Premeer FF:: Yaadein ::Part Nine June 15 - Page 23

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Posted: 15 years ago
hi just read this FF of yours. Truly nice. Please add me to your PM list.
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely!
i have just read all the parts!......all of them were mindblowing!=)
prem and heer understands each other sooo well!
continue soon!
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hey kali awesome update.......loved love bhaiya n his love for heer......really gr8.......cant wait to read whts in heers mind.....do update soon
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hey first all a big sorry for not commenting for long time was kinda busy n then underwent an operation so cudnt bcoz of that............the story is gng a fantastic way
loved every bit of it
hey i am not sure whether i will be able to comment regularly but when ever i can i will
plz pm when u update next
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masin: All the very best for your exams Samra Ji.......and get back to be with a flattering comment! Love ya!
Thanks a lot to everyone for reading and commening. It truly means a lot to me!
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I now that I took a long time to update this one but I try my best. As school is coming to an end for me this week, I will try my level best to post more frequently. Yaadein is now going to move into a total Premeer direction so I suggest that you fasten your seat belts and get ready for a journey full of faith, honesty, trust, passion, sacrifice, obedience, and the utmost strength of love.......
Heer knew that he at least deserved an explanation from her about her behavior. From the time she had seen him, she had acted as if he meant nothing to her. But only God knew how much she had always loved him.

From the day she became friends with him, it was love that they both shared. But when he left for Canada, Heer had built up this certain fear inside her that he might change. What scared her even more was that when she met him a couple of days ago, he turned out to be exactly the way he had always been.

Heer couldn't understand if he was just showing off or not. But his eyes said it all to her. His eyes truly reflected her Prem, and now was the fact to accept her defeat in front of the man she had loved, still loved, and would forever love'..

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The moment he felt her small fingers grip his wrist, a sudden flutter engulfed inside his heart. The mire contact of her soft skin on his made him feel as if he was the dry land and he was the water that was seeping through him. But the difference was that he was land and she wasn't water, it was the feeling of her that was seeping into his nerves and his cells all throughout his body.

Hiding the pathetic looking grin on his face, Prem turned around and looked at her. Beautiful as always! He didn't know how anyone had the control to stay away from such an angel.

But noticing her nervous eyes, he gave her a reassuring grin that conveyed to her that it was okay to share anything she had in mind with him.

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All she needed was that smile to encourage what she had to say to him. And now was the time, before she lost him forever. She had to gets it out.

"Woh' mujhe'.mai'.tumse kuch..baat-" Heer had started off. But Gayatri's call for Prem made her stop midway. She lost the chance of talking to him.

Knowing that it wouldn't look right if they both steped out of the room together into the place full of guests, Heer decided to put aside the talk for now.

"Woh Choti Maa tumhe bula rahi hai." Heer said with a smile.

"Maine suna. Par tum kuch kehne wali thi naa. Kaho?" Prem asked curiously yet calmly.

"Hum baad me baat karenge. Tum jao'" Heer said, slightly pushing him towards the door.

"Lekin Heer-" Prem was about to protest but stopped when he saw the pleading look she gave him. Now how was he supposed to override that look? Giving her a smile, he headed to see where Gayatri was.

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Heer watched him walk away. He was so different from all the people she has met so far. His innocence pours out of his eyes. His smile makes her heart flutter. His gaze upon her makes her shiver and blush.

She watched him as he listened to Gayatri's instructions to mingle around with the guests and help around in managing the caterers and waiters so that the guests are attended well.

She smiled seeing him work sincerely and willingly. But a sudden tap on the shoulder made her turn her attention to young and handsome Mr. Preet Juneja.

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For the few seconds, he had watched Heer di simply stare at his brother in admiration. And he wasn't surprised that this was going to happen one day. After all, Prem was the first person who had told him about his love for Heer. And it was great to see that his brother's love was being returned by the best choice possible.

He gave Heer his sparkling smile when she looked at him. Putting his arm on her shoulder and coming close to her ear, he whispered something.

"Aab lagta hai ke pyar ka jadoo dono taraf se chal raha hai. Kyu Heer'..bhabhi'" Preet grinned upon saying this to her.

But one glare from Heer got him to straighten up and erase the idiotic smile from his face.

Heer grabbed is ear and gave it a slight twist.

"Aab aap please mujhe tang karna bhand karenge?" Heer asked a whining Preet whose ear was bring pulled for his mistake.

