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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: yasu09
phantabulous character sketch..........
waiting eagerly for the first update....

thanks dear ...........................

yeah i will update soon

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314
nice concept.............do continue soon..........do pm me when u update..........

thanks dear ..........................

glad u liked it .................................

yeah surely pm u ..................

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Ashlesha09
kewl work
looking frwrd to read more

thanks dear ...............................

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Book_Kash

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

update soon bombasting concept

really different

cant wait

update soon

pleaseeee em already in love with it

add me to the pm list

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: xoxpunkxox
update soon bombasting concept
really different

cant wait

update soon

pleaseeee em already in love with it

add me to the pm list

thanks dear ....................

glad u liked it ...................

yeah sure...................

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meeshti jain

@meeshti.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

hiiiiiiiiiii frendz............................]

THANKS for all ur lovely coments

NOTE

prem' s past is not about heer .

PART :1

Heer's point of view:

I saw a large mansion from the car window . The gate opened as the car moved inside it . The mansion has been surrounded by many guards . We walked out of the car and stepped inside the JUNEJA MANSION . 'It is the huge house and big more than ours own mansion' I thought . I snapped out of my thoughts as I heard a call of my name . 'Come inside beta ' uncle said to me . 'Be comfortable here because from today this house belongs to u too' uncle said to me . 'but uncle' I said and interupted by uncle 'Call me bauji ' as me and meher nodded .

I saw a guy coming downstairs . He come to me and meher and said ' hello i m Preet juneja - son of a chand , i mean lalit juneja , kyu dad maine sahi kaha na ' . after listening that ,uncle started chasing him and we both looked them smile . Uncle came to us with holding preet's ear and said ' beta iss nalayak ki baat par mat jana ' . saying this uncle and we both laughed . Then preet said ' chand !i mean dad ! kaan toh chorh do !'After saying this , he stepped forward to meher and said ' I want to tell u that u are going to study with me in my college , so from tommorow be ready to go with preet juneja , and he winked . He took meher with him to show her room .

Gayatri aunty come to me and said ' heer come with me ! i will show you your room ' , i nodded and followed her . We stopped at the room's door and aunty said to me ' heer ! this is your room and room next to u ........' before she could told me someone called her and she went saying ' if u need anything then do tell me ' and i nodded.

' Uncle and aunty are so good as maa and bauji ' I thought as I walked inside the room with tears in my eyes .I wiped my tears . 'Its such a beautiful room' I thought as i walked in .

After 1 hour :

I take a quick shower and dressed into a yellow salwar suit . I straighten my hair and left them loose . Suddenly my eyes fell on a door which looks like a connecting door . I opened the door and saw a large room like mines . It has white and red walls with a glass ceiling and a large white bed . Tears welled up in my eyes as i saw the picture which was above the bed , it was none other than prem juneja who i loved in my college days . He is as handsome as in his college days , those same caramel eyes , those pink lips and the same smile playing on his lips , I snapped out of my thoughts as I heard the water sound which is coming from the bathroom and saw clothes lying here and there on the floor . I heard some footsteps and decided to leave the room . But then the lights went off . I become scared and started to walk towards my room . I lost my balance because of the clothes lying on the floor .

But before I hit the ground , someone ............................................

TO BE CONTINUED ..................................

pls read and do coment

pls tell me

hwz it ?

Edited by meeshti. - 15 years ago

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Her Meeshti.......

Loved the character sketch...........sounds interesting,,,,,,,,,,
Prem's past???? and Heer a Geek..Wow...

Sounds really different.........Post the first chapter soon 😳

NOTE:- The first part is toooooooooooooooo Short....😕😕

Edited by Additi... - 15 years ago