~~~FF- My Invisible Love~~~~~Part 2 updated pg:6 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Cess-

omg, looisha.... *sniffs*

what was that? i know u like tragic endings, but that was too much... *khafa*.... 🤣

omg, i know how sad i felt?? *sobs*.... poor prem... he mustve died the moment something happened to heer... so many sacrifices and pain in the end... what's the use?? *sniffs*..... but that was really nice lisha... u need to write more... 😆

*hugs both 'dead bodies'*... 🤣.... see, didnt i make u laugh?? well, if it was a bad try i didnt realise, coz i am rolfing at my own stupidity!! 🤣..... so tell me i have lost it! i need someone to tell me so, coz if not, i wont realise how much of brain is left in my empty skull.... u know, i'd have literally cried because of this OS, if not for HC-AG performance....

*dreams of head on chest and transported to premeer paradise*.... 😍....

Originally posted by: alisha_harshad

Are yuh laughing at my writing Loosy ??? no yaar, pagal ho gaye ho kya?? i was rolfing coz i wrote khafa... dont even ask me why... 🤣....😲😲 What is??? 😡😡.. I don't like tragic stories.. ehhe but i donno i was juss sitting and thot of this thing randomly.. and posted it.. like i typed directly in the new post thing.. i didn't even write in my notebook lol.... juss here yuh go... what ever i thot...😆😆

and yeah ur post is like 😕 donno 😆😆😆hey!! u told me u like tragic stories... ... that's why when i was to write an OS, u said u preffered reading those!!! 🤣... oh now i get it!! it was a lie so that i post that darn thing?? kamini!! 😡.... 🤣...but u wrote it real well!! *pats back*.... 😆

OMG!! their performance was out of this cruel world.. like para and pari dancing in heaven.. and me watching it... with all those yamdoots 😆😆 this is obviously my ghost speaking, coz i died ages ago!! 😍.... oye!! aur kisse yamdoot bula rahi ho?? 😡.... yamdoot tum!! *hmph*... i watched it alone 😳.... obv, except for my heart which was making it's presence felt!! 🤣.... i am loosing it... gradually i'll have not even a sane skull!! *sigh*

eheh head on chest... cutey cutey !!! 😳.... *THUD*.... *DIES*

Originally posted by: Cess-

The Proposal

Ek naam tumhara lekar hum jeetay hai martey hain, Yeh ishq nibha dena tum gujaarish yeh kartey hai .. Jaaneman.. Jaanemaan. Tum khush ho toh hum bhi yun khush rehetain hain.. Tum rutho toh hum khud se rothey rehetey hain. Yeh jaanloh bas tumse hi hum apni khabar rakhtey hai.. Tum bhool najaana isko gujaarish yeh rakhtey hain. Jaaneman !!

Heer was listening to this song for whole day today and is been wishing if anyone had to propose her, he shall sing this song to her. From the day she downloaded this song to her I-pod she has been listening to it like non-stop. She was obsessed with this song. The whole day in college she had her I-pod on. So while she was in the cafeteria, her friends were talking with her but she was in her own dreamland. Then her friends got annoyed and pulled the earphones off of her ears. "Hey!" she yelled "What's Wrong with you guys?" "Its enough Heer, this is the limit. It's been three days you have been ignoring us. You are with us but still not. What's the matter? Have you downloaded anyone's voice there or something?" After that Heer gets excited to tell them what she has been thinking the whole 3 days. She actually just needed a shake to come out of her dream. "Guess What? I have been listening to this song called Jaaneman by this Himesh dude and I am totally in love with this song. And I have been thinking that if anyone had to propose me or something. Like of anyone ever did, then they have to sing this song. No matter what I would immediately say yes to that guy who sings this song for me even if he is a Gee'.or that guy who I have crush on. Arghh Never mind. Wish anyone proposed me." She said to her friends. "So, this whole freaking 3 days you have been dreaming about this thing? Seriously Heer? You were never like that?"one of her friend said. "Hello! I can't remain one simple Heer forever I needed some change but hey whats wrong in dreaming?" Heer got annoyed. "Ok all right lets go to my locker I need something one of her friend said and all 4 girls stood up and went.

After they went, There was one guy sitting besides them, listening to all there conversation and laughing about Heer's dream. He was thinking how anyone can ever dream like that. But that was girl's stuff. He just smiled thinking about the girl's dream even tho he hadn't seen her face but he fascinated by her and her dreams.