"Accha sorry'.sorry'.mai toh bas mazak kar raha tha'seriously'" Preet whined and Heer smiled while letting go.

Both of them smiled and switched their attention to their favorite person, Prem.

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Heer watched him serve a few guests and her heart became full on joy and pride. This guy was ready to do anything that would bring a smile onto someone's face.

"Woh aap se bahot pyar karte hai Didi'" Preet whispered as he glanced at his elder brother.

Heer looked at Preet's face as she sensed the sadness in his voice. Little Preet looked at her and smiled though his eyes were filled with slight traces of tears.

"Aap janti hai. PB hamesha wahi karte hai joh Bade Papa, Dad aur Maa unhe kehti hai. Kabhi unki baat nahi talte. Lekin maine dekha hai ke jab unhe kuch pasand nahi atta aur unhe woh karma padta hai, phir bhi who karte hai. Apni khushi sab ke saath baat te hai aur sara dukh apne dil me chupa lete hai." Preet smiled at Heer through his tears.

Heer didn't know how to react. As a child she had seen little Prem caring side, but she never imagined that there was such a depth in his love and affection. What Preet told her really touched her heart and before she knew it, tears made their way into her eyes as well.

Preet looked at Heer and felt as if he needed to let what he wanted to say, out.

"Aap unka dil mat todna'" Preet whispered innocently and lowered his eyes.

Heer smiled at his cuteness. She admired the love that he felt for his brother. Taking a hold on his hand, she promised her loving little bro.

"Nahi todungi'..kabhi nahi todungi'" Heer smiled and wiped his tears away. She saw his face light up in happiness and he engulfed her into a tight hug. Even though Preet was a few inches taller then her, he sill had a soft heart of a 15 year-old boy who loved his brother.

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From the corner of his eyes, he had seen the bond that had formed between his brother and the girl he loved to death. While he pretended to listen to the stories that Meher was blabbing about, he eyes only stayed on her. There was something different about her today.

She looked rather calm, relaxed, yet still a little sad about something. Her eyes weren't flickering the way they always were. There was something that she was holding back from. A thought came to him saying that he might have done something to upset her. And that's why he decided to talk to her when they got the time alone to themselves.

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The time had come only when everyone had left from the Sangeet Party and headed for their own rooms. Prem was in Heer's room, standing in front of the mirror. Preet had already dozed off on the bed after the party ended, tired from all the dancing and rejoicing.

But Prem couldn't concentrate right now. He was staring at himself in the mirror, trying to think of ways by which he can talk to Heer. Glancing at the clock, he noticed that it was already 1:15 am. He took off his shawl and the sherwani and changed into a comfortable pair of sweatpants and t-shirt. Before hitting the bed himself, he decided to get a drink of water to satisfy his dry throat.

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It was as if the unexpected was bound to happen. As he was drinking his water, he nearly spit it out at the site of her.

There she was, in her elegant form, sitting on the swing in the backyard. After carefully drinking the water and placing the glass away, he hesitantly made his way into the yard, through the back kitchen door.

As quietly as possible, he sneaked out of the house. But one look at her graceful form and he was a dead man for sure. He instantly stopped in his tracks when he saw her. She still hadn't changed from her beautiful lehenga/choli. But her wrists were empty and all her jewelry was off. Her once open hair was now tied into a high ponytail and she had her glittering dupatta draped around her as if to shield her from the late night chills.

The swing was moving by the force of the wind and she had her feet pulled up close to her body, hugging them tightly.

His eyes burned like fire as he examined her soft, creamy skin under the blue moonlight. Her face was the only thing that his eyes demanded to look at. Her head rested softly on her knees, her eyes were slightly closed, her bangs fiddled with her face, and a light frown was resting on her lips. She looked at peace but he somehow felt the thing that was eating up her thoughts. He felt as if she was scared of something, of losing something. And yet, he didn't know how to console her.

His steps slowly approached her in the attempt to tell her that it was late and she was still outside. But he didn't know how she would react. He watched her closely upon nearing her and his heart just let out a leap. How can a 16-year-old girl look so beautiful and graceful? How can she erupt so many feelings inside him and turn him into a crazy lover?

He turned his face away from her so as to not jinx her innocent beauty. As he fought an inner battle to wake her up or not, he felt her soft finger entwine his wrist. He instantly looked at her and found a slightly-smiling Heer, patting on the place next to her. Smiling at her invitation to sit besides him, he decided to lighten her mood.

