A Mistake Worthmaking Pg38 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Great character sketch....
Prem better stop playing with Girls.....
Poor Heer......
thankz for pm...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
wow....that was a nice update.....
like you said.....interesting twist!
specially the last part.....wonder what happens now!
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
nice character sketch....waiting for the next update!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
hey...
great update...
pls update the next part soon.. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
awsome........................
premeer scenes r nice.......................
update soon.....................
plz pm me next time if possible
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
Awesome update very nice thx for pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Khijz shona wait till morning
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68

RESERVED FOR UPDATE

NOW ADDED

HERE WE GO

UpDaTe:-

So finally when PH entered the office. The first though that clicked Premz mind was that Barri Maa aa rahi hen.

They both moved to the conference room when Prem informed Heer

Prem: Look Heer barri Maa is coming in no time here to blast on me. So I just wanna make sure that you are really my GF.

He began to kiss her collar bone then moving upwards he planted really wetty kiss over her neck. Now he was just going to kiss her luscious lips when his phone rang it was Barri Maa.

Prem: Barri Maa How r u? I m fine now u tell me where r u? me at office

Baari Maa: Tujhe khush karnsy k liye phone kiya m not coming

Prem: Happily: what I mean what(being down lowering pitch) Mom thatz not fair

Barri Maa: one more thing Preet n Meher they r going back to London they had enough masti time

Prem: okeh now bye: looking lovingly over heer who was setting PJz tie: I love you: heer smiled shyly and prem pushed her very forcefully such that she just fell over him he held her

Prem: Haan Barri Maa I will myself go there and see You don't worry mein hun na I will never let u down: winked

Heer tried to stand straight but Prem put his hands over her back. So after a teenu weenoo kiss Prem held Heerz hand who was looking downwards. They moved upwards with Premz eyes totally trying to look inside Heer. Soon they reached the wholly fab, lavish cabin of PJ. Prem moved all of his work towards Heer who peacefully started to work whereas Prem began to play games on his laptop. The cute and satisfactory smile he had on his face made Heer feel happy.

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After an hour or so Prem ordered for a drink but the staff refused to give so kuz Barri Maa had prohibited after which he tried some other places for drinkz but all they gave same reply. So in rage he threw the glass placed on table on floor. A piece of glass got stuck in Heer's leg/ She already scared of Prem preferred to work silently. When the sweeper came to clear the mess Prem moved towards Heer when he saw blood slowly seep out from her leg. He yelled over Natasha who was working with Heer sitting with her He yelled over her that why dint she look over Heer she was so badly hurt. She brought the first aid box she was about to clear the wound when Prem took it from her and sat on his knees slowly took off sandal from Heer's foot and made it rest over his knee. He then lightly cleared the wound after that:

Prem: all staff looked over PH: Hello! Tum logIs a joke going on. Go back to your work places and You Natasha get out of my cabin before I fire you

They all left

Heer: Sir!

Prem: What Sir? You have a tongue I guess(heer nodded) so can't you tell me that you have been wounded am I a Genie or what? Who will come to know it that you are injured? (Although he was scolding but any other person seeing them at that time could easily figure out the bond of affection and care they had developed)

Heer: Sir Who—

Prem: What who? Huh am I a joke (I think u are lolz) You and I we r going back home and yepp that girl is not coming

Heer: But

Prem: Is argument your hobby (yelling and ordering others and flirting is yours)

Heer and Prem leaving the office

Heer: Sir may I ask you something(Prem smiled) Sir you are pretty much Confusing.

One moment you are totally shweet and the other you are totally the opposite one can't judge you at all

Prem: I like being like this The way I am I wanna be the same kuz straight 4wrd people can be fooled easily

Edited by Hajz95 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: NIMMY

whts heers mystery

sweetoo go on page 9 and read is k ilawa read the ff and see
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
awesome update dear. keep updating

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