"Hey! heer" one of Heer's friend called her out." What is it? Heer asked. "Would you mind coming over my house for a party tonight? It's a small get together thing with friends you see? Would You?" he asked.

"Surely I'll come. At what time?"

"Ummm around 6 Pm."

"Done"

"Done. And we'll even discuss about the culture program's performance then."

"Oh yeah, sure thing. Ok see you tonight then. Bye"

Heer walked away and Prem came near to that guy and said " Thanxx yaar. I owe you this. I really appreciated your help."

"Never mind Prem, Am I invited to the party too."

Prem laughed loudly and said, "Yes, of course. See you at 6?"

Yeah 6.

They walked on their ways. Prem at his home was preparing foods for his get together thing while heer on the other hand was choosing her dress. She didn't care much about her look aften but today she did. She wanted to look best. She finally got one which was her all time favorite. It was old but still suited her.

It was 5:30p.m Heer's friend came to pick her up and the guy who invited her was there as well because he needed to take them to Prem's place and not his. They all got into the car and when they were near to Prem's house Heer asked Rahul, " Rahul aren't we going your home. Which way is this?"

"Ah Heer actually the party is not in my home but at one of my friend's. Hope you won't mind."

"No no . I won't."

They reached Prem's house and Prem was eagerly waiting for them outside in the corridor. When he saw them coming he rushed to receive them.

Heer nearly fainted coz Prem was the guy she had crush on and seeing him in front has always made her dizzy. She was wondering here and there. Then prem suddenly called her name "heer aren't you coming inside."

"Huh? Oh ya, yes am coming."

Prem and heer went inside together. Heer was stunned to see prem's house it was not less than a palace. It was beautiful. She again started dreaming of the song. Wihed Prem could propose her because she went too far than a crush already. She loved him like anything. And she truly did. She was deeply in love with Prem. But she couldn't express her feeling to him as she thought Prem doesn't know her well.

The party started, they had foods, danced and all. They were having fun. Then suddenly Prem's father announced that party time was over. So they went to Prem;s room which was as big as the hall downstairs. 1000 People could fit in that one room. Then they started discussing about how to organize the cultural program in the school. They decided whatever was to be done, how to decorate the stage and all. It was 11 pm. Time passed really quickly for everyone especially for Heer. All those moments he was praising prem's smile his hair, His talk, in her mind. She wasn't being able to take her eyes off of him. It was time to leave, Heer was the last one to follow Prem. Everyone bid goodbye and went to their home. Heer couldn't stop dreaming about Prem, Her crush. Everyday she dreamed about having a conversation with him but today she had dinner, with Him. It was unbelievable to her. She thought she was dreaming.

Everyday during lunch they started meeting and planning for cultural program. Finally the day came, they decoration looked fabulous. Their hard works were praised by every teacher and students in the school. Everything went according to their plan. When it was time to wrap up the show one voice suddenly came from the stage. It was Prem's .. "That wasn't planned "Heer thought.

Then Prem started talking about his life. How he spent the life in school and its near that they gonna leave. Hoe he made friends without difficulties. And all and finally how he like fell in love with this girl. what he thought will never happen . he wasn't talking to her always but somehow he started liking her and that like turned into love. But when he didn't know. He started talking about that girl. Heer on the other hand felt sad that Prem liked someone else and not her. Her love loved someone else. She had tears in her eyes. She was about to leave the hall when suddenly she heard a music which she was familiar with. Yes! It was indeed the song Jaaneman. He started singing and came closer to Heer. He wiped her tears when he was still singing. Heer couldn't believe Prem just did that. He proposed her infront of whole school. After the song was done Prem kneeled down on his knees and said, "I love you Heer . Will you be fine for ever?" Heer was stunned he didn't know how to response in front of whole school and parents and her parents and everyone. She had more tears on her eyes. She couldn't believe what she saw right now. She thought she was dreaming but she wasn't. Prem put a diamond ring on Heer's finger , Heer accepted. Everyone clapped and all were happy for them. Then Prem suddenly said, "I know everything about you. Didn't you wanted some one to sing this song for you and propose. Well the thing is I always used to ask Rahul about you and he used to say me everything." Heer eyes were looking for Rahul who was her best friend. When she found him in the

Crowd. She smiled at him and he did back. Heer parents came forward and said and you would also want to know that the guy who we always talked about is none other than Prem. Both Prem and heer were shocked after knowing their parents were talking about their relation as well. None of them knew about it. But overall.. everything. Everytime .. Everywhere. Anything will always support true love.Even they didn't express their love but it was true on their each side Which is brought together at last.