"Aggar mai behtunga toh yeh toot toh nahi jayega?" Prem whispered to her teasingly.

This instantly made her smile and the sparkle in her eyes returned.

"Nahi tootega'.tum betho'" Heer whispered back rather softly. Smirking at her, he took the seat.

For a few minutes, it was complete silence. But it was Heer who broke the ice. She straightened up and put her feet on the ground.

"I'm sorry." She simply said in a subtle tone. Prem looked at her and didn't know why she was feeling sorry.

"Tum jaante ho, jab maine tumhe dekha tha, tab se mai tumhe samaj hi nahi payi hu." She said and she looked at him. Prem smiled at her.

"Tum bilcul waise hi nikle jaise maine socha tha. Ekdum shant, well-behaved, respectful, and caring. Lekin hamesha daar lagta tha ke tum sach me aisa ho ya phir koi dikhawa kar rahe ho. Pata nahi kyu mai asia sochne lagi? Lekin mera dil hamesha kehta tha ke tum kabhi badal nahi sakte." Heer grinned at a chuckling Prem who found it funny that she thought he was acting.

"Toh aab kya lagta hai tumhe. Natak kar raha hu, ke sach me aisa hi hu?" Prem asked cheekily.

Heer smiled at him and answered.

"Tum bahot ache ho." Heer said in a tone full of love for him.

"Woh toh mai jaanta hi hu. Lekin woh kya haina, aapko samajne mai kuch zyada hi waqt lagta hai." Prem chuckled as he saw Heer gape.

Heer playfully hit his shoulder.

"Achha sorry'sorry." Prem said to her. And the very next moment, they both fell into a fit of laughter.

"Jab sila ho hi gayi hai toh phir mujhse dosti karogi?" Prem held out his hand to her. And without wasting a moment, she willing it placed her hand in his.

The mire touch of the hands was enough for the fluttering feeling to come again and excite the heart. Prem noticed the awkwardness she felt and left her hand gently.

"Waise bahot raat ho chuki hai. Tum so jao." Prem said as he got up. Heer smiled and they both headed to their own rooms. After saying goodnight to each other, they felt as if a huge burden had been taken off their hearts.

Prem had gained her trust and Heer had let out her thoughts. Friendship had now bounded them together in the world while the bond of love between them strengthened.

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The next day, the evening had been a hasty one. The Mann farmhouse was a complete chaos with the mehndi preparations that were to be held at night. Early next morning, Kulraj was to get married to Kiran Bakshi and leave the household. Kulraj's last full day was to be made into a memorable one.

All the ladies had settled themselves in the spacious backyard that was decorated for the Mehndi function for the evening. Prem had taken the responsibility for getting all the decorations done for the tent that was built up outside. Balraj had been overwhelmed with his proposal. Balraj had watched Prem put up the drapes and drill down the tent along with the workers himself. His smile found no bound to knowing that his best friend had grown up to be such a ideal human being for everyone. At an age when he expected Prem to care less about any of this, Prem had proven him 101% wrong. He was what he had always been. The BEST!

As Balraj walked into his yard along with Lalit and Balwant, his tears found their way out of his eyes. The decorations were beautiful and so well thought of. The vibrant orange and green draperies/decorations gave of a radiant shade as their colors reflected off from the evening sunlight. The royal seating arrangements caught Balraj's attention as he walked around the inside of the tent. Balraj gave a grateful smile to both Balwant and Lalit who smiled back in return. This function was going to be a memorable one.

The Mehndi Function tent ( Must see decorations)

http://maharaniweddings.typepad.com/.a/6a010536f63a6d970b011278fb477b28a4-800wi

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By 6:30 in the evening, all the guests and relatives had arrived and the mehndi function was on the start. Kulraj was seated in the middle of all the ladies with Gayatri doing mehndi on her one hand and Sujata (her mother-in-law) doing the mehndi on her other hand.

Maya, Shabnam, and Sanjana were busying getting their mehndi done along with Meher. They were sitting al around a blushing Kulraj.

The men were having their own little party inside the house with light drinks and cocktails. Waiters were buzzing here and there with soft drinks, juices, and fresh hot samosas and kachoris. The atmosphere was loud, pleasant, and very joyful.

