FF-Aaye ho mere zindhagi mein..... part 16'pg 137' - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyyyyyyyyyyy nice start
do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 1

Haiii deshianzzz……….
I am happy that you people liked the introductory part of my SS
Here is the first part
Enjoy………

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Heer was shocked by the view in front of her. She felt as if the strong thunder and lightning is passing through her body and not in the outside. Her dreamz got shattered in just one sight. Her eyes started to well up all of a sudden.

Near the door 'her prince' was standing with reddish eyes. His face was all covered with sweat. He came forward towards her weak legs unable to carry his own weight. He was trying hard not to fall down. While he was coming towards her smell of the alcohol started to pierce her nostrils. On the way his legs struck with the couch and he fall on to heer's shoulders and heer immediately pushed him back.

"ohhhhhffff sorrrrryyyy…….."

Somehow he managed to say when he found heer turning her face away from him unable to take in the smell of alcohol. Heer waved her palm in front of her nostrils and made her step backwards.

"I am …feeelinggg very tired…we can talk tomorrowww…"

He felt even difficult to speak as his brain and tongue are controlled by alcohol.

"ohhh by the way what is your name???? yaaa I remember heerrr … right… guushhh nighttt heer..."

Uttering these last wards he fell on to the bed horizontally, stretching his arms and legs in four different directions.

Heer stood shocked in her position unable to believe what she had seen. Heer being a traditional village girl couldn't digest what she had seen. In her whole life she didn't even see her father or any other relatives having alcohol. It was too hard for her to digest such things.

She made her steps towards him and slowly removed his foot wears without disturbing his sleep. She pulled his legs and made him lay on the bed straightly and covered his body with the blanket. After giving a final look at his face she made her steps towards the couch.

Heer sat on the couch pulling her knees towards her chest and burying the head on it. Tears were flooding from her eyes uncontrollably. She raised her head from her knees and looked at him who is having a sound sleep.

"Is this her prince???

Who didn't even remember the name of his wife???

Who didn't even find it necessary to talk to his wife even in the suhaag raat???????"

She found her dreamz shattered in fraction of a second. All her dreams of about twenty years…
Tears were flooding nonstop from her eyes because of sorrow and fear. She prayed to end this night as soon as possible. She took the cushion and enclosed it close to her heart in order to reduce her pain. Outside the room thundering and lightning continued and heer spent her 'suhaag raat' all awake afraid of the surrounding as well as her husband.

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NEXT DAY MORNING

Heer went towards prem carrying cup of tea in her hands. She was wearing a pure white anarkali with silver embroidery. She had just completed her shower and some of her wet curls are falling on her face. She went towards him tucking her curls back into her ears with one hand.

Prem was sleeping peacefully on the bed in the same position as she had kept him in the last night. His face was really cute and adorable while sleeping. His shaggy hair falling on his fore head and was moving slowly which made him even more adorable. Heer find it too difficult to believe it is the same person whom she saw yesterday in such a condition.

Seeing him sleeping on the bed heer was confused. She was afraid to wake him up. She feared whether he will get angry on her. But the tea is getting cold so decided to make him wake up. She kept the tea cup on the night lamp table and went towards the window. She moved the curtains to the both ends which made the sun rays to fall on prem's face. Being disturbed by the rays' prem slowly opened his eyes keeping his right palm in front of his face.

When he opened his eyes he found a delicate figure standing in front of the window. Prem slowly pulled his palm back from his face without even blinking his eyes. Heer was looking like an angel in that white anarkali. Sun's first rays that were peeping into the room multiplied her beauty.

Prem realized that it's heer, his wife. Prem find it difficult to face her when he remembered the things that had happened last night. He should not have done like that, what she should have thought about his character? Prem got worried by this question. He turned his face because of guilt feelings.

Heer moved towards him playing with the end of her dupatta with her hands in tension. Fear of her mind is clearly visible in her face. She took the cup of tea in her hands and handed it to him looking away. Prem looked up at her face while receiving the tea from her hands. Her face clearly indicated that she didn't sleep yesterday. Unknowingly his fingers happened to touch her fingers.

Heer pulled her hands suddenly in shyness which made tea cup to tilt a little and few drops of tea fall on prem.Heer got really worried.

"sorry, sorry…main abhi teekh karlethi hoon" telling this heer was about to wipe the tea with her dupatta but prem stopped her.

Prem realized her voice trembling with fear.

"Heer are u mad. You are going to wipe the tea with your white dupatta? Don't worry I will manage it" prem told with a smiling face and went towards the wash room.

This was totally unexpected for heer. She didn't expect such a reaction from him. She looked at him unbelievably till he disappeared into the wash room. Heer stood there itself for some time without knowing what to do next. Then she decided to leave from there. Heer was just crossing the door of their room but suddenly stopped when she felt his hands on her wrist.

She was shivering at his touch and became a bit nervous. Heer slowly turned her face to face him, and look into his hazel eyes which was falling on her face. She lowered her eyes unable to withstand in the power of his eyes.

"Heer …I want to talk to you…"prem told her taking his hands off from heer and sat on the bed.

She stood there itself without even taking a single step forward. She was looking down unable to meet his gaze. What is behind this? Shyness or fear… heer don't know what is going on in her mind.