The end .

I feel you are with me always

I always feel you are with me. I know you've gone far but still close to me. This feeling tortures me a lot. Why can't I just forget you? Why? You left me but still took away my heart. Why did you do this Heer, why? Wasn't I good enough for you or there was anything you didn't like about me. You should have just said what was lacking in me, I would have done my best to change myself but you never gave me a chance. You' You just left me' Just left Me.!

I keep wondering here and there. Those places where I used to see a glimpse of you, those places where you used to be, those streets where you used to walk and those where I used to and still feel you. Even though you left me, you are here besides me, talking to me, laughing at my silly jokes, making me understand, making me feel complete. You are here with me' yes you are. I know you are because I can feel you. You taught me the real meaning of life; real meaning of love but still you didn't learn yourself. I always found myself in you when you left me; my soul left me. My everything went with you Heer please come back. Your Prem is nothing without you. Please come back'''.

"Prem?? Wake up son. It's almost time for your office, Hurry". Prem's mom knocked at his door. He didn't realize when he was asleep last night while writing a letter to Heer. Even though he wrote it, he didn't know which address to send to because Heer didn't give any address of her's neither she told him she was leaving She just left, leaving Prem alone. No one knows why she left not even her friends, no one. She was with her parents though, that made Prem relief but she left him. He couldn't imagine she left him. He always thought why?

My life' my life was happy before you entered and when you did it felt like I was in heaven. I life became beautiful as heaven, I was more happy than I ever was but when you left its all dark. All I see around me is darkness, darkness which cannot be brighten up, nothing can bright it up besides you. You are the light of my life. You and only you can bring those moments back, that happiness of mine' those lights my life used to get with your presence. Return back Heer. See I have written like 10 letters in your memories but I don't know where to send I am really very alone please.

Prem, wondering alone in the road, not knowing where he was going, not in his senses, the one thing was on his mind was to meet Heer once and just ask her why did she leave him. His days passed only by remembering her. It's been long 5 years; she never contacted him... never once. Prem!!!! He heard a voice, a voice familiar to him but anything he could think at that time was Heer, Heer and only Heer. But she still he turned back and saw a car coming to him but before he was hit by the car he saw someone ' he took the name he always loved Heer.. And was down the street, still he was taking Heer's name.

Nevertheless, it was Heer who was calling out his name' that Heer who Prem was waiting ' that Heer who left Prem and went don't know where. Heer came running to Prem, who was lying on the road bleeding all over. Heer couldn't react to this situation; she just cried her heart out. Called for help and people around her helped her take Prem to hospital. Prem was in ICU' Heer outside praying for his recovery (Please God make Prem Fine' I left him 5 years back now don't him leave me forever' don't punish me for ever for not being with Prem for 5 years, You know why did I leave him. I left him cause I wanted to be with him forever' but now' please don't God please don't) Suddenly doctor calls Heer from back saying Prem is taking her name she needs to rush. Heer went to Prem, all crying. Prem after 5 years smiled' He smiled seeing his Heer. His smile was gone along with Heer and came back with her. He said to Heer that how he waited for her each and everyday. Those days without her was like hell' he didn't wanted to live then but couldn't because he had hope that she would return, but when he was with him he didn't wanted to die. He was begging with God for his life and give him one chance only one. Heer was crying really hard and said why she left him 5 years back. She asked him to forgive her when Prem said he was never angry with Heer, He was just alone with her.. Just alone.. Despite of being alone he always felt her'he always felt she was around. Heer couldn't control crying and ran outside. Then the doctors started to operate him. With every passing time Heer was getting more nervous.

She was regretting the day when she left without telling Prem, she wished she could have told Prem that day. He wouldn't have been like this. Finally the operation was over and successful. Heer ran towards Prem and held his hand. Prem opened his eyes slowly and saw Heer in front. He cried and cried and asked Heer not to leave him alone. Heer promised that she'll never leave him alone.

Then suddenly Prem woke up from dream. It was a dream, he didn't had an accident, Heer didn't take him to hospital, Heer didn't promise him, it was all dream all dream. Nothing he saw was true but just a dream. He always felt she was near him... Watching his every activity... he always felt her. Then Prem decided whatever happened in his dream he would make it real and went outside his house.

Umm I am only inside his house' I don't know what happened after he left :s sorry !!!