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Prem had headed for a relaxing shower after he had finished with all the arrangements. As Balraj didn't have a son of his own to do these rituals, Gayatri had ordered Prem to do everything that she would have him do if Kulraj was her own daughter and Prem was her brother.

Knowing Prem's nature, her order was accepted even before she thought about telling him. He just understood everything so well that one didn't need to tell him what was right to do and what wasn't.

After taking a relaxing shower for 15-20 minutes, Prem came out of the bathroom with his pair of jeans on and a towel that was wiping off his wet torso and his silky hair. But yet once again, he managed to bump into her. Another awkward moment was on the way.

So how was it? Did you guys like the Premeer interaction. Just stay tuned for more of Premeer Mania. And don't forget to leave me those wonderful comments that always make me smile. I want long ones too.😆JK! Anyways, thanks for reading.

p.s. Samraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa........make sure you comment on this one first!😃 All the best foryour exams once again!! Miss you!

~Kali~

Edited by -Kali- - 15 years ago
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oh my!!! i had to come out for this one!! i'll try to make it long....but no promises cuz i really should be studying right now 😛
okay so the ending got me sooooo maaaaddddd!!!!!!!!!! seriously di!!!!! couldn't u have simply written a line or two more...ya phir ek precap! but no! how am i supposed to study now if im gonna keep thinking about how prem and heer's awkward moment went...and how he must've looked in his dashing after shower look and what heer was wearing, what heer thought, what they talked about, and if preet came in the way with his mischief to make things worst!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳😆 ab kya!?
anyway.....this was once again a fab update! oh snap....wait.....i gtg turn the stove off for mom! brb!
**edited**
sorry about that! okay so back to the update! yes it was fabbbb!!!!!! super duper fabb!!!!!!! i loveddd it when prem said "maine suna, par tum kuch keh rahi thi, bolo" (or im sure it was something along those lines!) but the "maine suna" part was just soooooooooo hoooootttttt!!!!!! okay i know im really weird like that.....but that phrase was just sooooooo ssexxxxaaaayyyy!!!!!!!! 😳😆
hmmm.....and then mr. preet juneja!!! ufffff!!!!!! i just fell in love with this guy all over again.......seriously! seeing him in zara nachke dikha makes me go crazy as it is...and now even in this ff he was given the limelight! 😃 he truly is such a sweet heart! and the bonding between him and heer was soooooooo cuuteeeeeee!!!!!! i have feeling he might run to his PB to tell him tht heer bhabhi loves him too!!!!! but then i think that might be too typical.....cuz then prem would know, heer's confession might be lame, and then she's just blush...and blah blah.......altho it would be hilarious to see prem going crazy after hearing that news and heer chasing preet ready to murder him! what a sight! 😛 but then again......who am i kidding! im sure heer and prem already know that both of them love each other....pshhtttt! 😆
oh oh.....there was this one part....ughghg.......i had it in my head and now its gone.....lemme think.....ughgh!!!!! its not coming back!! hmph!!!
anyway.....about their post-midnight backyard convo! that was very sweet too! (okay i think that its high time i open up a dictionary to look for different words to describe ur ff! sorry bout the repetitive vocab! LOL) especially when prem said tht the swing might break if he sits on it! i actually laughed like crazzyy on that one! such small jokes always crack me up !!!!!!!!! 😃😆😆 i'm glad that their confusion or w/e it was it finally out of the way!
oh oh btw....i don't really like the sound of balwants name! i have a feeling that he'll be a total jerk like yaadein (i forgot what the guy in yaadein was called....the bade bhaisahab dude!) honestly.....if this balwant idiot turns out to be an issue for premeer......just wait and watch....i'll whip his bum with the same towel that prem was using on his droolicious torso and hair! wait no....that towel is too precious.....but don't worry....i'll still find a way to whip his bum off into the pacific ocean, so the big fishies can gobble him up for dinner! 😃😉....but of course....if he's a good guy....then no worries.....i'll give him a tight hug....and that's about it.....i rather save the hugs from prem, preet and heer 😃😆
and the tent decor!!!!!!! btw we better get to see pics of premeer's outfits for the mehndi! but yes......the tent was truly a must see!!!! i would've seen it regardless......but man that was just soooooo elegant! where do u get these things from! truly amazing di! 👏👏
and awwwwww.......kulraj's last day at her mayka! 😭 i remember when it was my sister's last day at her house before her wedding.....well.....its ironic cuz she's coming today and she's gonna stay for a few days......so tht wasn't really her last day! 😆 but still.....we were all super sad.....and im surprised the adults hid it soo well.....wel actually all of us did! cuz we were sooo anxious for the wedding day itself and then there was soo much hype in all the dancing, singing, and wedding masti!! so good luck to kulraj, i'm sure kiran will keep her happy (and now i sound like a pathetic marriage councellor!)
oh oh....that word reminds me!!!!! i think that's what i was forgetting before! I LOVED how u descriped prem and preet's grins! LMAO!!!! i forgot who had which one......but i think prem had the "pathetic grin" and preet had the "idiotic smile!!" toooooooo cutee!!!!!! just wanna pull their cheeks sooooo hardd!!!!! 😳
alright......i think that's all i have to say for now.......which is surprising cuz i wanted to blab a lot more....par kya karein...too much school stress! well not really actually.....i only have like one full exam and a french five minute oral exam.....the rest are just summatives which are worth 10-15 % of our term mark...so i have a lot of those this semester! but there's also full french exam....on wed. and thurs. but tht's in class...so i guess that makes it less painful! 😕 i'm soo gladd tht school's ending soon tho! cuz so is urs...and so many of my other friends on this forum are also awaiting the summer.....it'll be soooo relaxing and then i can finally catch up with everyone.....something that i seriously need to do!
oh and please......can u pleassee send me a pm.....wait no....u said u also have some last school things left right! bummer! but as soon as u get a chance.....pleasee pm me and lemme know what u've been upto! 😃
lovee u loadzzzzz
miss u even moreee loadzzzzzzz!!!
take care kali di! and good luck with school!
ur Samra Ji 🤗❤️
P.S. do u plan on watching tere liye???? 😃
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oh my!!! i had to come out for this one!! i'll try to make it long....but no promises cuz i really should be studying right now 😛

