without even looking to her. Then he tried to get in to the car, but Heer stopped him and said "what's wrong with you today?" and Prem got really mad but he just said "nothing!" "Then why are you keeping your tie without knotting it in your lapel, Prem?" he felt like scolding at Heer and then he though he has no reason to do that! However then he said, "I forgot!" and he tried to do it, but Heer stopped him and she started doing it.

She on purpose came closer to him, touching her chest against his chest. But he acted like nothing bothers him and the phone is much important. She tried a lot to get Prem's romantic mood back but she was unsuccessful this time. After she was done she hugged him tightly. But what he did was hugged her back and broke the hug soon and said bye. She grinned on the air and then waved Chahath bye and soon they were off from her sight.

Inside the car Chahath was sitting silently watching outside. Suddenly she called Prem, "Papa, why are you so silent?" Prem gave a fake smile and said, "You people are making me to say nothing, so I better say nothing, what you say?" Chahath rolled her eyes and said, "I asked you a question, but your answer was like a riddle" Prem didn't say anything. Then again Chahath started, "papa, when your angry, you look so cute not like mummy" Prem replied "not funny" then this time Chahath sounded really concerned, and asked "why you are having such a bad mood now? You were really happy today, I mean in the very evening…" then Prem said, "It's because your mother can't remember things!" and then Chahath tried not to let Prem say it's his birth day so she said, "how can you say this. She reminds us to do all the work. If not we are nothing. Do u agree with me or not, dad?" then Prem said "I agree you" then Chahath started telling how Heer used to remind to do this and that and Prem said nothing but used to give a look to make Chahath feel that he is listening.
When finally they arrived to school, Chahath came out from the car soon and didn't give Prem time to speak her, she kissed on his cheeks and waved bye. Then his cell phone started vibrating and there was a message from Harman. He opened it and the message was to inform Prem that Harman is not feeling well so he is not coming to the office. Prem felt like throwing the phone then he stood there for a while and drove off to office.

In the Juneja mansion, Heer was going up stairs she heard Harman calling her name. Then she turned and saw Harman with group of people. She understood that those are the people he has hired to decorate the house. She quickly thanked him and entered the house. Then she started in structuring those guys how exactly she wants the place to look like. It was a family and close friends based party, as Prem does not like big parties.

"Listen! Everyone!" said Lalit when finally there was no sign of Prem. "it's our turn to make Prem feel that he is the most wanted person in the house. I have banned to celebrate his birthdays the six years in this house. But today, I want this surprise party to be a grant one!" he was in tears. And then Heer took his hand and assured him that his wish will be fulfilled.

There came Maya and asked, "If Prem comes to home before we are done" then Harman said, "Don't worry! I have made a fake file for our last contract. And I have made some mistakes in it. So bahyya will definitely work on it without any break." Everyone giggled and Heer said, "Prem will be here with Geet. And Harman, make sure they solve the problem before 5 30 pm. Because, the flight is landing at 6pm and hopefully they will be here at 7. And I will go and take Chahath from school. Today she is getting holidays from school."

It was around 12 pm, Prem was really busy working in that file, suddenly his cell phone started ringing and seeing the name flashing on the Phone, Prem smiled and thought she must have remembered abou his birthday. but from the other end he heard his Heer saying, "listen Prem, I am going to take Chahath from school." instead of whising him. And without giving any chance for Prem to say anything again he heard Heer saying, "Do you remember Chahath is getting two weeks holiday?" Prem replied in an angry tone, "Yes I do." And Heer shot back, "Preeemmm! Why are you angry? Oki anyways, don't forget to take Geet and her husband from airport. Their arrival is 6pm." Prem's jaw dropped and he said in a shocking voice, "you didn't tell me about this" and Heer replied back "I told you, just now. Okay bye. Take your lunch on time. I love you." and without giving a chance to say anything she cut her call. Prem was left upset and angry at the same time. He leaned against the chair and closed his eyes and started thinking something.

Heer was in a shopping mall with Chahath getting gift for Prem. "what are you buying to papa?" asked Heer and Chahath replied giving a big smile on her cute face. "A gift basket" Heer chuckled and then Chahath replied, "seriously mummy! Dad loves eating. And his favorite is chocolate and then I will get some soft and energy drinks for him. And I have make a card for him myself" Heer was in shock hearing that. Then she said, "humph, what for energy drinks?" then Chahath said, "Dad works a lot and so that." Heer made a cute face and said, "I wonder who will have the chocolates, you or dad" and both laughed. "And mom, what are you buying for him?" then she hissed something in Chahath's ears along with Chahath cried jumping "wow Mummy! Dad will love it sooo much." Then Heer replied saying, "not more than us."

Finally when it was 4 30pm, Prem's assistant got the real file as Harman has asked him to do. He was gone to insane when he came to know that the file he was working on was a wrong file and then he wanted to know who did that. But the assistant really covered up nicely saying it was the other file and they forgot about the new file made by Harman and just they called Harman asking for details and that's where they got to know about this file. In anger he went out from office and without saying any word. Then the assistant called Harman and informed about what has happened in the office and Prem has left the office.

Everyone in the house panicked, knowing Prem has left the office in anger. There was dead silent in the house, and then Heer muttered "Prem might come home before going to the airport as there is still time to 6." Then she took her phone to call Prem but Baoji told her not to as Prem is already upset of Heer not wishing on his birthday, so Baoji offered to call Prem so he might take the phone. But there was no luck, Prem was not answering to any of his call and then when Heer tried, his cell was switched off.


here is the update. i hope u like it. i f you like it pls do let me knw by pressing the like bttn and do comment here, it encourage me to update soooooon. 😃

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