"Heer... I am talking to you…come on, sit down" prem asked her to sit down on the bed.
Heer came to the senses and made her steps towards the bed. She sat at the edge of the bed in an uncomfortable manner. Her eyes still searching invisible thing in the space.

Prem looked at her from top to the bottom and found her hands laying on her lap one above the other. He noticed her finger tips shivering slightly. This brought a cute smile on his face. He kept his palm over her palms as if to control her shivering. Heer suddenly turned her face and looked first at the palm and then at him. There she found the most attractive eyes she had ever seen in her life.

"Today is somewhat sunny… right, then why are you shivering?"And paused for a second and then continued looking into her eyes "because of me"

Heer couldn't find an answer for this question, and started blabbering.

"nahi … woh actually…main…" Heer find it too difficult to give out some words.

"Heer, please don't be scared of me. I am sorry… I know yesterday night whatever happened would have scared you. Yesterday I had met some of my friends after a long time. They all compelled me to have the drink. I thought that I can stop in one or two peg, but…" prem paused for few seconds and looked outside the window.

"My mom also would have hearted yesterday, just as u did. I had promise her that I will become a good boy." Prem looked up at the sky and continued "sorry… maa…"

Heer saw the tears rolling from his eyes.

Heer too liked gayathri mom very much. She still remembers the day when she first met gayathri mom in the mandhir. On that day itself gayathri mom had told her that she wanted to make heer her bahu. She was the one who wanted prem to get married to heer the most. She was a heart patient and few months ago she died of heart attack.

She had heard that Prem was very much upset after that. He considered that he was responsible for his mom's death even though she don't know the reason behind it. Gayathri mom was everything to him throughout his life. His father died when he 4 or 5 and he have no siblings also.

She found her thoughts about prem which got into her mind on yesterday getting upside down. She didn't expect prem as a sentimental person. Prem stood still looking at the sky wiping his tears. Heer wanted to console him but didn't say anything as she doubted whether she has any right for that. Heer felt she should go from there so that he can have some privacy. She didn't want to interfere in his privacy. Heer was about to leave the place but stopped again when prem called her.

"Heer I want to talk to you" prem started to say something but didn't continue. He looked very much upset.

"haa prem.. bolo.." heer asked him to continue.

Suddenly they heard her mobile ringing and heer attended the call. It was her maa and bauji at the other end. Heer was very much excited at their call as she missed her parents very badly last night. Heer was the only daughter of balraaj and teji maan.

Prem watched her talking to her parents all exited. He smiled at her seeing her talking with her parents. It was as if she has not talked to them for so many years. Prem felt it is very nice to see her enthusiasm and her gestures were also too nice to watch. Heer found prem's gaze falling on her while she was talking in the phone which made her to blush a bit.

Heer turned to prem after finishing her talking. She wanted to know what he wanted to tell her.
"aap kuch keh rahe dhey naa…" heer asked him in a hesitated tone.

Prem kept silence to few seconds and then said

"Heer get ready soon. We have to go Mumbai today itself. I have no leave. Finish the packing as soon as possible. I have already booked our flight tickets. We have the flight in the evening." Telling this prem went to the closet and took out a saree for heer.

"yeh saadi maa ne tumhareliye kharidi thee… lekin dhe nahi paayi. Aaj tum yahi penanaa… maa bohut khush hogi…"

Telling this prem handed the saari to heer and rushed into the bath room to fresh up.

Heer somehow felt that he wanted to tell her something else.

Heer looked at the saree in her hands. It was a green sari with golden embroidery. Heer moved her hands over it and smiled. Suddenly she remembered that she don't know to take fleets for the saree.

"oh god! Now what to do?" heer stood biting her nails in tension.

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In the evening prem is waiting for heer. Their packing is already over and the entire luggage is with him. It's getting late for them. If heer got ready they can leave but there is no response from her side.

'kithni time lagati hai ek saree pehan ne keliye, why these girls are like this?' prem thought in mind. At last prem decided to go upstairs and check she is doing.

Prem rushed into their bed room and suddenly stopped at the door way seeing heer…

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So that's the first part
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greeshma
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
hey!!!!!!!!
thanks 4 the pm.........
awesome update.....
wt did prem try say to heer??
cnt wait 4 the next update..........
pls update soon....
will be waiting....

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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
awesomeee update.........
hmmmm wonder why prem blames himself for his mothers death.....
can't wait 4 da next part................

Edited by yasu09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
awesommm update dear cant wait to read next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwwww........Prem will help Heer with the pleats of her saree!!
how cute!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
It's good...I'm glad he apologised to her...awww he's going to help her wear the saree. Pls continue.

* Edit * Drop me a PM whenever you update.




Edited by sv06 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
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hiiiiiiii sweety
awesome update
prem scared heer.
but thanks god he is not bad boy.
love the whole update.
wait for next.
update asap
luv
fatima
Edited by -fsn- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Hi!!!!!!!!
awesomeeeeeeeeeeee update...
eagerly waitinggg 4 next part....
update asap
thnx a lot 4 ur PM.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
awwwww thats really awesome updateeeeeeeeee
plz update the next part i cant wait to see plz update

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