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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Hey heres a short update

Next morning Heer was sleeping in her room when Prem came up in her room and kissed her cheeks trying to wake her up.

Prem: Heer Get up emm getting late

As soon as heer opened up her eyes she got scared of Prem as she opened her eyes she saw prem over her

She stammered a bit: Puppup.........

Clearing her throat: Whuw what r u dud doing

Prem: Gud morning

Heer pointed Prem to get off. So he just got off the girl and now Heer came to her full senses

Heer: Good Morning

Now go and change

Prem: I am ready

Heer: Aisey jaao gay na to worker ziada boss kum lagi gey. Saarey kaprey kharab kar diye hn. Aur haan neechay laundry mein rakhwa dena.

Prem: So many instructions.

Heer: M not feeling well thats it oops I meant muje m feeling dizzy.

Prem: Just lie down.

Heer: m fine

Prem was getting angry on heer as she tried to lie even thogh she could not do that so very easily or perfectly. She as running fever nd fatigueness

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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
Excellent one liked it update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
nice update.........hope ul cont asap..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
awesme update.....luvd premeer conversation.....plzz tell me what is actually prem heers relation......and plzz pm me when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovvvvvvvvely.....
do continue soon!
and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Nikhita...

lovvvvvvvvely.....

do continue soon!
and thanks for the pm

thanx actually mujhe yaad ni ra update dena two days mein update dun gi o.k
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: JoeJonasRoks

Excellent one liked it update soon

THankz sweety but aap gayab ho gayi ho kahan ho aap i miss you
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

Update four:-

Prem after making sure that Heer won't get out of bed when he was about to leave Heer asked him

Heer: So aap jaaa rahay hain Sir

Prem: Mujhe office mein kaam bhi karna hai and you meri girlfriend aa rahi he is liye after clearing the mess get the mansion ready to her standard and I don't want you in my bed when i return .

Heer's face had lost the glow but still she gave him a nod that she would make all arrangements according to his will he had left a hectic schedule for Heer who giving a long sigh got up from the bed thinking that What guy was Prem first when she saw him he was flirting with the receptionist of his own hotel the next time he was flirting with her then he one evening called Heer into his office when Heer had got the news that the great tucoon Prem Juneja wants to meet her from a call and that call was even from his own cellphone Heer was not able to step on Earth.

Heer at Juneja Hotel Mumbai with Prem all alone

Heer stepped inside and Prem hugged her with his hands rubbing Heerz body Heer had been got crushed on his very first sight

Prem:Heer tum mera sath kaam karo gi.

Heer: Prem yeah i have already lost alot many thing now i would not like to lose this opportunity. Yes I would like to.

Prem: Without hiding anything I am just gonna say that kee you have to stay with me totally 24hrs till I want OK and I know you are a strong and Beautiful girl (winked)

Heer:smiled without evn thinking a second: Yeah so I have to come from

Prem: evening come at the pub we met

flashback ended as Prem came over again

Prem: Get ready quickly get up

Heer: Sir I am not feeling well

Prem: I just don't know. Heer I want you in my office

Heer: Sir I will come afterwards

Prem: Abhi chalo meray sath just come down in car.

In the car:

Heer had just come down a lil while late but Prem Juneja had each nd every second costly

Prem: Are you going on a fashion parade or what?You know you are 2 minutes late

Heer seeing sudden anger in Prem's eyes got scared of him and her eyes aflooded she closed her eyes forcefully in order to stop her tears from coming out she stopped her breathe. She knew well that Prem hated crying girls.

But seeing her cry his anger melted

he took her into his laps and then began kissing her collarbone she tried to speak

Heer: Stop

i don't wanna talk to you i

Prem: like you. Tum bahut achi ho I like you ( Katz dialogue from apkgk)

Heer: flirt

he smirked and then helld her from her tummy.

Prem: Heer tum kaho to i will send you on a fashion parade.

Heer: Leave me.

Prem: Heer

Heer: office ander ni jaana kya

Prem: I wanna go inside you

Heer: Keep your dirty talk off from me

Prem: haan haan wesay b meri real girl b to aa rahi he. I can flirt with her

A key about Heer: Will Prem be evr able to know who is heer actualyPrem is unknown that who is she and has appointed Heer just because shez simple and not complicated, beautiful and never lies to him Will Prem forgive heer for lieing to him when he will know her truth

He hates People who lie even though if they are very close to his heart
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
Helo every1 i hope you catch up what i wrote actually i made slight changes in ff so sorry but it will make this more interesting i hope you like changes
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: hajoo00

thanx actually mujhe yaad ni ra update dena two days mein update dun gi o.k

sorry 2 days k 5 days ho gayye

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