okay so the ending got me sooooo maaaaddddd!!!!!!!!!! seriously di!!!!! couldn't u have simply written a line or two more...ya phir ek precap! but no! how am i supposed to study now if im gonna keep thinking about how prem and heer's awkward moment went...and how he must've looked in his dashing after shower look and what heer was wearing, what heer thought, what they talked about, and if preet came in the way with his mischief to make things worst!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳😆 ab kya!?
anyway.....this was once again a fab update! oh snap....wait.....i gtg turn the stove off for mom! brb!

I order you to study right now and get your butt off the chair to rush and turn off the stove. Verma teri mom ka to nahi patta lekin mai tujhe zabardast datungi.
Aur tu baar baar I-F pe kyu aa jaati hai. Padhaikar aur school ko acche se khatam kar verna mai update nahi kanr wali.
I want all you comments only after the last day of your school, which is what btw? I gto to know so that I can reserve my time to read your comment.
And I swear I was gonna write a precap but totally forgot to post it. Anyways, if you want the next update soon, you better study and inform me about all the A++++++'s .Okay baby. Love ya and STUDY!!!!
~Kali~
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Originally posted by: -Kali-

I order you to study right now and get your butt off the chair to rush and turn off the stove. Verma teri mom ka to nahi patta lekin mai tujhe zabardast datungi.
Aur tu baar baar I-F pe kyu aa jaati hai. Padhaikar aur school ko acche se khatam kar verna mai update nahi kanr wali.
I want all you comments only after the last day of your school, which is what btw? I gto to know so that I can reserve my time to read your comment.
And I swear I was gonna write a precap but totally forgot to post it. Anyways, if you want the next update soon, you better study and inform me about all the A++++++'s .Okay baby. Love ya and STUDY!!!!
~Kali~

oh snap! u truly are really fast! LOL! and i thot i'd get away with just quickly posting! lol! sorry i didn't see ur comment.....but regardless i had to comment.....otherwise i just forget my comments and they never come back no matter how many times i re-read the chapter! last day of school is next monday! hbu????
and acha baba jaa rahin hoon! im actually taking a break till 11 so still have half an hour to chill! 😉 and running to turn of the stove was such a waste.....it was already turned off -_- meri falthu mein exercise ho gayi!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hiiiiii kali!
as usual that was a really sweet and beautiful update.....loved the purity and innocence of everyone....
and specially the fact that this one has no negative character! till now atleast!
loved Prem's 'adarsh' character...he rocked as usual!
and premeer scenes were awesome!
continue soon....

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