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AAYE HO MERI
ZINDHAGI MEIN.......hiii deshiaz.............
Today I have come up with an SS for you.
You people please read it and tell me whether I have to continue it or not?
So here is the introductory part'
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Heer is sitting in the bed holding her knees towards her chest and her hands wrapping around the knees. The bed is scattered with full of rose petals. She slowly raised her head and looked around.
The room is decorated with different types of flowers like rose, jasmine, etc. The fragrance of the flowers is spreading all over the room which made the room sweeter. But the beauty of the room or fragrance of the flowers didn't help her to control her nervousness. For more than 4 hours she is in this position. Her heart is beating faster because of fear and anxiety.
Like all other girls or sometimes more than all other girls heer had dreamz about the prince of her life. She always used to dream'
"A handsome prince with chocolate brown eyes holding a sharp sward in his hands coming riding on a white horse asking her hand and saying WILL U MARRY ME?"
"It's very nice to dream, but in reality it's something which' she don't know what's going on in her mind!!!!!!!!!!!"
Today is the most important day of her life, because today her prince came into her life. It's her father who found him for her. Heer being an obedient daughter followed his directions even though she believed that love marriage is the best. She strongly believed that before the marriage, the girl and the boy should know each other very well and she felt love marriage is the best for that. But what to do she couldn't find her prince by her own.
Her eyes fall on her own image in the mirror which is on left side of the bed. She was wearing a bright red lehanga with matching jewelers. She was looking gorgeous in that bridal costume. Her necklace, bangles, earrings, mangtika' everything made her look like an angelic bride, but one thing was missing and it was the smile'..the shy full smile which makes a bride complete. Even through underneath of her heart she was feeling shy it was not showing out as her fear on the brain is over powering her feelings.
There was a chain with black and golden beads around her neck. It's her 'mangalsuthra'. Today her prince had put it around her neck. His name is PREM JUNEJA.
From today she is Mrs. Prem Juneja, and it's her SUHAAG RAAT.
A cute smile appeared on her lips'
But she is getting nervous about that. Today she has to spend the night with an unknown person. Other than his name or job she doesn't know much about him. They hadn't talked with each other yet. For one thing she is very happy; he is very handsome just as the Prince of her dreamz'
But why is he getting this much late?
Is this the way to treat the wife in the suhaag raat?????????
Being bored and tensed she got up from the bed and went towards the window and opened it. The sky is very lovely today with full moon and twinkling stars. She felt as if they are shedding their blessings on her.
But suddenly sky started to electrify with thunder and lightning. She was afraid of thunder even from her childhood. She got frightened and closed her both ears with her palm. Unable to control her fear she turned around and was shocked to see......
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PART 1- page 5
PART 2- page 10
PART 3- page 15
PART 2- page 10
PART 3- page 15
PART 4- page 21
PART 5- page 29
PART 6- page 36
PART 7- page 45
PART 8- page 53
PART 9 -page 61
PART 10- page 70
PART 11 - page 80
PART 12 -page 90
PART 13 -part 100
PART 14 - page 113
PART 15 - page 125
PART 5- page 29
PART 6- page 36
PART 7- page 45
PART 8- page 53
PART 9 -page 61
PART 10- page 70
PART 11 - page 80
PART 12 -page 90
PART 13 -part 100
PART 14 - page 113
PART 15 - page 125
So how was it??????????
Please give me your valuable comments so that I can decide whether I have to continue it or not. If u didn't like it u can tell it frankly to me. I welcome criticisms also'
Love
Greeshma
Cricket
